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* BrokenPedestal: At first Lisa admires Persephone for being a girl boss, but changes her mind once she's presented with evidence of fraud.
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* BrokenPedestal: At first Lisa admires Persephone for being a girl boss, girlboss, but changes her mind once she's presented with evidence of fraud.
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* TruthInTelevision: Hypernatremia -- an overdose of sodium in the blood -- is an agonizing and serious condition, and such high sodium content is the primary danger of ingesting seawater. The bit about all those children ''instantly turning into dust'' is baloney, but anyone following the cycle of "drink seawater > thirsty from salt > drink seawater > thirsty from salt" could certainly be in critical condition within hours.
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* MandatoryLine: Marge has only one line regarding how [[AwesomeButImpractical the stocks Homer bought her proved useless at the grocery store]]. Bart doesn't speak at all.
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* SexlessMarriage: The end reveals that Burns' marriage to Persephone was never consummated, with Burns regretting that they weren't even married long enough for him to sleep with her, which he thinks he might have convinced her to do in a few more months.
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* SexlessMarriage: The end reveals that Burns' marriage to Persephone was never consummated, with Burns regretting that they weren't even married long enough for him to got divorced before he could sleep with her, which he thinks he might have convinced her to do in a few more months.
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* SexlessMarriage: Burns regrets that his marriage to Persephone didn't last long enough for him to sleep with her, which he thinks he might have convinced her to do in a few months.
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* SexlessMarriage: Burns regrets The end reveals that his Burns' marriage to Persephone didn't last was never consummated, with Burns regretting that they weren't even married long enough for him to sleep with her, which he thinks he might have convinced her to do in a few more months.
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* EvilHasStandards: Downplayed. Mr. Burns is horrified to learn Persephone's product is masked saltwater that children are about to drink, mostly as he would be liable for poisoning them.
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* EvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards: Downplayed. Mr. Burns is horrified to learn Persephone's product is masked saltwater that children are about to drink, mostly as he would be liable for poisoning them.
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Wasn't Persephone something of a Consummate Liar?
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* IdiotBall: Lisa fails to see through Persephone's nonsense words and continues to support her even after Carl disappears suspiciously, but sees sense once Carl shows her how Persephone's machine works.
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-->'''Persephone:''' Why do you doubt a female CEO, but believe the silhouette of a man sitting in the dark? News flash! [[InsaneTrollLogic Women have faces now]].
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-->'''Persephone:''' Why do you doubt a female CEO, but believe the silhouette of a man sitting in the dark? News flash! flash: [[InsaneTrollLogic Women have faces now]].now]]!
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* AmbiguousSituation: Because of Persephone's tendency to lie compulsively with no tells, there's no way of knowing whether she really loved Mr. Burns or just his money.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Because of Persephone's tendency to lie compulsively with no tells, there's no way of knowing whether she really loved Mr. Burns or [[GoldDigger just his money.money]].
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-->'''Persephone:''' Why do you doubt a female CEO, but believe the silhouette of a man sitting in the dark? News flash! Women have faces now.
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-->'''Persephone:''' Why do you doubt a female CEO, but believe the silhouette of a man sitting in the dark? News flash! [[InsaneTrollLogic Women have faces now.now]].
