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** Garz is a Krogan, so he just goes batshit crazy during most fights because that's what they do.
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** Especially ''Communist Androids'' too.Androids''. Seriously.
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** '''Kyri:''' Maybe I should stop drinking so much... nah.
** '''Kyri:''' Maybe I should stop drinking so much... nah.
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* ItsASmallWorldAfterAll: Kyri says this of the galaxy when bumping into Grore again.
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* AffectionateNickname: Lemon.
** Also doubles as EmbarrassingNickname. James hates it. [[spoiler: Or at least he says he does.]]
** Also doubles as EmbarrassingNickname. James hates it. [[spoiler: Or at least he says he does.]]
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**Lemon. Also doubles as EmbarrassingNickname. James hates it. [[spoiler: Or at least he says he does.]]
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Averted: Artificial Intelligences, namely the Geth, have become more accepted in the galactic community since the end of ''VideoGame/MassEffect3''.
** Played straight when you consider the Council still curtails the developments of AIs, just to a lesser extent than before.
** Played straight when you consider the Council still curtails the developments of AIs, just to a lesser extent than before.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Averted: Artificial Intelligences, namely the Geth, have become more accepted in the galactic community since the end of ''VideoGame/MassEffect3''.
**''VideoGame/MassEffect3''. Played straight when you consider the Council still curtails the developments of AIs, just to a lesser extent than before.
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* TheChick: Kyri, Cerri and Kiara are the only female characters aboard the Ragtag.
** And remember, Cerri and Kiara are Asari, an all-female race.
** And remember, Cerri and Kiara are Asari, an all-female race.
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**Ragtag. And remember, Cerri and Kiara are Asari, an all-female race.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The thug that insults James at the beginning gets gunned down.
** Then again, they likely had plans to murder him, so...
** Then again, they likely had plans to murder him, so...
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The thug that insults James at the beginning gets gunned down.
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*** Think that's bad? Half of Varian's face was torn off by [[spoiler: a ''raging moose!'']] It's been artificially repaired, but it's still noticeable.
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** Let's see, we have a snarky, Ex-Cerberus HumanPopsicle, a Turian OldSoldier who's done mercenary work in every corner of the galaxy, an alcoholic, Quarian adrenaline junkie, a GentleGiant in Toreg, a {{Jerkass}} in Garz, a Geth RobotBuddy in Trojan, Rakil the Batarian and TheQuietOne, and TheComicallySerious Cerri, all headed by TheCaptain who doesn't realize that DrugsAreBad.
*** [[spoiler: Actually he does, in fact he ''enjoys'' the thought of them eventually crippling his costumers.]]
*** [[spoiler: Actually he does, in fact he ''enjoys'' the thought of them eventually crippling his costumers.]]
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** Let's see, we have a snarky, Ex-Cerberus HumanPopsicle, a Turian OldSoldier who's done mercenary work in every corner of the galaxy, an alcoholic, Quarian adrenaline junkie, a GentleGiant in Toreg, a {{Jerkass}} in Garz, a Geth RobotBuddy in Trojan, Rakil the Batarian and TheQuietOne, and TheComicallySerious Cerri, all headed by TheCaptain who doesn't realize that DrugsAreBad.
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* PrecisionFStrike:
** ''"Keelah se'lai, motherfuckers!"''
** ''"Keelah se'lai, motherfuckers!"''
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* PrecisionFStrike:
**PrecisionFStrike: ''"Keelah se'lai, motherfuckers!"''
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* RedOniBlueOni: Kyri is red, James is blue.
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** Definitely not ColorCodedForYourConvenience; Kyri wears black/green, James wears white/yellow/black.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Kyri is red, James is blue.
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** How could we forget [[spoiler: Blue Suns defector]] Robert?
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** How could we forget [[spoiler: Blue Suns defector]] Robert?Robert.
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** '''Varian:''' It's too bad you (Kyri) got your pretty little face all cut up. Now you're gonna start lookin' like me!
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* SuperDoc: Doc. [[spoiler: Shocking right?]]
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* SuperDoc: Doc. [[spoiler: Shocking right?]]Shocking, right?
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** '''James:''' "How'd you like it if I started calling you "annoying bitch"? ''It fits.'''''
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*CigarChomper: Varian has a smoking habit, which he picked up from those silly Humans.
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*INeedAFreakingDrink: James is so desperate for a drink that he drinks ''ryncol''. Suffice to say, it doesn't end well.
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*InTheHood: Kyri, and every Quarian for that matter.
** James also is seen with his vintage Buffalo Bills hoodie.
*IneffectualDeathThreats: Kyri (jokingly) threatens to kill James in his sleep. He shrugs it off.
** James also is seen with his vintage Buffalo Bills hoodie.
*IneffectualDeathThreats: Kyri (jokingly) threatens to kill James in his sleep. He shrugs it off.
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** ''Communist Androids'' too.
*KnightInSourArmor: James ''is'' this trope. For God's sake, his nickname is "Lemon"!
*KnightInSourArmor: James ''is'' this trope. For God's sake, his nickname is "Lemon"!
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*TheMeanBrit: Varian, though definitely not a {{Jerkass}}.
** Extra funny since Varian is not even Human.
** Extra funny since Varian is not even Human.
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*NoodleIncident: The story never explains why half of Varian's face is artificial other than "a raging moose" tore it off.
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*GodIsDead: James plays the BlackSabbath song after surrendering himself to fate.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The entirety of the fittingly named Kail Ragtag.
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** And remember, Cerri and Kiara are Asari, an all-female race.
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* TheChick: Kyri and Cerri are the only female characters aboard the Ragtag.
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*GenreSavvy: Athena. [[spoiler: She can see that the Ragtag is destined for great things from lightyears away.]]
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* RememberTheAlamo: Everyone over the age of 45 or so (excluding James, being frozen and all that) has a history with the Reaper War.
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* RememberTheAlamo: Everyone over the age of 45 or so (excluding (including James, aged 31, being frozen and all that) has a history with the Reaper War.
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** "I hate you, Lemon."
** "The feeling's mutual."
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** "I '''Kyri:''' I hate you, Lemon."
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**"The '''James:''' The feeling's mutual."
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*MyFriendsAndZoidberg: The Ragtag... and Garz.
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* MythologyGag: James unwittingly copies Tali's "I've got a shotgun" line from ''VideoGame/MassEffect2''.
** Kyri even responds with Garrus' "Maybe we'll talk later" line.
** Kyri even responds with Garrus' "Maybe we'll talk later" line.
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* MythologyGag: James unwittingly copies Tali's "I've got a shotgun" line Tali from ''VideoGame/MassEffect2''.
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* TheXenophile: Rolfe, particularly towards Turians, and Cerri, mainly towards females outside of her own species.
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*YouAreACreditToYourRace: James absolutely ''hates'' Batarians, but he begrudgingly respects Rakil. He'll never admit it though.
*YouAreACreditToYourRace: James absolutely ''hates'' Batarians, but he begrudgingly respects Rakil. He'll never admit it though.
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** '''Varian:''' It's too bad you (Kyri) got your pretty little face all cut up. Now you're gonna start lookin' like me!
** '''Varian:''' It's too bad you (Kyri) got your pretty little face all cut up. Now you're gonna start lookin' like me!
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*TakeThat: James mocks Kyri after she gives the the nickname "Lemon" and says it fits.
** '''James:''' "How'd you like it if I started calling you "annoying bitch"? ''It fits.'''''
** '''James:''' "How'd you like it if I started calling you "annoying bitch"? ''It fits.'''''
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*AntiHero: There are far more of these than there are of TheParagon.
*AnythingThatMoves: Rolfe, and to a lesser extent Varian.
*AnythingThatMoves: Rolfe, and to a lesser extent Varian.
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*TheChick: Kyri and Cerri are the only female characters aboard the Ragtag.
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** A minor example is Eagle-Six, the only female Neo-Cerberus trooper seen thus far.
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*ForTheEvulz: When you really boil it down, Teronus simply has a lust for power.
** Hades' Dogs claim to be protecting Humanity from the "evil Xeno threat". Uh-huh.
** Hades' Dogs claim to be protecting Humanity from the "evil Xeno threat". Uh-huh.
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*RedOniBlueOni: Kyri is red, James is blue.
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** Definitely not ColorCodedForYourConvenience; Kyri wears black/green, James wears white/yellow/black.
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*ShootEverythingThatMoves: Garz.
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* ShipTease: [[Spoiler: ''Confederated Southern States'' is doing a pretty good job with James and Kyri.]]
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* ShipTease: [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: ''Confederated Southern States'' is doing a pretty good job with James and Kyri.]]
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*RememberTheAlamo: Everyone over the age of 45 or so (excluding James, being frozen and all that) has a history with the Reaper War.
*ShipTease: [[Spoiler: ''Confederated Southern States'' is doing a pretty good job with James and Kyri.]]
*SnarkToSnarkCombat: James, Kyri and Varian just never cease their never ending war of snark.
*ShipTease: [[Spoiler: ''Confederated Southern States'' is doing a pretty good job with James and Kyri.]]
*SnarkToSnarkCombat: James, Kyri and Varian just never cease their never ending war of snark.
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** "I hate you, Lemon."
** "The feeling's mutual."
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** "The feeling's mutual."
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** Let's see, we have a snarky, Ex-Cerberus HumanPopsicle, a Turian OldSoldier who's done mercenary work in every corner of the galaxy, an alcoholic, Quarian adrenaline junkie, a GentleGiant in Toreg, a {{Jerkass}} in Garz, a Geth RobotBuddy in Trojan, Rakil the Batarian and TheQuietOne, and TheComicallySerious Cerri, all headed by TheCaptain who doesn't realize that DrugsAreBad.
*** [[spoiler: Actually he does, in fact he ''enjoys'' the thought of them eventually crippling his costumers.]]
** Let's see, we have a snarky, Ex-Cerberus HumanPopsicle, a Turian OldSoldier who's done mercenary work in every corner of the galaxy, an alcoholic, Quarian adrenaline junkie, a GentleGiant in Toreg, a {{Jerkass}} in Garz, a Geth RobotBuddy in Trojan, Rakil the Batarian and TheQuietOne, and TheComicallySerious Cerri, all headed by TheCaptain who doesn't realize that DrugsAreBad.
*** [[spoiler: Actually he does, in fact he ''enjoys'' the thought of them eventually crippling his costumers.]]
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* IllBeInMyBunk: Subverted and {{lampshaded}} by Varian and James. Varian, after a trip to Omega, uses this trope word for word. James then says "the tissues are by the stairs". Varian didn't actually have a DateWithRosiePalms, but it's still funny.
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* IllBeInMyBunk: Subverted and {{lampshaded}} {{Lampshaded}} by Varian and James. Varian, after a trip to Omega, uses this trope word for word. James then says "the tissues are by the stairs". Varian didn't actually have a DateWithRosiePalms, ADateWithRosiePalms, but it's still funny.
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*IllBeInMyBunk: Subverted and {{lampshaded}} by Varian and James. Varian, after a trip to Omega, uses this trope word for word. James then says "the tissues are by the stairs". Varian didn't actually have a DateWithRosiePalms, but it's still funny.
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*TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler: Hades' Dogs cut through mechs (including a YMIR) like they're butter.]] They had the jump, and the main force of [[spoiler: Eclipse soldiers]] retreated, and [[spoiler: the Eclipse soldiers blow them up afterwards,]] so this may ultimately be a subversion.
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*CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Neo-Cerberus systematically ''decimates'' an Eclipse frigate ''full'' of troopers.]] Those were only goons, but still.
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*MoreDeadlyThanTheMale:
** Athena is far more hands on and militaristic than the Illusive Man ever was.
** Kyri, despite being small even by Quarian standards, will ''rip you to shreds'' if angered.
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*SpaceMarine: The Alliance marines. Surprising, I know.
*StayFrosty: Odin-One drops this as [[spoiler: Neo-Cerberus troops raid a Eclipse frigate.]]
*StayFrosty: Odin-One drops this as [[spoiler: Neo-Cerberus troops raid a Eclipse frigate.]]
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*EvilOverlord: Teronus.
*EvilWearsBlack:
** Averted with the Blues Suns/Eclipse/Blood Pack. Blues Suns wear, well, blue, Eclipse wears yellow and Blood Pack wears red.
** Played straight with Hades' Dogs, who wear black and dark gray.
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** Averted with the Blues Suns/Eclipse/Blood Pack. Blues Suns wear, well, blue, Eclipse wears yellow and Blood Pack wears red.
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*FacelessGoons: Averted. Whenever possible, even the lowest Blue Suns mook is given a name.
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*NecessarilyEvil: Neo-Cerberus fashions themselves as this. It's up to the reader to determine if they really are.
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*RebelLeader: Captain Assad, obviously.
*RebelLeader: Captain Assad, obviously.
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*TheStoic: James keeps his emotions under wrap and covers them with sarcasm and snark.
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* SuperDoc: Doc. [[spoiler: Shocking right?]]
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** Played straight when you consider the Council still curtails the developments of AIs, just to a lesser extent than before.before.
*TheAlcoholic: Kyri. It's been stated in the OOC thread that she can drink more than ''Varian''.
*TheAlcoholic: Kyri. It's been stated in the OOC thread that she can drink more than ''Varian''.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Toreg suffers from one which that seems to have severely impeded his mental maturation.
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* AppliedPhelbotinum: Doc uses medical nanites to treat and severe wounds, and most characters posses medi-gel which nearly instantaneously heals minor wounds.
* BenevolentBoss: Doc commonly asks the officers under him for their opinions on battle plans, and always listens to what they have to say.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Doc once ran through enemy fire to aid a wounded soldier.
* HonorBeforeReason: Doc once ran through enemy fire to aid a wounded soldier.
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