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* Gretchen's death. When critically wounded by both Jaune and Hazel, she's hurling insults and disparages at her brother. However, the realization that she's about to die begins to set in, and she's [[FaceDeathWithDespair reduced to crying as her brother comforts her in her final moments]].
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* Gretchen's death.death, despite all she'd done previously, is rather harrowing. When critically wounded by both Jaune and Hazel, she's hurling insults and disparages at her brother. However, the realization that she's about to die begins to set in, and she's [[FaceDeathWithDespair reduced to crying as her brother comforts her in her final moments]].
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* Ozpin and Glynda seeing what the demons do to their students. Ozpin's rage that he couldn't save his students is made clear with Glynda's horror being almost palpable, and the hope that they could save at least one is dashed the minute it's shown they have become a Possessed. [[ApologeticAttacker All Ozpin can do is apologize]] to whatever lingering humanity may be left and [[MercyKill kill them]]. The real kicker is that throughout this entire ordeal, Ozpin displays zero emotion, [[SeenItAll as if he's seen this so many times that he's just going through the motions at this point]].
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* Ozpin and Glynda seeing what the demons do to their students. Ozpin's rage that he couldn't save his students is made clear with Glynda's horror being almost palpable, and the hope that they could save at least one is dashed the minute it's shown they have become a Possessed. [[ApologeticAttacker All Ozpin can do is apologize]] to whatever lingering humanity may be left and [[MercyKill kill them]]. The real kicker Perhaps the most saddening thing is that throughout this entire ordeal, Ozpin displays zero emotion, [[SeenItAll as if he's seen this so many times that he's just going through the motions at this point]].
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* Gretchen's death. When critically wounded by both Jaune and Hazel, she's hurling insults and disparages at her brother. However, the realization that she's about to die begins to set in, and she's reduced to crying as her brother comforts her in her final moments.
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* Gretchen's death. When critically wounded by both Jaune and Hazel, she's hurling insults and disparages at her brother. However, the realization that she's about to die begins to set in, and she's [[FaceDeathWithDespair reduced to crying as her brother comforts her in her final moments.
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* When Winter leaves with the Atlas forces, Weiss calls out to her. The elder sister doesn't even say goodbye, leaving Weiss to the painful realization that all she did was push her loved ones away.
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* When Winter leaves with the Atlas forces, Weiss calls out to her. The elder sister doesn't even say goodbye, leaving Weiss to the painful realization that all she did was push her loved ones family away.
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* Gretchen's death. When critically wounded by both Jaune and Hazel, she's hurling insults and disparages at her brother. However the realization that she's about to die begins to set in. After that, she's reduced to crying as her brother comforts her in her final moments.
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* Gretchen's death. When critically wounded by both Jaune and Hazel, she's hurling insults and disparages at her brother. However However, the realization that she's about to die begins to set in. After that, in, and she's reduced to crying as her brother comforts her in her final moments.
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The chapter was rewritten to make Ren's Semblance more in-line with canon, so he doesn't alter her emotions to remove her hatred as she dies.
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* Gretchen's death. When critically wounded by both Jaune and Hazel, she's hurling insults and disparages at her brother, only for Ren to cleanse her of her hatred through his semblance. After that, she's reduced to crying as her brother comforts her in her final moments.
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* Gretchen's death. When critically wounded by both Jaune and Hazel, she's hurling insults and disparages at her brother, only for Ren brother. However the realization that she's about to cleanse her of her hatred through his semblance.die begins to set in. After that, she's reduced to crying as her brother comforts her in her final moments.
