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* BigSecret: [[spoiler:Bob Offer deletes the e-mail Odelle sent, won't tell anyone why, and it's strongly implied that Societele and/or the police leaned heavily on him to do it.]]
* CassandraTruth: Inverted. [[spoiler:Harrison's father becomes convinced of the truth of Harrison's allegations about Odelle's email.]]
* CassandraTruth: Inverted. [[spoiler:Harrison's father becomes convinced of the truth of Harrison's allegations about Odelle's email.]]
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* BigSecret: [[spoiler:Bob Bob Offer deletes the e-mail Odelle sent, won't refuses to tell anyone why, Harrison why he [[spoiler:deleted Odelle's email]], and it's strongly implied that Societele and/or the police leaned heavily on someone fed him false information about Harrison's motivations to get him to do it.]]
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* CassandraTruth: Inverted.[[spoiler:Harrison's Harrison's father becomes convinced of the truth of Harrison's allegations about [[spoiler:about Odelle's email.]]
* CassandraTruth: Inverted.
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* LoverTugOfWar: Anna is visibly annoyed at the way Ruby is rather openly hitting on Harrison in front of her.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Ruby, The false news reporter; she is apparently a hired assassin as well.]]
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* TheMole: The hired assassin, [[spoiler:Ruby, The false news reporter; she is apparently a hired assassin who masquerades as well.a freelance reporter.]]
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* StraightGay: The Malian General who is the secret lover of Aslam's uncle.
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* StraightGay: The Malian General (Diallo) who is the secret lover of Aslam's uncle.
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Rewrote Scylla and Charybdis, added Straight Gay as well.
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* ScyllaAndCharybdis: [[spoiler:Odelle doesn't want to get caught by the Ansar Dine, and her companion Aslam is Tuareg, so he's not fond of them either. Nonetheless, when she gets found out and the Tuareg travellers are getting ready to kill her, Aslam's only option is to convince the Ansar Dine mercs to capture her alive and join with them as well.]]
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* ScyllaAndCharybdis: [[spoiler:Odelle doesn't want to get caught by the Ansar Dine, Odelle and her companion Aslam (who is Tuareg, so he's not fond Tuareg) have to choose between her certain death [[spoiler:at the hands of them either. Nonetheless, when she gets found out and the Tuareg travellers are getting ready to kill her, Aslam's only option is to convince travellers]], or being captured alive [[spoiler:by the Ansar Dine mercs to capture her alive and join with them as well.]]mercenaries.]]
* StraightGay: The Malian General who is the secret lover of Aslam's uncle.
* StraightGay: The Malian General who is the secret lover of Aslam's uncle.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Ruby, the false news reporter; she is apparently a hired assassin as well.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Ruby, the The false news reporter; she is apparently a hired assassin as well.]]
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* ScyllaAndCharybdis: [[spoiler:Odelle doesn't want to get caught by the Ansar Dine, and her companion Aslam is Tuareg, so he's not fond of them either. Nonetheless, when she gets found out and the Tuareg travellers are getting ready to kill her, Aslam's only option is to convince the Ansar Dine mercs to capture her alive and join with them as well.]]
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* ScyllaAndCharybdis: [[spoiler:Odelle doesn't want to get caught by the Ansar Dine, and her companion Aslam is Tuareg, so he's not fond of them either. Nonetheless, when she gets found out and the Tuareg travellers are getting ready to kill her, Aslam's only option is to convince the Ansar Dine mercs to capture her alive and join with them as well.]]]]
* WholesomeCrossdresser: Aslam's uncle in Bamako.
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* WholesomeCrossdresser: Aslam's uncle in Bamako.
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* IronicEcho: When Odelle is being interrogated by Omar, he mentions studying at Michigan State University, and says, "Go blue". Later, when Odelle reveals she understands Arabic, she mockingly chants back, "Go blue!" in that language.
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* IronicEcho: When Odelle is being interrogated by Omar, he mentions studying at Michigan State University, the University of Michigan, and says, "Go blue". Later, when Odelle reveals she understands Arabic, she mockingly chants back, "Go blue!" in that language.
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* IronicEcho: When Odelle is being interrogated by Omar, he mentions studying at Michigan State University, and says, "Go blue". Later, when Odelle reveals she understands Arabic, she mockingly chants back, "Go blue!" in that language.
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* KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade: Invoked in the case of [[spoiler:Odelle Ballard's unit and Harrison's father]].
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* CooperationGambit / TeethClenchedTeamwork: Aslam and [[spoiler:Odelle]].
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* CooperationGambit / TeethClenchedTeamwork: Aslam and [[spoiler:Odelle]].Odelle; [[spoiler:by the third episode, "Drop King", they have evolved to calling each other friends.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Ruby, the false news reporter; so far more implied than proven.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Ruby, the false news reporter; so far more implied than proven.she is apparently a hired assassin as well.]]
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* CassandraTruth: Inverted. [[spoiler:Harrison's father becomes convinced of the truth of Harrison's allegations about Odelle's email.]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: Aslam, who rather downplays the armed aspect of the conflict at hand:
-->'''Aslam:''' The Ansar Dine hate the Tuareg. Like your blue states and red states. We're used to it.
-->'''Aslam:''' The Ansar Dine hate the Tuareg. Like your blue states and red states. We're used to it.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: If Odelle [[spoiler:hadn't given the pills to the wounded boy, she wouldn't have ended up needing to kill his father (or older relative).]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: If Odelle [[spoiler:hadn't given the pills to the wounded boy, she wouldn't have ended up needing to kill his father (or older relative).father.]]
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* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Such an organization, called OSELA, features prominently, and are reputed to play fast and loose with basic courtesies and standard procedures.
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* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Such an organization, called OSELA, A PMC named OSELA features prominently, and are in the pilot. They're reputed to play fast and loose with basic courtesies and standard procedures.
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* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Such an organization, called OSELA, features prominently, and are reputed to play fast and loose with basic courtesies and standard procedures.
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* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Such an organization, called OSELA, features prominently, and are reputed to play fast and loose with basic courtesies and standard procedures.procedures.
* ScyllaAndCharybdis: [[spoiler:Odelle doesn't want to get caught by the Ansar Dine, and her companion Aslam is Tuareg, so he's not fond of them either. Nonetheless, when she gets found out and the Tuareg travellers are getting ready to kill her, Aslam's only option is to convince the Ansar Dine mercs to capture her alive and join with them as well.]]
* ScyllaAndCharybdis: [[spoiler:Odelle doesn't want to get caught by the Ansar Dine, and her companion Aslam is Tuareg, so he's not fond of them either. Nonetheless, when she gets found out and the Tuareg travellers are getting ready to kill her, Aslam's only option is to convince the Ansar Dine mercs to capture her alive and join with them as well.]]
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* BigSecret: [[spoiler:Bob Offer deletes the e-mail Odelle sent, won't tell anyone why, and it's strongly implied that Societele and/or the police leaned heavily on him to do it.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Ruby, the false news reporter.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Ruby, the false news reporter.reporter; so far more implied than proven.]]
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* OhCrap: Harrison is so hyped up [[spoiler:that he doesn't check the email sent to him by Bob, which completely wrecks his credibility when he live-tweets the equivalent of a rickrolling.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: If Odelle [[spoiler:hadn't given the pills to the wounded boy, she wouldn't have ended up needing to kill his father (or older relative).]]
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* GenreSavvy: Harrison Walters guesses Bob Offer's password by paying close attention to Bob's [[TheBigBoard wall of interconnected items]].
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* GenreSavvy: Played with. Harrison Walters guesses Bob Offer's password by paying close attention to Bob's [[TheBigBoard wall of interconnected items]].items]], but as it turns out, Bob Offer was even more GenreSavvy and programmed his computer to fool someone trying to guess easy passwords.
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* GenreSavvy: Harrison Walters guesses Bob Offer's password by paying close attention to Bob's [[wall of interconnected items TheBigBoard]].
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* GenreSavvy: Harrison Walters guesses Bob Offer's password by paying close attention to Bob's [[wall [[TheBigBoard wall of interconnected items TheBigBoard]].items]].
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* GenreSavvy: Harrison Walters guesses Bob Offer's password by paying close attention to Bob's [[wall of interconnected items TheBigBoard]].
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:The false news reporter.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:The [[spoiler:Ruby, the false news reporter.]]
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''American Odyssey'' is an {{Creator/NBC}} TV Series which centers around three separate milieux, exempilified in the characters of Sergeant Odelle Ballard, who must escape out of Mali and who possesses critical information tying a large megacorporation to terrorist financing; Peter Decker as a corporate lawyer who has stumbled on another piece of the conspiracy while trying to head off a potential IRS investigation into questionable tax avoidance behavior by said megacorporation; Harrison Walters, the young figurehead of the anti-corporate Occupy protesters, and Bob Offer, a fringe member of the group who has computing skills and sees conspiracies everywhere.
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''American Odyssey'' is an {{Creator/NBC}} TV Series which centers around three separate milieux, exempilified in the characters of these characters:
* Sergeant Odelle Ballard, who must escape out of Mali and who possesses critical information tying a large megacorporation to terroristfinancing; financing.
* Peter Decker as a corporate lawyer who has stumbled on another piece of the conspiracy while trying to head off a potential IRS investigation into questionable tax avoidance behavior by saidmegacorporation; megacorporation
* Harrison Walters, the young figurehead of the anti-corporate Occupyprotesters, protesters based out of New York City, and Bob Offer, a fringe member of the group who has computing skills and sees conspiracies everywhere.
* Sergeant Odelle Ballard, who must escape out of Mali and who possesses critical information tying a large megacorporation to terrorist
* Peter Decker as a corporate lawyer who has stumbled on another piece of the conspiracy while trying to head off a potential IRS investigation into questionable tax avoidance behavior by said
* Harrison Walters, the young figurehead of the anti-corporate Occupy
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:The false news reporter.]]
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* CooperationGambit / TeethClenchedTeamwork: Aslam and [[spoiler:Odelle]].
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* ChildSoldier: Aslam, a young boy impressed into the duty of prisoner guard.
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* AdultFear: A man in Delaware loosely connected to the conspiracy has his wife and child threatened unless he stays quiet.
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''American Odyssey'' is an Creator/NBC {{Creator/NBC}} TV Series which centers around three separate milieux, exempilified in the characters of Sergeant Odelle Ballard, who must escape out of Mali and who possesses critical information tying a large megacorporation to terrorist financing; Peter Decker as a corporate lawyer who has stumbled on another piece of the conspiracy while trying to head off a potential IRS investigation into questionable tax avoidance behavior by said megacorporation; Harrison Walters, the young figurehead of the anti-corporate Occupy protesters, and Bob Offer, a fringe member of the group who has computing skills and sees conspiracies everywhere.
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''American Odyssey'' is an Creator/NBC TV Series which centers around three separate milieux, exempilified in the characters of Sergeant Odelle Ballard, who must escape out of Mali and who possesses critical information tying a large megacorporation to terrorist financing; Peter Decker as a corporate lawyer who has stumbled on another piece of the conspiracy while trying to head off a potential IRS investigation into questionable tax avoidance behavior by said megacorporation; Harrison Walters, the young figurehead of the anti-corporate Occupy protesters, and Bob Offer, a fringe member of the group who has computing skills and sees conspiracies everywhere.
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* BigBad: A company named [[spoiler:Societele]] is the megacorporation suspected of enabling terrorist financing.
* CloudCuckooLander: Bob Offer.
* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Implied to be in play as the BigBad is a megacorporation.
* HollywoodHacking: Bob's ability to crack iPhone passwords.
* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Such an organization, called OSELA, features prominently, and are reputed to play fast and loose with basic courtesies and standard procedures.
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* BigBad: A company named [[spoiler:Societele]] is the megacorporation suspected of enabling terrorist financing.
* CloudCuckooLander: Bob Offer.
* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Implied to be in play as the BigBad is a megacorporation.
* HollywoodHacking: Bob's ability to crack iPhone passwords.
* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Such an organization, called OSELA, features prominently, and are reputed to play fast and loose with basic courtesies and standard procedures.