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* Matau's Funeral was absolutely heart-wrenching.
* Matau's Funeral was absolutely heart-wrenching.
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--> Salvinn nodded, that made sense to him, however something seemed to then click in him, a question he needed to ask, "Salvinn sane?" sane?"
--> Septimus was silent for a while as he struggled to find a properanswer. answer.
--> "Yeah ..." he whispered. "You are and will be. I promise."
--> Septimus was silent for a while as he struggled to find a proper
--> "Yeah ..." he whispered. "You are and will be. I promise."
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* [[spoiler: After having Anthryn destroy his mind, Salvinn asking Sep Septimus if he was sane.]]
sane.
-->[[spoiler: Salvinn nodded, that made sense to him, however something seemed to then click in him, a question he needed to ask, "Salvinn sane?"]]sane?" Septimus was silent for a while as he struggled to find a proper answer. "Yeah ..." he whispered. "You are and will be. I promise."
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--> Salvinn nodded, that made sense to him, however something seemed to then click in him, a question he needed to ask, "Salvinn sane?"]]
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* [[spoiler: After having Anthryn destroy his mind, Salvinn asking Sep if he was sane.
sane.]]
--> [[spoiler: Salvinn nodded, that made sense to him, however something seemed to then click in him, a question he needed to ask, "Salvinn sane?"]]
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* [[spoiler: After having Anthryn destroy his mind, Salvinn asking Sep if he was sane.]]
sane.
--> Salvinn nodded, that made sense to him, however something seemed to then click in him, a question he needed to ask, "Salvinnsane?"sane?"]]
--> Salvinn nodded, that made sense to him, however something seemed to then click in him, a question he needed to ask, "Salvinn
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*[[spoiler: After having Anthryn destroy his mind, Salvinn asking Sep if he was sane.]]
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--> Salvinn nodded, that made sense to him, however something seemed to then click in him, a question he needed to ask, "Salvinn sane?"
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