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Run by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/members/starmaker764.26501/ StarMaker764]] on [[Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom Sufficient Velocity]], this quest takes place in the last days of the 42nd millennium, and the dawn of the 43rd. You play as Octavia Tesla, an Archmagos of the Adeptus Mechanicus who has barely escaped death for the crime of techno-heresy, and has instead been exiled to the Helios Sub-Sector and onto the DeathWorld of Atlantis as punishment. Through her, you will be a leader of a rebellion against the Imperium in order to drive away its forces from your sector and craft your own way in these cruel stars through the power of innovation, compassion, and space mines.
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Run by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/members/starmaker764.26501/ StarMaker764]] on [[Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom Sufficient Velocity]], Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom, this quest takes place in the last days of the 42nd millennium, and the dawn of the 43rd. You play as Octavia Tesla, an Archmagos of the Adeptus Mechanicus who has barely escaped death for the crime of techno-heresy, and has instead been exiled to the Helios Sub-Sector and onto the DeathWorld of Atlantis as punishment. Through her, you will be a leader of a rebellion against the Imperium in order to drive away its forces from your sector and craft your own way in these cruel stars through the power of innovation, compassion, and space mines.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The crime Octavia was exiled for. Instead of discovering her real techno-heresies, [[AIIsACrapshoot including a close call with creating an abominable intelligence]], the Fabricator General of Mars indicts Octavia [[FelonyMisdemeanor for a single page of notes on how to subtly improve the human genome written in her youth]]. [[BerserkButton In sheer rage at the absurdity of the situation]], she loudly condemned everything wrong about the Imperium and the Mechanicus in a public forum. It took every connection she had just to avoid being killed as a result.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The crime Octavia was exiled for. Instead of discovering her real techno-heresies, [[AIIsACrapshoot including a close call with creating an abominable intelligence]], the Fabricator General of Mars indicts Octavia [[FelonyMisdemeanor for a single page of notes on how to subtly improve the human genome written in her youth]]. [[BerserkButton [[RageBreakingPoint In sheer rage at the absurdity of the situation]], she loudly condemned everything wrong about the Imperium and the Mechanicus in a public forum. It took every connection she had just to avoid being killed as a result.
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* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Some magos in the Dominion comes up with the [[BlatantLies brilliant idea]] to colonize the moon [[EldritchAbomination Dis]] above the Planet Atlantis IV. Naturally, [[ApocalypseHow death and mayhem follow]].
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* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Some magos in the Dominion comes up with the [[BlatantLies brilliant idea]] to colonize the moon [[EldritchAbomination Dis]] above the Planet Atlantis IV.III. Naturally, [[ApocalypseHow death and mayhem follow]].
