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The Nonsensical RP is a roleplay on the Text-Based Games Forums made by cheesyfriedeggs.
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The Nonsensical RP is a roleplay on the [[{{MUCK}} Text-Based Games Games]] Forums made by cheesyfriedeggs.
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The Nonsensical RP is a roleplay on the Text Based Games Forums made by cheesyfriedeggs.
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The Nonsensical RP is a roleplay on the Text Based Text-Based Games Forums made by cheesyfriedeggs.
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* TimeSkip: The Nonsensical RP: Legacy takes place five years after the original Nonsensical RP ended.
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* TimeSkip: The Nonsensical RP: Legacy takes place five years after the original Nonsensical RP ended.ended.
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The first part (completed) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=5563&p=1 here]], and the second part (canceled due to various reasons, but an epilogue has been provided to tie up loose ends) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=6043 here]].
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The first part (completed) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=5563&p=1 com/forums/index.php?topic=5563.0 here]], and the second part (canceled due to various reasons, but an epilogue has been provided to tie up loose ends) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=6043 com/forums/index.php?topic=6043.0 here]].
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** Umbramancer Cricket Green also has this ability, and can also create weapons and force fields out of shadow.
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** Umbramancer [[WesternAnimation/BigCityGreens Cricket Green Green]] also has this ability, and can also create weapons and force fields out of shadow.
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* DisneyDeath: [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=517293#p517293 Parodied]] in Chapter 7 of the first part. Orion mauls Left Hand to near death, but when it seems like they're going to give some dramatic last words, it turns out they're completely fine.
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* DisneyDeath: [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=517293#p517293 Parodied]] in Chapter 7 In chapter 7]] of the first part. part, Orion mauls Left Hand to near death, but when it seems like they're going to give some dramatic last words, it turns out they're completely fine.fine. They then [[LampshadeHanging lampshade]] how generic it is to have a fakeout death.
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* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: It becomes this near the end of the first part, with characters from Nickelodeon, PBS Kids, Cartoon Network, and Disney Channel cartoons (up to and including a dimension filled with [[WesternAnimation/BigCityGreens Cricket Green]] clones), the creator's own [=OCs=], and many others.
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* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: It becomes this near the end of the first part, with characters from Nickelodeon, PBS Kids, Cartoon Network, and Disney Channel cartoons (up to and including a dimension filled with [[WesternAnimation/BigCityGreens Cricket Green]] clones), cartoons, the creator's own [=OCs=], and many others.characters from ''VideoGame/{{Minecraft}}'' (including ''VideoGame/MinecraftStoryMode''), ''VideoGame/BloonsTowerDefense'', ''VideoGame/BeeSwarmSimulator'', ''VideoGame/KingdomOfLoathing'', ''VideoGame/{{Deltarune}}'', and ''VideoGame/PaperMario'' being summoned to help defeat [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]].
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* MyNameIsQuestionMarks: Before [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]'s real name is revealed, he is simply called ???.
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* MyNameIsQuestionMarks: Before [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]'s real name is revealed, he is simply instead called ???.???.
* OnlyKnownByInitials: Mechanic Cricket Green is referred to as "MCG" in most of the story.
* OnlyKnownByInitials: Mechanic Cricket Green is referred to as "MCG" in most of the story.
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* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]] is clearly a parody of [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Bill Cipher]].
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* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]] is clearly visibly intended to be a parody of [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Bill Cipher]].Cipher]], with his last name being a synonym of Bill's last name and being described as a square with one eye and a top hat.
-->'''Left Hand:''' Seriously?! We came all this way and the final boss is a BILL CIPHER RIPOFF?!
-->'''Left Hand:''' Seriously?! We came all this way and the final boss is a BILL CIPHER RIPOFF?!
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* DisneyDeath: [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=517293#p517293 Parodied]] in Chapter 7 of the first part. Orion mauls Left Hand to near-death, but when it seems like they're going to give some dramatic last words, it turns out they're completely fine.
-->'''Pepperony:''' Left Hand must of had a lot of acting lessons.
-->'''Pepperony:''' Left Hand must of had a lot of acting lessons.
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* DisneyDeath: [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=517293#p517293 Parodied]] in Chapter 7 of the first part. Orion mauls Left Hand to near-death, near death, but when it seems like they're going to give some dramatic last words, it turns out they're completely fine.
-->'''Pepperony:''' Left Hand mustof have had a lot of acting lessons.
-->'''Pepperony:''' Left Hand must
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* ArcVillain: For the first part, it's [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]], who seeks to take over all of existence. For the second, it's [[spoiler:Black Hole Hand, who John Cryptograph works for, and has the same goals as John.]]
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* BigBad: For the first part, it's [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]], who seeks to take over all of existence. For the second, it's [[spoiler:Black Hole Hand, who John Cryptograph [[GreaterScopeVillain works for]], and has the same goals as John.]]
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* AmbiguousGender: Pepperony is never referred to with any pronouns in the first part. [[spoiler:Subverted when the timeskip at the end of the first part reveals they are non-binary, and use they/them pronouns.]]
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* BigBad: For the first part, it's [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]. For the second, it's [[spoiler:Black Hole Hand.]]
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* BigBad: For the first part, it's [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]. Cryptograph]], who seeks to take over all of existence. For the second, it's [[spoiler:Black Hole Hand.Hand, who John Cryptograph [[GreaterScopeVillain works for]], and has the same goals as John.]]
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** Umbramancer Cricket Green also has this ability, and can even create weapons and force fields out of shadow.
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** Umbramancer Cricket Green also has this ability, and can even also create weapons and force fields out of shadow.
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* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: It becomes this near the end of the first part, with characters from Nickelodeon, PBS Kids, Cartoon Network, and Disney Channel cartoons (up to and including an entire dimension filled with [[WesternAnimation/BigCityGreens Cricket Green]] clones), the creator's own [=OCs=], and many others.
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* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: It becomes this near the end of the first part, with characters from Nickelodeon, PBS Kids, Cartoon Network, and Disney Channel cartoons (up to and including an entire a dimension filled with [[WesternAnimation/BigCityGreens Cricket Green]] clones), the creator's own [=OCs=], and many others.
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* AbsurdlySpaciousSewer: The Interdimensional Sewage System is an infinite sewage system that transports sewage from every dimension in existence to...nowhere in particular. It has lighting, and the air is breathable (despite the sewage being toxic to most lifeforms).
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* AbsurdlySpaciousSewer: The Interdimensional Sewage System is an infinite sewage system that transports sewage from every dimension in existence to...nowhere in particular. It has lighting, The characters are able to see clearly, and the air is breathable (despite the sewage being toxic to most lifeforms).breathable.
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* ShoutOut: The title of Chapter 7 (Sewer, Sewer, Cha Cha Cha) is a reference to the ''WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants'' episode "[[Recap/SpongeBobSquarePantsS9E16PatrickTheGameTheSewersOfBikiniBottom The Sewers of Bikini Bottom]]".
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* {{Bookends}}: The story both begins and ends with the phrase "Jerald has joined the server"; in the first part, Jerald joins the Nonsensical RP dimension [[spoiler:after being banished there by Grape Guy]], while in the second, [[spoiler:he uses his new robot body to teleport to an MMORPG for him to finally call home]].
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The first part (completed) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=5563&p=1 here]], and the second part (ongoing) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=6043 here]].
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The first part (completed) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=5563&p=1 here]], and the second part (ongoing) (canceled due to various reasons, but an epilogue has been provided to tie up loose ends) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=6043 here]].
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* MultiversalConqueror: [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]] and [[spoiler:Black Hole Hand]] both seek to conquer all of existence.
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* MyNameIsQuestionMarks: Before [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]'s real name is revealed, he is simply called ???.
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* BigNo: In chapter 11, after getting captured by the experiment, Right Hand, Left Hand, Grape Guy, and Golfer Man are taken to [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]'s lab, to which he says he plans to brainwash them. Right Hand refuses, to which this exchange occurs:
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* BigNo: In chapter 11, 11 of the first part, after getting captured by the experiment, Right Hand, Left Hand, Grape Guy, and Golfer Man are taken to [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]'s lab, to which he says he plans to brainwash them. Right Hand refuses, to which this exchange occurs:
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* DisneyDeath: [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=517293#p517293 Parodied]] in Chapter 7. Orion mauls Left Hand to near-death, but when it seems like they're going to give some dramatic last words, it turns out they're completely fine.
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* DisneyDeath: [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=517293#p517293 Parodied]] in Chapter 7.7 of the first part. Orion mauls Left Hand to near-death, but when it seems like they're going to give some dramatic last words, it turns out they're completely fine.
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* TheBeastmaster: Snakemaster Bea has the ability to control giant snakes, which she uses to capture people and send them to their boss.
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* TheBeastmaster: Snakemaster Bea has the ability to control giant snakes, which she uses to capture people and send them to their boss.boss, [[spoiler:Black Hole Hand]].
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* BigNo: In chapter 11, after getting captured by the experiment, Right Hand, Left Hand, Grape Guy, and Golfer Man are taken to [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]'s lab, to which he says he plans to brainwash them. Right Hand refuses, to which this exchange occurs:
-->'''[[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]:''' Well, if you say so. [=GenericEvilBadGuy=], carry them to the prison cells.
-->'''[=GenericEvilBadGuy=]:''' Will do.
-->'''Right Hand:''' No! No! NO!
-->'''[[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]:''' Well, if you say so. [=GenericEvilBadGuy=], carry them to the prison cells.
-->'''[=GenericEvilBadGuy=]:''' Will do.
-->'''Right Hand:''' No! No! NO!
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* TheBeastmaster: Snakemaster Bea has the ability to control giant snakes, which she uses to capture people and send them to their boss.
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* AuthorAvatar: Kind of. Right Hand and Left Hand are meant to represent the creator (Right Hand being their logical side, and Left Hand being their creative side), but the creator themselves is implied to actually exist. However, the characters cannot get to them.
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* DisneyDeath: [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=517293#p517293 Parodied]] in Chapter 7. Orion mauls Left Hand to near-death, but when it seems like they're going to give some dramatic last words, it turns out they're completely fine.
-->'''Pepperony:''' Left Hand must of had a lot of acting lessons.
-->'''Pepperony:''' Left Hand must of had a lot of acting lessons.
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** Storm has the ability to manipulate shadow (along with being able to create a stronger variant of the [[VideoGame/{{Minecraft}} Wither]] effect).
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* CastingAShadow: Storm has the ability to manipulate shadow (along with being able to create a stronger variant of the [[VideoGame/{{Minecraft}} Wither]] effect).
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** Storm has the ability to manipulate shadow (along with being able to create a stronger variant of the [[VideoGame/{{Minecraft}} Wither]] effect).
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* AbsurdlySpaciousSewer: The Interdimensional Sewage System is an infinite sewage system that transports sewage from every dimension in existence to...nowhere in particular. It has lighting, and the air is breathable (despite the sewage being toxic to most lifeforms).
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* CastingAShadow: Storm has the ability to manipulate shadow (along with being able to create a stronger variant of the [[VideoGame/{{Minecraft}} Wither]] effect).
** Umbramancer Cricket Green also has this ability, and can even create weapons and force fields out of shadow.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Right Hand is the calm and logical blue to Left Hand's silly and cheerful red.
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The Nonsensical RP is a roleplay on the Text Based Games Forums made by cheesyfriedeggs.
It starts out as an RPG with a diverse cast of characters, and multiple chaotic events. However, when two of those characters, Jerald, and Byron, somehow find a way to teleport to a pit with people from multiple dimensions, a plot starts to unfold as our main antagonist soon shows himself...
The first part (completed) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=5563&p=1 here]], and the second part (ongoing) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=6043 here]].
!!The Nonsensical RP contains examples of:
* AmbiguousGender: Pepperony is never referred to with any pronouns in the first part. [[spoiler:Subverted when the timeskip at the end of the first part reveals they are non-binary, and use they/them pronouns.]]
* AnimateBodyParts: Right Hand and Left Hand are two giant sentient hands that represent parts of the creator's personality.
* AnthropomorphicFood: Grape Guy is a giant slug made out of grape juice.
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:In the timeskip at the end of the first part, Starstick and Dicestick have decided to walk through dimensions helping people to atone for their crimes.]]
* BigBad: For the first part, it's [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]. For the second, it's [[spoiler:Black Hole Hand.]]
* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]] is clearly a parody of [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Bill Cipher]].
* CardCarryingVillain: [=GenericEvilBadGuy=] is constantly boasting about being a generic villain, even up to his very name.
* DimensionalTraveler:
** Right Hand and Left Hand have two dimension-traveling guns which they use to travel across dimensions.
** [[spoiler:Starstick and Dicestick are shown to be this in the timeskip at the end of the first part, and are using it to help people after leaving John Cryptograph's forces.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Near the end of the first part, Starstick and Dicestick realize that helping John Cryptograph is wrong, and join the heroes in defeating him.]]
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: It becomes this near the end of the first part, with characters from Nickelodeon, PBS Kids, Cartoon Network, and Disney Channel cartoons (up to and including an entire dimension filled with [[WesternAnimation/BigCityGreens Cricket Green]] clones), the creator's own [=OCs=], and many others.
* TimeSkip: The Nonsensical RP: Legacy takes place five years after the original Nonsensical RP ended.
It starts out as an RPG with a diverse cast of characters, and multiple chaotic events. However, when two of those characters, Jerald, and Byron, somehow find a way to teleport to a pit with people from multiple dimensions, a plot starts to unfold as our main antagonist soon shows himself...
The first part (completed) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=5563&p=1 here]], and the second part (ongoing) can be read [[https://tbgforums.com/forums/viewtopic.php?id=6043 here]].
!!The Nonsensical RP contains examples of:
* AmbiguousGender: Pepperony is never referred to with any pronouns in the first part. [[spoiler:Subverted when the timeskip at the end of the first part reveals they are non-binary, and use they/them pronouns.]]
* AnimateBodyParts: Right Hand and Left Hand are two giant sentient hands that represent parts of the creator's personality.
* AnthropomorphicFood: Grape Guy is a giant slug made out of grape juice.
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:In the timeskip at the end of the first part, Starstick and Dicestick have decided to walk through dimensions helping people to atone for their crimes.]]
* BigBad: For the first part, it's [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]]. For the second, it's [[spoiler:Black Hole Hand.]]
* CaptainErsatz: [[spoiler:John Cryptograph]] is clearly a parody of [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Bill Cipher]].
* CardCarryingVillain: [=GenericEvilBadGuy=] is constantly boasting about being a generic villain, even up to his very name.
* DimensionalTraveler:
** Right Hand and Left Hand have two dimension-traveling guns which they use to travel across dimensions.
** [[spoiler:Starstick and Dicestick are shown to be this in the timeskip at the end of the first part, and are using it to help people after leaving John Cryptograph's forces.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Near the end of the first part, Starstick and Dicestick realize that helping John Cryptograph is wrong, and join the heroes in defeating him.]]
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: It becomes this near the end of the first part, with characters from Nickelodeon, PBS Kids, Cartoon Network, and Disney Channel cartoons (up to and including an entire dimension filled with [[WesternAnimation/BigCityGreens Cricket Green]] clones), the creator's own [=OCs=], and many others.
* TimeSkip: The Nonsensical RP: Legacy takes place five years after the original Nonsensical RP ended.
