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* At the first pub they go to, the girls mention ''Series/HomeAndAway'' and ''Series/{{Neighbours}}'' when trying to pin down the barman's accent.
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* At the first pub they go to, the girls mention ''Series/HomeAndAway'' and ''Series/{{Neighbours}}'' when trying to pin down the barman's accent.accent.
* Some of the shops on the agenda for the trip are Schuh, French Connection, Gap, River Island and HMV.
* Some of the shops on the agenda for the trip are Schuh, French Connection, Gap, River Island and HMV.
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* Chell has a box of Scottish Bluebell matches.
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* Sergeant [=McPherson=] drives a Land Rover.
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* Chell has a box of Scottish Bluebell matches.
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* Orla quips about cleaning "[[Film/TheLastOfTheMohicans The Last of The [=McDonald's=]]]" from her retainer.
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* Orla quips about cleaning "[[Film/TheLastOfTheMohicans The Last of The [=McDonald's=]]]" from her retainer.retainer.
* Sergeant [=McPherson=] drives a Land Rover.
* Sergeant [=McPherson=] drives a Land Rover.
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* Orla quips about cleaning "[[Film/TheLastOfTheMohicans The Last of The [[=McDonald's=]]]]" from her retainer.
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* The main page quote, said by Orla as the girls are changing in the bathroom at UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, is a reference to the Evangelical counsels, the values cited by Jesus in [[Literature/TheBible the Gospels]] as the virtues one needs to cultivate in order to enter the Kingdom of Heaven, and are frequently associated with the vows taken by those who've taken holy orders (e.g. priests and nuns).
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* The main page quote, said by Orla as the girls are changing in the bathroom at UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, is a reference to the Evangelical counsels, the values cited by Jesus in [[Literature/TheBible the Gospels]] as the virtues one needs to cultivate in order to enter the Kingdom of Heaven, and are frequently associated with the vows taken by those who've taken holy orders (e.g. priests and nuns).nuns).
* Orla quips about cleaning "[[Film/TheLastOfTheMohicans The Last of The [[=McDonald's=]]]]" from her retainer.
* Orla quips about cleaning "[[Film/TheLastOfTheMohicans The Last of The [[=McDonald's=]]]]" from her retainer.
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* Between them, the girls have a mixture of Nike, Head and Adidas schoolbags.
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* The main page quote, said by Orla as the girls are changing in the bathroom at UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, is a reference to the Evangelical counsels, the values cited by Jesus in [[Literature/TheBible the Gospels]] as the virtues one needs to cultivate in order to enter the Kingdom of Heaven, and are frequently associated with the vows taken by those who've taken holy orders (e.g. priests and nuns).
* The main page quote, said by Orla as the girls are changing in the bathroom at UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, is a reference to the Evangelical counsels, the values cited by Jesus in [[Literature/TheBible the Gospels]] as the virtues one needs to cultivate in order to enter the Kingdom of Heaven, and are frequently associated with the vows taken by those who've taken holy orders (e.g. priests and nuns).
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* Chell walks her dog Selwyn on Battleship Hill, a RealLife Oban landmark.
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* Chell walks her dog Selwyn dog, Selwyn, on Battleship Hill, a RealLife Oban landmark.
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* Fionnula shares an anecdote about a guy from the Port known as "The Argonaut", prompting one of the others to mention the [[Film/JasonAndTheArgonauts film]] that's "[[TakeThat all shitey special effects.]]"
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* Fionnula shares an anecdote about a guy from the Port known as "The Argonaut", prompting one of the others to mention the [[Film/JasonAndTheArgonauts film]] that's "[[TakeThat all shitey special effects.]]"]]"
* Between them, the girls have a mixture of Nike, Head and Adidas schoolbags.
* Between them, the girls have a mixture of Nike, Head and Adidas schoolbags.
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* At UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs [=McDonald=]'s Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
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* At UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs [=McDonald=]'s Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] concluded a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
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* Daddy Patrick is described as being "down in [[DavyJones Davy Jones’s locker]]". His boat called the ''Eilean Shona'', a reference to an island in Loch Moidart.
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* Daddy Patrick is described as being "down in [[DavyJones Davy Jones’s locker]]". His was boat called the ''Eilean Shona'', a reference to an island in Loch Moidart.
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*** The ''Film/{{Jaws}} ''Film/{{Jaws}}'' soundtrack
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* Kylah owns a Miss Selfridge skirt that she ordered from a catalogue.
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* Kylah owns a Miss Selfridge skirt that she ordered from a catalogue.catalogue.
* Fionnula shares an anecdote about a guy from the Port known as "The Argonaut", prompting one of the others to mention the [[Film/JasonAndTheArgonauts film]] that's "[[TakeThat all shitey special effects.]]"
* Fionnula shares an anecdote about a guy from the Port known as "The Argonaut", prompting one of the others to mention the [[Film/JasonAndTheArgonauts film]] that's "[[TakeThat all shitey special effects.]]"
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* At UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs McDonald's Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
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* At UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs McDonald's [=McDonald=]'s Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
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* At Franchise/{{McDonalds}}, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs McDonald's Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
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* At Franchise/{{McDonalds}}, UsefulNotes/{{McDonalds}}, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs McDonald's Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
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* At Franchise/McDonalds, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs McDonald's Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
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* At Franchise/McDonalds, Franchise/{{McDonalds}}, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs McDonald's Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.book.
* Kylah owns a Miss Selfridge skirt that she ordered from a catalogue.
* Kylah owns a Miss Selfridge skirt that she ordered from a catalogue.
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* Jamie Prenter's parents own a Nissan Datsun.
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* Jamie Prenter's parents own a Nissan Datsun.Datsun.
* At Franchise/McDonalds, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs McDonald's Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
* At Franchise/McDonalds, Kylah gets a "scorching-looking black coffee". The infamous ''Liebeck vs McDonald's Restaurants'' hot coffee [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liebeck_v._McDonald%27s_Restaurants case]] a couple of years prior to the publication of the book.
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* Chell walks her dog Selwyn on Battleship Hill, a RealLife Oban landmark.
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* Chell walks her dog Selwyn on Battleship Hill, a RealLife Oban landmark.landmark.
* Jamie Prenter's parents own a Nissan Datsun.
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* Buzz has a telly in his garden, where a young Chell sees Buzz's pal Snorkel watching ''Series/{{Panorama}}''.
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* Buzz has a telly in his garden, where a young Chell sees Buzz's pal Snorkel watching ''Series/{{Panorama}}''.''Series/{{Panorama}}''.
* Chell walks her dog Selwyn on Battleship Hill, a RealLife Oban landmark.
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* Daddy Patrick is described as being "down in [[DavyJones Davy Jones’s locker]]".
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* Kay dishes out a box of Cadbury's Roses on the coach. Kylah takes one saying she's "always partial to a Rosey, specially [[Music/TheStoneRoses Ian Brown]]".
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* Kay dishes out a box of Cadbury's Roses on the coach. Kylah takes one saying she's "always partial to a Rosey, specially [[Music/TheStoneRoses Ian Brown]]".Brown]]".
* Orla chews Wrigleys chewing gum.
* Rest and Be Thankful has some [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Humber_Limited Humbers]] and [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Austin_Motor_Company Austins]] in the car park, as well as some [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/VDL_Bova Bova]] tour buses.
* Daddy Patrick is described as being "down in [[DavyJones Davy Jones’s locker]]".
* Buzz owns a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Daihatsu_Zebra Daihatsu Zebra]] pick-up which he salvaged from the Bear Park at Loch Lomond.
* Buzz has a telly in his garden, where a young Chell sees Buzz's pal Snorkel watching ''Series/{{Panorama}}''.
* Orla chews Wrigleys chewing gum.
* Rest and Be Thankful has some [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Humber_Limited Humbers]] and [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Austin_Motor_Company Austins]] in the car park, as well as some [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/VDL_Bova Bova]] tour buses.
* Daddy Patrick is described as being "down in [[DavyJones Davy Jones’s locker]]".
* Buzz owns a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Daihatsu_Zebra Daihatsu Zebra]] pick-up which he salvaged from the Bear Park at Loch Lomond.
* Buzz has a telly in his garden, where a young Chell sees Buzz's pal Snorkel watching ''Series/{{Panorama}}''.
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** She wishes she could sing on [[Music/PublicImageLtd Jah Wobble’s]] ''Invaders of the Heart''.
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* Kylah wears a pair of Converse All Stars to her first meetup with the band.
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* Spimmy claims that he wanted Kylah to join the band because he heard her singing "Glencoe" in Gaelic at the Gaelic League.
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* Kay dishes out a box of Cadbury's Roses on the coach. Kylah takes one saying she's "always partial to a Rosey, specially Music/TheStoneRoses Ian Brown]]".
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* Kay dishes out a box of Cadbury's Roses on the coach. Kylah takes one saying she's "always partial to a Rosey, specially Music/TheStoneRoses [[Music/TheStoneRoses Ian Brown]]".
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* Kay dishes out a box of Cadbury's Roses on the coach. Kylah takes one saying she's "always partial to a Rosey, specially Music/TheStoneRoses Ian Brown".
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* Kay dishes out a box of Cadbury's Roses on the coach. Kylah takes one saying she's "always partial to a Rosey, specially Music/TheStoneRoses Ian Brown".Brown]]".
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** Kylah reckons that the rest of the band got the idea to write a pretentious acoustic guitar prelude by reading about it in Magazine/NME.
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* The pupils at the school use Gaelic League pins as earrings.
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* Kylah is a fan of The Cocteau Twins, particularly Elizabeth Fraser’s voice.
* Kylah takes "Wheels of Fire" by Music/{{Cream}} for the coach journey specifically because [[EpicRocking its length]] will prevent anyone else putting anything on that she doesn’t approval.
* Kylah cites Pamela Anderson as an example of someone who’s had breast implants. She’s aware of the fact that Pamela is married to the drummer from Music/MotleyCrue, but doesn’t bother bringing it up in conversation.
* Kylah takes "Wheels of Fire" by Music/{{Cream}} for the coach journey specifically because [[EpicRocking its length]] will prevent anyone else putting anything on that she doesn’t approval.
* Kylah cites Pamela Anderson as an example of someone who’s had breast implants. She’s aware of the fact that Pamela is married to the drummer from Music/MotleyCrue, but doesn’t bother bringing it up in conversation.
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* Kylah is a fan Kylah’s love of music and her involvement in Lemonfinger gives rise to a wide range of references:
** Artists and songs she mentions liking include:
*** The CocteauTwins, Twins
*** ''Life is Elsewhere'' by Superstar
*** Frank Sinatra
*** Nat King Cole
*** Geoff Love
*** James Bond Themes
*** The Jaws soundtrack
*** Grace Slick from The Great Society, who she regards as a much better singer than Music/JanisJoplin, particularlyElizabeth Fraser’s voice.
* Kylahon the album ''Conspicuous Only in Its Absence'', although in the book it's referred to as "Conspicuous Mainly By Its Absence".
*** Damo Suzuki from Music/{{Can}}.
*** [[Music/{{Cream}} Jack Bruce]] and "that guy in Music/TheGratefulDead".
** She takes "Wheels of Fire" by Music/{{Cream}} for the coach journey specifically because [[EpicRocking its length]] will prevent anyone else putting anything on that she doesn’t meet her approval.
* Kylah cites Pamela Anderson ** She doesn't think much of Music/JimiHendrix as an example of someone who’s had breast implants. a singer.
** She’s aware of the fact that Pamela Anderson is married to the drummer from Music/MotleyCrue, but doesn’t bother bringing it up inconversation.conversation after Orla was dismissive about her above-mentioned Music/BonJovi factoid.
** Lemonfinger practise in a local [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scout_hall Scout hall]].
** They have a few covers in their setlist:
*** "The Snake" by [[SpaceRock The Pink Fairies]]
*** "Grimly Forming" by The Great Society. The text of the book quotes an extract from the song.
*** "Help Me, Mary" by Music/LizPhair. Kylah thinks that she sounds like a "nubile [[Literature/TheBible Old Testament]] prophet" when she sings it.
** Kylah reckons that the rest of the band got the idea to write a pretentious acoustic guitar prelude by reading about it in Magazine/NME.
** They write an original song called "Homage to Catatonia", the title being a {{Pun}} on Literature/HomageToCatalonia by George Orwell, and possibly also a nod to the AlternativeRock band fronted by Cerys Matthews.
** They sometimes swap instruments and play "[[Music/DeepPurple Smoke On The Water]]" for fun during rehearsals.
** When Spimmy and the others first asked Kylah to join the band, she told them to "keep on watching their fucking [[Film/TheCommitments Commitments]] video!"
* Spimmy claims that he wanted Kylah to join the band because he heard her singing "Glencoe" in Gaelic at the Gaelic League.
** When Spimmy calls up Kylah to ask her again, she's watching ''Series/{{Brookside}}''. Spimmy claims that it [[SeasonalRot isn't as good as it used to be]]. When he asks if she's seen any of the repeats with Harry Cross, Kylah mentions that her mum thought that Harry was "a right dour so and so".
* Kylah wears a pair of Converse All Stars to her first meetup with the band.
* Spimmy tries to impress Kylah by playing "The Man with the Golden Gun" on his Fender copy.
* On the subject of fashion, Orla states:
-- >"I like Kate Moss’s tits, but I can’t stand all that Calvin Klein shite that comes with her."
* Kay dishes out a box of Cadbury's Roses on the coach. Kylah takes one saying she's "always partial to a Rosey, specially Music/TheStoneRoses Ian Brown".
** Artists and songs she mentions liking include:
*** The Cocteau
*** ''Life is Elsewhere'' by Superstar
*** Frank Sinatra
*** Nat King Cole
*** Geoff Love
*** James Bond Themes
*** The Jaws soundtrack
*** Grace Slick from The Great Society, who she regards as a much better singer than Music/JanisJoplin, particularly
* Kylah
*** Damo Suzuki from Music/{{Can}}.
*** [[Music/{{Cream}} Jack Bruce]] and "that guy in Music/TheGratefulDead".
** She takes "Wheels of Fire" by Music/{{Cream}} for the coach journey specifically because [[EpicRocking its length]] will prevent anyone else putting anything on that she doesn’t meet her approval.
** She’s aware of the fact that Pamela Anderson is married to the drummer from Music/MotleyCrue, but doesn’t bother bringing it up in
** Lemonfinger practise in a local [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scout_hall Scout hall]].
** They have a few covers in their setlist:
*** "The Snake" by [[SpaceRock The Pink Fairies]]
*** "Grimly Forming" by The Great Society. The text of the book quotes an extract from the song.
*** "Help Me, Mary" by Music/LizPhair. Kylah thinks that she sounds like a "nubile [[Literature/TheBible Old Testament]] prophet" when she sings it.
** Kylah reckons that the rest of the band got the idea to write a pretentious acoustic guitar prelude by reading about it in Magazine/NME.
** They write an original song called "Homage to Catatonia", the title being a {{Pun}} on Literature/HomageToCatalonia by George Orwell, and possibly also a nod to the AlternativeRock band fronted by Cerys Matthews.
** They sometimes swap instruments and play "[[Music/DeepPurple Smoke On The Water]]" for fun during rehearsals.
** When Spimmy and the others first asked Kylah to join the band, she told them to "keep on watching their fucking [[Film/TheCommitments Commitments]] video!"
* Spimmy claims that he wanted Kylah to join the band because he heard her singing "Glencoe" in Gaelic at the Gaelic League.
** When Spimmy calls up Kylah to ask her again, she's watching ''Series/{{Brookside}}''. Spimmy claims that it [[SeasonalRot isn't as good as it used to be]]. When he asks if she's seen any of the repeats with Harry Cross, Kylah mentions that her mum thought that Harry was "a right dour so and so".
* Kylah wears a pair of Converse All Stars to her first meetup with the band.
* Spimmy tries to impress Kylah by playing "The Man with the Golden Gun" on his Fender copy.
* On the subject of fashion, Orla states:
-- >"I like Kate Moss’s tits, but I can’t stand all that Calvin Klein shite that comes with her."
* Kay dishes out a box of Cadbury's Roses on the coach. Kylah takes one saying she's "always partial to a Rosey, specially Music/TheStoneRoses Ian Brown".