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Later, Tallpaw goes on a patrol with the new warriors, Stagleap, Ryestalk, and Doespring. In the middle of the patrol, they are interrupted by Sandgorse and some of the other tunnelers, who boast about how they have nearly completed a tunnel into the gorge. This tunnel has been their prime project for quite a while. Sandgorge, taking advantage of Heatherstar's policy that each moor runner apprentice must spend one day underground, forces Tallpaw to go with him, hoping that Tallpaw will see the completion of the gorge tunnel. Tallpaw is terrified inside the tunnel, and he knows that the life of a tunneler isn't for him. As the cats continue digging, the wall before them starts gushing water, and the tunnel begins to flood. Tallpaw races out of the tunnel with the other cats. Everyone survives, but Tallpaw is shocked when the tunnelers talk about continuing the project. Sandgorse says that they'll break through to the gorge together and tries to force his son to become a tunneler, but Tallpaw tells him that he's a moor runner at heart, and won't be a copy of his father.
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Later, Tallpaw goes on a patrol with the new warriors, Stagleap, Ryestalk, and Doespring. In the middle of the patrol, they are interrupted by Sandgorse and some of the other tunnelers, who boast about how they have nearly completed a tunnel into the gorge. This tunnel has been their prime project for quite a while. Sandgorge, Sandgorse, taking advantage of Heatherstar's policy that each moor runner apprentice must spend one day underground, forces Tallpaw to go with him, hoping that Tallpaw will see the completion of the gorge tunnel. Tallpaw is terrified inside the tunnel, and he knows that the life of a tunneler isn't for him. As the cats continue digging, the wall before them starts gushing water, and the tunnel begins to flood. Tallpaw races out of the tunnel with the other cats. Everyone survives, but Tallpaw is shocked when the tunnelers talk about continuing the project. Sandgorse says that they'll break through to the gorge together and tries to force his son to become a tunneler, but Tallpaw tells him that he's a moor runner at heart, and won't be a copy of his father.
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The next day, Tallpaw goes on a patrol with Reena. During the patrol, Woollytail shows up and mentions the flooding tunnel. Tallpaw explains what happened to a shocked Dawnstripe, who tells Heatherstar. Heatherstar, realizing the danger, forces the tunnelers to abandon the gorge tunnel project. Sandgorse is angered, and he tells Tallpaw to stay away from his tunnels and to stop trying to ruin his life.
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The next day, Tallpaw goes on a patrol with Reena. During the patrol, Woollytail shows up and mentions the flooding tunnel. Tallpaw explains what happened to a shocked Dawnstripe, who tells Heatherstar. Heatherstar, realizing the danger, forces the tunnelers to abandon the gorge tunnel project. Sandgorse is angered, and he tells Tallpaw to stay away from his him and the tunnels and to stop trying to ruin his life.
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The rogues finally decide that it's time to leave. Tallpaw is enraged at how Sparrow can simply leave after Sandgorse's death. Afterwards, Tallpaw and Shrewpaw are taken on their trip to the Moonstone. When they visit it, Tallpaw has a dream about the rogues, while Shrewpaw meets Daisytail in his dream. They return to the Clan for their final assessment. The fight between Tallpaw and Shrewpaw starts out well, but when Shrewpaw taunts Tallpaw over not being able to save his father, Tallpaw loses it. Imagining Shrewpaw as Sparrow, he brutally tears into him. When Tallpaw realizes what he's done, he's filled with remorse and says that he doesn't deserve to become a warrior. Back at the camp, Palebird reveals to Tallpaw that she's gotten together with Woollytail and will be having his kits. Tallpaw is furious that she could be moving on so soon after Sandgorse's death. Despite Tallpaw's doubts, Heatherstar makes him a warrior anyway. He gets the name Talltail, while Shrewpaw becomes Shrewclaw. Talltail and Shrewclaw bicker during their vigil, which makes Heathertail annoyed when she comes to check on them.
Palebird later gives birth to Woollytail's kits, Wrenkit, Bristlekit, Rabbitkit, and Flykit. After the kitting, Talltail talks with Barkpaw and wonders if it's his destiny to leave [=WindClan=], find Sparrow, and avenge Sandgorse. Afterwards, Talltail is hunting on the moor when he sees the [=RiverClan=] warriors Nightsky and Piketooth catch some prey that ran over their border to [=WindClan=]. He lets them keep it, despite the protests of his Clanmates.
Barkface comes back to Talltail and tells him that he's had a sign about Talltail leaving the Clans. He explains that [=StarClan=] seems to approve, so Talltail talks to Heatherstar about it. Heatherstar allows him to leave the Clan, and despite Shrewclaw begging him to stay, Talltail leaves.
Palebird later gives birth to Woollytail's kits, Wrenkit, Bristlekit, Rabbitkit, and Flykit. After the kitting, Talltail talks with Barkpaw and wonders if it's his destiny to leave [=WindClan=], find Sparrow, and avenge Sandgorse. Afterwards, Talltail is hunting on the moor when he sees the [=RiverClan=] warriors Nightsky and Piketooth catch some prey that ran over their border to [=WindClan=]. He lets them keep it, despite the protests of his Clanmates.
Barkface comes back to Talltail and tells him that he's had a sign about Talltail leaving the Clans. He explains that [=StarClan=] seems to approve, so Talltail talks to Heatherstar about it. Heatherstar allows him to leave the Clan, and despite Shrewclaw begging him to stay, Talltail leaves.
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The rogues finally decide that it's time to leave. Tallpaw is enraged at how Sparrow can simply leave after Sandgorse's death. Afterwards, Tallpaw and Shrewpaw are taken on their trip to the Moonstone. When they visit it, Tallpaw has a dream about the rogues, while Shrewpaw meets Daisytail in his dream. They return to the Clan for their final assessment. The fight between Tallpaw and Shrewpaw starts out well, but when Shrewpaw taunts Tallpaw over not being able to save his father, Tallpaw loses it. Imagining Shrewpaw as Sparrow, he brutally tears into him. When Tallpaw realizes what he's done, he's filled with remorse and says that he doesn't deserve to become a warrior. Back at the camp, Palebird reveals to Tallpaw that she's gotten together with Woollytail and will be having his kits. Tallpaw is furious that she could be moving on so soon after Sandgorse's death. Despite Tallpaw's doubts, Heatherstar makes him a warrior anyway. He gets the name Talltail, while Shrewpaw becomes Shrewclaw. Talltail and Shrewclaw bicker during their vigil, which makes Heathertail Heatherstar annoyed when she comes to check on them.
Palebird later gives birth to Woollytail's kits, Wrenkit, Bristlekit, Rabbitkit, and Flykit. After the kitting, Talltail talks with Barkpaw and wonders if it's his destiny to leave [=WindClan=], find Sparrow, and avenge Sandgorse. Afterwards, Talltail is hunting on the moor when he sees the [=RiverClan=] warriors Nightsky (called Brightsky in the rest of the series) and Piketooth catch some prey that ran over their border to [=WindClan=]. He lets them keep it, despite the protests of his Clanmates.
Barkface comes back to Talltail and tells him that he's had a sign about Talltail leaving the Clans. He explains that [=StarClan=] seems to approve, so Talltail talks to Heatherstar about it. Heatherstar allows him to leave the Clan, and despite Shrewclaw and Wrenkit begging him to stay, Talltail leaves.
Palebird later gives birth to Woollytail's kits, Wrenkit, Bristlekit, Rabbitkit, and Flykit. After the kitting, Talltail talks with Barkpaw and wonders if it's his destiny to leave [=WindClan=], find Sparrow, and avenge Sandgorse. Afterwards, Talltail is hunting on the moor when he sees the [=RiverClan=] warriors Nightsky (called Brightsky in the rest of the series) and Piketooth catch some prey that ran over their border to [=WindClan=]. He lets them keep it, despite the protests of his Clanmates.
Barkface comes back to Talltail and tells him that he's had a sign about Talltail leaving the Clans. He explains that [=StarClan=] seems to approve, so Talltail talks to Heatherstar about it. Heatherstar allows him to leave the Clan, and despite Shrewclaw and Wrenkit begging him to stay, Talltail leaves.
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On the way back, he sees his siblings being attacked by a hawk. Talltail manages to catch the hawk and save them, before taking them back to the Clan. Heatherstar talks with him and accepts him back into the Clan. She also tells him about her nine lives ceremony, and how Mothflight told her about him.
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On the way back, he sees his siblings Wrenkit and Flykit being attacked by a hawk. Talltail manages to catch the hawk and save them, before taking them back to the Clan. Heatherstar talks with him and accepts him back into the Clan. She also tells him about her nine lives ceremony, and how Mothflight told her about him.
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** There's an elder in [=RiverClan=] who was named Tanglewhisker in ''Crookedstar's Promise''. This book renames him "Tanglefur" in the Allegiances.
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** There's an elder in [=RiverClan=] who was named Tanglewhisker in ''Crookedstar's Promise''. This book renames him "Tanglefur" in the Allegiances. In ''Leopardstar's Honor'', he's once again called Tanglewhisker.
** There's also a warrior in [=RiverClan=] named Nightsky. The Allegiances call her "Brightsky". In the earlier published ''Crookedstar's Promise'' and the later published ''Leopardstar's Honor'', she is also called Brightsky.
** There's also a warrior in [=RiverClan=] named Nightsky. The Allegiances call her "Brightsky". In the earlier published ''Crookedstar's Promise'' and the later published ''Leopardstar's Honor'', she is also called Brightsky.
