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** While it doesn't justify his leaving Torunn on a world ruled by Ultron. The fact that Thor only left Earth being due to his father Odin dying. Leaving ruling over Asgard as ''his'' responsibility is a bit sad.
* Hawkeye's confusion and anger upon learning James and the other kids are the children of the original Avengers. It's clear that underneath his anger and indignation, he has feelings of abandonment.
--> '''Hawkeye''': I've been here fighting all this time! Where have you been?!
--> '''James''': Let him go! We didn't know!
--> '''Hawkeye''': I thought I was the last one...
* Hawkeye's confusion and anger upon learning James and the other kids are the children of the original Avengers. It's clear that underneath his anger and indignation, he has feelings of abandonment.
--> '''Hawkeye''': I've been here fighting all this time! Where have you been?!
--> '''James''': Let him go! We didn't know!
--> '''Hawkeye''': I thought I was the last one...
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* Torunn's desperate hope to reunite with her father and abandonment issues towards him. She treasures her sword as her only gift from him and practically begs him for help during battle.
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* Seeing all those "[[CreepySouvenir trophies]]" in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.
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* Seeing all those "[[CreepySouvenir trophies]]" in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.display while showing the child heroes there is no cavalry and that they're mankind's last hope to stop Ultron.
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* Watching James trying desperately to make ''some'' kind of connection to his late father through the machine built in his likeness.
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* Watching James trying desperately to make ''some'' kind of connection to his late father father. Even if it's only through the mindless machine built in his likeness.
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* Seeing all those "trophies" in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.
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* Seeing all those "trophies" "[[CreepySouvenir trophies]]" in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.
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* Watching James trying desperatly to make ''some'' kind of connection to his late father through the machine built in his likeness.
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* Watching James trying desperatly desperately to make ''some'' kind of connection to his late father through the machine built in his likeness.
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* Even though she gets rescued at the last second, watching Toruun, who is a teenager at best, suffocate is rough. In the last few moments, she's obviously trying to say some sort of prayer to her father, but all we can hear is her gasping for breath
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* Even though she gets rescued at the last second, watching Toruun, who is a teenager at best, suffocate is rough. In the last few moments, she's obviously trying to say some sort of prayer to her father, but all we can hear is her gasping for breathbreath.
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* Seeing all those "trophies" in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.
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* Seeing all those "trophies" in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.display.
* Even though she gets rescued at the last second, watching Toruun, who is a teenager at best, suffocate is rough. In the last few moments, she's obviously trying to say some sort of prayer to her father, but all we can hear is her gasping for breath
* Even though she gets rescued at the last second, watching Toruun, who is a teenager at best, suffocate is rough. In the last few moments, she's obviously trying to say some sort of prayer to her father, but all we can hear is her gasping for breath
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* Seeing all those ''trophies'' in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.
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* Seeing all those ''trophies'' "trophies" in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.
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* Seeing all those ''trophies'' in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling.
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* Seeing all those ''trophies'' in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsettling. The tattered cowls and broken armor of hundreds of fallen heroes, proudly on display.
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* Watching James trying desperatly to make ''some'' kind of connection to his late father through the machine built in his likeness.
* Seeing all those ''trophies'' in Ultron's fortress was ''very''unsetteling.unsettling.
* Seeing all those ''trophies'' in Ultron's fortress was ''very''
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* Seeing all those ''trophies'' in Ultron's fortress was ''very'' unsetteling.
