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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, the [[HookerWithAHeartOfGold prostitute]] who had grown to become a loving ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well, to say the least.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, Titine (Creator/EmmanuelleSeigner), the [[HookerWithAHeartOfGold prostitute]] who had grown to become a loving ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well, to say the least.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who had grown to become a loving ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well, to say the least.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold the [[HookerWithAHeartOfGold prostitute]] who had grown to become a loving ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well, to say the least.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who has become a loving ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well, to say the least.
* It takes quite a moment for Edith's staff to tell her that her lover died in a plane crash.
* It takes quite a moment for Edith's staff to tell her that her lover died in a plane crash.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who has had grown to become a loving ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well, to say the least.
* It takes quite a moment for Edith's staff to tell her that her lover Marcel Cerdan died in a plane crash.
* It takes quite a moment for Edith's staff to tell her that her lover Marcel Cerdan died in a plane crash.
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* It takes a moment for Edith's staff to tell her that her lover died in a plane crash.
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* It takes quite a moment for Edith's staff to tell her that her lover died in a plane crash.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who has become a loving ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who has become a loving ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well.well, to say the least.
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* A weakened 47 years old Edith who looks like she's in her 80's and holds on her memories as she dies.
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* A weakened 47 years old At age 47, Edith who really looks like she's in her 80's 80's, after years of being physically and mentally broken by life and consuming drugs to ease the pain. She holds on her memories as she dies.dies.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who has become a loving ParentalSubstitute, doesn't take it well.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who has become a loving ParentalSubstitute, ParentalSubstitute for Edith, doesn't take it well.
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* It takes a moment for Edith's staff to tell her that her lover died in a plane crash.
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* It takes a moment for Edith's staff to tell her that her lover died in a plane crash.crash.
* A weakened 47 years old Edith who looks like she's in her 80's and holds on her memories as she dies.
* A weakened 47 years old Edith who looks like she's in her 80's and holds on her memories as she dies.
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* It takes a moment for Edith's staff to announce her that her lover died in a plane crash.
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* It takes a moment for Edith's staff to announce tell her that her lover died in a plane crash.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who has become a loving ParentalSubstitute, doesn't take it well.
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* When Edith's father comes back to reclaim her and takes her away from the brothel. Titine, a HookerWithAHeartOfGold who has become a loving ParentalSubstitute, doesn't take it well.well.
* It takes a moment for Edith's staff to announce her that her lover died in a plane crash.
* It takes a moment for Edith's staff to announce her that her lover died in a plane crash.
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