History Sandbox / MonsterScripts

** [[Script/SpiderMan1993 Second draft]], by Creator/JamesCameron et al. ([[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bcSJXxm5lU4qHpdyAHYNq7nlQBhas_ES/view?usp=sharing link]]): [[Characters/MarvelComicsOttoOctavius Doctor Otto Octavius]], aka "Doc Ock", is a narcissistic MadScientist defined by his ego. Already callous to the lives of his students, as shown when his classroom nearly burns down and he dismisses the risks, Ock manages to view an alternate dimension, giving him [[AGodAmI a God complex]] that makes him decide to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy the entire universe]]. In pursuit of this goal, Ock murders his former boss out of spite; has his henchman attack Peter's home and causes Uncle Ben's death; kidnaps Liz Allen and almost kills her to draw Peter out; and repeatedly tries to kill Spider-Man. Once his goal is set in motion, chaos erupts in the city, with a train derailing and cars floating, which causes many injuries. Coming within seconds of wiping out all life, Ock chooses himself when the portal to his "heaven" can only transport one person, believing [[ItsAllAboutMe only himself]] to be worthy of life.

** [[Script/SpiderManScriptment Scriptment]], by Creator/JamesCameron ([[http://www.script-o-rama.com/movie_scripts/s/spider-man-scriptment.html link]]): [[FromNobodyToNightmare Carlton Strand]] is a [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]] and [[TheSocialDarwinist Darwinistic]] supervillain who has used his electricity powers to become an [[CorruptCorporateExecutive unfathomably rich businessman]]. Getting his start as a lowly street crook who tested his new powers by slaughtering his gang, Strand ascended to power by forcing heart attacks onto anyone in his way and silencing any who tried to expose his corruption. Getting his kicks by electrocuting his abused lover to near-death then reviving her at his whim--culminating in him leaving her to die in this state when he's in a hurry--Strand later kidnaps Mary Jane Watson to torture and molest in an attempt to [[WeCanRuleTogether force Spider-Man to ally with him]] in bringing about a new age of superhumans to stand above humanity.

* ''Film/{{Sicario}}'' [[Script/{{Sicario}} original script]] ([[https://indiegroundfilms.files.wordpress.com/2014/01/sicario-by-taylor-sheridan.pdf link]]): [[BigBad Fausto Alarcon]] here lacks [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes the genuine care for his family]] that the film version has. One of the top chiefs of [[TheCartel the Sinaloa Cartel]], Alarcon is likened to a virus plaguing all of Mexico; it's noted that any murders carried out by the Cartel are perpetrated "with his hand or with his blessing". Alarcon's murderous reign is so brutal that entire houses are filled to bursting with the bodies of his dozens of victims, and he personally had the wife and [[WouldHurtAChild child daughter]] of Alejandro brutally tortured, raped, and murdered. When Alejandro comes seeking revenge, Alarcon tries to sacrifice his own wife to save his own skin, emotionlessly remarking "[ItsAllAboutMe I love me more]]."

* ''Film/TheLastBoyScout'' (Creator/ShaneBlack's [[Script/TheLastBoyScoutShaneBlack original script]]): [[TheDragon Milo]] is significantly nastier than he is in the final product, even managing to eclipse his boss [[BigBad Sheldon Marcone]]. A director of {{snuff film}}s on top of being a [[PsychoForHire psychotic hitman]] for Marcone, Milo routinely has young women tricked or kidnapped to be brutally murdered by his henchmen for the purpose of his films. Once Marcone orders the assassination of [[CorruptPolitician Senator Calvin Baynard]], Milo kidnaps the hero Joe Hallenbeck and his wife Sarah and threatens to use Sarah as the next star in his snuff films if Joe doesn't kill Baynard, with full intent of simply burning Joe to death and using him to soak up guilt as he and Marcone walk off free. Along the way, Milo massacres an innocent family simply because they inconvenience him and, after murdering Baynard and all of his men before being defeated and scarred by Joe, murders his way back to Joe and tries to furiously gun down him and his entire family in revenge.

* ''Script/{{Venom|1997}}'''s unproduced script ([[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FZ-6BbjE0xKDvdpEc-pgQjXPchEt16YE/view link]]) has both [[AxCrazy psychotic]], [[ChaosIsEvil chaos-loving]] halves of [[Characters/MarvelComicsCarnage Carnage]]:

** [[DirtyCop Dan Wilhite]] is the Captain of the LAPD's Narcotics Division, who uses his status to run a criminal empire. Serving as the right-hand man to Fritz Koenig, Wilhite uses the gangster Hector Magdalena as a figurehead to control a large drug trafficking conspiracy, routinely murdering rivals and petty criminals as part of the enterprise. Having groomed and lusted after Hector's daughter Lucille since her youth, Wilhite takes advantage of the girl while her father is pimping her out, before orchestrating the murder of Hector and his son Tommy so Wilhite can have Lucille all to himself.
** [[AssholeVictim Hector Magdelena]] himself was a violent drug dealer who informed to Wilhite in return for the LAPD turning a blind eye as he flooded the streets with poison. Also horribly abusive to his family, Hector regularly beat [[DomesticAbuse his wife]] and [[AbusiveParents two children]] and even groomed his daughter Lucille to sleep with his criminal allies, Wilhite in particular using her for years.

** ''Literature/WhiteJazz'' 2007 [[Script/WhiteJazz2007 script]], by Matthew Michael Carnahan & Creator/JoeCarnahan ([[https://imsdb.com/scripts/White-Jazz.html link]]): [[DirtyCop Dan Wilhite]] is the Captain of the LAPD's Narcotics Division, who uses his status to run a criminal empire. Serving as the right-hand man to Fritz Koenig, Wilhite uses the gangster Hector Magdalena as a figurehead to control a large drug trafficking conspiracy, routinely murdering rivals and petty criminals as part of the enterprise. Having groomed and lusted after Hector's daughter Lucille since her youth, Wilhite takes advantage of the girl while her father is pimping her out, before orchestrating the murder of Hector and his son Tommy so Wilhite can have Lucille all to himself.

* ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfSpyro'' [[Script/TheLegendOfSpyroAltiereBros unproduced script]] ([[https://drive.google.com/file/d/12oZRKTDMzxVum6UJU4ih1XkJF9xiBoy6/view link]]): [[EvilOverlord The Dark Master]] is an evil purple dragon who seeks dominion over the realms. Creating an army of monsters, The Dark Master has them raze the surface, killing all in their path and leaving the lands as a charred wasteland. Seeking more power, the Dark Master uses a red jewel to [[YourSoulIsMine steal the souls]] of the dragons he killed to bolster his own power. Kidnapping Cynder as a hatchling, the Dark Master twisted her into a snarling beast and used her as a weapon of war, keeping her aware of her actions. Hearing of [[Characters/SpyroTheDragonTheCharacter Spyro]]'s existence, the Dark Master has his minions attack the Dragonfly Village to bring him out, later attacking the Dragon Temple and stealing Ignitus's soul. Despite once being able to be the defender of the realms, [[AmbitionIsEvil the Dark Master]] willingly chose to harbor power and wouldn't be content until he's got it all, standing on a world of ashes.

** [[Creator/JMDeMatteis J.M. DeMatteis]]'s [[Script/DaredevilTheManWithoutFearJMDeMatteis treatment]] ([[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lvhUuNV-QL3-xI4BwnUMpcddj3biNm_6/view link]]): [[ArmsDealer Baron Von Strucker]] is the head of arms company ComicBook/{{Hydra}}. Previously kidnapping a young Elektra Natchios and murdering her mother, Von Strucker would go on to sell dangerous weapons to numerous criminals, such as guns that can melt people's skin off. Bargaining with [[Characters/MarvelComicsTheKingpin Kingpin]] to sell him weapons if he kills his friend Nikos, Von Strucker shows no care for the massive amount of lives his weapons take, just as long as he profits.

** ''Literature/WhiteJazz'' 2007 [[Script/WhiteJazz2007 script]] ([[https://imsdb.com/scripts/White-Jazz.html link]]), by Matthew Michael Carnahan & Creator/JoeCarnahan ([[https://imsdb.com/scripts/White-Jazz.html link]]): [[DirtyCop Dan Wilhite]] is the Captain of the LAPD's Narcotics Division, who uses his status to run a criminal empire. Serving as the right-hand man to Fritz Koenig, Wilhite uses the gangster Hector Magdalena as a figurehead to control a large drug trafficking conspiracy, routinely murdering rivals and petty criminals as part of the enterprise. Having groomed and lusted after Hector's daughter Lucille since her youth, Wilhite takes advantage of the girl while her father is pimping her out, before orchestrating the murder of Hector and his son Tommy so Wilhite can have Lucille all to himself.

** ''Literature/WhiteJazz'' 2007 [[Script/WhiteJazz2007 script]] (https://imsdb.com/scripts/White-Jazz.html link]]), by Matthew Michael Carnahan & Creator/JoeCarnahan ([[https://imsdb.com/scripts/White-Jazz.html link]]): [[DirtyCop Dan Wilhite]] is the Captain of the LAPD's Narcotics Division, who uses his status to run a criminal empire. Serving as the right-hand man to Fritz Koenig, Wilhite uses the gangster Hector Magdalena as a figurehead to control a large drug trafficking conspiracy, routinely murdering rivals and petty criminals as part of the enterprise. Having groomed and lusted after Hector's daughter Lucille since her youth, Wilhite takes advantage of the girl while her father is pimping her out, before orchestrating the murder of Hector and his son Tommy so Wilhite can have Lucille all to himself.