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* Because of ZAIA's repetitive interference, Delmo couldn't physically appear on the model runway due to a damaged leg caused by Gai. Walking on the runway was something that she dreamt of and yet she could not do it herself. Luckily enough, there is a HeartwarmingMoment, as Izu and Aruto helped her to achieve that by having themselves there. Izu even transmits the cheering of the crowd and presumably all the things that Izu sees, so that Delmo could feel it too.
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* Because of ZAIA's repetitive interference, Delmo couldn't physically appear on the model runway due to a damaged leg caused by Gai. Walking on the runway was something that she dreamt of and yet she could not do it herself. Luckily enough, there is a HeartwarmingMoment, SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoment, as Izu and Aruto helped her to achieve that by having themselves there. Izu even transmits the cheering of the crowd and presumably all the things that Izu sees, so that Delmo could feel it too.
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** Let's take a moment to address the scene in more detail: Up until now, the only [=HumaGear=] capable of crying was Izu, even then it was but a simulation for most of it... Until she made the Zero-Two Progrise Key. But now we have a [=HumaGear=], older than Izu, who didn't just shed a single tear, but many, as he watched his son die in his very arms. There's no way he could have faked those tears, his heart was squeezed into scrap at that very last moment.
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** Let's take a moment to address the scene in more detail: Up until now, the only [=HumaGear=] capable of crying was Izu, even then it was but a simulation for most of it... Until until she made the Zero-Two Progrise Key. But now we have a [=HumaGear=], older than Izu, who didn't just shed a single tear, but many, as he watched his son die in his very arms. There's no way he could have faked those tears, his heart was squeezed into scrap at that very last moment.
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* Metsubojinrai.net (sans Jin) getting their Singularity data taken out of them. All of those emotions, dreams, passions... Just gone in an instant. All to fuel a horrific agenda.
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* Metsubojinrai.net (sans Jin) getting their Singularity data taken out of them. All of those emotions, dreams, passions... Just just gone in an instant. All to fuel a horrific agenda.
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* Horobi's introspection scene really sells his inability to reconcile his mission with the fatherly love he's suppressed for so long. Once he does finally come to terms with it, [[HopeSpot he tries to approach his son]]....only The Ark to snatch that moment from him and use him as a puppet to attempt to kill Jin.
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* Horobi's introspection scene really sells his inability to reconcile his mission with the fatherly love he's suppressed for so long. Once he does finally come to terms with it, [[HopeSpot he tries to approach his son]]....son]]... only The the Ark to snatch that moment from him and use him as a puppet to attempt to kill Jin.
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--> '''Aruto''': I am... The Ark...
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--> '''Aruto''': I am... The the Ark...
