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* [[spoiler:A different outcome to the Hyūga Incident (that happened two years later than canon) and several slightly alterations to history [[ForWantOfANail causes cause a whole different set of events]] to occur.]]
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* [[spoiler:GambitPileup - Naruto vs. Konan & Hinata vs. Orochimaru vs. Madara & Hidan at some point?]]
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** [[spoiler:Naruto - wants Hinata to return.]]
** [[spoiler:Konoha - wants Hinata to die as to cover up their mistakes.]]
** [[spoiler:Konan - wants the Kyūbi no Yōko to keep it away from Orochimaru's hands.]]
** [[spoiler:Hinata - wants to avenge her father and sister.]]
** [[spoiler:Orochimaru - wants the Kyūbi as to help his experiments along and the Sharingan and Byakugan to help him observe the effects.]]
** [[spoiler:Madara - wants all the Bijū as to use them as weapons.]]
** [[spoiler:Obito - wants all the Bijū as to cast his Tsuki no Me.]]
** [[spoiler:Kiri - wants Hi no Kuni's coastal territories.]]
** [[spoiler:Pain - wants to topple Konoha from power and institute Amegakure as a major village.]]
** [[spoiler:Itachi - doesn't have a purpose except being a SpannerInTheWorks for Orochimaru.]]
** [[spoiler:Naruto - wants Hinata to return.]]
** [[spoiler:Konoha - wants Hinata to die as to cover up their mistakes.]]
** [[spoiler:Konan - wants the Kyūbi no Yōko to keep it away from Orochimaru's hands.]]
** [[spoiler:Hinata - wants to avenge her father and sister.]]
** [[spoiler:Orochimaru - wants the Kyūbi as to help his experiments along and the Sharingan and Byakugan to help him observe the effects.]]
** [[spoiler:Madara - wants all the Bijū as to use them as weapons.]]
** [[spoiler:Obito - wants all the Bijū as to cast his Tsuki no Me.]]
** [[spoiler:Kiri - wants Hi no Kuni's coastal territories.]]
** [[spoiler:Pain - wants to topple Konoha from power and institute Amegakure as a major village.]]
** [[spoiler:Itachi - doesn't have a purpose except being a SpannerInTheWorks for Orochimaru.]]
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*** [[spoiler: Hinata's [[LifeOrLimbDecision "Life or Limb" decision]] occurs here.]]
* [[spoiler: "ThereIsNoGod" - Asuma's response once he sees the battleground left behind Shikamaru and Hinata.]]
* [[spoiler: "ThereIsNoGod" - Asuma's response once he sees the battleground left behind Shikamaru and Hinata.]]
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** [[spoiler: Shikamaru [[YouAreTooLate arrives late]] to assist Naruto, where he fights Hinata and [[NeverFoundTheBody isn't seen again]] until [[FinallyFoundTheBody much later]].]]
*** [[spoiler: Most in Konoha consider Hinata's actions to be [[MoralEventHorizon irredeemable]] - she faces a HeelRealization and a moment of "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" as Shikamaru has been her teammate for quite a long time.]]
* [[spoiler: "ThereIsNoGod" - Asuma's response once he sees the battleground left behind Shikamaru and Hinata.]]
*** [[spoiler: Most in Konoha consider Hinata's actions to be [[MoralEventHorizon irredeemable]] - she faces a HeelRealization and a moment of "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" as Shikamaru has been her teammate for quite a long time.]]
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*** By the time the story begins, [[spoiler: Hidan, Kakuzu, Pain and Konan should still be affiliated with the Akatsuki.]]
* [[spoiler: Hinata defects from Konoha after finding out the truth about her father. This is "WasItAllALie" played out on a village scale.]]
** [[spoiler: Konoha mounts a [[RescueArc rescue attempt]], except [[UnwantedRescue she doesn't want to be rescued]]. Cue the [[FightingYourFriend Naruto vs. Hinata fight]], where [[IdiotHero Naruto]] is utterly convinced that [[FallenHero Hinata]] is misaimed - he gets defeated.]]
** [[spoiler: Shikamaru [[YouAreTooLate arrives late]] to assist Naruto, where he fights Hinata and [[NeverFoundTheBody isn't seen again]] until [[FinallyFoundTheBody much later]].]]
* [[spoiler: Hinata defects from Konoha after finding out the truth about her father. This is "WasItAllALie" played out on a village scale.]]
** [[spoiler: Konoha mounts a [[RescueArc rescue attempt]], except [[UnwantedRescue she doesn't want to be rescued]]. Cue the [[FightingYourFriend Naruto vs. Hinata fight]], where [[IdiotHero Naruto]] is utterly convinced that [[FallenHero Hinata]] is misaimed - he gets defeated.]]
** [[spoiler: Shikamaru [[YouAreTooLate arrives late]] to assist Naruto, where he fights Hinata and [[NeverFoundTheBody isn't seen again]] until [[FinallyFoundTheBody much later]].]]
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*** [[spoiler: Because of this, [[SerialEscalation Orochimaru left, followed by Hidan and Kakuzu, followed by Pain and Konan]], leaving FauxAffablyEvil "Tobi", [[PlantPerson Zetsu]], [[MadBomber Deidara]] and [[MarionetteMaster Sasori]].]]
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*** [[spoiler: Because of this, [[SerialEscalation Orochimaru left, followed by Hidan and Kakuzu, followed by Pain and Konan]], leaving FauxAffablyEvil "Tobi", [[PlantPerson Zetsu]], [[MadBomber Deidara]] and [[MarionetteMaster Sasori]].]]
*** By the time the story begins, [[spoiler: Hidan, Kakuzu, Pain and Konan should still be affiliated with the Akatsuki.]]
*** By the time the story begins, [[spoiler: Hidan, Kakuzu, Pain and Konan should still be affiliated with the Akatsuki.]]
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** [[spoiler:Neji further delves into the realm of pride over his skills to the point of [[InsufferableGenius rubbing it in people's faces every chance he has]].]]
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** [[spoiler:Shino becomes [=RotY=], [=RotY=][[labelnote:*]]Rookie of the Year[[/labelnote]], Ino and Sakura never graduate from the academy and Kakashi gets a mediocre team which he fails.]]
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** [[spoiler:Itachi and Kisame leave the Akatsuki, inverting the "RenegadeSplinterFaction" trope.]]
*** [[spoiler: Because of this, [[SerialEscalation Orochimaru left, followed by Hidan and Kakuzu, followed by Pain and Konan]], leaving FauxAffablyEvil "Tobi", [[PlantPerson Zetsu]], [[MadBomber Deidara]] and [[MarionetteMaster Sasori]].]]
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** [[spoiler:Itachi takes both of Shisui's eyes, kills his entire clan save for his brother, [[MindRape mind-rapes]] Sasuke who [[DrivenToSuicide commits suicide suicide]] after some time.]]
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** [[spoiler:Hinata lost both [[ParentalAbandonment her parents]] and [[CynicismCatalyst her sister]] in the Hyūga [[NoodleIncident Incident]] that happened eight years before the main events.]]
** [[spoiler:Zabuza's coup succeeds and he becomes Mizukage.]]
** [[spoiler:Zabuza's coup succeeds and he becomes Mizukage.]]
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** [[spoiler:Hinata lost both [[ParentalAbandonment both her parents]] and [[CynicismCatalyst her sister]] in the Hyūga [[NoodleIncident Incident]] that happened eight years before the main events.]]
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** [[spoiler:Hinata lost [[ParentalAbandonment both her parents]] and [[CynicismCatalyst her sister]] in the Hyūga [[NoodleIncident Hyūga Incident]] TheQuietOne ]]
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* [[spoiler:GeniusBonus + {{Foreshadowing}} = Ikinai!]]Ikinai!]]
* [[spoiler:A different outcome to the Hyūga Incident [[ForWantOfANail causes a whole set of events]] to occur.]]
** [[spoiler:Itachi takes both of Shisui's eyes, kills his entire clan save for his brother, [[MindRape mind-rapes]] Sasuke who commits suicide after some time.]]
** [[spoiler:Shino becomes RotY, Ino and Sakura never graduate from the academy and...]]
** [[spoiler:Neji further delves into the realm of pride over his skills to the point of [[InsufferableGenius rubbing it in people's faces every chance he has]].]]
** [[spoiler:Hinata lost [[ParentalAbandonment both her parents]] and [[CynicismCatalyst her sister]] in the [[NoodleIncident Hyūga Incident]] TheQuietOne ]]
* [[spoiler:A different outcome to the Hyūga Incident [[ForWantOfANail causes a whole set of events]] to occur.]]
** [[spoiler:Itachi takes both of Shisui's eyes, kills his entire clan save for his brother, [[MindRape mind-rapes]] Sasuke who commits suicide after some time.]]
** [[spoiler:Shino becomes RotY, Ino and Sakura never graduate from the academy and...]]
** [[spoiler:Neji further delves into the realm of pride over his skills to the point of [[InsufferableGenius rubbing it in people's faces every chance he has]].]]
** [[spoiler:Hinata lost [[ParentalAbandonment both her parents]] and [[CynicismCatalyst her sister]] in the [[NoodleIncident Hyūga Incident]] TheQuietOne ]]
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* [[spoiler:GeniusBonus + Foreshadowing [[Foreshadowing]] = Ikinai!]]
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* [[spoiler:GeniusBonus + Foreshadowing = Ikinai!]]
* [[spoiler:GeniusBonus + Foreshadowing = Ikinai!]]
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* [[spoiler:IcyBlueEyes - Naruto again]]again]]
* [[spoiler:Naruto [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil starts slipping into evil]] rather than the insane as he works to redeem Hinata.]]
* [[spoiler:Naruto [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil starts slipping into evil]] rather than the insane as he works to redeem Hinata.]]
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* [[spoiler:GambitPileup - Naruto vs. Konan & Hinata vs. Orochimaru vs. Madara & Hidan at some point?]]point?]]
* [[spoiler:IcyBlueEyes - Naruto again]]
* [[spoiler:IcyBlueEyes - Naruto again]]
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* [[spoiler:She [[AnArmAndALeg loses her arm]] because [[LifeOrLimbDecision it was either self-amputation or death]] [[labelnote:*]]technically, there ''was'' a third choice[[/labelnote]]]]choice[[/labelnote]]]]
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* [[spoiler:She [[AnArmAndALeg loses her arm]] because [[LifeOrLimbDecision it was either self-amputation or death]] [[labelnote:*]]technically, there ''was'' a third choice[[/labelnote]]]]
* [[spoiler:She [[AnArmAndALeg loses her arm]] because [[LifeOrLimbDecision it was either self-amputation or death]] [[labelnote:*]]technically, there ''was'' a third choice[[/labelnote]]]]
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* [[spoiler:"MurderMakesYouCrazy" combined with "MyGodWhatHaveIDone"]] make makes for one hell of a surprising start to one's career.career.
* [[spoiler:Hinata's sanity [[SanitySlippage starts slipping]] as she progressively kills more people as a ninja...]]
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Hoorah [[spoiler:for Angra Mainyu]]!Mainyu]]!
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