Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
* GreatEscape: [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode11 This time]], the prisoners are more successful in escaping.
to:
* GreatEscape: There is [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode11 another break out attempt at Belle Reve]]. This time]], time, the prisoners are more successful in escaping.
Changed line(s) 32 (click to see context) from:
---> '''Thomas''': What you try'an t'do? Ah got [[SuperStrength super strength]].\\
to:
---> '''Thomas''': What you try'an t'do? Ah got [[SuperStrength super strength]].{{super strength}}.\\
Added DiffLines:
** Also, right after Donna says this, the Watchtower receives a distress call about another break out attempt at Belle Reve.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Expand summary
Changed line(s) 3,4 (click to see context) from:
Takes place December 31-January 1
to:
Takes place 31 December 31-January 1
2010-1 January 2011.
!!! Short version
A breakout occurs at Belle Reve Penitentiary; Paul, Superboy, and Troia investigate and stop Kobra from escaping.
!!! Longer version
!!! Short version
A breakout occurs at Belle Reve Penitentiary; Paul, Superboy, and Troia investigate and stop Kobra from escaping.
!!! Longer version
Changed line(s) 9,10 (click to see context) from:
Later that day, Paul is woken by a call from Nylor Truggs, sharing a warning about the future: Earth will soon be invaded by the Reach, with mass deaths and widespread civilisation collapse. Truggs indicates that he's impressed by Paul's success, and since the Light is having less success than he'd like, he's willing to attack the problem from multiple angles. Paul consults the database from his new second ring to learn more.
to:
Later that day, Paul is woken by a call from Nylor Truggs, sharing a warning about the future: Earth will soon be invaded by the Reach, Reach Interstellar Empire, with mass deaths and widespread civilisation collapse. Truggs indicates that he's impressed by Paul's success, and since the Light is having less success than he'd like, he's willing to attack the problem from multiple angles. Paul consults the database from his new second ring to learn more.
Changed line(s) 18 (click to see context) from:
* HeelFaceTurn: Tuppence Beresford has remained hostile despite Paul's efforts, but after learning the truth about Jade's transfer out of Belle Reve, she starts to come around.
to:
* HeelFaceTurn: Tuppence Beresford has remained hostile despite Paul's efforts, but after learning the truth about Jade's transfer out of Belle Reve, she starts to come around. (She previously thought that Jade had been killed.)
Changed line(s) 32 (click to see context) from:
** After OL interrogated him, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17215375/ Harley and the guards took turns questioning him]].
to:
** After OL interrogated him, Dr Strange, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17215375/ Harley and the guards took turns questioning him]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Add a trope
Added DiffLines:
* YouCantThwartStageOne: Turns out to have been averted with Kobra, whose escape was doomed as soon as Klarion became indisposed in the previous episode, but who didn't know it. His climactic showdown was all for naught.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Add a trope
Added DiffLines:
* TruthSerums: Abra Kadabra uses an Atlantean spell to compel Doctor Strange to answer Paul's questions honestly. Keeping silent isn't an option, either; Strange visibly tries and fails to keep his mouth shut, leaving his further answers [[PaintingTheMedium permeated with the yellow light of fear]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Add a trope example
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
* NoSell: Kobra is given water manipulation powers by one of his gods, and attempts to use them on Paul, but nothing happens. Paul guesses it's because his scry-warding tattoos prevent the god from seeing and targeting him.
to:
* NoSell: NoSell:
** Kobra is given water manipulation powers by one of his gods, and attempts to use them on Paul, but nothing happens. Paul guesses it's because his scry-warding tattoos prevent the god from seeing and targetinghim.him.
** A mundane Kobra cultist attempts to grapple with Thomas Beresford, who simply picks her up by her robes with one hand.
---> '''Thomas''': What you try'an t'do? Ah got [[SuperStrength super strength]].\\
'''Paul''': Welcome to my world.
** Kobra is given water manipulation powers by one of his gods, and attempts to use them on Paul, but nothing happens. Paul guesses it's because his scry-warding tattoos prevent the god from seeing and targeting
** A mundane Kobra cultist attempts to grapple with Thomas Beresford, who simply picks her up by her robes with one hand.
---> '''Thomas''': What you try'an t'do? Ah got [[SuperStrength super strength]].\\
'''Paul''': Welcome to my world.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Expand trope application
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* TemptingFate: Donna says that if the mind controlled League members had done anything, they would have heard it by now, right before the emergency call comes in.
to:
* TemptingFate: Donna says that if the mind controlled League members had done anything, they would have heard it by now, right before on the emergency call comes in.news by now. Young Justice season 2 reveals that they were indeed sent on a rampage, it's just that it was on another planet and took years to be traced back to them.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Add a trope
Changed line(s) 7,8 (click to see context) from:
They find the prison magically warded against detection (including power ring scans), the staff overpowered and the prisoners running riot. However, Paul's work pays off; Thomas, Tuppence, and Abra Kadabra all help in restoring order. The instigator turns out to be Jeffrey Burr, aka Kobra, who is plotting an escape and calls on four snake gods to power him up, but is quickly shut down when Paul destroys the magical gate he was using. After his defeat, one of the cultists channels "Lady Eve" and revokes Jeffrey's status as designated Kobra. Doctor Strange is revealed to be in collusion with Kobra, and Waller is soon reinstated as prison warden.
to:
They find the prison magically warded against detection (including power ring scans), the staff overpowered and the prisoners running riot. However, Paul's work pays off; Thomas, Tuppence, and Abra Kadabra all help in restoring order. The instigator turns out to be Jeffrey Burr, aka Kobra, who is plotting an escape and calls on four snake gods to power him up, but is quickly shut down when Paul destroys the magical gate he was using. After his defeat, one of the cultists channels "Lady Eve" and revokes Jeffrey's status as designated Kobra. Doctor Strange is revealed to be in collusion with Kobra, and is arrested; Waller is soon reinstated as prison warden.
Changed line(s) 19,20 (click to see context) from:
* IronicEcho: When Count Vertigo proclaims that he is a noble and the Renegade is a peasant, the Renegade replies that that isn't actually true. Vertigo's title was revoked, and the Renegade is actually the Suzerain of Earth.
--> "No it isn't. Didn't you hear? Your title's been revoked. Cancelled. Made extinct and invalid. And… Not that I'm one for nepotism, but I '''am''' the son of the ruler of the planet Apokolips. My name is Prince Grayven… '''Peasant'''. But you may address me as Your Highness."
--> "No it isn't. Didn't you hear? Your title's been revoked. Cancelled. Made extinct and invalid. And… Not that I'm one for nepotism, but I '''am''' the son of the ruler of the planet Apokolips. My name is Prince Grayven… '''Peasant'''. But you may address me as Your Highness."
to:
* IronicEcho: When Count Vertigo proclaims that he is a noble and the Renegade is a peasant, the Renegade replies that that isn't actually true. Vertigo's title was revoked, and turns the Renegade is actually the Suzerain of Earth.
tables on him.
-->"No '''Vertigo''': That's '''Count''' Vertigo, peasant.\\
'''Renegade''': No it isn't. Didn't you hear? Your title's been revoked. Cancelled. Made extinct and invalid. And… Not that I'm one for nepotism, but I '''am''' the son of the ruler of the planet Apokolips. My name is Prince Grayven… '''Peasant'''. But you may address me as Your Highness."
-->
'''Renegade''': No it isn't. Didn't you hear? Your title's been revoked. Cancelled. Made extinct and invalid. And… Not that I'm one for nepotism, but I '''am''' the son of the ruler of the planet Apokolips. My name is Prince Grayven… '''Peasant'''. But you may address me as Your Highness.
Added DiffLines:
* NoSell: Kobra is given water manipulation powers by one of his gods, and attempts to use them on Paul, but nothing happens. Paul guesses it's because his scry-warding tattoos prevent the god from seeing and targeting him.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* IronicEcho: When Count Vertigo proclaims that he is a noble and the Renegade is a peasant, the Renegade replies that that isn't actually true. Vertigo's title was revoked, and the Renegade is actually the Suzerain of Earth.
--> "No it isn't. Didn't you hear? Your title's been revoked. Cancelled. Made extinct and invalid. And… Not that I'm one for nepotism, but I '''am''' the son of the ruler of the planet Apokolips. My name is Prince Grayven… '''Peasant'''. But you may address me as Your Highness."
--> "No it isn't. Didn't you hear? Your title's been revoked. Cancelled. Made extinct and invalid. And… Not that I'm one for nepotism, but I '''am''' the son of the ruler of the planet Apokolips. My name is Prince Grayven… '''Peasant'''. But you may address me as Your Highness."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AlternateUniverse: One chapter shows Earth -14, where the local version of Paul is a member of the Syndicate and wields a blue power ring.
Added DiffLines:
* LaserGuidedKarma: Dr. Strange helped in the first prison break attempt and, although it ultimately failed, it resulted in him becoming warden. This time, he aids a more successful breakout, but is exposed and at the mercy of the people he betrayed: Waller, the guards, and Dr. Quinzel.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 19 (click to see context) from:
* WordOfGod: Truggs made a [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17207293/ deal with Black Manta]] to help him escape from Belle Reve during New Year's.
to:
* WordOfGod: Mr Zoat [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-17163621 answers a bunch of questions]] about Earth -14.
** Truggs made a [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17207293/ deal with Black Manta]] to help him escape from Belle Reve during New Year's.
** Truggs made a [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17207293/ deal with Black Manta]] to help him escape from Belle Reve during New Year's.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 15,16 (click to see context) :
* AllThereInTheManual: Truggs made a [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17207293/ deal with Black Manta]] to help him escape from Belle Reve during New Year's.
** After OL interrogated him, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17215375/ Harley and the guards took turns questioning him]].
** After OL interrogated him, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17215375/ Harley and the guards took turns questioning him]].
Added DiffLines:
* WordOfGod: Truggs made a [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17207293/ deal with Black Manta]] to help him escape from Belle Reve during New Year's.
** After OL interrogated him, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17215375/ Harley and the guards took turns questioning him]].
** After OL interrogated him, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17215375/ Harley and the guards took turns questioning him]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Add title
!! Episode 27: Gaolbreak
Takes place December 31-January 1
Takes place December 31-January 1
Changed line(s) 3,6 (click to see context) from:
They find the prison magically warded against detection (including power ring scans), the staff overpowered and the prisoners running riot. However, Paul's work pays off; Thomas, Tuppence, and Abra Kadabra all help in restoring order. The instigator turns out to be Jeffrey Burr, aka Kobra, who calls on four snake gods to power him up, but is quickly shut down when Paul destroys the magical gate he was using. After his defeat, one of the cultists channels Lady Eve and revokes Jeffrey's status as designated Kobra. Waller is later reinstated as prison warden.
Later that day, Paul is woken by a call from Nylor Truggs, sharing a warning about the future: Earth will soon be invaded by the Reach, with mass deaths and widespread civilisation collapse. Truggs indicates that he's impressed by Paul's success, and willing to attack the problem from multiple angles. Paul consults the database from his new second ring to learn more.
Later that day, Paul is woken by a call from Nylor Truggs, sharing a warning about the future: Earth will soon be invaded by the Reach, with mass deaths and widespread civilisation collapse. Truggs indicates that he's impressed by Paul's success, and willing to attack the problem from multiple angles. Paul consults the database from his new second ring to learn more.
to:
They find the prison magically warded against detection (including power ring scans), the staff overpowered and the prisoners running riot. However, Paul's work pays off; Thomas, Tuppence, and Abra Kadabra all help in restoring order. The instigator turns out to be Jeffrey Burr, aka Kobra, who is plotting an escape and calls on four snake gods to power him up, but is quickly shut down when Paul destroys the magical gate he was using. After his defeat, one of the cultists channels Lady Eve "Lady Eve" and revokes Jeffrey's status as designated Kobra. Doctor Strange is revealed to be in collusion with Kobra, and Waller is later soon reinstated as prison warden.
Later that day, Paul is woken by a call from Nylor Truggs, sharing a warning about the future: Earth will soon be invaded by the Reach, with mass deaths and widespread civilisation collapse. Truggs indicates that he's impressed by Paul's success, and since the Light is having less success than he'd like, he's willing to attack the problem from multiple angles. Paul consults the database from his new second ring to learn more.
Later that day, Paul is woken by a call from Nylor Truggs, sharing a warning about the future: Earth will soon be invaded by the Reach, with mass deaths and widespread civilisation collapse. Truggs indicates that he's impressed by Paul's success, and since the Light is having less success than he'd like, he's willing to attack the problem from multiple angles. Paul consults the database from his new second ring to learn more.
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
* TemptingFate: Donna says that if the mind controlled League members had done anything, they would have heard it by now right before the emergency call comes in.
to:
* TemptingFate: Donna says that if the mind controlled League members had done anything, they would have heard it by now now, right before the emergency call comes in.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Add a trope
Added DiffLines:
* HeelFaceTurn: Tuppence Beresford has remained hostile despite Paul's efforts, but after learning the truth about Jade's transfer out of Belle Reve, she starts to come around.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Add Renegade timeline and Earth -14
Added DiffLines:
The Renegade doesn't enter the prison, instead working with Barda to chase down some of the escaped prisoners (including Thomas and Tuppence). As a result of his absence, and Klarion being in better condition than in the Paragon timeline, Jeffrey Burr escapes the prison.
There is also a single chapter from Earth -14, showing the Young Offenders at New Year's, after Power Ring Blue kills Emperor Rickard. Zorina Zatara recruits him to free her father from being controlled by Doctor Chaos, to which he agrees in hopes of making the Syndicate less aggressive.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Draft summary
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
Paul and a few others are still in the Watchtower while most of the League and Team have retired for the night. An emergency call from Waller however, alerts the remaining heroes of a jailbreak in Belle Reve. Paul, Kon, and Donna are sent to the prison assess the situation while the others go to round up the escaped prisoners.
to:
Paul and a few others are still in the Watchtower while most of the League and Team have retired for the night. An emergency call from Waller Amanda Waller, however, alerts the remaining heroes of to a jailbreak in Belle Reve. Paul, Kon, and Donna are sent to the prison to assess the situation while the others go to round up the escaped prisoners.prisoners.
They find the prison magically warded against detection (including power ring scans), the staff overpowered and the prisoners running riot. However, Paul's work pays off; Thomas, Tuppence, and Abra Kadabra all help in restoring order. The instigator turns out to be Jeffrey Burr, aka Kobra, who calls on four snake gods to power him up, but is quickly shut down when Paul destroys the magical gate he was using. After his defeat, one of the cultists channels Lady Eve and revokes Jeffrey's status as designated Kobra. Waller is later reinstated as prison warden.
Later that day, Paul is woken by a call from Nylor Truggs, sharing a warning about the future: Earth will soon be invaded by the Reach, with mass deaths and widespread civilisation collapse. Truggs indicates that he's impressed by Paul's success, and willing to attack the problem from multiple angles. Paul consults the database from his new second ring to learn more.
They find the prison magically warded against detection (including power ring scans), the staff overpowered and the prisoners running riot. However, Paul's work pays off; Thomas, Tuppence, and Abra Kadabra all help in restoring order. The instigator turns out to be Jeffrey Burr, aka Kobra, who calls on four snake gods to power him up, but is quickly shut down when Paul destroys the magical gate he was using. After his defeat, one of the cultists channels Lady Eve and revokes Jeffrey's status as designated Kobra. Waller is later reinstated as prison warden.
Later that day, Paul is woken by a call from Nylor Truggs, sharing a warning about the future: Earth will soon be invaded by the Reach, with mass deaths and widespread civilisation collapse. Truggs indicates that he's impressed by Paul's success, and willing to attack the problem from multiple angles. Paul consults the database from his new second ring to learn more.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** After OL interrogated him, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17215375/ Harley and the guards took turns questioning him]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AllThereInTheManual: Truggs made a [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/17207293/ deal with Black Manta]] to help him escape from Belle Reve during New Year's.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
* JailBreak: [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode11 This time]], the prisoners are more successful in escaping.
to:
* JailBreak: EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the prisoners of Belle Reve aren't fond of Klarion. They are noticeably unhappy when they learn Strange was working with him.
* GreatEscape: [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode11 This time]], the prisoners are more successful in escaping.
* GreatEscape: [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode11 This time]], the prisoners are more successful in escaping.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
Paul and a few others are still in the Watchtower while most of the League and Team have retired for the night. An emergency call from Waller however, alerts the remaining heroes of a jailbreak in Belle Reve. Paul, Kon, and Donna are sent to the prison assess the situation while the others go to round up the escaped prisoners.
----
* JailBreak: [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode11 This time]], the prisoners are more successful in escaping.
* TemptingFate: Donna says that if the mind controlled League members had done anything, they would have heard it by now right before the emergency call comes in.
----
----
* JailBreak: [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode11 This time]], the prisoners are more successful in escaping.
* TemptingFate: Donna says that if the mind controlled League members had done anything, they would have heard it by now right before the emergency call comes in.
----
