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--> '''Velvet''': Go to sleep Ingway. You won't suffer anymore... Let us go to our mother, together. The three of us, together... Just like before...
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* Scenes from earlier in the game such as when Oswald is about to commit suicide out of hopelessness or when Velvet Ingway the second half of their mother's note are guaranteed to make you cry.
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* Scenes from earlier in the game such as when Oswald is about to commit suicide out of hopelessness or when Velvet shows Ingway the second half of their mother's note are guaranteed to make you cry.
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* In the best ending of ''Leifthrasir'', the end card showing the World Tree changes to reveal that Ingway ended up in the Netherworld after he died. He deserved it, but you still can't help but feel bad for him. At least there's the hopeful note of the World Tree's roots having reached him and blooming with a familiar white fower, as though Mercedes is going to pull him out so they can be TogetherInDeath.
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* In the best ending of ''Leifthrasir'', the end card showing the World Tree changes to reveal that Ingway ended up in the Netherworld after he died. He deserved it, but you still can't help but feel bad for him. At least there's the hopeful note of the World Tree's roots having reached him and blooming with a familiar white fower, flower, as though Mercedes is going to pull him out so they can be TogetherInDeath.
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** The Bad Ending, where you see Myris standing on what was the peak of Horn Mountain, only the oceans have risen so high that ''almost the entire mountain is underwater'', and as "the last piece of land in Erion" crumbles beneath her, Myris prays that someone she loves will be spared and cries out, "This is a terrible ending! Who would wish for this?" before burying her face in her hands in grief and the screen fades to black...
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** The Bad Ending, called "The False End", where you see Myris standing on what was the peak of Horn Mountain, only the oceans have risen so high that ''almost the entire mountain is underwater'', and as "the last piece of land in Erion" crumbles beneath her, Myris prays that someone she loves will be spared and cries out, "This is a terrible ending! Who would wish for this?" before burying her face in her hands in grief and the screen fades to black...
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* When Velvet is taken to be executed, the phantom blue bird tempts Gwendolyn with the prospect of letting it happen so that she can be Odin's only daughter and no longer have to compete for his affection. Gwendolyn responds "That's true...if she were only gone...", pauses and then immediately rejects this idea in favor of saving Velvet. The pause is almost as if she was remembering having similar thoughts about Griselda...and how horribly it felt when she finally ''was'' gone.
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* In the best ending of ''Leifthrasir'', the end card showing the World Tree changes to reveal that Ingway ended up in the Netherworld after he died. He deserved it, but you still can't help but feel bad for him. At least there's the hopeful note of the World Tree's roots slowly reaching him, as though Mercedes is going to eventually pull him out.
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* In the best ending of ''Leifthrasir'', the end card showing the World Tree changes to reveal that Ingway ended up in the Netherworld after he died. He deserved it, but you still can't help but feel bad for him. At least there's the hopeful note of the World Tree's roots slowly reaching him, having reached him and blooming with a familiar white fower, as though Mercedes is going to eventually pull him out.out so they can be TogetherInDeath.
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* Even Mercedes's good ending can count as one because she dies believing she failed. It isn't until she reveals her true name and the OhCrap from Onyx that the player gets tears of joy instead, made better by the reveal that the WorldTree grew from the spot she died in after the credits, possibly being her reincarnation.
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* Even Mercedes's good ending can count as one because she dies believing she failed. It isn't until she reveals her true name and the OhCrap from Onyx that the player gets tears of joy instead, made better by the reveal that the WorldTree grew from the spot she died in after the credits, possibly being which ''Leifthrasir'' confirms to be her reincarnation.reincarnation in an additional shot where one of the tree's roots reach to the Netherworld to retrieve Ingway, with Mercedes' trademark white flower blooming on it.
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* In the best ending of Leifthrasir, the end card showing the World Tree changes to reveal that Ingway ended up in the Netherworld after he died. He deserved it, but you still can't help but feel bad for him. At least there's the hopeful note of the World Tree's roots slowly reaching him, as though Mercedes is going to eventually pull him out.
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* In the best ending of Leifthrasir, ''Leifthrasir'', the end card showing the World Tree changes to reveal that Ingway ended up in the Netherworld after he died. He deserved it, but you still can't help but feel bad for him. At least there's the hopeful note of the World Tree's roots slowly reaching him, as though Mercedes is going to eventually pull him out.
