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* OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Ellen, a clockwork creature, Lizzie, a powerful necromancer, Jim, a courier from a post-apocalyptic world....and Fuuka, an IllGirl OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent from a school for the handicapped.
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* GaidenGame: Zigzagged. A majority of characters come from established settings (TwilightAcademy, alternate universes to RiseOfTheMagicGirls, what is implied to be [[{{VideoGame/Fallout}} Fallout]] and [[{{VideoGame/Starbound}} Starbound]]), but there is still a significant amount of characters from original settings.
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* GaidenGame: Zigzagged. A majority of characters come from established settings (TwilightAcademy, (Roleplay/TwilightAcademy, alternate universes to RiseOfTheMagicGirls, Roleplay/RiseOfTheMagicGirls, what is implied to be [[{{VideoGame/Fallout}} Fallout]] and [[{{VideoGame/Starbound}} Starbound]]), but there is still a significant amount of characters from original settings.
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* VastBureaucracy: The [[LyricalNanoha Time-Space Administration Bureau]], which governs the main city (working title of Outland City, or TSAB-Administered Metropolis). While largely made up of [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure decent people]] as a whole, they can be conveniently neutralized via [[NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering infighting]] or [[BeleagueredBureaucrat paperwork.]]
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* VastBureaucracy: The [[LyricalNanoha [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Time-Space Administration Bureau]], which governs the main city (working title of Outland City, or TSAB-Administered Metropolis). While largely made up of [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure decent people]] as a whole, they can be conveniently neutralized via [[NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering infighting]] or [[BeleagueredBureaucrat paperwork.]]
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* FreakyFridayFlip: Luke enacts one between himself and Lorenzo to try to help his brother settle into his new job at Club 404. Due to the sheer amount of GenreSavvy present, approximately no one thinks this is a good idea.
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** Risa, None. Dany's entire build consists of running away.
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** Taken UpToEleven when Marie activated 'Warp 404', causing the entire place to have a date with Escher.
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* MegaCity: Time-Space Administration Bureau-Administered Metropolis, or Outland City, or whatever you want to call it.
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* VastBureaucracy: The [[LyricalNanoha Time-Space Administration Bureau]], which governs the main city (working title of Outland City). While largely made up of [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure decent people]] as a whole, they can be conveniently neutralized via [[NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering infighting]] or [[BeleagueredBureaucrat paperwork.]]
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* VastBureaucracy: The [[LyricalNanoha Time-Space Administration Bureau]], which governs the main city (working title of Outland City).City, or TSAB-Administered Metropolis). While largely made up of [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure decent people]] as a whole, they can be conveniently neutralized via [[NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering infighting]] or [[BeleagueredBureaucrat paperwork.]]
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The largely faceless version of the [[{{Franchise/Lyrical Nanoha}} Time-Space Administration Bureau]] that governs the town as a whole, when they're not suffering from NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering disorder or simply [[BeleagueredBureaucrat burying their officials in paperwork]].
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* UniversalPoison: Averted, there are currently four different types of poison each with their own counter and with their own unique effects.
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* UniversalPoison: Averted, there are currently four different types of poison each with their own counter and with their own unique effects.effects.
* VastBureaucracy: The [[LyricalNanoha Time-Space Administration Bureau]], which governs the main city (working title of Outland City). While largely made up of [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure decent people]] as a whole, they can be conveniently neutralized via [[NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering infighting]] or [[BeleagueredBureaucrat paperwork.]]
* VastBureaucracy: The [[LyricalNanoha Time-Space Administration Bureau]], which governs the main city (working title of Outland City). While largely made up of [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure decent people]] as a whole, they can be conveniently neutralized via [[NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering infighting]] or [[BeleagueredBureaucrat paperwork.]]
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** Gaston encourages this as his family's motto.
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Tenses need to be consistent!
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** Risa and None also count.Risa, None. Dany's entire build consists of running away.
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* GenderBender: [[ShapeshiftingSeducer Ori promptly transforms into a male]] as soon as Dany [[SorryImGay informed her he is gay.]]
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* GenderBender: [[ShapeshiftingSeducer Ori promptly transforms transformed into a male]] as soon as Dany [[SorryImGay informed her he is gay.]]
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* SinisterScythe: Elizabeth's Death Scythe.
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* SinisterScythe: Elizabeth's Lizzie's Death Scythe.
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We talked about this. :p
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* GenderBender: Ori promptly transforms into a male as soon as Dany [[SorryImGay informed her he is gay.]]
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* GenderBender: [[ShapeshiftingSeducer Ori promptly transforms into a male male]] as soon as Dany [[SorryImGay informed her he is gay.]]
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* MomentKiller: Miranda barged in to arrest Dany when he and Ori was flirting in Bar 404 just before it went somewhere. Cue Ori turning into a monster to fight Miranda and Dany deciding to flee.
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* MomentKiller: Miranda barged in to arrest Dany when he and Ori was were flirting in Bar 404 just before it went somewhere. Cue Ori turning into a monster to fight Miranda and Dany deciding to flee.
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* GenderBender: Ori promptly transforms into a male as soon as Dany [[SorryImGay informed her he is gay.]]
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** Risa and None also count.
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** Risa and None also count.
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* FreakyFridayFlip: Luke enacts one between himself and Lorenzo to try to help his brother settle into his new job at Club 404. Due to the sheer amount of GenreSavvy present, approximately no one thinks this is a good idea.
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Vehemently averted by Miranda, who tries to drill averting this into Luke as well.
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** The various characters working in Club 404 with Ori gone and Marie busy.
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** Eldon Jaeger and Dany Jaeger have basically nothing in common with each other. Different players, different species, totally different abilities, totally different personalities.
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** Risa, an wandering entertainer from a futuristic world, lacks any abilities and has no Special Attack at all.
** Miranda, despite her SuperStrength, is largely this, particularly considering she comes from TheRoaringTwenties and thus [[RealityEnsues doesn't get so many chances to use her]] CharlesAtlasSuperpower.
** Miranda, despite her SuperStrength, is largely this, particularly considering she comes from TheRoaringTwenties and thus [[RealityEnsues doesn't get so many chances to use her]] CharlesAtlasSuperpower.
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** Risa, an wandering entertainer from a futuristic world, lacks any abilities and has no Special Attack at all.
** Miranda, despite her SuperStrength, is largely this, particularly considering she comes from TheRoaringTwenties and thus [[RealityEnsues doesn't get so many chances to use her]] CharlesAtlasSuperpower.
** Miranda, despite her SuperStrength, is largely this, particularly considering she comes from TheRoaringTwenties and thus [[RealityEnsues doesn't get so many chances to use her]] CharlesAtlasSuperpower.
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* BadassNormal: Jim, a courier from a post apocalyptic world, does not have any abilities and has very low Special Attack.
* ClockworkCreature: Ellen is, to an extent.
* TheCommandments: A meta-example in The Decalogue which is designed to handle lore conflicts.
* TheCommandments: A meta-example in The Decalogue which is designed to handle lore conflicts.
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* BadassNormal: Jim, a courier from a post apocalyptic world, does not have any abilities and has very low Special Attack.
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* ClockworkCreature: Ellen is, to an extent.
* TheCommandments: A meta-example in The Decalogue which is designed to handle lore conflicts.
* TheCommandments: A meta-example in The Decalogue which is designed to handle lore conflicts.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The largely faceless version of the [[{{Franchise/Lyrical Nanoha}} Time-Space Administration Bureau]] that governs the town as a whole, when they're not suffering from NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering disorder or simply [[BeleagueredBureaucrat burying their officials in paperwork]].
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The largely faceless version of the [[{{Franchise/Lyrical Nanoha}} Time-Space Administration Bureau]] that governs the town as a whole, when they're not suffering from NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering disorder or simply [[BeleagueredBureaucrat burying their officials in paperwork]].
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* SwordAndSorcerer: To some strange degree at least. [[{{Necromancer}} Lizzie]] summons two undead minions to attack a lich whilst [[KnightInShiningArmor Graham]] breaks into his house and flanks him.
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decided that they should be named differently, though.
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* CaptainErsatz: Eldon Jaeger was originally supposed to be Eren Jaeger. Yes, that [[{{Manga/AttackOnTitan}} Eren Jaeger]]. Elf
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* CaptainErsatz: Eldon Jaeger was originally supposed to be Eren Jaeger. Yes, that [[{{Manga/AttackOnTitan}} Eren Jaeger]]. Elf decided that they should be named differently, though.
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Minor alphabetical ordering :3
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