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* ''Fanfic/MetalGearGreen'':
** When Snake and Miller are investigating Night Owl's next move, they find out he needs serious manpower with all the weapons he has, which makes little sense for him to go to the Ninth Circle, which has fifteen members on paper. However, after looking deeper and finding the aforementioned fifteen members have been arrested twice, thrice, four times, or at the same time on the same day, it begins to dawn on the two that the HPSC never bothered to keep tabs on the Ninth Circle for a decade, which, when paired with Ocelot's intel on the JSDF selling their own guns, paints a very ''nasty'' revelation.
---> '''Snake''' Those idiots... They weren't keeping tabs on the Ninth Circle. They haven't been for years!
** When All Might and Naomasa investigate the power plant Snake rescued Izuku from nine years ago, they find it in complete ruins. However, after some searching, they soon find something went down when finding [[spoiler: evidence of a human experimentation site and the remains of Agent Matter.]]
** When Snake and Miller are investigating Night Owl's next move, they find out he needs serious manpower with all the weapons he has, which makes little sense for him to go to the Ninth Circle, which has fifteen members on paper. However, after looking deeper and finding the aforementioned fifteen members have been arrested twice, thrice, four times, or at the same time on the same day, it begins to dawn on the two that the HPSC never bothered to keep tabs on the Ninth Circle for a decade, which, when paired with Ocelot's intel on the JSDF selling their own guns, paints a very ''nasty'' revelation.
---> '''Snake''' Those idiots... They weren't keeping tabs on the Ninth Circle. They haven't been for years!
** When All Might and Naomasa investigate the power plant Snake rescued Izuku from nine years ago, they find it in complete ruins. However, after some searching, they soon find something went down when finding [[spoiler: evidence of a human experimentation site and the remains of Agent Matter.]]
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* In ''Fanfic/LittleGlimpses'', Twilight goes to Celestia's daughter Rainbow Dash for help in convincing Celestia that Nightmare Moon will return, only for Rainbow Dash to dismiss it as an old myth and suggest Twilight got something wrong in her research. When Nightmare Moon ''does'' return, not only does Rainbow Dash seem completely unsurprised, but she has no reaction to being called "niece" by a thousand year old AncientEvil. Noticing this discrepancy causes Twilight to realize that Rainbow knew all along.
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* ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'': King Henry realises that Hiccup so easily chasing Sir Henry off from attacking William conflicts with Sir Henry's version of the events regarding him and Dogsbreath, and he realises Sir Henry took over Brittany using EngineeredHeroics.
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* ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'': ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'':
** King Henryrealises realizes that Hiccup so easily chasing Sir Henry off from attacking William conflicts with Sir Henry's version of the events regarding him and Dogsbreath, and he realises realizes Sir Henry took over Brittany using EngineeredHeroics.
** Rikard Hofferson had long suspected Mildew of murdering his own family the whole time because of how odd it was for there to be a lone dragon raiding Berk, how odd it was Mildew just happened to be in the area to get revenge on their behalf on the blamed dragon, how odd it was his family just so happened to have died months after they banished Mildew from the clan, and the joyous expression he caught on Mildew's face which morphed to hate when he saw he and his wife survived the blaze.
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** Rikard Hofferson had long suspected Mildew of murdering his own family the whole time because of how odd it was for there to be a lone dragon raiding Berk, how odd it was Mildew just happened to be in the area to get revenge on their behalf on the blamed dragon, how odd it was his family just so happened to have died months after they banished Mildew from the clan, and the joyous expression he caught on Mildew's face which morphed to hate when he saw he and his wife survived the blaze.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9208791/1/Snow-Blind Snow Blind]]'' a wounded and temporarily blinded Donatello is [[TheKindnapper taken prisoner]] by the Nightwatcher after a fight with some Purple Dragons so the vigilante can help him heal. Afterwards, he spots several threads that help him work out the Nightwatcher's identity:
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9208791/1/Snow-Blind Snow Blind]]'' ''Fanfic/SnowBlind'' a wounded and temporarily blinded Donatello is [[TheKindnapper taken prisoner]] by the Nightwatcher after a fight with some Purple Dragons so the vigilante can help him heal. Afterwards, he spots several threads that help him work out the Nightwatcher's identity:
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** Raph and the Nightwatcher have similar mannerisms and speech patterns.
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** Raph [[spoiler:Raph]] and the Nightwatcher have similar mannerisms and speech patterns.
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* ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'': King Henry realises that Hiccup so easily chasing Sir Henry off from attacking William conflicts with Sir Henry's version of the events regarding him and Dogsbreath, and he realises Sir Henry took over Brittany using EngineeredHeroics.
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* In ''[[Fanfic/TheLightningStrike The Broken Day]]'', [[spoiler:when Harry's scar starts bleeding after a nightmare, Ginny and Natasha swiftly realise that the horcrux in Harry has been restored in the new timeline created by the TimeCrash of Harry's two realities being pulled together]].
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* In ''Fanfic/WhatItTakes'', Susan Williams notes the obvious flaw with the idea of Roy Harper being the Arrow: he isn't tall enough. This is made apparent by the fact that Roy and Laurel have verifiable heights, and the images that exist of the Hood/Arrow with Laurel in her civilian or Black Canary identity (after Quentin makes Laurel's identity public) show the Arrow to be taller than Roy is.
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38573961/ The Wedding of Yasmin Kahn]]" features the Doctor claiming that Yaz is her wife after Yaz needs urgent medical treatment and the Doctor wanted to be able to supervise the treatment. Yaz initially assumes that [[AmnesiacLover she just forgot about the wedding after her attack]], but realises the truth when one of the ward sisters mentions that their marriage certificate was in a black leather wallet, leading Yaz to realise that the "marriage certificate" was just the psychic paper.
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* In ''Fanfic/BecauseIKnewYou'', once Wanda leaves the Darkhold behind while travelling to New York to investigate the spell that almost made her forget Peter Parker, Wanda starts to consider how only her earlier visions of her lost sons showed them actually asking for help where her recent visions reveal they’re fine, suggesting that the Darkhold was influencing her earlier glimpses and now thinks she’s so far gone she wouldn’t care.
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* ''Fanfic/IfICouldStartAgain'';
** Thor is not very good at trying to hide that he's from the future. Natasha's able to pick up on many subtle hints in his behavior (having way more hatred for Thanos than he reasonably should and his reactions to Sakaar and Valkyrie) that he's hiding something from them and convinces him to confess the truth.
** [[spoiler:The Winter Soldier]] ultimately begins to realize that something's wrong when [[spoiler:he hears the Asgardians speaking in English; if his memories were correct, he'd be hearing them speak Russian, but the fact that he hears English implies that that's his mother tongue and that something isn't right about his memories]].
** When [[spoiler:Steve is looking at photographs of Camp Leigh with Coulson, he's quick to spot the addition of the bunker containing Zola's computer-brain]].
* ''Fanfic/SpiderManFindingHome'';
** Yelena identifies Peter as Spider-Man based on how he pins her down after their first night out with Kate, as she observes that only one person held her down like that (during their initial fight at the Rockefeller Centre).
** When helping Jessica investigate a break-in, Peter and Kate call on Shuri to examine claw marks and confirm that the marks weren’t made by T’Challa or Yelena (they affirm that they didn’t believe either party was committing such thefts, but it was worth making sure).
** Thor is not very good at trying to hide that he's from the future. Natasha's able to pick up on many subtle hints in his behavior (having way more hatred for Thanos than he reasonably should and his reactions to Sakaar and Valkyrie) that he's hiding something from them and convinces him to confess the truth.
** [[spoiler:The Winter Soldier]] ultimately begins to realize that something's wrong when [[spoiler:he hears the Asgardians speaking in English; if his memories were correct, he'd be hearing them speak Russian, but the fact that he hears English implies that that's his mother tongue and that something isn't right about his memories]].
** When [[spoiler:Steve is looking at photographs of Camp Leigh with Coulson, he's quick to spot the addition of the bunker containing Zola's computer-brain]].
* ''Fanfic/SpiderManFindingHome'';
** Yelena identifies Peter as Spider-Man based on how he pins her down after their first night out with Kate, as she observes that only one person held her down like that (during their initial fight at the Rockefeller Centre).
** When helping Jessica investigate a break-in, Peter and Kate call on Shuri to examine claw marks and confirm that the marks weren’t made by T’Challa or Yelena (they affirm that they didn’t believe either party was committing such thefts, but it was worth making sure).
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* In ''Fanfic/TheChaoticThree'', Finn confirms that Poe was in a certain bar by noting a bottle of Poe’s favourite drink on a table, which is apparently not to everyone’s tastes; Rey isn’t much of a drinker and Finn only shares it with Poe to be social.
* ''Fanfic/ShadowsOfTheFuture'';
** Obi-Wan initially assumes that his appearance in the past is an elaborate psychological game being played by Vader, but abandons that idea when he realises that his old lightsaber (which he lost in his first duel with Maul) retains a slight imbalance in its design that he was never able to correct, as there's no record of that flaw and therefore no way anyone could have duplicated it.
** When [[spoiler:Anakin learns about Obi-Wan's time-travel and hears reference to Obi-Wan taking an apprentice, Anakin recalls how Obi-Wan occasionally slipped and called him "Padawan" and realises that ''he'' was the future apprentice]].
* In ''Fanfic/TheChaoticThree'', Finn confirms that Poe was in a certain bar by noting a bottle of Poe’s favourite drink on a table, which is apparently not to everyone’s tastes; Rey isn’t much of a drinker and Finn only shares it with Poe to be social.
* ''Fanfic/ShadowsOfTheFuture'';
** Obi-Wan initially assumes that his appearance in the past is an elaborate psychological game being played by Vader, but abandons that idea when he realises that his old lightsaber (which he lost in his first duel with Maul) retains a slight imbalance in its design that he was never able to correct, as there's no record of that flaw and therefore no way anyone could have duplicated it.
** When [[spoiler:Anakin learns about Obi-Wan's time-travel and hears reference to Obi-Wan taking an apprentice, Anakin recalls how Obi-Wan occasionally slipped and called him "Padawan" and realises that ''he'' was the future apprentice]].
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* In ''Fanfic/TurningRedSecretsOfThePanda'', Catherine Moore correctly deduces that [[spoiler:Howard Mitchell]] is working for the PCA when she sees he is both wearing the silver ring that serves as Mei's talisman, and carrying a pistol which she's never seen him use before.
* In ''Fanfic/TurningRedSecretsOfThePanda'', Catherine Moore correctly deduces that [[spoiler:Howard Mitchell]] is working for the PCA when she sees he is both wearing the silver ring that serves as Mei's talisman, and carrying a pistol which she's never seen him use before.
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* ''Fanfic/{{Spider-Ninja}}'': SHIELD manages to tie the [[ComicBook/SpiderMan girl]] who stopped the robot at Avengers Tower with the [[Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles mysterious vigilantes]] who've been stopping criminals for the last few weeks because the substance found holding the robot's legs together was identical to a substance many of the stopped criminals were found [[AllWebbedUp tied up in]].
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* ''Fanfic/{{Spider-Ninja}}'': ''Fanfic/SpiderNinja'': SHIELD manages to tie the [[ComicBook/SpiderMan girl]] who stopped the robot at Avengers Tower with the [[Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles mysterious vigilantes]] who've been stopping criminals for the last few weeks because the substance found holding the robot's legs together was identical to a substance many of the stopped criminals were found [[AllWebbedUp tied up in]].
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* ''Fanfic/{{Spider-Ninja}}'': SHIELD manages to tie the [[ComicBookSpiderMan strange girl]] who stopped the robot at Avengers Tower with the [[Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles mysterious vigilantes]] who've been stopping criminals for the last few weeks because the substance found holding the robot's legs together was identical to a substance many of the stopped criminals were found [[AllWebbedUp tied up in]].
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* ''Fanfic/{{Spider-Ninja}}'': SHIELD manages to tie the [[ComicBookSpiderMan strange [[ComicBook/SpiderMan girl]] who stopped the robot at Avengers Tower with the [[Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles mysterious vigilantes]] who've been stopping criminals for the last few weeks because the substance found holding the robot's legs together was identical to a substance many of the stopped criminals were found [[AllWebbedUp tied up in]].
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* ''Fanfic/ZToA'':
** Once Tony regains his initial memories of the future (dating to just the moment when Thanos destroyed the Stones), he’s immediately suspicious of how Peter and Wanda can be familiar with each other when as far as he knows they only met at Leipzig; Peter improvises to claim that he and Wanda ‘met’ in the Soul Stone dimension.
** [[spoiler:Basically how nearly all of Midtown deduces Peter is Spider-Man. First he is gone the same weekend the Avengers almost split up for which Spider-Man was present at and then shows up at school with Tony Stark. Then he has an after school rendezvous with Wanda. Then was he was gone the entire week the Avengers were deployed at Area 51. Combine all that with Spider-Man being obviously minor due to Tony signing the accords for Spider-Man, they knew Spider-Man had to be Peter.]]
** Once Tony regains his initial memories of the future (dating to just the moment when Thanos destroyed the Stones), he’s immediately suspicious of how Peter and Wanda can be familiar with each other when as far as he knows they only met at Leipzig; Peter improvises to claim that he and Wanda ‘met’ in the Soul Stone dimension.
** [[spoiler:Basically how nearly all of Midtown deduces Peter is Spider-Man. First he is gone the same weekend the Avengers almost split up for which Spider-Man was present at and then shows up at school with Tony Stark. Then he has an after school rendezvous with Wanda. Then was he was gone the entire week the Avengers were deployed at Area 51. Combine all that with Spider-Man being obviously minor due to Tony signing the accords for Spider-Man, they knew Spider-Man had to be Peter.]]
