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* Captain Derek [[Series/BlakesSeven Tarrant]], right down to a physical description that fits Stephen Pacey. They don't act much alike though.
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* Captain Derek [[Series/BlakesSeven Tarrant]], right down to a physical description that fits Stephen Pacey.Creator/StevenPacey. They don't act much alike though.
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* {{Original Character}}s Scott Kerbley and Kurt [=McKerjel=] are named for popular KSP LetsPlay makers Creator/ScottManley and LetsPlay/KurtJMac.
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* {{Original Character}}s Scott Kerbley and Kurt [=McKerjel=] are named for popular KSP LetsPlay makers Creator/ScottManley LetsPlay/ScottManley and LetsPlay/KurtJMac.
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* {{Original Character}}s Scott Kerbley and Kurt [=McKerjel=] are named for popular KSP LetsPlay makers {{Scott Manley}} and LetsPlay/KurtJMac.
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* {{Original Character}}s Scott Kerbley and Kurt [=McKerjel=] are named for popular KSP LetsPlay makers {{Scott Manley}} Creator/ScottManley and LetsPlay/KurtJMac.
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* OriginalCharacters {{Original Character}}s Scott Kerbley and Kurt [=McKerjel=] are named for popular KSP LetsPlay makers {{Scott Manley}} and LetsPlay/KurtJMac.
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* OriginalCharacters Scott Kerbley and Kurt [=McKerjel=] are named for popular KSP LetsPlay makers {{Scott Manley}} and KurtJMac.
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* The way the Kerbals developed their FasterThanLightDrive (launching a probe into a [[NegativeSpaceWedgie mysterious gravitational anomaly]], accidentally accelerating it past lightspeed and developing things from there) is taken directly from one of [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC8DIKwGU8wFZfk3Xi3-zcrQ Danny2462's]] KSP videos.
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* The way the Kerbals developed their FasterThanLightDrive (launching a probe into a [[NegativeSpaceWedgie mysterious gravitational anomaly]], accidentally accelerating it past lightspeed and developing things from there) is taken directly from one of [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC8DIKwGU8wFZfk3Xi3-zcrQ Danny2462's]] com/watch?v=NLscXyIP4c8 one of Danny2462's KSP videos.
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* The way the Kerbals developed their FasterThanLightDrive (launching a probe into a [[NegativeSpaceWedgie mysterious gravitational anomaly]], accidentally accelerating it past lightspeed and developing things from there) is taken directly from one of [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC8DIKwGU8wFZfk3Xi3-zcrQ Danny2462's]] KSP videos.
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* Jeb's "IComeInPeace" speech makes references to the fact that Bob apparently "[[Film/TheyLive came here to chew bubblegum and kick ass]], and he ran out of gum back in the Oort Cloud."
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* Jeb's "IComeInPeace" speech makes references to the fact that Bob apparently "[[Film/TheyLive came here to chew bubblegum and kick ass]], and he ran out of gum back in the Oort Cloud.""
* While talking with Jeb in the wardroom, Admiral Liu lifts a glass and says, [[Film/{{Jaws}} "Here's to swimmin' with bow-legged women."]]
* While talking with Jeb in the wardroom, Admiral Liu lifts a glass and says, [[Film/{{Jaws}} "Here's to swimmin' with bow-legged women."]]
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* The IAV ''Fredricksson'''s Chief of The Boat is Master CPO Hemry, named after the SF writer John G. Hemry... better known as Jack Campbell, author of ''Literature/TheLostFleet'' series.
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* The IAV ''Fredricksson'''s Chief of The Boat is Master CPO Hemry, named after the SF writer John G. Hemry... better known as Jack Campbell, author of ''Literature/TheLostFleet'' series.series.
* Jeb's "IComeInPeace" speech makes references to the fact that Bob apparently "[[Film/TheyLive came here to chew bubblegum and kick ass]], and he ran out of gum back in the Oort Cloud."
* Jeb's "IComeInPeace" speech makes references to the fact that Bob apparently "[[Film/TheyLive came here to chew bubblegum and kick ass]], and he ran out of gum back in the Oort Cloud."
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[[AC:Shout-outs that don't spoil The Reveal]]
* As noted on the main page, the TNF universe apparently has a game called [[VideoGame/BuzzAldrinRaceIntoSpace Buzz Kerman's Race Into Space]]. Which is their equivalent of ''Kerbal Space Program'', and Jeb is apparently a fan. That's... quite meta, really.
* One of the blog entries discusses an SF novel Jeb read once about a method of detecting intelligent life. It's actually a reference to ''Nemesis'' by Creator/IsaacAsimov, in which the interplanetary [=EEG=] thing was crucial to the plot.
* The dwarf planet shaped like a female kerbal's... something reproductive[[note]]let's just say MaleToFemaleUniversalAdaptor is averted here and leave it at that![[/note]] is lifted more or less directly from ''Series/RedDwarf''.
* OriginalCharacters Scott Kerbley and Kurt McKerjel are named for popular KSP LetsPlay makers {{Scott Manley}} and KurtJMac.
* The computer-generated voice calling the Kerbals to the cockpit when dropping out of warp is a reference to the computer from ''Film/DarkStar''. This was supposed to be more than a one-scene gag but [[CerebusSyndrome the story's direction precluded that.]]
[[AC: Shout-outs that ''do'' spoil TheReveal, so scroll down at your own risk.]]
* Captain Derek [[Series/BlakesSeven Tarrant]], right down to a physical description that fits Stephen Pacey. They don't act much alike though.
* The asteroid the ''Starfarer 1'' orbits is called K-78356-Jessenstein, in reference to a ''VideoGame/{{Terraria}}'' LetsPlay... possibly. (It was suggested by a reader on the Spacebattles forums, and the author never got around to asking for details.)
* The IAV ''Fredricksson'''s Chief of The Boat is Master CPO Hemry, named after the SF writer John G. Hemry... better known as Jack Campbell, author of ''Literature/TheLostFleet'' series.
* As noted on the main page, the TNF universe apparently has a game called [[VideoGame/BuzzAldrinRaceIntoSpace Buzz Kerman's Race Into Space]]. Which is their equivalent of ''Kerbal Space Program'', and Jeb is apparently a fan. That's... quite meta, really.
* One of the blog entries discusses an SF novel Jeb read once about a method of detecting intelligent life. It's actually a reference to ''Nemesis'' by Creator/IsaacAsimov, in which the interplanetary [=EEG=] thing was crucial to the plot.
* The dwarf planet shaped like a female kerbal's... something reproductive[[note]]let's just say MaleToFemaleUniversalAdaptor is averted here and leave it at that![[/note]] is lifted more or less directly from ''Series/RedDwarf''.
* OriginalCharacters Scott Kerbley and Kurt McKerjel are named for popular KSP LetsPlay makers {{Scott Manley}} and KurtJMac.
* The computer-generated voice calling the Kerbals to the cockpit when dropping out of warp is a reference to the computer from ''Film/DarkStar''. This was supposed to be more than a one-scene gag but [[CerebusSyndrome the story's direction precluded that.]]
[[AC: Shout-outs that ''do'' spoil TheReveal, so scroll down at your own risk.]]
* Captain Derek [[Series/BlakesSeven Tarrant]], right down to a physical description that fits Stephen Pacey. They don't act much alike though.
* The asteroid the ''Starfarer 1'' orbits is called K-78356-Jessenstein, in reference to a ''VideoGame/{{Terraria}}'' LetsPlay... possibly. (It was suggested by a reader on the Spacebattles forums, and the author never got around to asking for details.)
* The IAV ''Fredricksson'''s Chief of The Boat is Master CPO Hemry, named after the SF writer John G. Hemry... better known as Jack Campbell, author of ''Literature/TheLostFleet'' series.