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* ForWantOfANail: As Wotan wasn't sent to Atlantis in the Renegade timeline, Klarion didn't need to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15797736 find and enhance Dard Druid]] as in the Paragon timeline.
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* PointOfDivergence: As Wotan wasn't sent to Atlantis in the Renegade timeline, Klarion didn't need to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15797736 find and enhance Dard Druid]] as in the Paragon timeline.
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** Mr Zoat gives the current statuses of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15750193 Puzzler, Question, Harley, Roxy Rocket, and Judomaster]].
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** Mr Zoat gives the current statuses of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15750193 Puzzler, Question, Harley, Roxy Rocket, and Judomaster]].
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** Aquaman is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15750073 busy running Alantis]] as a result of Orm's treachery being revealed.
** Mr Zoat gives the current statuses of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15750193 Puzzler, Question, Harley, Roxy Rocket, and Judomaster]].
** Judomaster [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15750356 investigated the Renegade's tentacle ogre sex cult]].
** Mr Zoat gives the current statuses of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15750193 Puzzler, Question, Harley, Roxy Rocket, and Judomaster]].
** Judomaster [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15750356 investigated the Renegade's tentacle ogre sex cult]].
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** The Team [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15856670 doesn't know]] when Paul's birthday is.
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Two omakes show the Justice League debating on who to nominate to become new members.
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--> '''Jade''': You have the weirdest ideas about what I find romantic.\\
'''Renegade''': But you're thinking about it right now, aren't you? A giant pile of burning rubble, sirens in the distance as I shove my way free of debris, my clothing torn and scorched and my-.\\
'''Jade''': ''<blushes>''\\
'''Artemis''': When he said you two were dating, I thought he just said it to annoy me. Now? Yeah, I totally get it.
'''Renegade''': But you're thinking about it right now, aren't you? A giant pile of burning rubble, sirens in the distance as I shove my way free of debris, my clothing torn and scorched and my-.\\
'''Jade''': ''<blushes>''\\
'''Artemis''': When he said you two were dating, I thought he just said it to annoy me. Now? Yeah, I totally get it.
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--> '''Jade''': '''Jade:''' You have the weirdest ideas about what I find romantic.\\
'''Renegade''': '''Renegade:''' But you're thinking about it right now, aren't you? A giant pile of burning rubble, sirens in the distance as I shove my way free of debris, my clothing torn and scorched and my-.\\
'''Jade''': ''<blushes>''\\
'''Artemis''':''[Jade blushes]''\\
'''Artemis:''' When he said you two were dating, I thought he just said it to annoy me. Now? Yeah, I totally getit.it.
* {{Omake}}: We see the League debating on who to nominate to become new members, as well as their reaction to learning about Match.
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'''Artemis:''' When he said you two were dating, I thought he just said it to annoy me. Now? Yeah, I totally get
* {{Omake}}: We see the League debating on who to nominate to become new members, as well as their reaction to learning about Match.
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: During their argument, Lori says that Atlanteans who didn't inherit the Pureblood aquatic adaptation shouldn't feel inferior to those who do. Paul rebuts that the Pureblood aquatic adaptation doesn't come with the same drawbacks that every other aquatic adaptation does. Professor Sephtian, a manta ray person, points out the validity of Paul's statement.
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The Renegade timeline sees Green Arrow and Zatanna accept Awakening, and Superboy transformed into a full Kryptonian. Grayven takes him to meet Karsta Wor-Ul, who is initially hostile, but reluctantly agrees to further contact after learning that Superboy now has some of her DNA.
Grayven likewise goes to Cadmus, but takes less interest in freeing the Genomorphs. However, he arranges for Miss Martian to examine Match's mind before waking him. She is able to repair some of the damage, and Grayven uses his stolen Kryptonian data to fix more, resulting in Match being somewhat lost and confused, but not hostile. They take him back to the Mountain, but tell Lex that he escaped.
Grayven likewise goes to Cadmus, but takes less interest in freeing the Genomorphs. However, he arranges for Miss Martian to examine Match's mind before waking him. She is able to repair some of the damage, and Grayven uses his stolen Kryptonian data to fix more, resulting in Match being somewhat lost and confused, but not hostile. They take him back to the Mountain, but tell Lex that he escaped.
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The Renegade timeline sees Green Arrow and Zatanna accept Awakening, and Superboy transformed into a full Kryptonian. Grayven The Renegade takes him to meet Karsta Wor-Ul, who is initially hostile, but reluctantly agrees to further contact after learning that Superboy now has some of her DNA.
Grayven The Renegade likewise goes to Cadmus, but takes less interest in freeing the Genomorphs. However, he arranges for Miss Martian to examine Match's mind before waking him. She is able to repair some of the damage, and Grayven the Renegade uses his stolen Kryptonian data to fix more, resulting in Match being somewhat lost and confused, but not hostile. They take him back to the Mountain, but tell Lex that he escaped.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Grayven admits he doesn't much care about the fate of Cadmus, but offers to destroy it if it's important to Jade.
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* ForWantOfANail: As Wotan wasn't sent to Atlantis in the Renegade timeline, Klarion didn't need to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15797736 find and enhance Dard Druid]] as in the Paragon timeline.
* InLoveWithYourCarnage:Grayven The Renegade admits he doesn't much care about the fate of Cadmus, but offers to destroy it if it's important to Jade.
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* WordOfGod: Grayven hasn't bothered investigating his [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15663254 suspicions about Wonder Woman's soul structure]].
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* WordOfGod: Grayven The Renegade hasn't bothered investigating his [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15663254 suspicions about Wonder Woman's soul structure]].
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Grayven admits he doesn't much care about the fate of Cadmus, but offers to destroy it if it's important to Jade. His description of standing atop its ash and rubble turns her on.
--> '''Artemis''': When he said you two were dating, I thought he just said it to annoy me. Now? Yeah, I totally get it.
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--> '''Jade''': You have the weirdest ideas about what I find romantic.\\
'''Renegade''': But you're thinking about it right now, aren't you? A giant pile of burning rubble, sirens in the distance as I shove my way free of debris, my clothing torn and scorched and my-.\\
'''Jade''': ''<blushes>''\\
'''Artemis''': When he said you two were dating, I thought he just said it to annoy me. Now? Yeah, I totally get it.
--> '''Jade''': You have the weirdest ideas about what I find romantic.\\
'''Renegade''': But you're thinking about it right now, aren't you? A giant pile of burning rubble, sirens in the distance as I shove my way free of debris, my clothing torn and scorched and my-.\\
'''Jade''': ''<blushes>''\\
'''Artemis''': When he said you two were dating, I thought he just said it to annoy me. Now? Yeah, I totally get it.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: Paul notices that Paula Nguyen has an impressively toned physique. Artemis notices him noticing and is not amused -- and being elbowed by a Danner enhancile is unpleasant even for a Lantern.
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Equivalent canon episode: "Agendas".[[Recap/YoungJusticeS1E22Agendas "Agendas"]]. Apart from the connection between the two words, the origin of "Minutes" is unclear.
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Paul and Superboy investigate Cadmus and find the insane Kryptonian clone "Match", who attacks them but is overpowered and put back in his tank to await a cure. Paul also pressures Lex into taking action to free the Genomorphs from the slavery conditions they're kept in.
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!!! Short version
Paul and Superboy investigate Cadmus and find the insane Kryptonian clone "Match", who attacks them but is overpowered and put back in his tank to await a cure. Paul also pressures Lex into taking action to free the Genomorphs from the slavery conditions they're kept in.
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* MurderInTheFamily: Teth Adom's father was so disappointed by Adom's desire for peaceful trade that he had Adom's wife and children assassinated - believing that she had softened him. Once Adom traced the killers back to him, he killed his father on the spot, and even the Wizard Shazam couldn't argue that he was wrong.
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* MurderInTheFamily: {{Patricide}}: Teth Adom's father was so disappointed by Adom's desire for peaceful trade that he had Adom's wife and children assassinated - believing that she had softened him. Once Adom traced the killers back to him, he killed his father on the spot, and even the Wizard Shazam couldn't argue that he was wrong.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Grayven admits he doesn't much care about the fate of Cadmus, but offers to destroy it if it's important to Jade. His description of standing atop its ash and rubble turns her on.
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--> '''Artemis''': When he said you two were dating, I thought he just said it to annoy me. Now? Yeah, I totally get it.
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* AgeGapAlgebra: When Paul checks out Paula Nguyen from behind, Artemis is revolted, but he internally reflects that Paula will soon be within minus-seven-doubled for his true age.
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Paul apologises to Teth Adom for having Miss Martian imitate him, but Adom is unconcerned. He tells Paul about the situation in Kahndaq, where he intends to govern but is waiting for the civil war to subside, and about some of his personal history with his family and the Wizard Shazam.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: When Paul and Kon enter the Hall of Justice, two people that Paul notices are a young woman with a shaved head and a little girl holding a balloon. We get a hint that something is off about them when the girl's text shows up as [[PaintingTheMedium distorted]].
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* EarlyBirdCameo: When Paul and Kon enter the Hall of Justice, two people that Paul notices are a young woman with a shaved head and a little girl holding a balloon. We get a hint that something is off about them when the girl's text shows up as [[PaintingTheMedium distorted]].
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* WordOfGod: Graven hasn't bothered investigating his [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15663254 suspicions about Wonder Woman's soul structure]].
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* WordOfGod: Graven Grayven hasn't bothered investigating his [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-eleven.311139/post-15663254 suspicions about Wonder Woman's soul structure]].
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!! Episode 22: Minutes
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Lex Luthor contacts Superboy and informs him that there is a second Kryptonian clone in Cadmus. Paul accompanies him to investigate, and they soon locate the clone; however, he is mentally unstable and attacks when freed from his pod. They subdue him and reluctantly return him to Cadmus' custody until he can be treated.
While there, Paul is disgusted to find that the League did not and the treatment of the Genomorphs as slave labor. He and Lex discuss the matter, and Paul offers to help fund a legal campaign to have the Genomorphs recognised as people. Lex is concerned about how association with Cadmus will affect his reputation, but agrees to the campaign rather than have Cadmus shut down.
While there, Paul is disgusted to find that the League did not and the treatment of the Genomorphs as slave labor. He and Lex discuss the matter, and Paul offers to help fund a legal campaign to have the Genomorphs recognised as people. Lex is concerned about how association with Cadmus will affect his reputation, but agrees to the campaign rather than have Cadmus shut down.
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Lex Luthor contacts Superboy and informs him that there is a second Kryptonian clone in Cadmus. Paul accompanies him to investigate, and they soon locate the clone; clone, Match; however, he is mentally unstable and attacks when freed from his pod. They subdue him and reluctantly return him to Cadmus' custody until he can be treated.
While there, Paul is disgusted to find that the League did notand end the treatment of the Genomorphs as slave labor. He and Lex discuss the matter, and Paul offers to help fund a legal campaign to have the Genomorphs recognised as people. Lex is concerned about how association with Cadmus will affect his reputation, but agrees to the campaign rather than have Cadmus shut down.
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Grayven likewise goes to Cadmus, but takes less interest in freeing the Genomorphs. However, he arranges for Miss Martian to examine Match's mind before waking him. She is able to repair some of the damage, and Grayven uses his stolen Kryptonian data to fix more, resulting in Match being somewhat lost and confused, but not hostile. They take him back to the Mountain, but tell Lex that he escaped.
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Paul and Zatanna meet with John Constantine and some other magicians to discuss Nabu. John reveals what he has learned about Lords of Order/Chaos and how to defeat them.
Lex Luthor contacts Superboy and informs him that there is a second Kryptonian clone in Cadmus. Paul accompanies him to investigate, and they soon locate the clone; however, he is mentally unstable and attacks when freed from his pod. They subdue him and reluctantly return him to Cadmus' custody until he can be treated.
While there, Paul is disgusted to find that the League did not and the treatment of the Genomorphs as slave labor. He and Lex discuss the matter, and Paul offers to help fund a legal campaign to have the Genomorphs recognised as people. Lex is concerned about how association with Cadmus will affect his reputation, but agrees to the campaign rather than have Cadmus shut down.
Lex also speaks to Kon, offering to build a relationship. Kon is conflicted, wanting a parent but knowing about Lex's faults. Paul is initially worried, but is then thrilled to learn that Wonder Woman already planned to offer to adopt Kon, which she does at Thanksgiving and he accepts.
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