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* [[CustomUniform Custom Armor:] James parades around in his old Cerberus Ajax Armor, despite cutting ties with the organization even before they dissolved ''thirty years ago.'' No one seems to care, as most people simply chalk it up to it being a collector's item. They're not far off.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Neo-Cerberus is gray, Hades' Dogs are black.
* BloodBrothers: Rolfe's one and only true friend is Rakil, who would sail through hell itself for the man.
** James, Kyri and Varian, though Kyri is female. Though they bicker 24/7, each would put their life on the line for the others.
* BloodBrothers: Rolfe's one and only true friend is Rakil, who would sail through hell itself for the man.
** James, Kyri and Varian, though Kyri is female. Though they bicker 24/7, each would put their life on the line for the others.
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* BreakThemByTalking: Kyri teeters on this when she [[spoiler: calls Rolfe out harshly.]]
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* BreakThemByTalking: [[BreakThemByTalking Break Him By Talking]]: Kyri teeters on this when she [[spoiler: calls Rolfe out harshly.]]
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** Doc too, since even Neo-Cerberus' ''Eagle Squad'' is willing to explicitly work with the Alliance.
* TheChick: Kyri, Cerri, and Kiara are the only female characters aboard the Ragtag. And remember, Cerri and Kiara are Asari, an all-female race.
* TheChick: Kyri, Cerri, and Kiara are the only female characters aboard the Ragtag. And remember, Cerri and Kiara are Asari, an all-female race.
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* CustomUniform: James parades around in his old Cerberus Ajax Armor, despite cutting ties with the organization even before they dissolved ''thirty years ago.'' No one seems to care, as most people simply chalk it up to it being a collector's item. They're not far off.
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* CustomUniform: [[CustomUniform Custom Armor:] James parades around in his old Cerberus Ajax Armor, despite cutting ties with the organization even before they dissolved ''thirty years ago.'' No one seems to care, as most people simply chalk it up to it being a collector's item. They're not far off.
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* ForTheEvulz: When you really boil it down, Teronus simply has a lust for power.
** Hades' Dogs claim to be protecting Humanity from the "evil Xeno threat". Uh-huh.
** Hades' Dogs claim to be protecting Humanity from the "evil Xeno threat". Uh-huh.
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* ForTheEvulz: When you really boil it down, Teronus simply has a lust for power.
**Hades' Dogs claim to be protecting Humanity from the "evil Xeno threat". Uh-huh.
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* HatesSmallTalk: Ethan.
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*GrayAndGrayMorality: The protagonists include a Cerberus reboot, freelancing mercenaries, a drug dealer, a morally dubious scientist, a homocidal Krogan and ambitious politicians. The antagonizing army is full of desperate civilians. The war is definitely gray versus darker gray.
* HatesSmallTalk:Ethan.Ethan and Cerema.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Doc once ran through enemy fire to aid a wounded soldier.
** [[spoiler: Assad nearly martyrs himself simply to help rescue Doc's men. Eagle-One puts a stop to it]]
** [[spoiler: Assad nearly martyrs himself simply to help rescue Doc's men. Eagle-One puts a stop to it]]
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* ItsASmallWorldAfterAll: Kyri says this of the galaxy when bumping into Grore again.
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* TheLeader: Captain Assad, Doc and Eagle-One are the triumvirate for the Virmire group.
** For the DarkerAndEdgier version, Rolfe.
** For the DarkerAndEdgier version, Rolfe.
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* TheLeader: Captain Assad, Doc and Eagle-One are were the triumvirate for the Virmire group.
** For the DarkerAndEdgier version, Rolfe. [[spoiler: Though he doesn't exactly garner much respect.]]
** For the DarkerAndEdgier version, Rolfe. [[spoiler: Though he doesn't exactly garner much respect.]]
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* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: James and Kyri. [[spoiler: It's kinda cute, actually.]]
* LostColony: Virmire has been absorbed into Teronus' empire.
* LostColony: Virmire has been absorbed into Teronus' empire.
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* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: James and Kyri. [[spoiler: It's kinda cute, actually.]]
Kyri.
* LostColony: Virmire has been absorbed into Teronus' empire. The Alliance has to save it. [[spoiler: It ain't going so well.]]
* LostColony: Virmire has been absorbed into Teronus' empire. The Alliance has to save it. [[spoiler: It ain't going so well.]]
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** Doc.
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** Hades' Dogs as well, but they're assholes and we all know it.
** Kyri once slept with a Krogan after a lost bet. I don't think we ''want'' to know.
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** Let's see, we have a snarky, Ex-Cerberus HumanPopsicle, a Turian OldSoldier who's done mercenary work in every corner of the galaxy, an alcoholic, Quarian adrenaline junkie, a GentleGiant in Toreg, a {{Jerkass}} in Garz, a Geth RobotBuddy in Trojan, Rakil the Batarian and TheQuietOne, and TheComicallySerious Cerri, all headed by TheCaptain who doesn't realize that DrugsAreBad. [[spoiler: Actually he does, in fact he ''enjoys'' the thought of them eventually crippling his costumers.]]
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** Let's see, we have a snarky, Ex-Cerberus HumanPopsicle, a Turian OldSoldier who's done mercenary work in every corner of the galaxy, [[spoiler: his long lost daughter turned Specter,]] an alcoholic, Quarian adrenaline junkie, a GentleGiant in Toreg, a {{Jerkass}} in Garz, a Geth RobotBuddy in Trojan, Rakil the Batarian and TheQuietOne, and TheComicallySerious Cerri, all headed by TheCaptain who doesn't realize that DrugsAreBad. [[spoiler: Actually Actually, he does, does; in fact he ''enjoys'' the thought of them eventually crippling his costumers.]]
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** Arguably Cerri too.
* IOweYouMyLife: The reason Kyri follows Varian.
* IOweYouMyLife: The reason Kyri follows Varian.
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** James could fall into this trope too, considering his prime motivation for joining Rolfe [[spoiler:despite his total digust with the man]] is it gives him the best chance to combat Teronus, who is [[spoiler: mostly aiming for Human worlds.]]
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** James could fall into this trope too, considering his prime motivation for joining Rolfe [[spoiler:despite his total digust with the man]] is it gives him the best chance to combat Teronus, who is [[spoiler: mostly aiming for Human worlds.colonies.]]
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* PsychoForHire: Hoyt.
* PunchClockVillain: You begin to feel Byrin, Teronus' right hand man, is this.
* PunchClockVillain: You begin to feel Byrin, Teronus' right hand man, is this.
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** Teronus' personal AI, I.D.S., too.
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** The new addition of the Serenity, Ethan.
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** The new addition of the Serenity, Can't forget Ethan.
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** The squadrons of Hades' Dogs, [[spoiler: who all get killed in the mines,]] could count as a RedShirtArmy
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* RememberTheAlamo: Everyone over the age of 45 or so (including James, aged 31, being frozen and all that) has a history with the Reaper War.
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*WhamEpisode: [[spoiler: The debacle on Parnack. Rolfe's deception is brought to light, James almost dies and the true extent of Teronus' power is unveiled. And it's just the beginning... Kyri even {{Lampshades}} this to James by saying "we're going to see worse".]]
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: For the most part, the citizens of the Terminus Empire support Teronus' ambitions.
* AbstractApotheosis: [[spoiler: Teronus is greed.]]
* ActionFilmQuietDramaScene: Mainly focusing on Teronus and his evil plans.
** Athena, minus the evil part. Mostly.
** The Council Game in its entirety.
* AdrenalineMakeover: Kyri now finds herself soaked in sweat and grease 24/7 after joining the Ragtag.
* AbstractApotheosis: [[spoiler: Teronus is greed.]]
* ActionFilmQuietDramaScene: Mainly focusing on Teronus and his evil plans.
** Athena, minus the evil part. Mostly.
** The Council Game in its entirety.
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: For the most part, the citizens of the Terminus Empire support Teronus' ambitions.
ambitions.
*AbstractApotheosis: [[spoiler: Teronus is greed.]]
* ActionFilmQuietDramaScene: Mainly focusing on Teronus and his evil plans.
** Athena, minus[[ActionFilmQuietDramaScene Action Roleplay Quiet Drama Scene:]] Despite being the evil part. Mostly.
BigBad, most of Teronus' scenes involve little action. The same could be said for Athena.
** The Council Game in itsentirety.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Kyrinow finds herself soaked in sweat and used to be a [[NiceJewishBoy Nice Quarian Girl.]] Didn't take long to turn her into a grease 24/7 after joining the Ragtag.monkey.
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* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Strangely played straight with Kyri, a Quarian; She tends to remove her facemask around James when on the Ragtag, to earn the former Cerberus operative's trust. Possibly due to the fact quarians look the most similar to Humans out of all the alien races.
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* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Strangely played straight with Kyri, a Quarian; She tends to remove her facemask around James when on the Ragtag, to earn the former Cerberus operative's trust. Possibly due to the fact quarians that Quarians look the most similar to Humans out of all the alien races.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Subverted with Teronus. He's a complete, unrepentant douchebag.
* TheAlcoholic: Kyri. It's been stated in the OOC thread that she can drink more than ''Varian''.
* TheAlcoholic: Kyri. It's been stated in the OOC thread that she can drink more than ''Varian''.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Subverted Both invoked and subverted with Teronus. He's a complete, unrepentant douchebag.He truly is greedy and lusts for power, yet he did what he did because the Council was sitting on their hands while the Terminus withered.
* TheAlcoholic: Kyri. It's been stated in the OOC thread that she candrink drink, pound for pound, more than ''Varian''. ''Garz''.
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: The Terminus Empire in a nutshell, with its rampage across a good chunk of the galaxy.
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* AntiHero: There are far more of these than there are of TheParagon.
* AnythingThatMoves: Obviously Garz, though this also applies to Rolfe, and to a lesser extent Varian.
* AppliedPhlebotinum: Doc uses medical nanites to treat severe wounds, and most characters posses medi-gel which nearly instantaneously heals minor wounds.
* AnythingThatMoves: Obviously Garz, though this also applies to Rolfe, and to a lesser extent Varian.
* AppliedPhlebotinum: Doc uses medical nanites to treat severe wounds, and most characters posses medi-gel which nearly instantaneously heals minor wounds.
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* AntiHero: There are far more of these than there are of TheParagon.
Practically everyone falls under this anymore.
* AnythingThatMoves:Obviously Garz, though this also applies to Rolfe, and to a lesser extent Varian.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Kyri has ADH- Hey look, machinery!
* AvengingTheVillain: Hades' Dogs are a spin-off of Cerberus; their much more antagonistic side, compared to Neo-Cerberus.
* AwakeningTheSleepingGiant: The Terminus Empire outnumbers the ''Systems Alliance and Turian Hierarchy combined!'' That's what happens when you let billions of souls fend for themselves after the Reaper War...
* AvengingTheVillain: Hades' Dogs are a spin-off of Cerberus; their much more antagonistic side, compared to Neo-Cerberus.
* AwakeningTheSleepingGiant: The Terminus Empire outnumbers the ''Systems Alliance and Turian Hierarchy combined!'' That's what happens when you let billions of souls fend for themselves after the Reaper War...
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Kyri has ADH- Hey look, unrepaired machinery!
* AvengingTheVillain: Hades' Dogs are a spin-off of Cerberus; their much more antagonistic side, compared to Neo-Cerberus.
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* BenevolentBoss: Doc commonly asks the officers under him for their opinions on battle plans, and always listens to what they have to say.
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* BigGood: Arguably, Doc.
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* BigGood:Arguably, Doc.Arguably Athena. VERY arguable.
* BigGood:
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*HeterosexualLifePartners: Rolfe and Rakil come off as this.
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*[[LikeASonToMe Like A Daughter To Me:]] After taking Kyri under his wing, Varian views her as this. [[spoiler: Things get... complicated when his real daughter Cerema, whom he left as a child, shows up.]]
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** '''James:''' ''"The hell? It's... open? Geez, why not stick a giant sign that says 'I'm a trap' on it too?"''
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** '''James:''' ''"The hell? It's... open? Geez, why not stick a giant sign that says 'I'm a trap' on it too?"''
** '''James:''' ''"The hell? It's... open? Geez, why not stick a giant sign that says 'I'm a trap' on it too?"''
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*BreakTheCutie: Kiara's fluffy demeanor doesn't last long ''at all.''
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*WithUsOrAgainstUs: Very much Teronus' mentality. The merc leader sees anyone either as a "defender of the old ways" or a supporter of his; no in betweens.
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*IceQueen: Cerema; definitely not a DaddysGirl. [[spoiler: Also counts as a BrokenBird. Literally.]]
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** Kyri is extremely protective of all of her friends, especially James. [[spoiler: She has a crush on James.]]
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: The qualms between the player characters are always overshadowed by the threat of Teronus, and to a lesser extent Hades' Dogs.
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: The qualms between the player characters are always overshadowed by the threat of Teronus, and to a lesser extent Hades' Dogs.Teronus.
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Started by a user named ''Confederated Southern States'' on the NationStates' ''Portal to the Multiverse'' forum, in late August 2013. Set thirty years after the ''Destroy'' ending of ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'', the galaxy is still trying to get on its feet. [[http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=258603 Check it out here.]]
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Started by a user named ''Confederated Southern States'' on the NationStates' ''Portal to the Multiverse'' forum, in late August 2013. Set thirty years after the ''Destroy'' ending of ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'', the galaxy is still trying to get on its feet. [[http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=258603 php?f=31&t=260750 Check it out here.]]
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* GodIsDead: James plays the BlackSabbath song after surrendering himself to fate.
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* GodIsDead: James plays the BlackSabbath Music/BlackSabbath song after surrendering himself to fate.
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* TheChick: Kyri, Cerri and Kiara are the only female characters aboard the Ragtag. And remember, Cerri and Kiara are Asari, an all-female race.
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* TheChick: Kyri, Cerri Cerri, and Kiara are the only female characters aboard the Ragtag. And remember, Cerri and Kiara are Asari, an all-female race.
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* BigEgoHiddenDepths: [[Spoiler: Varian]]
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* IAmWhoIAm: About everyone on the Ragtag feels this way.
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* IAmWhoIAm: IAmWhatIAm: About everyone on the Ragtag feels this way.
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* JerkassWoobie: Rolfe, despite his many flaws, gets handed shit on a silver platter constantly.
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*AbstractApotheosis: [[spoiler: Teronus is greed.]]
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*BloodBrothers: Rolfe's one and only true friend is Rakil, who would sail through hell itself for the man.
** James, Kyri and Varian, though Kyri is female. Though they bicker 24/7, each would put their life on the line for the others.
** James, Kyri and Varian, though Kyri is female. Though they bicker 24/7, each would put their life on the line for the others.
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*HatesSmallTalk: Ethan.
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*IWantYouToMeetAnOldFriendOfMine: Varian has so many damn friends all over the place.
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*JerkassWoobie: Rolfe, despite his many flaws, gets handed shit on a silver platter constantly.
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*NervousWreck: Kiara becomes this after the mission on Parnack.
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*OppositesAttract: [[spoiler: James and Kyri.]]
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*TheQuietOne: For the most part, Toreg.
** The new addition of the Serenity, Ethan.
** The new addition of the Serenity, Ethan.
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*ShorterMeansSmarter: Kyri, at a measly 5'3", has perhaps the highest IQ on the Ragtag. Not saying much, but still.
*SmokingIsCool: Varian and Grant smoke cigars constantly, without any detrimental effects. Then again, it's the year 2216, so...
*SmokingIsCool: Varian and Grant smoke cigars constantly, without any detrimental effects. Then again, it's the year 2216, so...
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*AwakeningTheSleepingGiant: The Terminus Empire outnumbers the ''Systems Alliance and Turian Hierarchy combined!'' That's what happens when you let billions of souls fend for themselves after the Reaper War...
**WorldWarTwo anyone?
**WorldWarTwo anyone?
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* AwakeningTheSleepingGiant: The Terminus Empire is the formation of all the starving, deprived citizens of the Terminus Systems/Attican Traverse wearing Blue Suns/Eclipse armor. They're mad, and a madman is spearheading it all...
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*ShellShockedSenior: Leonidas Grant makes Varian seem young.
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** [[Spoiler: '''Kyri:''' "Uh oh, trouble's brewing. Well I'll be back guys, try not to kill yourselves."]] Think about it...
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** [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: '''Kyri:''' "Uh oh, trouble's brewing. Well I'll be back guys, try not to kill yourselves."]] Think about it...
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: The Terminus Empire in a nutshell, with its rampage across a good chunk of the galaxy.
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** "Riot" by ThreeDaysGrace. Interesting lyrics...
** [[Spoiler: '''Kyri:''' "Uh oh, trouble's brewing. Well I'll be back guys, try not to kill yourselves."]] Think about it...
** "Riot" by ThreeDaysGrace. Interesting lyrics...
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*PointOfNoReturn: When Rolfe [[spoiler: signs the Ragtag up with Neo-Cerberus, that's it; No going back for them.]]
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*BreakThemByTalking: Kyri teeters on this when she [[spoiler: calls Rolfe out harshly.]]
** Played straight when [[spoiler: Doc dies saving his men. Many tears.]]
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** Forum Co-OP ''Old Vester.'' I know you're reading this, Vester.
** Especially ''Communist Androids''. Seriously.
** Especially ''Communist Androids''. Seriously.
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** Forum Co-OP ''Old Vester.'' I know you're reading this, Vester.
** Especially''Communist Androids''. Seriously.Seriously.
*JustAMachine: Thoroughly averted. Trojan, a Geth, seems to have some of the strongest emotions on the Ragtag.
** ItIsDehumanizing: Also averted. Everyone refers to Trojan as an 'it', yet Trojan doesn't mind (considering he has no gender).
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*JustAMachine: Thoroughly averted. Trojan, a Geth, seems to have some of the strongest emotions on the Ragtag.
** ItIsDehumanizing: Also averted. Everyone refers to Trojan as an 'it', yet Trojan doesn't mind (considering he has no gender).
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*MetaphoricallyTrue: Rolfe loves this trope.
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*HundredPercentAdorationRating: For the most part, the citizens of the Terminus Empire support Teronus' ambitions.
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*HeroicSacrifice: Subverted: [[spoiler: Eagle-One ''forces'' Assad to stay alive by knocking him out.]]
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** [[spoiler: Assad nearly martyrs himself simply to help rescue Doc's men. Eagle-One puts a stop to it]]
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