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[[folder:Good Manners]]
* Kevin pushing Kate around by shoving her and throwing water balloons at her is a realistic depiction of bullying. Not to mention that absolutely ''no'' student or even an adult stepped in to stop Kevin from doing so, let alone ''witness'' it happening. KidsAreCruel indeed.
* The other students at Bella’s etiquette class insulting Andre, a sloth, for his slow pace, not keeping in mind that it’s in his species nature to be that way and he can’t help himself.
** Even the monkey comes in to distract Andre so that he and the other students can eat without him. Poor sloth…
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* Kevin pushing Kate around by shoving her and throwing water balloons at her is a realistic depiction of bullying. Not to mention that absolutely ''no'' student or even an adult stepped in to stop Kevin from doing so, let alone ''witness'' it happening. KidsAreCruel indeed.
* The other students at Bella’s etiquette class insulting Andre, a sloth, for his slow pace, not keeping in mind that it’s in his species nature to be that way and he can’t help himself.
** Even the monkey comes in to distract Andre so that he and the other students can eat without him. Poor sloth…
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** These final words from Eva towards Ava can really be a heartbreaker. Towards her ''own sister'' who likely is her only blood family that's present.
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** These final words from Eva towards Ava can really be a heartbreaker. Towards her ''own sister'' who likely is her only blood family that's present. Why, Eva, why?
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* Eva being an absolute JerkAss towards her sister. She is incredibly blunt and rude towards her talk with Ava, and even has the audacity to say that "she didn't become evil, she has always been that way", and that because of her pure heart she is much too blind to sense evil in others. Then Ava proceeds to say she remembers several happy moments she and Eva had, to where her sister says that she's wrong, even if the flashback brought up about Ava hurting her paw seemed to be rather recent.
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* Eva being an absolute JerkAss towards her sister. She is incredibly blunt and rude towards her talk with Ava, and even has the audacity to say that "she "[[ForTheEvulz she didn't become evil, she has always been that way", way]]", and that because of her pure heart she is much too blind to sense evil in others. Then Ava proceeds to say she remembers several happy moments she and Eva had, to where her sister says that she's wrong, even if the flashback brought up about Ava hurting her paw seemed to be rather recent.
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** Keep in mind this all happened on Kate’s [[ABirthdayNotABreak birthday]] of all days. When she was supposed to have fun at the amusement park that day, she instead has to leave early to not only take a knocked-out Wallace to the vet, but also deal with the failure to capture Ava.
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** Also, these final words from Eva towards Ava can really be a heartbreaker. Towards her ''own sister'' who likely is her only blood family that's present.
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** Also, these Not to mention Ava's dialogue in the US dub after the flashback ends. In the UK one originally, she says "And I thought it was an accident," whereas in the US one, it was changed to "And I thought that you were truly sorry."
** These final words from Eva towards Ava can really be a heartbreaker. Towards her ''own sister'' who likely is her only blood family that's present.
** These final words from Eva towards Ava can really be a heartbreaker. Towards her ''own sister'' who likely is her only blood family that's present.
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*** Bonus points for Ava's dialogue beforehand in the US dub. In the UK one originally, she says "And I thought it was an accident," whereas in the US one, it was changed to "And I thought that you were truly sorry."
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*** Bonus points for Ava's dialogue beforehand in the US dub. In the UK one originally, she says "And I thought it was an accident," whereas in the US one, it was changed to "And I thought that you were truly sorry."
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* Francesca has worried so much about the upcoming test that she had lost sleep, and thus fell asleep in class.
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* Francesca has worried so much about the upcoming test that she had lost sleep, and thus fell asleep in class. Her being stressed about upcoming exams is even relatable to people much older than her.
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** To make matters worse, it isn't clear on whether or not she or Ava is telling the truth, especially when FridgeHorror settles in. Was Eva lying out of some unexplained trauma for some reason? Because evil is ''taught'' to someone; nobody is born with it.
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** To make matters worse, it isn't clear on whether or not she or Ava is telling the truth, truth given the UnreliableNarrator, especially when FridgeHorror settles in. Was Eva lying out of some unexplained trauma for some reason? Because evil is ''taught'' to someone; nobody is born with it.
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* Francesca has worried so much about the upcoming test that she had lost sleep, and thus fell asleep in class.
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[[folder:Sweet Dreams]]
* After Eva had explained her plan to the Pet Buster, all of the gold coins Kate and Magic collected with the help of the Royal Guards had disappeared, making their way back to Pocketville. All of their hard work was absolutely gone all thanks to Eva’s meddling.
* Kate’s NightmareSequence. She and Magic get caught in an InescapableNet and meet Eva, who takes the Royal Collar away from them.
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* After Eva had explained her plan to the Pet Buster, all of the gold coins Kate and Magic collected with the help of the Royal Guards had disappeared, making their way back to Pocketville. All of their hard work was absolutely gone all thanks to Eva’s meddling.
* Kate’s NightmareSequence. She and Magic get caught in an InescapableNet and meet Eva, who takes the Royal Collar away from them.
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[[folder:Friendship is a Treasure]]
* The Bernese puppy appears to be absolutely ''petrified'' as it is presented on the table during the Pet Buster's auction.
* Just as the Pet Buster was counting the coins and Kate was about to get Ava to a safer place, Eva intrudes through the Communication Shell, telling the Pet Buster that keeping Ava at bay is all part of her plan to take the throne, even showing him proof of her lineage by telling him about her birthmark, as well as a promise to give him all the pets he wants once she becomes monarch.
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* The Bernese puppy appears to be absolutely ''petrified'' as it is presented on the table during the Pet Buster's auction.
* Just as the Pet Buster was counting the coins and Kate was about to get Ava to a safer place, Eva intrudes through the Communication Shell, telling the Pet Buster that keeping Ava at bay is all part of her plan to take the throne, even showing him proof of her lineage by telling him about her birthmark, as well as a promise to give him all the pets he wants once she becomes monarch.
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Ava: ''[thinks]'' ''Their fear is much stronger than their will to be free.''
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* Beatrix has gotten very sick in the past, [[SoapOperaDisease but it isn't specified on what ailment she had]]. However, it is implied to be something serious, hence [[MyBelovedSmother her mother being very overprotective of her]]. Even if she has gotten healthier, her mother still remained that way.
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[[folder:White as a Ghost]]
* Ava tries to get another cat to grab the key that was left on her cage door, but the cat was much too terrified of the Pet Buster. Poor kitty.
-->'''Cat:''' No, he’s too strong! He’s too mean!\\
Ava: ''[thinks]'' ''Their fear is much stronger than their will to be free.''
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* Ava tries to get another cat to grab the key that was left on her cage door, but the cat was much too terrified of the Pet Buster. Poor kitty.
-->'''Cat:''' No, he’s too strong! He’s too mean!\\
Ava: ''[thinks]'' ''Their fear is much stronger than their will to be free.''
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* Nicole has a busy schedule full of so many extracurricular activities that she doesn't even have time to ''make friends''. She even turns down Kate's offer of friendship because of it.
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* The stray dogs being jerks to Ava. She was about to eat scraps from a bin outside a restaurant when they come in and claim all of it for themselves, leaving nothing for her.
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* The stray dogs [[JerkAss being jerks jerks]] to Ava. She was about to eat scraps from a bin outside a restaurant when they come in and claim all of it for themselves, leaving nothing for her.
