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Changed line(s) 2 (click to see context) from:
* Fluttershy saying good by to her friends for what may be the last time, after deciding to sacrifice herself and become Discord's bride.
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* Fluttershy saying good by goodbye to her friends for what may be the last time, after deciding to sacrifice herself and become as Discord's bride.
Changed line(s) 4,10 (click to see context) from:
* Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage after Fluttershy is gone, Twilight desperately searching the library for a solution, while Pinkie barley holds herself together while throwing a child's birthday party, eventually just snapping and saying [[MadnessMantra Fluttershy go bye bye]] on a loop.
* Fluttershy looking watching her friends sing about how much they miss, through the mirror Discord gave her. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as99hZR_jSs As seen here.]]
* Fluttershy confronting Discord telling him she knows why he wanted a bride not because he's bored, because he's lonely.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' I know why you wanted a bride.
--> '''Discord:''' Um...I was bored?
--> '''Fluttershy:''' You're lonely.
* Discord and Fluttershy exchanging their personal stories, during their picnic.
* Fluttershy looking watching her friends sing about how much they miss, through the mirror Discord gave her. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as99hZR_jSs As seen here.]]
* Fluttershy confronting Discord telling him she knows why he wanted a bride not because he's bored, because he's lonely.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' I know why you wanted a bride.
--> '''Discord:''' Um...I was bored?
--> '''Fluttershy:''' You're lonely.
* Discord and Fluttershy exchanging their personal stories, during their picnic.
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* Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage after Fluttershy is gone, Twilight desperately searching the library for a solution, while Pinkie barley holds herself together while throwing a child's birthday party, eventually just snapping and saying [[MadnessMantra Fluttershy "Fluttershy go bye bye]] bye!"]] on a loop.
* Fluttershylooking watching her friends sing about how much they miss, miss her through the mirror Discord gave her. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as99hZR_jSs As seen here.]]
* Fluttershy confrontingDiscord Discord, telling him she knows why he wanted a bride not because he's bored, but because he's lonely.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' I know why you wanted a bride.
--> '''Discord:''' Um...I was bored?
--> '''Fluttershy:''' You'relonely.
* Discord and Fluttershy exchanging their personalstories, stories during their picnic.
* Fluttershy
* Fluttershy confronting
--> '''Fluttershy:''' I know why you wanted a bride.
--> '''Discord:''' Um...I was bored?
--> '''Fluttershy:''' You're
* Discord and Fluttershy exchanging their personal
Changed line(s) 12,13 (click to see context) from:
* Discord and Fluttershy's fight near the end of the story, after she says she doesn't love her, after her friends pressure her about the issue, before Discord drives her out in a fit of anger.
** Discord's reaction when he realizes he accidentally hurt the mare he loved.
** Discord's reaction when he realizes he accidentally hurt the mare he loved.
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* Discord and Fluttershy's fight near the end of the story, end, after she says she doesn't love her, after her friends pressure her about the issue, before Discord drives her out in a fit of anger.
** [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Also Discord's reaction when he realizes he accidentally hurt the mare he loved.]]
** [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Also Discord's reaction when he realizes he accidentally hurt the mare he loved.]]
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* Fluttershy confronting Discord telling him she knows why he wanted a bride not because he's bored, because he's lonely.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' I know why you wanted a bride.
--> '''Discord:''' Um...I was bored?
--> '''Fluttershy:''' You're lonely.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' I know why you wanted a bride.
--> '''Discord:''' Um...I was bored?
--> '''Fluttershy:''' You're lonely.
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* Fluttershy waking up confused in Discord's castle the first day, before remembering where she is, before it hits her, ''exactly'' what she had gotten herself into with no escape. Later, when she goes to her room and finally gets some alone time, she just jumps into bed and cries herself to sleep. Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage after Flutteershy is gone, Twilight desperately searching the library for a solution, while Pinkie barley holds herself together while throwing a child's birthday party, eventually just snapping and saying [[MadnessMantra Fluttershy go bye bye]] on a loop.
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* Fluttershy waking up confused in Discord's castle the first day, before remembering where she is, before it hits her, ''exactly'' what she had gotten herself into with no escape. Later, when she goes to her room and finally gets some alone time, she just jumps into bed and cries herself to sleep. sleep.
* Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage afterFlutteershy Fluttershy is gone, Twilight desperately searching the library for a solution, while Pinkie barley holds herself together while throwing a child's birthday party, eventually just snapping and saying [[MadnessMantra Fluttershy go bye bye]] on a loop.
* Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage after
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Changed line(s) 1,8 (click to see context) from:
** Among other things, Applejack's cover of [[Theatre/LesMiserables "On My Own"]] in the audio version.
** Fluttershy saying good by to her friends for what may be the last time, after deciding to sacrifice herself and become Discord's bride.
** Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage after Flutteershy is gone, Twilight desperately searching the library for a solution, while Pinkie barley holds herself together while throwing a child's birthday party, eventually just snapping and saying [[MadnessMantra Fluttershy go bye bye]] on a loop.
** Fluttershy looking watching her friends sing about how much they miss, through the mirror Discord gave her. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as99hZR_jSs As seen here.]]
** Discord and Fluttershy exchanging their personal stories, during their picnic.
** After putting a lot of work into setting up their date, Spike learns the hard way that not only are he and Rarity never going to happen, she ''already'' has someone else.
** Discord and Fluttershy's fight near the end of the story, after she says she doesn't love her, after her friends pressure her about the issue, before Discord drives her out in a fit of anger.
*** Discord's reaction when he realizes he accidentally hurt the mare he loved.
** Fluttershy saying good by to her friends for what may be the last time, after deciding to sacrifice herself and become Discord's bride.
** Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage after Flutteershy is gone, Twilight desperately searching the library for a solution, while Pinkie barley holds herself together while throwing a child's birthday party, eventually just snapping and saying [[MadnessMantra Fluttershy go bye bye]] on a loop.
** Fluttershy looking watching her friends sing about how much they miss, through the mirror Discord gave her. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as99hZR_jSs As seen here.]]
** Discord and Fluttershy exchanging their personal stories, during their picnic.
** After putting a lot of work into setting up their date, Spike learns the hard way that not only are he and Rarity never going to happen, she ''already'' has someone else.
** Discord and Fluttershy's fight near the end of the story, after she says she doesn't love her, after her friends pressure her about the issue, before Discord drives her out in a fit of anger.
*** Discord's reaction when he realizes he accidentally hurt the mare he loved.
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** Among other things, Applejack's cover of [[Theatre/LesMiserables "On My Own"]] in the audio version.
** Fluttershy saying good by to her friends for what may be the last time, after deciding to sacrifice herself and become Discord's bride.
** Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage after Flutteershy is gone, Twilight desperately searching the library for a solution, while Pinkie barley holds herself together while throwing a child's birthday party, eventually just snapping and saying [[MadnessMantra Fluttershy go bye bye]] on a loop.
** Fluttershy looking watching her friends sing about how much they miss, through the mirror Discord gave her. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as99hZR_jSs As seen here.]]
** Discord and Fluttershy exchanging their personal stories, during their picnic.
** After putting a lot of work into setting up their date, Spike learns the hard way that not only are he and Rarity never going to happen, she ''already'' has someone else.
** Discord and Fluttershy's fight near the end of the story, after she says she doesn't love her, after her friends pressure her about the issue, before Discord drives her out in a fit of anger.
*** Discord's reaction when he realizes he accidentally hurt the mare he loved.
** Fluttershy saying good by to her friends for what may be the last time, after deciding to sacrifice herself and become Discord's bride.
** Twilight and Pinkie Pie suffering SanitySlippage after Flutteershy is gone, Twilight desperately searching the library for a solution, while Pinkie barley holds herself together while throwing a child's birthday party, eventually just snapping and saying [[MadnessMantra Fluttershy go bye bye]] on a loop.
** Fluttershy looking watching her friends sing about how much they miss, through the mirror Discord gave her. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as99hZR_jSs As seen here.]]
** Discord and Fluttershy exchanging their personal stories, during their picnic.
** After putting a lot of work into setting up their date, Spike learns the hard way that not only are he and Rarity never going to happen, she ''already'' has someone else.
** Discord and Fluttershy's fight near the end of the story, after she says she doesn't love her, after her friends pressure her about the issue, before Discord drives her out in a fit of anger.
*** Discord's reaction when he realizes he accidentally hurt the mare he loved.