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* DelayedRippleEffect: Gives Present Leah time to [[spoiler: make one last call to her mom before everything goes away. /spoiler]]
* FutureSelfReveal: With the twist [[spoiler: that she was posing as Past Leah (she's had some work done). /spoiler]]
* FutureSelfReveal: With the twist [[spoiler: that she was posing as Past Leah (she's had some work done). /spoiler]]
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* DelayedRippleEffect: Gives Present Leah time to [[spoiler: make one last call to her mom before everything goes away. /spoiler]]\n]]
* FutureSelfReveal: With the twist [[spoiler: that she was posing as Past Leah (she's had some work done). /spoiler]]]]
* FutureSelfReveal: With the twist [[spoiler: that she was posing as Past Leah (she's had some work done).
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* TragicStillbirth: Tragic both for its own sake and for what it leads Jenny to do.
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* AloneWithThePsycho: Though unusually for the trope, when the calvary arrives [[spoiler: it is voluntarily turned away.]]
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* MistakenForPedophile: Not explicitly stated, but after Jenny was found passed out, drunk, and naked in her neighbor's bed, he made it clear she was not to come anywhere near his son again.
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* MistakenForPedophile: Not explicitly stated, but after Jenny was found passed out, drunk, and naked in her neighbor's bed, bed when she was supposed to be babysitting, he made it clear she was not to come anywhere near his son again.
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* MistakenForPedophile: Not explicitly stated, but after Jenny was found passed out, drunk, and naked in her neighbor's bed, he made it clear she was not to come anywhere near his son again.
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* MeeknessIsWeakness / ShrinkingViolet: Poor Peg spent her while life being overlooked, ignored, or simply avoiding opportunities for happiness because she "didn't want to be a bother."
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* MeeknessIsWeakness / ShrinkingViolet: MeeknessIsWeakness: Poor Peg spent her while life being overlooked, ignored, or simply avoiding opportunities for happiness because she "didn't want to be a bother."
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* ShrinkingViolet: According to Peg, she avoided contact with the love of her life because she didn't want him to be bullied for being with her, and later because she assumed he just wanted to let her down easy. Whether these perceptions were accurate or just the delusions of a painfully shy girl, there is way of knowing, but the AI believes it was the latter.
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* MeeknessIsWeakness/ShrinkingViolet: Poor Peg spent her while life being overlooked, ignored, or simply avoiding opportunities for happiness because she "didn't want to be a bother."
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* MeeknessIsWeakness/ShrinkingViolet: MeeknessIsWeakness / ShrinkingViolet: Poor Peg spent her while life being overlooked, ignored, or simply avoiding opportunities for happiness because she "didn't want to be a bother."
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* MeeknessIsWeakness: Poor Peg spent her while life being overlooked, ignored, or simply avoiding opportunities for happiness because she "didn't want to be a bother."
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* MeeknessIsWeakness: MeeknessIsWeakness/ShrinkingViolet: Poor Peg spent her while life being overlooked, ignored, or simply avoiding opportunities for happiness because she "didn't want to be a bother."
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* DrowningMySorrows: Jenny's reaction to a miscarriage. Leads to [[spoiler: [[DrunkDriver Drunk Driving]] and an aversion of InfantImmortality]].
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* DrowningMySorrows: Jenny's reaction to a miscarriage. Leads to [[spoiler: [[DrunkDriver Drunk Driving]] and an aversion of InfantImmortality]].DeathOfAChild]].
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** "[[PrecisionFStrike F__k]] [[TakeThat magic]] [[Film/ThirteenGoingOnThirty wishing dust!"
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** "[[PrecisionFStrike F__k]] [[TakeThat magic]] [[Film/ThirteenGoingOnThirty wishing dust!"dust!]]"
