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* Chapter 31 ends on a pretty big tear jerker. Earlier in the evening, Twilight has asked Sunset to "please lie" to avoid talking about Equestria, or being homeless. It works, but when Twilight privately asks how she feels about Sunset, [[ExactWords she still has to lie]]. Despite crying, Sunset says that she hates Twilight and despises their time together, inadvertently breaking Twilight's heart because of Sunset's curse.
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* Chapter 31 ends on a pretty big tear jerker. Earlier in the evening, Twilight has asked Sunset to "please lie" to avoid talking about Equestria, or being homeless. It works, but when Twilight privately asks Sunset how she feels about Sunset, her, [[ExactWords she still has to lie]]. Despite crying, Sunset says that she hates Twilight and despises their time together, inadvertently breaking Twilight's heart because of Sunset's curse.
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* When [[ShrinkingViolet Fluttershy's]] supervisor Ms. Tenderheart at the animal shelter confronts Sunset about her bullying, we are treated to learning about what the consequences were of the latter's actions. Not only did Fluttershy come to the shelter almost every day in '''tears''', [[spoiler: there were one or two instances she contemplated suicide just to escape it all]]. Even Sunset [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone couldn't believe]] how far she pushed her.
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* When [[ShrinkingViolet Fluttershy's]] supervisor Ms. Tenderheart at the animal shelter confronts Sunset about her bullying, we are treated to learning about what the consequences were of the latter's actions. Not only did Fluttershy come to the shelter almost every day in '''tears''', [[spoiler: there were one or two instances she contemplated suicide just to escape it all]].all. Even Sunset [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone couldn't believe]] how far she pushed her.
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* At the Halloween party, Sunset endures yet another nightmare that jolts her up in the middle of the night. While getting a drink to calm her nerves, Twilight wakes up and asks her what's wrong. [[spoiler: Then Sunset's pride suddenly shatters like fragile glass and she breaks down into a sobbing mess, crying and pouring her heart out to Twilight over her past transgressions and heinous activities. It's so jarring to see Sunset become so vulnerable that the only comfort she could find at this moment was [[{{Irony}} Twilight]].]]
* Chapter 24. [[spoiler:Sunset finally clues in that Twilight might have feelings for her. She initially brushes the idea off as silly since of course Twilight would never be attracted to her, they're JustFriends. Then she thinks that if Twilight ''did'' have feelings for her, "[I’d] stomp her heart flat", because Sunset isn't into girls anyway]]. It's not often an author does a ShipSinking of ''the ship the story is based on''.
* Chapter 26, "The Rise and Fall of Sunset Shimmer." It features a lot of {{Call Back}}s to canon continuity, like Sunset being an arrogant bully who felt she deserved to be a princess, but it's all told from Sunset's perspective instead of the third-person narration the story had been using. The CharacterDevelopment Sunset had been going through shows here, as she lays out the myriad of ways she was terrible to her parents, her mentor, and anyone who showed her a shred of kindness. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more sad when Sunset walks up to the statue that links Equestria and the human world at the end of the chapter.]]
* Chapter 24. [[spoiler:Sunset finally clues in that Twilight might have feelings for her. She initially brushes the idea off as silly since of course Twilight would never be attracted to her, they're JustFriends. Then she thinks that if Twilight ''did'' have feelings for her, "[I’d] stomp her heart flat", because Sunset isn't into girls anyway]]. It's not often an author does a ShipSinking of ''the ship the story is based on''.
* Chapter 26, "The Rise and Fall of Sunset Shimmer." It features a lot of {{Call Back}}s to canon continuity, like Sunset being an arrogant bully who felt she deserved to be a princess, but it's all told from Sunset's perspective instead of the third-person narration the story had been using. The CharacterDevelopment Sunset had been going through shows here, as she lays out the myriad of ways she was terrible to her parents, her mentor, and anyone who showed her a shred of kindness. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more sad when Sunset walks up to the statue that links Equestria and the human world at the end of the chapter.]]
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* At the Halloween party, Sunset endures yet another nightmare that jolts her up in the middle of the night. While getting a drink to calm her nerves, Twilight wakes up and asks her what's wrong. [[spoiler: Then Sunset's pride suddenly shatters like fragile glass and she breaks down into a sobbing mess, crying and pouring her heart out to Twilight over her past transgressions and heinous activities. It's so jarring to see Sunset become so vulnerable that the only comfort she could find at this moment was [[{{Irony}} Twilight]].]]
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* Chapter 24.[[spoiler:Sunset Sunset finally clues in that Twilight might have feelings for her. She initially brushes the idea off as silly since of course Twilight would never be attracted to her, they're JustFriends. Then she thinks that if Twilight ''did'' have feelings for her, "[I’d] stomp her heart flat", because Sunset isn't into girls anyway]].anyway. It's not often an author does a ShipSinking of ''the ship the story is based on''.
* Chapter 26, "The Rise and Fall of Sunset Shimmer." It features a lot of {{Call Back}}s to canon continuity, like Sunset being an arrogant bully who felt she deserved to be a princess, but it's all told from Sunset's perspective instead of the third-person narration the story had been using. The CharacterDevelopment Sunset had been going through shows here, as she lays out the myriad of ways she was terrible to her parents, her mentor, and anyone who showed her a shred of kindness.[[spoiler:It It makes it all the more sad when Sunset walks up to the statue that links Equestria and the human world at the end of the chapter.]]
* Chapter 24.
* Chapter 26, "The Rise and Fall of Sunset Shimmer." It features a lot of {{Call Back}}s to canon continuity, like Sunset being an arrogant bully who felt she deserved to be a princess, but it's all told from Sunset's perspective instead of the third-person narration the story had been using. The CharacterDevelopment Sunset had been going through shows here, as she lays out the myriad of ways she was terrible to her parents, her mentor, and anyone who showed her a shred of kindness.
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* Chapter 31 ends on a pretty big tear jerker. [[spoiler:Earlier in the evening, Twilight has asked Sunset to "please lie" to avoid talking about Equestria, or being homeless. It works, but when Twilight privately asks how she feels about Sunset, [[ExactWords she still has to lie]]. Despite crying, Sunset says that she hates Twilight and despises their time together, inadvertently breaking Twilight's heart because of Sunset's curse.]]
** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it. [[spoiler:Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that.]] All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it. [[spoiler:Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that.]] All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
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* Chapter 31 ends on a pretty big tear jerker. [[spoiler:Earlier Earlier in the evening, Twilight has asked Sunset to "please lie" to avoid talking about Equestria, or being homeless. It works, but when Twilight privately asks how she feels about Sunset, [[ExactWords she still has to lie]]. Despite crying, Sunset says that she hates Twilight and despises their time together, inadvertently breaking Twilight's heart because of Sunset's curse.]]
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** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it.[[spoiler:Sunset Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that.]] that. All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it.
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* In Chapter 34, the Humane Five and Sunset are at a pizza place, and the conversation turns to things said about them. It turns out the Humane Five all accidentally started rumors and mishaps with each other, and all of it comes to a massive head with a food fight. Despite Sunset's best attempts, the Humane Five storm out, angry at each other. All Sunset can say is "Girls, please... don't leave me alone."
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* In Chapter 34, the Humane Five and Sunset are at a pizza place, and the conversation turns to things said about them. It turns out the Humane Five all accidentally started rumors and mishaps with each other, and all of it comes to a massive head with a food fight. Despite Sunset's best attempts, attempts to pin this all on her, the Humane Five storm out, angry at each other. All Sunset can say is "Girls, please... don't leave me alone."" The next chapter has Sunset all but cross the DespairEventHorizon, [[IHatePastMe screaming "I hate you!" to her past self]], even believing that [[FromBadToWorse she's worse off now than she was at the Fall Formal]].
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** Made worse still in Chapter 32, when Sunset discovers that she physically can't tell anyone about the curse. Even if she'd wanted to explain the situation to Twilight, she wouldn't have been able to.
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** Made worse still in Chapter 32, when Sunset discovers that she physically can't tell anyone about the curse. Even if she'd wanted to explain the situation to Twilight, she wouldn't have been able to.to.
* In Chapter 34, the Humane Five and Sunset are at a pizza place, and the conversation turns to things said about them. It turns out the Humane Five all accidentally started rumors and mishaps with each other, and all of it comes to a massive head with a food fight. Despite Sunset's best attempts, the Humane Five storm out, angry at each other. All Sunset can say is "Girls, please... don't leave me alone."
* In Chapter 34, the Humane Five and Sunset are at a pizza place, and the conversation turns to things said about them. It turns out the Humane Five all accidentally started rumors and mishaps with each other, and all of it comes to a massive head with a food fight. Despite Sunset's best attempts, the Humane Five storm out, angry at each other. All Sunset can say is "Girls, please... don't leave me alone."
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** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it. [[spoiler:Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that. And, if she'd just told Twilight about the curse in the first place, this wouldn't have happened.]] All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
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** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it. [[spoiler:Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that. And, if she'd just told Twilight about the curse in the first place, this wouldn't have happened.]] All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].away]].
** Made worse still in Chapter 32, when Sunset discovers that she physically can't tell anyone about the curse. Even if she'd wanted to explain the situation to Twilight, she wouldn't have been able to.
** Made worse still in Chapter 32, when Sunset discovers that she physically can't tell anyone about the curse. Even if she'd wanted to explain the situation to Twilight, she wouldn't have been able to.
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* Chapter 31 ends on a pretty big tear jerker. Earlier in the evening, Twilight has asked Sunset to "please lie" to avoid talking about Equestria, or being homeless. It works, but when Twilight privately asks how she feels about Sunset, [[ExactWords she still has to lie]]. Despite crying, Sunset says that she hates Twilight and despises their time together, inadvertently breaking Twilight's heart because of Sunset's curse.
** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it. Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that. And, if she'd just told Twilight about the curse in the first place, this wouldn't have happened. All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it. Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that. And, if she'd just told Twilight about the curse in the first place, this wouldn't have happened. All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
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* Chapter 31 ends on a pretty big tear jerker. Earlier [[spoiler:Earlier in the evening, Twilight has asked Sunset to "please lie" to avoid talking about Equestria, or being homeless. It works, but when Twilight privately asks how she feels about Sunset, [[ExactWords she still has to lie]]. Despite crying, Sunset says that she hates Twilight and despises their time together, inadvertently breaking Twilight's heart because of Sunset's curse.
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** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it.Sunset [[spoiler:Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that. And, if she'd just told Twilight about the curse in the first place, this wouldn't have happened. ]] All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it.
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* Chapter 30 has Lyra smoothly, casually tell Sunset that, if the Winter Ball doesn't make money, Sunset will be banned from all future school events. It's heartbreaking to see how much of a [[TheScapegoat scapegoat]] that Sunset's become.
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* Chapter 30 has Lyra smoothly, casually tell Sunset that, if the Winter Ball doesn't make money, Sunset will be banned from all future school events. It's heartbreaking to see how much of a [[TheScapegoat scapegoat]] that Sunset's become.become.
* Chapter 31 ends on a pretty big tear jerker. Earlier in the evening, Twilight has asked Sunset to "please lie" to avoid talking about Equestria, or being homeless. It works, but when Twilight privately asks how she feels about Sunset, [[ExactWords she still has to lie]]. Despite crying, Sunset says that she hates Twilight and despises their time together, inadvertently breaking Twilight's heart because of Sunset's curse.
** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it. Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that. And, if she'd just told Twilight about the curse in the first place, this wouldn't have happened. All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
* Chapter 31 ends on a pretty big tear jerker. Earlier in the evening, Twilight has asked Sunset to "please lie" to avoid talking about Equestria, or being homeless. It works, but when Twilight privately asks how she feels about Sunset, [[ExactWords she still has to lie]]. Despite crying, Sunset says that she hates Twilight and despises their time together, inadvertently breaking Twilight's heart because of Sunset's curse.
** It gets worse when Twilight tells Sunset to "please leave her alone," and again, Sunset has to do it. Sunset even notes that by trying to avoid breaking Twilight's heart, she'd done just that. And, if she'd just told Twilight about the curse in the first place, this wouldn't have happened. All that time finally coming to grips with her feelings, and Sunset [[ShootTheShaggyDog threw it away]].
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* Chapter 30 has Lyra smoothly, casually tell Sunset that, if the Winter Ball doesn't make money, Sunset will be banned from all future school events. It's heartbreaking to see how much of a [[TheScapegoat scapegoat]] that Sunset's become.
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* Chapter 24. [[spoiler:Sunset finally clues in that Twilight might have feelings for her. She initially brushes the idea off as silly since of course Twilight would never be attracted to her, they're JustFriends. Then she thinks that if Twilight ''did'' have feelings for her, "[I’d] stomp her heart flat", because Sunset isn't into girls anyway]]. It's not often an author does a ShipSinking of ''the ship the story is based on''.
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* Chapter 24. [[spoiler:Sunset finally clues in that Twilight might have feelings for her. She initially brushes the idea off as silly since of course Twilight would never be attracted to her, they're JustFriends. Then she thinks that if Twilight ''did'' have feelings for her, "[I’d] stomp her heart flat", because Sunset isn't into girls anyway]]. It's not often an author does a ShipSinking of ''the ship the story is based on''.on''.
* Chapter 26, "The Rise and Fall of Sunset Shimmer." It features a lot of {{Call Back}}s to canon continuity, like Sunset being an arrogant bully who felt she deserved to be a princess, but it's all told from Sunset's perspective instead of the third-person narration the story had been using. The CharacterDevelopment Sunset had been going through shows here, as she lays out the myriad of ways she was terrible to her parents, her mentor, and anyone who showed her a shred of kindness. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more sad when Sunset walks up to the statue that links Equestria and the human world at the end of the chapter.]]
-->'''[[spoiler:Sunset:]]''' [[spoiler:Mom, Dad, Celestia... I'm sorry.]]
* Chapter 26, "The Rise and Fall of Sunset Shimmer." It features a lot of {{Call Back}}s to canon continuity, like Sunset being an arrogant bully who felt she deserved to be a princess, but it's all told from Sunset's perspective instead of the third-person narration the story had been using. The CharacterDevelopment Sunset had been going through shows here, as she lays out the myriad of ways she was terrible to her parents, her mentor, and anyone who showed her a shred of kindness. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more sad when Sunset walks up to the statue that links Equestria and the human world at the end of the chapter.]]
-->'''[[spoiler:Sunset:]]''' [[spoiler:Mom, Dad, Celestia... I'm sorry.]]
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* At the Halloween party, Sunset endures yet another nightmare that jolts her up in the middle of the night. While getting a drink to calm her nerves, Twilight wakes up and asks her what's wrong. [[spoiler: Then Sunset's pride suddenly shatters like fragile glass and she breaks down into a sobbing mess, crying and pouring her heart out to Twilight over her past transgressions and heinous activities. It's so jarring to see Sunset become so vulnerable that the only comfort she could find at this moment was [[{{Irony}} Twilight]].]]
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* At the Halloween party, Sunset endures yet another nightmare that jolts her up in the middle of the night. While getting a drink to calm her nerves, Twilight wakes up and asks her what's wrong. [[spoiler: Then Sunset's pride suddenly shatters like fragile glass and she breaks down into a sobbing mess, crying and pouring her heart out to Twilight over her past transgressions and heinous activities. It's so jarring to see Sunset become so vulnerable that the only comfort she could find at this moment was [[{{Irony}} Twilight]].]]]]
* Chapter 24. [[spoiler:Sunset finally clues in that Twilight might have feelings for her. She initially brushes the idea off as silly since of course Twilight would never be attracted to her, they're JustFriends. Then she thinks that if Twilight ''did'' have feelings for her, "[I’d] stomp her heart flat", because Sunset isn't into girls anyway]]. It's not often an author does a ShipSinking of ''the ship the story is based on''.
* Chapter 24. [[spoiler:Sunset finally clues in that Twilight might have feelings for her. She initially brushes the idea off as silly since of course Twilight would never be attracted to her, they're JustFriends. Then she thinks that if Twilight ''did'' have feelings for her, "[I’d] stomp her heart flat", because Sunset isn't into girls anyway]]. It's not often an author does a ShipSinking of ''the ship the story is based on''.
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* When [[ShrinkingViolet Fluttershy's]] supervisor Ms. Tenderheart at the animal shelter confronts Sunset about her bullying, we are treated to learning about what the consequences were of the latter's actions. Not only did Fluttershy come to the shelter almost every day in '''tears''', [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] of all people [[spoiler: gets pushed there were one or two instances she contemplated suicide just to contemplating suicide]] because of Sunset Shimmer's endless bullying in the past. escape it all]]. Even Sunset [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone couldn't believe her actions]] had believe]] how far she pushed her.
** What makes thismuch consequence.worse is because Sunset broke up all their friendships prior to ''Equestria Girls'', Fluttershy had literally no one to turn to for what was likely nearly 3 years of loneliness.
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* [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] of all people [[spoiler: gets pushed to contemplating suicide]] because of Sunset Shimmer's endless bullying in the past. Even Sunset [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone couldn't believe her actions]] had this much consequence.consequence.
* At the Halloween party, Sunset endures yet another nightmare that jolts her up in the middle of the night. While getting a drink to calm her nerves, Twilight wakes up and asks her what's wrong. [[spoiler: Then Sunset's pride suddenly shatters like fragile glass and she breaks down into a sobbing mess, crying and pouring her heart out to Twilight over her past transgressions and heinous activities. It's so jarring to see Sunset become so vulnerable that the only comfort she could find at this moment was [[{{Irony}} Twilight]].]]
* At the Halloween party, Sunset endures yet another nightmare that jolts her up in the middle of the night. While getting a drink to calm her nerves, Twilight wakes up and asks her what's wrong. [[spoiler: Then Sunset's pride suddenly shatters like fragile glass and she breaks down into a sobbing mess, crying and pouring her heart out to Twilight over her past transgressions and heinous activities. It's so jarring to see Sunset become so vulnerable that the only comfort she could find at this moment was [[{{Irony}} Twilight]].]]
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