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* ChildAbuseIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Wonder Woman is horrified to learn that Apokolips has a New God of Child Abuse.
--> '''Wonder Woman:''' The New God of… They have a ''god'' for that!?
--> '''Wonder Woman:''' The New God of… They have a ''god'' for that!?
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* NoodleIncident: Scott reminds Barda that she once made a scene in New York involving a "five items or less" line.
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After testing the Danner Formula on rats, Paul uses it to enhance Superboy's human components, giving him similar strength and toughness to Superman. A few days later, Superboy has the chance to use it when Ocean Master attacks Atlantis and kidnaps its queen. Orange Lantern cuts off Ocean Master's hands (a weak point in his armor).
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After testing the Danner Formula on rats, Paul uses it to enhance Superboy's human components, giving him similar strength and toughness to Superman. A few days later, Superboy has the chance to use it when Ocean Master attacks Atlantis and kidnaps its queen. Orange Lantern cuts off Ocean Master's hands (a weak point in his armor).
armor), disabling him and allowing him to be captured -- which shocks Atlantis with the revelation that he is Prince Orm.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Guy's reaction to finding out that Paul can use his ring to mine as much precious metals from asteroids as he wants.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Guy's reaction to finding out that Paul can use his ring to mine as much precious metals from asteroids as he wants. Green Lanterns just get a basic salary; they're allowed to collect local bounties if applicable, but otherwise can't use their rings for personal gain.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Lex finds Paul's joking accusation of being a {{Yandere}} for Superman genuinely amusing.
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* LiteralDisarming: Downplayed. Orange Lantern only cut off Ocean Master's hands.
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* LiteralDisarming: Downplayed. Orange Lantern only cut cuts off Ocean Master's hands.hands before Superboy incapacitates him.
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Paul protects a Rhelasian peace conference from assault, and gains the attention of Lex Luthor.
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* AchillesHeel: Ocean Master's armor has bound spells that make him, among other things, immune to constructs -- but it doesn't cover his hands or feet. So Paul cuts his hands off.
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* PaintingTheMedium: This episode marks the first instance of "God-speech", magical communication between empowered individuals, which appears (or rather doesn't) as text that is invisible until highlighted.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Paul realizes that people think he is a teenager when Wonder Woman tries to send him to high school with Kon and M'gann.
* ThoughtTheyKnewAlready: When Mr J'onzz brings up Paul's sensitivity to telepathy and ability to transmit tactile sensation, Paul immediately apologises for coming on to M'gann in Bialya. Mr J'onzz didn't actually know about that incident.
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* LargeHam: Paul takes the opportunity to have some fun when Donna is bemused and disturbed by the Rats of Dawn.
--> '''Donna''': You made.. super rats?\\
'''Paul''': Yes! NOW THE WORLD WILL ''TREMBLE'' IN '''FEAR''' BEFORE MY RODENT MINIONS!\\
'''Wallace''': Ah, I'm not gunna help you with that.
--> '''Donna''': You made.. super rats?\\
'''Paul''': Yes! NOW THE WORLD WILL ''TREMBLE'' IN '''FEAR''' BEFORE MY RODENT MINIONS!\\
'''Wallace''': Ah, I'm not gunna help you with that.
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* PercussiveTherapy: Paul decides to unwind by "testing" the resilience of Danner-augmented rats, through baseball.
--> '''Paul''': I already know that the Danner Formula worked on them just fine. But yesterday I had to explain to Batman why I decided to build a giant naked statue of myself in the middle of an enemy country. I ''need'' this.
--> '''Paul''': I already know that the Danner Formula worked on them just fine. But yesterday I had to explain to Batman why I decided to build a giant naked statue of myself in the middle of an enemy country. I ''need'' this.
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!!! Short version
Paul protects a Rhelasian peace conference from assault, and gains the attention of Lex Luthor.
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Paul protects a Rhelasian peace conference from assault, and gains the attention of Lex Luthor.
!!! Longer version
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Paul puts the idea in Luthor's head to utilize magic, as it's a virtually untapped resource that can bring exponential benefits in R&D.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Paul puts the idea in Luthor's head to utilize magic, as it's a virtually untapped resource that can bring exponential benefits in R&D.R&D, and to research the Danner formula, which gives strength and toughness comparable to Superboy.
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!! Episode 10: Tracers
Takes place September 5-7
Takes place September 5-7
Equivalent canon episode: "Targets". "Tracers" possibly refers to Paul tracking and destroying the missiles.
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* RefugeInAudacity: When Big Barda and Mister Miracle's cover is blown, OL tries to pass of the fight as a stunt and even produces a camera to pretend filming it.
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* SuperEmpowering: Paul increases Superboy's strength and durability and even gives him a minor healing factor with the Danner Formula.
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* SuperReflexes: When responding to the missiles, Paul uses his ring to temporarily accelerate his brain, allowing him to locate and counter each of them. Unfortunately, since the technique [[PowerAtAPrice causes neural degradation]], he can only use it briefly before stopping to heal.
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The school term starts shortly afterward, occupying most of the team. Paul, being older and not needing to go to school, takes the opportunity to visit Mister Miracle and Big Barda, to tell them about the occurrences in Bialya and show them the Sphere. The Frees are initially suspicious, but friendly once they confirm that Orange Lantern and Wonder Woman are not from Apokolips.
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The school term starts shortly afterward, occupying most of the team. Paul, Paul discovers that he has been enrolled too, because his ring-optimised body looks younger than his true age of 29, and panics about the possibility of being removed from the team, but doesn't want to repeat school either; he claims to be 18. Renegade!OL, however, reveals his true age.
Being older and not needing to go to school, OL takes the opportunity to visit Mister Miracle and Big Barda, to tell them about the occurrences in Bialya and show them the Sphere. The Frees are initially suspicious, but friendly once they confirm thatOrange Lantern he and Wonder Woman are not from Apokolips.
Being older and not needing to go to school, OL takes the opportunity to visit Mister Miracle and Big Barda, to tell them about the occurrences in Bialya and show them the Sphere. The Frees are initially suspicious, but friendly once they confirm that
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Between assaults, Orange Lantern has a conversation with Lex Luthor, who is mediating at the conference, regarding the need for human technological advancement, drawing his attention to the Danner Formula and Atlantean magic as examples of what is possible.
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Between assaults, Orange Lantern has a conversation with Lex Luthor, who is mediating at the conference, regarding the need for human technological advancement, drawing his attention to the Danner Formula and Atlantean magic as examples of what is possible. Lex is surprised that he takes magic seriously, but thoughtful by the end of the conversation.
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--> '''Big Barda''': I didn't know that Earth had a God of Bullshit.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Paul realizes that people think he is a teenager when Wonder Woman tries to send him to high school with Kon and M'gann.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Paul realizes that people think he is a teenager when Wonder Woman tries to send him to high school with Kon and M'gann.M'gann.
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After testing the Danner formula on rats, Paul uses it to enhance Superboy's human components, giving him similar strength and toughness to Superman. A few days later, Superboy has the chance to use it when Ocean Master attacks Atlantis and kidnaps its queen. Orange Lantern cuts off Ocean Master's hands (a weak point in his armor).
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After testing the Danner formula Formula on rats, Paul uses it to enhance Superboy's human components, giving him similar strength and toughness to Superman. A few days later, Superboy has the chance to use it when Ocean Master attacks Atlantis and kidnaps its queen. Orange Lantern cuts off Ocean Master's hands (a weak point in his armor).
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While Paul is recording what he knows about the New Gods, Red Arrow contacts the Cave. The two of them thwart multiple assassination attempts on a Rhelasian peace conference, escalating from a single rampaging Venom Buster injected civilian to the launch of ten anti-ship missiles at the conference building.
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* SuperEmpowering: Paul increases Superboy's strength and durability and even gives him a minor healing factor with the Danner Formula.
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After testing the Danner formula on rats, the SI uses it to enhance Superboy's human components, giving him similar strength and toughness to Superman. A few days later, Superboy has the chance to use it when Ocean Master attacks Atlantis and kidnaps its queen. The Paragon SI cuts off Ocean Master's hands (a weak point in his armour), while the Renegade goes further, sending constructs up his arms and killing him on the spot.
The school term starts shortly afterward, occupying most of the team. The SI, being older, takes the opportunity to visit Scott and Barda Free, from New Genesis, to tell them about the occurrences in Bialya and show them the Sphere. The Frees are initially suspicious, but friendly once they confirm that the SI and Wonder Woman are not from Apokolips.
While the SI is recording what he knows about the New Gods, Red Arrow contacts the Mountain. The two of them thwart multiple assassination attempts on a Rhelasian peace conference, escalating from a single rampaging Venom Buster metahuman to the launch of ten anti-ship missiles at the conference building.
Between assaults, the SI has a conversation with Lex Luthor, who is mediating at the conference, regarding the need for human technological advancement, drawing his attention to the Danner formula and Atlantean magic as examples of what is possible.
The school term starts shortly afterward, occupying most of the team. The SI, being older, takes the opportunity to visit Scott and Barda Free, from New Genesis, to tell them about the occurrences in Bialya and show them the Sphere. The Frees are initially suspicious, but friendly once they confirm that the SI and Wonder Woman are not from Apokolips.
While the SI is recording what he knows about the New Gods, Red Arrow contacts the Mountain. The two of them thwart multiple assassination attempts on a Rhelasian peace conference, escalating from a single rampaging Venom Buster metahuman to the launch of ten anti-ship missiles at the conference building.
Between assaults, the SI has a conversation with Lex Luthor, who is mediating at the conference, regarding the need for human technological advancement, drawing his attention to the Danner formula and Atlantean magic as examples of what is possible.
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After testing the Danner formula on rats, the SI Paul uses it to enhance Superboy's human components, giving him similar strength and toughness to Superman. A few days later, Superboy has the chance to use it when Ocean Master attacks Atlantis and kidnaps its queen. The Paragon SI Orange Lantern cuts off Ocean Master's hands (a weak point in his armour), while the Renegade goes further, sending constructs up his arms and killing him on the spot.
armor).
The school term starts shortly afterward, occupying most of the team.The SI, Paul, being older, older and not needing to go to school, takes the opportunity to visit Scott Mister Miracle and Barda Free, from New Genesis, Big Barda, to tell them about the occurrences in Bialya and show them the Sphere. The Frees are initially suspicious, but friendly once they confirm that the SI Orange Lantern and Wonder Woman are not from Apokolips.
Whilethe SI Paul is recording what he knows about the New Gods, Red Arrow contacts the Mountain. Cave. The two of them thwart multiple assassination attempts on a Rhelasian peace conference, escalating from a single rampaging Venom Buster metahuman injected civilian to the launch of ten anti-ship missiles at the conference building.
Between assaults,the SI Orange Lantern has a conversation with Lex Luthor, who is mediating at the conference, regarding the need for human technological advancement, drawing his attention to the Danner formula Formula and Atlantean magic as examples of what is possible.
The school term starts shortly afterward, occupying most of the team.
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* RefugeInAudacity: When Barda and Mister Miracle's cover is blown, OL tries to pass of the fight as a stunt and even produces a camera to pretend filming it.
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* RefugeInAudacity: When Big Barda and Mister Miracle's cover is blown, OL tries to pass of the fight as a stunt and even produces a camera to pretend filming it.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Paul realizes that people think he is a teenager when Wonder Woman tries to send him to high school with Kon and M'gann.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: Paul realizes that people think he is a teenager when Wonder Woman tries to send him to high school with Kon and M'gann.
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* LiteralDisarming: Downplayed. Orange Lantern only cut off Ocean Master's hands.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The defeat and capture of Ocean Master.
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* CurbstompBattle: Aqualad, Miss Martian, Superboy, and Orange Lantern are able to quickly able to disable and capture Ocean Master.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Paul put the idea in Luthor's head to utilize magic, as it's a virtually untapped resource that can bring exponential benefits in R&D.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Paul put the idea in Luthor's head to utilize magic, as it's a virtually untapped resource that can bring exponential benefits in R&D.
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* CurbstompBattle: CurbStompBattle: Aqualad, Miss Martian, Superboy, and Orange Lantern are able to quickly able to disable and capture Ocean Master.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Paulput puts the idea in Luthor's head to utilize magic, as it's a virtually untapped resource that can bring exponential benefits in R&D.R&D.
* RefugeInAudacity: When Barda and Mister Miracle's cover is blown, OL tries to pass of the fight as a stunt and even produces a camera to pretend filming it.
--> '''Barda:''' I didn't know that Earth had a God of Bullshit.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Paul
* RefugeInAudacity: When Barda and Mister Miracle's cover is blown, OL tries to pass of the fight as a stunt and even produces a camera to pretend filming it.
--> '''Barda:''' I didn't know that Earth had a God of Bullshit.
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* CurbstompBattle: Aqualad, Miss Martian, Superboy, and Orange Lantern are able to quickly able to disable and capture Ocean Master.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Paul put the idea in Luthor's head to utilize magic, as it's a virtually untapped resource that can bring exponential benefits in R&D.
* VillainRespect: Luthor likes that Paul is so polite and cordial to him, unlike every other hero he interacts with.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Guy's reaction to finding out that Paul can use his ring to mine as much precious minerals from asteroids as he wants.
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* CurbstompBattle: Aqualad, Miss Martian, Superboy, and Orange Lantern are able to quickly able to disable and capture Ocean Master.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Paul put the idea in Luthor's head to utilize magic, as it's a virtually untapped resource that can bring exponential benefits in R&D.
* VillainRespect: Luthor likes that Paul is so polite and cordial to him, unlike every other hero he interacts with.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Guy's reaction to finding out that Paul can use his ring to mine as much precious minerals from asteroids as he wants.
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After testing the Danner formula on rats, the SI uses it to enhance Superboy's human components, giving him similar strength and toughness to Superman. A few days later, Superboy has the chance to use it when Ocean Master attacks Atlantis and kidnaps its queen. The Paragon SI cuts off Ocean Master's hands (a weak point in his armour), while the Renegade goes further, sending constructs up his arms and killing him on the spot.
The school term starts shortly afterward, occupying most of the team. The SI, being older, takes the opportunity to visit Scott and Barda Free, from New Genesis, to tell them about the occurrences in Bialya and show them the Sphere. The Frees are initially suspicious, but friendly once they confirm that the SI and Wonder Woman are not from Apokolips.
While the SI is recording what he knows about the New Gods, Red Arrow contacts the Mountain. The two of them thwart multiple assassination attempts on a Rhelasian peace conference, escalating from a single rampaging Venom Buster metahuman to the launch of ten anti-ship missiles at the conference building.
Between assaults, the SI has a conversation with Lex Luthor, who is mediating at the conference, regarding the need for human technological advancement, drawing his attention to the Danner formula and Atlantean magic as examples of what is possible.
The school term starts shortly afterward, occupying most of the team. The SI, being older, takes the opportunity to visit Scott and Barda Free, from New Genesis, to tell them about the occurrences in Bialya and show them the Sphere. The Frees are initially suspicious, but friendly once they confirm that the SI and Wonder Woman are not from Apokolips.
While the SI is recording what he knows about the New Gods, Red Arrow contacts the Mountain. The two of them thwart multiple assassination attempts on a Rhelasian peace conference, escalating from a single rampaging Venom Buster metahuman to the launch of ten anti-ship missiles at the conference building.
Between assaults, the SI has a conversation with Lex Luthor, who is mediating at the conference, regarding the need for human technological advancement, drawing his attention to the Danner formula and Atlantean magic as examples of what is possible.