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* Ulf receiving a stab wound in the side during the invasion of Tabork. What makes it whose is the utter suddenness of it -- Lydia and Edvin leading the rowers and Kloof in a surprise flanking attack utterly shatters the Tualagi defense and the mood is composed of triumph only dimmed by exhaustion...until a devastated wail draws the heroes' attention to Wulf cradling his ashen, unconscious brother.
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* Ulf receiving taking a stab wound in the side during the invasion of Tabork. What makes it whose worse is the utter suddenness of it -- Lydia and Edvin leading the rowers and Kloof in a surprise flanking attack utterly shatters the Tualagi defense and the mood is composed of triumph only dimmed by exhaustion...until a devastated wail draws the heroes' attention to Wulf cradling his ashen, unconscious brother.
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* In a bizarre way, the sinking of ''Nightwolf''. Hal sabotages the ship to keep Tursgud and his crew from catching them while they're trying to escape Socorro. [[GoneHorriblyRight It works too well]], ripping the stern out and sinking the ship before her crew can react to save themselves. Despite what a pain Tursgud was during training and his turning to slaving and piracy over his "humiliation", [[AlasPoorVillain even most of the Herons are horrified at the sight.]]
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* In a bizarre way, the sinking of ''Nightwolf''. Hal sabotages the ship to keep Tursgud and his crew from catching them while they're trying to escape Socorro. [[GoneHorriblyRight It works too well]], ripping the stern out and sinking the ship before her crew can react to save themselves. Despite what a pain Tursgud was during training and his turning to slaving and piracy over his "humiliation", [[AlasPoorVillain even most of the Herons are horrified at the sight.]]]]
* Ulf receiving a stab wound in the side during the invasion of Tabork. What makes it whose is the utter suddenness of it -- Lydia and Edvin leading the rowers and Kloof in a surprise flanking attack utterly shatters the Tualagi defense and the mood is composed of triumph only dimmed by exhaustion...until a devastated wail draws the heroes' attention to Wulf cradling his ashen, unconscious brother.
* Ulf receiving a stab wound in the side during the invasion of Tabork. What makes it whose is the utter suddenness of it -- Lydia and Edvin leading the rowers and Kloof in a surprise flanking attack utterly shatters the Tualagi defense and the mood is composed of triumph only dimmed by exhaustion...until a devastated wail draws the heroes' attention to Wulf cradling his ashen, unconscious brother.
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* The utter disgracing of the Herons after Zavac steals the Andomal from under their noses. They've just proven themselves, only to have it snatched away. They set out after the pirate, despite the danger, as their only chance to escape living under the degradation and the crushing bitterness of almost everyone in town.
** Even worse? Almost every one of them is an outsider, unpopular for some reason or another. This was their chance to be heroes, to be not just accepted, but honored...and because of one stupid mistake, it's all been snatched away.
** Even worse? Almost every one of them is an outsider, unpopular for some reason or another. This was their chance to be heroes, to be not just accepted, but honored...and because of one stupid mistake, it's all been snatched away.
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* The utter disgracing of the Herons after Zavac steals the Andomal from under their noses. They've just proven themselves, only to have it snatched away. They set out after the pirate, despite the danger, as their only chance to escape living under the degradation and the crushing bitterness of almost everyone in town. \n** Even worse? Almost every one of them is an outsider, unpopular for some reason or another. This was their chance to be heroes, to be not just accepted, but honored...and because of one stupid mistake, it's all been snatched away.
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* The utter disgracing of the Herons after Zavac steals the Andomal from under their noses. They've just proven themselves, only to have it snatched away. They out after the pirate, despite the danger, as their only chance to escape living under the degradation and the crushing bitterness of almost everyone in town.
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* The utter disgracing of the Herons after Zavac steals the Andomal from under their noses. They've just proven themselves, only to have it snatched away. They set out after the pirate, despite the danger, as their only chance to escape living under the degradation and the crushing bitterness of almost everyone in town.town.
** Even worse? Almost every one of them is an outsider, unpopular for some reason or another. This was their chance to be heroes, to be not just accepted, but honored...and because of one stupid mistake, it's all been snatched away.
** Even worse? Almost every one of them is an outsider, unpopular for some reason or another. This was their chance to be heroes, to be not just accepted, but honored...and because of one stupid mistake, it's all been snatched away.
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* The utter disgracing of the Herons after Zavac steals the Andomal from under their noses. They've just proven themselves, only to have it snatched away. They out after the pirate, despite the danger, as their only chance to escape living under the degradation and the crushing bitterness of almost everyone in town.
* Ingvar getting shot in the storming of Limmat during ''The Invaders''. It's the first time any of the Herons has gotten seriously injured and it introduces them viscerally to the horrors of war. His wound becomes infected in ''The Hunters'', after the Herons are already far out to sea. The infection and the resulting fever comes within a hair's width of killing him, while the other Brotherband members (especially [[AFatherToHisMen Hal]] and [[TheMedic Edvin]]) can only watch and hope something they can do makes a difference.
* In a bizarre way, the sinking of ''Nightwolf''. Hal sabotages the ship to keep Tursgud and his crew from catching them while they're trying to escape Socorro. [[GoneHorriblyRight It works too well]], ripping the stern out and sinking the ship before her crew can react to save themselves. Despite what a pain Tursgud was during training and his turning to slaving and piracy over his "humiliation", [[AlasPoorVillain even most of the Herons are horrified at the sight.]]
* Ingvar getting shot in the storming of Limmat during ''The Invaders''. It's the first time any of the Herons has gotten seriously injured and it introduces them viscerally to the horrors of war. His wound becomes infected in ''The Hunters'', after the Herons are already far out to sea. The infection and the resulting fever comes within a hair's width of killing him, while the other Brotherband members (especially [[AFatherToHisMen Hal]] and [[TheMedic Edvin]]) can only watch and hope something they can do makes a difference.
* In a bizarre way, the sinking of ''Nightwolf''. Hal sabotages the ship to keep Tursgud and his crew from catching them while they're trying to escape Socorro. [[GoneHorriblyRight It works too well]], ripping the stern out and sinking the ship before her crew can react to save themselves. Despite what a pain Tursgud was during training and his turning to slaving and piracy over his "humiliation", [[AlasPoorVillain even most of the Herons are horrified at the sight.]]
