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* ShoutOut: When using his New God abilities, Scott Free says: [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Freedom Is The Right Of All Sentient Beings]] in Godspeech.
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* ShoutOut: When using his New God abilities, Scott Free says: says [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Freedom Is The Right Of All Sentient Beings]] in Godspeech.
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* ShoutOut: When using his New God abilities, Scott Free says: [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Freedom Is The Right Of All Sentient Beings]] in Godspeech.
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* WhamLine: Paul's ring wallops him after Mannheim's device is activated.
--> Ring active. Alert! Major mental alterations detected.\\
What? Considering, I feel f-.\\
Worldwide.
--> Ring active. Alert! Major mental alterations detected.\\
What? Considering, I feel f-.\\
Worldwide.
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Takes place 29 December 2012 - ongoing.
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Takes place 29 29-31 December 2012 - ongoing.
2012.
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* AlternateUniverse:
** We see Paol of ''TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy'' working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his village.
** We meet a new version of the SI who ends up in ''Series/{{Brimstone}}''. He is briefly mistaken for a soul that's escaped Hell by that series' protagonist before the SI explains that he's something else.
* ArchEnemy: While making conversation with Task Force X, Paul refers to himself as Sportsmaster's nemesis, the counterpoint to everything Sportsmaster has done. Mr Crock's behaviour has alienated everyone connected to him, while Paul's heroism has resulted in forming friendships with pretty much all of those same people: both of Mr Crock's daughters (including dating one), his ex-wife, ex-mother-in-law, parents, siblings, even nephews.
--> '''Paul:''' It's a matter of contrast; by existing I repudiate your entire personal philosophy.
** We see Paol of ''TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy'' working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his village.
** We meet a new version of the SI who ends up in ''Series/{{Brimstone}}''. He is briefly mistaken for a soul that's escaped Hell by that series' protagonist before the SI explains that he's something else.
* ArchEnemy: While making conversation with Task Force X, Paul refers to himself as Sportsmaster's nemesis, the counterpoint to everything Sportsmaster has done. Mr Crock's behaviour has alienated everyone connected to him, while Paul's heroism has resulted in forming friendships with pretty much all of those same people: both of Mr Crock's daughters (including dating one), his ex-wife, ex-mother-in-law, parents, siblings, even nephews.
--> '''Paul:''' It's a matter of contrast; by existing I repudiate your entire personal philosophy.
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* AlternateUniverse:
**AlternateUniverse: We see Paol of ''TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy'' working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his village.
** We meet a new version of the SI who ends up in ''Series/{{Brimstone}}''. He is briefly mistaken for a soul that's escaped Hell by that series' protagonist before the SI explains that he's something else.
* ArchEnemy: While making conversation with Task Force X, Paul refers to himself as Sportsmaster's nemesis, the counterpoint to everything Sportsmaster has done. Mr Crock's behaviour has alienated everyone connected to him, while Paul's heroism has resulted in forming friendships with pretty much all of those same people: both of Mr Crock's daughters (including dating one), his ex-wife, ex-mother-in-law, parents, siblings, even nephews.
--> '''Paul:''' It's a matter of contrast; by existing I repudiate your entire personal philosophy.village.
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** We meet a new version of the SI who ends up in ''Series/{{Brimstone}}''. He is briefly mistaken for a soul that's escaped Hell by that series' protagonist before the SI explains that he's something else.
* ArchEnemy: While making conversation with Task Force X, Paul refers to himself as Sportsmaster's nemesis, the counterpoint to everything Sportsmaster has done. Mr Crock's behaviour has alienated everyone connected to him, while Paul's heroism has resulted in forming friendships with pretty much all of those same people: both of Mr Crock's daughters (including dating one), his ex-wife, ex-mother-in-law, parents, siblings, even nephews.
--> '''Paul:''' It's a matter of contrast; by existing I repudiate your entire personal philosophy.
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* ArchEnemy: While making conversation with Task Force X, Paul refers to himself as Sportsmaster's nemesis, the counterpoint to everything Sportsmaster has done. Mr Crock's behaviour has alienated everyone connected to him, while Paul's heroism has resulted in forming friendships with pretty much all of those same people: both of Mr Crock's daughters (including dating one), his ex-wife, ex-mother-in-law, parents, siblings, even nephews.
--> '''Paul:''' It's a matter of contrast; by existing I repudiate your entire personal philosophy.
--> '''Paul:''' It's a matter of contrast; by existing I repudiate your entire personal philosophy.
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* AlternateUniverse: We see Paol of ''TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy'' working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his village.
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** We see Paol of ''TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy'' working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of hisvillage.village.
** We meet a new version of the SI who ends up in ''Series/{{Brimstone}}''. He is briefly mistaken for a soul that's escaped Hell by that series' protagonist before the SI explains that he's something else.
** We see Paol of ''TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy'' working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his
** We meet a new version of the SI who ends up in ''Series/{{Brimstone}}''. He is briefly mistaken for a soul that's escaped Hell by that series' protagonist before the SI explains that he's something else.
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Due to having to face all the heroes controlled by the Anti-Life Equation, Paul is forced to recruit the villains in Belle Reve into the newly made Task Force X.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Paul assimilates Colin Thornton aka Satanus in his cell, turning him into a Construct-Lantern, and has him write up a demonic contract that the other prisoners can sign to join Taskforce X. They get an immediate pardon by joining, but if they break the contract, their souls are immediately forfeit.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Paul assimilates Colin Thornton aka Satanus in his cell, turning him into a Construct-Lantern, and has him write up a demonic contract that the other prisoners can sign to join Taskforce Task Force X. They [[BoxedCrook get an immediate pardon by joining, joining]], but if they break the contract, [[YourSoulIsMine their souls are immediately forfeit.forfeit]].
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* DealWithTheDevil: Paul assimilates Colin Thornton aka Satanus in his cell, turning him into a Construct-Lantern, and has him write up a demonic contract that the other prisoners can sign to join Taskforce X. They get an immediate pardon by joining, but if they break the contract, their souls are immediately forfeit.
--> '''Paul:''' It's an unpleasant way to die, and then you're in Hell.
--> '''Paul:''' It's an unpleasant way to die, and then you're in Hell.
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* SwitchingPOV: We briefly see the [=POVs=] of Holly and Lois after the Anti-Life Equation starts spreading across the world.
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* SwitchingPOV: We briefly see the [=POVs=] of Holly and Lois various characters after the Anti-Life Equation starts spreading across the world.
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* HeroicWillpower: Batman reveals to Paul that he's being influenced by the worldwide Anti-Life, but he is [[green:working through it]].
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Paul takes the time to visit the new teleporters set up by the Alliance of the Just.
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Paul takes the time to visit the new teleporters set up by the Alliance of the Just.
Just, and encounters a man named "Father Bruno" -- then realises afterward that he cannot clearly remember Bruno's face. Further investigation reveals that using the teleportation system has embedded a particle of Anti-Life in Paul, which Doctor Mist is able to remove. At Batman's direction, they investigate the system further, and are able to heal Scott Free from more serious exposure, although his wife Barda has been abducted.
Tracing the Anti-Life back to its source, they find a machine connected to several members of the Alliance of the Just with related powers, such as Anita Fite. "Father Bruno" turns out to be Bruno Mannheim of Intergang, who reveals that as a reward for capturing the Forever Children and corrupting Infinity Man, Darkseid gave Bruno a portion of his own soul, granting Bruno access to the Omega Force and a large amount of the Anti-Life Equation. Bruno uses the machine to broadcast the Anti-Life's influence over the entire world, bringing depression and despair to everyone.
Tracing the Anti-Life back to its source, they find a machine connected to several members of the Alliance of the Just with related powers, such as Anita Fite. "Father Bruno" turns out to be Bruno Mannheim of Intergang, who reveals that as a reward for capturing the Forever Children and corrupting Infinity Man, Darkseid gave Bruno a portion of his own soul, granting Bruno access to the Omega Force and a large amount of the Anti-Life Equation. Bruno uses the machine to broadcast the Anti-Life's influence over the entire world, bringing depression and despair to everyone.
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* AlternateUniverse: We see Paol working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his village.
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* AlternateUniverse: We see Paol of ''TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy'' working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his village.
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* SwitchingPOV: We briefly see POVs of Holly and Lois after the Anti-Life Equation starts spreading across the world.
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* SwitchingPOV: We briefly see POVs the [=POVs=] of Holly and Lois after the Anti-Life Equation starts spreading across the world.
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* SeenItAll: Lois has been around Superman and other oddities for over a decade, so she is able to tell when her mind is being affected by something, in this case the Anti-Life Equation, and does her best to resist it.
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--> (''in pitch black font'') It's better to be a toy than a dishcloth.
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* SwitchingPOV: We briefly see Holly's POV after she is affected by the Anti-Life Equation.
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* SwitchingPOV: We briefly see Holly's POV after she is affected by the Anti-Life Equation.
--> (''in pitch black font'') It's better to be a toy than a dishcloth.
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* OhCrap: Downplayed. OL has a rather subdued reaction to learning that they're dealing with the Anti-Life, specifically a more subtle version that may have been operating for a while now.
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!! Episode 129: Pete Tong
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!! Episode 129: 130: Pete Tong
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!! Episode 129: Pete Tong
Takes place 29 December 2012 - ongoing.
Paul takes the time to visit the new teleporters set up by the Alliance of the Just.
The title is named after an English disc jockey who works for BBC Radio 1. His name is used in the phrase "It's all gone Pete Tong", where the name is used as rhyming slang for "a bit wrong"
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* AlternateUniverse: We see Paol working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his village.
* SpottingTheThread: OL, thanks to a little assistance from Artemis, realizes that "Father Bruno" is highly suspicious due to the fact that he can't remember the latter clearly despite his PhotographicMemory.
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Takes place 29 December 2012 - ongoing.
Paul takes the time to visit the new teleporters set up by the Alliance of the Just.
The title is named after an English disc jockey who works for BBC Radio 1. His name is used in the phrase "It's all gone Pete Tong", where the name is used as rhyming slang for "a bit wrong"
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* AlternateUniverse: We see Paol working to solve some problems while acting as the ruler of his village.
* SpottingTheThread: OL, thanks to a little assistance from Artemis, realizes that "Father Bruno" is highly suspicious due to the fact that he can't remember the latter clearly despite his PhotographicMemory.
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