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''Daikaiju Yuki'' is a series set after an apocalypse, so naturally, you're going to feel sorry for the characters one way or another. '''Unmarked spoilers ahead.'''
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''Daikaiju Yuki'' is a series set after an apocalypse, so naturally, you're going to feel sorry for the characters one way or another.
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* Shujayra, barely holding on to life after being poisoned by his father/brother, gives what little power he has left to Allie and Mokwa so that they may kill King Supayra. He then collapses, seemingly dead in Mokwa's arms. All Allie can do is cry over the loss of her one good son, wishing it had been her instead.
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* Shujayra, barely holding on to life after being poisoned by his father/brother, gives what little power he has left to Allie and Mokwa so that they may kill King Supayra. He then collapses, seemingly dead in Mokwa's arms. All Allie can do is cry over the loss of her one good son, wishing it had been her instead.instead.
* After all is said and done, Allie decides that if anyone's getting off the planet, it's not her. She offers Obasi her amulet, and very nearly brings a knife (the same one she almost killed Obasi with) [[drivenToSuicide to her throat]]. The man instantly stops her, and they both end up sobbing into each other. It's only when Shujayra reveals himself to be NotQuiteDead that Allie finds the strength to carry on.
* After all is said and done, Allie decides that if anyone's getting off the planet, it's not her. She offers Obasi her amulet, and very nearly brings a knife (the same one she almost killed Obasi with) [[drivenToSuicide to her throat]]. The man instantly stops her, and they both end up sobbing into each other. It's only when Shujayra reveals himself to be NotQuiteDead that Allie finds the strength to carry on.
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* Shujayra, barely holding on to life after being poisoned by his father/brother, gives what little power he has left to Allie and Mokwa so that they may kill King Supayra. He then collapses, seemingly dead. All Allie can do is cry over the loss of her one good son.
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* Shujayra, barely holding on to life after being poisoned by his father/brother, gives what little power he has left to Allie and Mokwa so that they may kill King Supayra. He then collapses, seemingly dead. dead in Mokwa's arms. All Allie can do is cry over the loss of her one good son.son, wishing it had been her instead.
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* After Supayra has been reborn along with his surviving children, Obasi is allowed to leave Mokwa after recovering. The look he gives Allie isn't even anger, it's described as [[DisappointedInYou dejection]]. He's quick to forgive her as always, but it's clear that her almost killing him under Supayra's possession has left its emotional mark.
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* After Supayra has been reborn along with his surviving children, Obasi is allowed to leave Mokwa after recovering. The look he gives Allie isn't even anger, it's described as [[DisappointedInYou dejection]]. He's quick to forgive her as always, but it's clear that her almost killing him under Supayra's possession has left its emotional mark.mark.
* He may have been a mindless brute, but Setanayra's death is rather somber. He gets jumped by Shujayra, and has no idea why his brother would just turn on him like that. Then Mecha Mungonde and the Mecha Knight attack, with the latter stabbing him before his brother performs a NeckSnap on him.
* Shujayra, barely holding on to life after being poisoned by his father/brother, gives what little power he has left to Allie and Mokwa so that they may kill King Supayra. He then collapses, seemingly dead. All Allie can do is cry over the loss of her one good son.
* He may have been a mindless brute, but Setanayra's death is rather somber. He gets jumped by Shujayra, and has no idea why his brother would just turn on him like that. Then Mecha Mungonde and the Mecha Knight attack, with the latter stabbing him before his brother performs a NeckSnap on him.
* Shujayra, barely holding on to life after being poisoned by his father/brother, gives what little power he has left to Allie and Mokwa so that they may kill King Supayra. He then collapses, seemingly dead. All Allie can do is cry over the loss of her one good son.
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** Later, Supayra possesses her into stabbing Obasi to the point of nearly killing him. All Allie can do is scream for him to stop making her do it before Mokwa manages to intervene.
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** Later, Supayra possesses her into stabbing Obasi to the point of nearly killing him. All Allie can do is scream for him to stop making her do it before Mokwa manages to intervene.intervene.
* After Supayra has been reborn along with his surviving children, Obasi is allowed to leave Mokwa after recovering. The look he gives Allie isn't even anger, it's described as [[DisappointedInYou dejection]]. He's quick to forgive her as always, but it's clear that her almost killing him under Supayra's possession has left its emotional mark.
* After Supayra has been reborn along with his surviving children, Obasi is allowed to leave Mokwa after recovering. The look he gives Allie isn't even anger, it's described as [[DisappointedInYou dejection]]. He's quick to forgive her as always, but it's clear that her almost killing him under Supayra's possession has left its emotional mark.
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** One of the people killed, the most recent one before the ruse is up, is the new colonel, who just stares at Allie's possessed face with a look of pure betrayal before succumbing to her wounds.
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** One of the people killed, the most recent one before the ruse is up, is the new colonel, who just stares at Allie's possessed face with a look of pure betrayal before succumbing to her wounds.wounds.
* After everyone notices the dead colonel, Supayra betrays Allie, possessing Mokwa for a brief time and causing her to annihilate hundreds of civilians and even the queen. Mokwa manages to get Allie out of there (unaware that Supayra tagged along), and all the human woman can do is look upon the carnage that she got roped into allowing to happen. All because she chose to trust someone who never had her best interests in mind. The fact that she basically betrayed all of her values for him of all beings crashes down upon her.
-->What had she done?
-->What had become of Mokwa?
--> What had become of her own self?
** Later, Supayra possesses her into stabbing Obasi to the point of nearly killing him. All Allie can do is scream for him to stop making her do it before Mokwa manages to intervene.
* After everyone notices the dead colonel, Supayra betrays Allie, possessing Mokwa for a brief time and causing her to annihilate hundreds of civilians and even the queen. Mokwa manages to get Allie out of there (unaware that Supayra tagged along), and all the human woman can do is look upon the carnage that she got roped into allowing to happen. All because she chose to trust someone who never had her best interests in mind. The fact that she basically betrayed all of her values for him of all beings crashes down upon her.
-->What had she done?
-->What had become of Mokwa?
--> What had become of her own self?
** Later, Supayra possesses her into stabbing Obasi to the point of nearly killing him. All Allie can do is scream for him to stop making her do it before Mokwa manages to intervene.
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** Speaking of which, the fact that Supayra has successfully gaslit Allie into basically doing his bidding. She's so broken by her experiences that she's willing to trust a psychotic murderous frog that makes her kill people while tricking her into thinking it's AllJustADream. That's just...awful.
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** Speaking of which, the fact that Supayra has successfully gaslit Allie into basically doing his bidding. She's so broken by her experiences that she's willing to trust a psychotic murderous frog that makes her kill people while tricking her into thinking it's AllJustADream. That's just...awful.awful.
** One of the people killed, the most recent one before the ruse is up, is the new colonel, who just stares at Allie's possessed face with a look of pure betrayal before succumbing to her wounds.
** One of the people killed, the most recent one before the ruse is up, is the new colonel, who just stares at Allie's possessed face with a look of pure betrayal before succumbing to her wounds.
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* The prologue involves a bride hearing that her fiance got killed by Supayra, who then shows up and kills everyone there. The poor bride ends up so consumed by despair that she willfully walks into the frog's mouth.
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* Allie and Mokwa finally find Obasi and Mungonde...except the latter is possessed by the fog while the former is barely clinging to life. After being forced to fight twice, Obasi says to Allie that the only way to save him is to kill Mungonde. With great reluctance, Mokwa does just that, slowly and violently smashing in the poor monkey's head. In the end, the FinalBoss of the book is not the fog itself, but the bear kaiju' former friend turned puppet. It's by and large the most sorrowful moment of all in not just this story, but the series as a whole, leaving everyone involved all but broken by it.
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* Allie and Mokwa finally find Obasi and Mungonde...except the latter is possessed by the fog while the former is barely clinging to life. After being forced to fight twice, Obasi says to Allie that the only way to save him is to kill Mungonde. With great reluctance, Mokwa does just that, slowly and violently smashing in the poor monkey's head. In the end, the FinalBoss of the book is not the fog itself, but the bear kaiju' former friend turned puppet. It's by and large the most sorrowful moment of all in not just this story, but the series as a whole, leaving everyone involved all but broken by it.it.
* The implication at the very end that Supayra was indeed real throughout the book (something confirmed in the next one), and is now possessing Allie, which she just allows. Quite the harrowing cliffhanger to end on, eh?
!!Mokwa: Exorcism
* After such a long time of being on Ganawenda, Allie has [[TookALevelInCynic taken many levels in cynic.]] She has nothing but contempt for the world she saved not too long ago, sees the inhabitants as ungrateful, treats her occasional talks with Mowka with contempt, and alienates Obasi with her sour attitude and suggestions of violence. Altogether, there's the strong sense that this once heroic woman has well and truly FALLEN...at least, before it becomes clearer that she's being slowly possessed by Supayra.
** Speaking of which, the fact that Supayra has successfully gaslit Allie into basically doing his bidding. She's so broken by her experiences that she's willing to trust a psychotic murderous frog that makes her kill people while tricking her into thinking it's AllJustADream. That's just...awful.
* The implication at the very end that Supayra was indeed real throughout the book (something confirmed in the next one), and is now possessing Allie, which she just allows. Quite the harrowing cliffhanger to end on, eh?
!!Mokwa: Exorcism
* After such a long time of being on Ganawenda, Allie has [[TookALevelInCynic taken many levels in cynic.]] She has nothing but contempt for the world she saved not too long ago, sees the inhabitants as ungrateful, treats her occasional talks with Mowka with contempt, and alienates Obasi with her sour attitude and suggestions of violence. Altogether, there's the strong sense that this once heroic woman has well and truly FALLEN...at least, before it becomes clearer that she's being slowly possessed by Supayra.
** Speaking of which, the fact that Supayra has successfully gaslit Allie into basically doing his bidding. She's so broken by her experiences that she's willing to trust a psychotic murderous frog that makes her kill people while tricking her into thinking it's AllJustADream. That's just...awful.
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* In spite of the camraderie (and romantic fling in Tim's case), Allie knows that the soldiers she's allied with will inevitably die fighting the Fog Knights. And they do. The pilots of Mons Magna are blown up in their own robot, Tim gets sliced in half after Broadsword is used as a weapon by Mokwa, and Colonel B orders her to blow him and Fortress up when the Fog Demons prove too much. For the last two, Allie feels almost responsible for their deaths, and especially bad about how the Colonel won't live to see his vengeance realized.
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* In spite of the camraderie camaraderie (and romantic fling in Tim's case), Allie knows that the soldiers she's allied with will inevitably die fighting the Fog Knights. And they do. The pilots of Mons Magna are blown up in their own robot, Tim gets sliced in half after Broadsword is used as a weapon by Mokwa, and Colonel B orders her to blow him and Fortress up when the Fog Demons prove too much. For the last two, Allie feels almost responsible for their deaths, and especially bad about how the Colonel won't live to see his vengeance realized.realized.
* Allie and Mokwa finally find Obasi and Mungonde...except the latter is possessed by the fog while the former is barely clinging to life. After being forced to fight twice, Obasi says to Allie that the only way to save him is to kill Mungonde. With great reluctance, Mokwa does just that, slowly and violently smashing in the poor monkey's head. In the end, the FinalBoss of the book is not the fog itself, but the bear kaiju' former friend turned puppet. It's by and large the most sorrowful moment of all in not just this story, but the series as a whole, leaving everyone involved all but broken by it.
* Allie and Mokwa finally find Obasi and Mungonde...except the latter is possessed by the fog while the former is barely clinging to life. After being forced to fight twice, Obasi says to Allie that the only way to save him is to kill Mungonde. With great reluctance, Mokwa does just that, slowly and violently smashing in the poor monkey's head. In the end, the FinalBoss of the book is not the fog itself, but the bear kaiju' former friend turned puppet. It's by and large the most sorrowful moment of all in not just this story, but the series as a whole, leaving everyone involved all but broken by it.
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* It's made very clear that Colonal B is haunted by how the Fog Knights took away his family and by extension his hopes of having a normal life. He's driven almost entirely by revenge at this point, not caring what happens if he succeeds or fails. Allie finds it hard not to relate.
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* It's made very clear that Colonal Colonel B is haunted by how the Fog Knights took away his family and by extension his hopes of having a normal life. He's driven almost entirely by revenge at this point, not caring what happens if he succeeds or fails. Allie finds it hard not to relate.relate.
* In spite of the camraderie (and romantic fling in Tim's case), Allie knows that the soldiers she's allied with will inevitably die fighting the Fog Knights. And they do. The pilots of Mons Magna are blown up in their own robot, Tim gets sliced in half after Broadsword is used as a weapon by Mokwa, and Colonel B orders her to blow him and Fortress up when the Fog Demons prove too much. For the last two, Allie feels almost responsible for their deaths, and especially bad about how the Colonel won't live to see his vengeance realized.
* In spite of the camraderie (and romantic fling in Tim's case), Allie knows that the soldiers she's allied with will inevitably die fighting the Fog Knights. And they do. The pilots of Mons Magna are blown up in their own robot, Tim gets sliced in half after Broadsword is used as a weapon by Mokwa, and Colonel B orders her to blow him and Fortress up when the Fog Demons prove too much. For the last two, Allie feels almost responsible for their deaths, and especially bad about how the Colonel won't live to see his vengeance realized.
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* During the night in the Ganawendan castle, Allie has a huge panic attack from the stress of the Fog Knights and Obasi's kidnapping, launching into a ClusterFBomb and her screaming into a pillow. And that's before her vision of Supayra shows up.
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* During the night in the Ganawendan castle, Allie has a huge panic attack from the stress of the Fog Knights and Obasi's kidnapping, launching into a ClusterFBomb and her screaming into a pillow. And that's before her vision of Supayra shows up.up.
* It's made very clear that Colonal B is haunted by how the Fog Knights took away his family and by extension his hopes of having a normal life. He's driven almost entirely by revenge at this point, not caring what happens if he succeeds or fails. Allie finds it hard not to relate.
* It's made very clear that Colonal B is haunted by how the Fog Knights took away his family and by extension his hopes of having a normal life. He's driven almost entirely by revenge at this point, not caring what happens if he succeeds or fails. Allie finds it hard not to relate.
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* Appropriately, Mokwa is left wracked by guilt over their inadvertent misfire that got them on the fog-haunted planet, stating that she failed everyone, especially Allie, who for a time blames all of it on her.
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* Appropriately, Mokwa is left wracked by guilt over their inadvertent misfire that got them on the fog-haunted planet, stating that she failed everyone, especially Allie, who for a time blames all of it on her.her.
* During the night in the Ganawendan castle, Allie has a huge panic attack from the stress of the Fog Knights and Obasi's kidnapping, launching into a ClusterFBomb and her screaming into a pillow. And that's before her vision of Supayra shows up.
* During the night in the Ganawendan castle, Allie has a huge panic attack from the stress of the Fog Knights and Obasi's kidnapping, launching into a ClusterFBomb and her screaming into a pillow. And that's before her vision of Supayra shows up.
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* When the Fog Knights are fighting Mokwa and Mungonde, the Plague Knight stabs Mungonde, and takes both him and Obasi away to parts unknown. Allie and Mokwa are left all alone on a planet they have no idea what to do on.
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* When the Fog Knights are fighting Mokwa and Mungonde, the Plague Knight stabs Mungonde, and takes both him and Obasi away to parts unknown. Allie and Mokwa are left all alone on a planet they have no idea what to do on.on.
* Appropriately, Mokwa is left wracked by guilt over their inadvertent misfire that got them on the fog-haunted planet, stating that she failed everyone, especially Allie, who for a time blames all of it on her.
* Appropriately, Mokwa is left wracked by guilt over their inadvertent misfire that got them on the fog-haunted planet, stating that she failed everyone, especially Allie, who for a time blames all of it on her.
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* At first, it seems that Allie and Obasi are going to reunite with the Pantheon on the planet that they occupy. [[HopeSpot They come within inches of the place...]][[YankTheDogsChain and then they miss.]] They end up sailing past the planet and into a far, far, far away part of the universe. It's here where the horrible things in the story begin happening in earnest.
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* At first, it seems that Allie and Obasi are going to reunite with the Pantheon on the planet that they occupy. [[HopeSpot They come within inches of the place...]][[YankTheDogsChain and then they miss.]] They end up sailing past the planet and into a far, far, far away part of the universe. It's here where the horrible things in the story begin happening in earnest.earnest.
* When the Fog Knights are fighting Mokwa and Mungonde, the Plague Knight stabs Mungonde, and takes both him and Obasi away to parts unknown. Allie and Mokwa are left all alone on a planet they have no idea what to do on.
* When the Fog Knights are fighting Mokwa and Mungonde, the Plague Knight stabs Mungonde, and takes both him and Obasi away to parts unknown. Allie and Mokwa are left all alone on a planet they have no idea what to do on.
