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* Kaworu unknowingly quotes Music/NineInchNails while describing the effect the Call is having on him.
-->"This thing is slowly taking me apart."
-->"This thing is slowly taking me apart."
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* At one point in Chapter 9, Misato says that Gendo makes [[Franchise/StarWars Darth Vader]] look like a good dad in comparison.
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* Kensuke has two girlfriends named [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Kyoko and Sayaka, who dye their hair red and blue, respectively]].
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** WordOfGod has now confirmed them to be the original counterparts, with same surnames. It's been even shown that they're engaging in a [[HoYay/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica secret love relationship]] - which Kensuke has respectfully kept a secret from everyone.
** WordOfGod has now confirmed them to be the original counterparts, with same surnames. It's been even shown that they're engaging in a [[HoYay/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica secret love relationship]] - which Kensuke has respectfully kept a secret from everyone.
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* In an early chapter Asuka reassures Shinji that he is [[{{Futurama}} technically correct. The best kind of correct]].
* Right after the fight with [[spoiler: Bardiel]] Asuka boasts to Shinji that [[{{Firefly}} "no power in the 'verse can stop us."]]
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* In an early chapter Asuka reassures Shinji that he is [[{{Futurama}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} technically correct. The best kind of correct]].
* Right after the fight with [[spoiler: Bardiel]] Asuka boasts to Shinji that[[{{Firefly}} [[Series/{{Firefly}} "no power in the 'verse can stop us."]]
* Right after the fight with [[spoiler: Bardiel]] Asuka boasts to Shinji that
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* When Hikari asks what the other Pilots are planning for Asuka's birthday, Kaworu only replies: [[Film/TwoThousandTenTheYearWeMakeContact "Something wonderful."]]
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* In Chapter 9, Kaworu quotes the ArcWords from ''Series/BattlestarGalactica2003'':
-->''"All this has happened before, all of this will happen again."''
-->''"All this has happened before, all of this will happen again."''
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-->[[Film/ThePrincessBride “Good evening, Nagisa. Sleep well. I'll most likely kill you in the morning.”]]
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* "[[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Stupid Sexy Rei]]."
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* While performing a sneak attack on Bardiel, Asuka screams "[[Machinima/RedVsBlue Payback's a bitch, and so am I]]."
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-->''"[[Music/PinkFloyd "I do believe it's working. Good. That'll keep you going through the night. Come on, it's time to go]]."''
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-->''"[[Music/PinkFloyd "I I do believe it's working. Good. That'll keep you going through the night. Come on, it's time to go]]."''
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** And after giving her the injection, here's what Ritsuko has to say to her:
-->''"[[Music/PinkFloyd "I do believe it's working. Good. That'll keep you going through the night. Come on, it's time to go]]."''
-->''"[[Music/PinkFloyd "I do believe it's working. Good. That'll keep you going through the night. Come on, it's time to go]]."''
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* To ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' in chapter 8 when Rei tells Shinji and Asuka are "The ones I Love".
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* Here's how the story describes one of Rei's injections:
-->''Music/JohnnyCash The needle tore its tiny hole in her skin, the old familiar sting.''
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* To ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' in chapter 8 when Asuka tells Shinji he is going to spend his pilot pay:
-->'''Asuka:''' "This is a proper date, dear baka, so you're paying for everything. Spend some of that munificent Pilot's pay for once."\\
'''Shinji:''' "........We get paid?"
-->'''Asuka:''' "This is a proper date, dear baka, so you're paying for everything. Spend some of that munificent Pilot's pay for once."\\
'''Shinji:''' "........We get paid?"
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* And in the next posts ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'', the other main crossover with ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' gets referenced:
-->''HA! I get it. And Asuka, just be glad this isn't Thousand Shinji.''\\
''Why? In Thousand Shinji, Asuka's got superhuman strength & toughness and the will to use it to SLAUGHTER HER ENEMIES AND TAKE THEIR SKULLS! BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GODDESS! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!''
-->''HA! I get it. And Asuka, just be glad this isn't Thousand Shinji.''\\
''Why? In Thousand Shinji, Asuka's got superhuman strength & toughness and the will to use it to SLAUGHTER HER ENEMIES AND TAKE THEIR SKULLS! BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GODDESS! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!''
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'''Shinji''':''"This isn't S&WH40K, [=S&WH40K=], dear..."''
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Shout-outs found in ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'':
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* Plenty to ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling''.
* ''[[http://studioshinnyo.com/txt/casanova.txt Shinji the Casanova]]'' by Strike-Fiss -author of ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'' has one, too.
* Several Shinji's female classmates are named after ''Evangelion'' seiyuus such like Megumi Hayashibara.
* In another chapter Asuka calls Rei ''The Film/{{Terminator}}''.
* [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/4161544/ In this post]] Strypgia mentions ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'':
-->'''Asuka''':''"I was pre-emptively killing the Void Dragon!"''\\
'''Shinji''':''"This isn't S&WH40K, dear..."''
* As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/4162372/ watching a show]] Asuka compares two characters with Maverick and Goose from ''Film/TopGun''.
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* Plenty to ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling''.
* ''[[http://studioshinnyo.com/txt/casanova.txt Shinji the Casanova]]'' by Strike-Fiss -author of ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'' has one, too.
* Several Shinji's female classmates are named after ''Evangelion'' seiyuus such like Megumi Hayashibara.
* In another chapter Asuka calls Rei ''The Film/{{Terminator}}''.
* [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/4161544/ In this post]] Strypgia mentions ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'':
-->'''Asuka''':''"I was pre-emptively killing the Void Dragon!"''\\
'''Shinji''':''"This isn't S&WH40K, dear..."''
* As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/4162372/ watching a show]] Asuka compares two characters with Maverick and Goose from ''Film/TopGun''.
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