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* BigWhat: Rivet's and M'Ress' reactions to Interstella joking about turning them into emergency rations.
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* BigWhat: Rivet's and M'Ress' reactions to Interstella joking joke about turning them into emergency rations.
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* IronicLastWords: When the section of the wall of the ship Ant Queen and Ryoko begins to break apart, Ant Queen bemoans that she knew that this mission was going to be a failure, Ryoko tells her "C'mon! We're not dead yet!". And then the part of the ship they're one breaks off, and they're sent hurtling to a nearby volcanic region.
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* IronicLastWords: When the section of the wall of the ship Ant Queen and Ryoko begins to break apart, Ant Queen bemoans that she knew that this mission was going to be a failure, Ryoko tells her "C'mon! We're not dead yet!". And then Then the part of the ship they're one on breaks off, and they're sent hurtling to a nearby volcanic region.
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** When Cheelai is panicking trying to shoot the Alien Hominid, she yells "[[Series/BlarkAndSon He's in the walls...HE'S IN THE GODDAMN WALLS!]]".
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** When Cheelai is panicking trying to shoot the Alien Hominid, she yells out "[[Series/BlarkAndSon He's in the walls...HE'S IN THE GODDAMN WALLS!]]".
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* SquashedFlat: The giant Zim in the climax kills Aria by smashing her into paste with his giant thumb.
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* SquashedFlat: SquashedFlat:
** The giant Zim in the climax kills Aria by smashing her into paste with his giant thumb.
** The giant Zim in the climax kills Aria by smashing her into paste with his giant thumb.
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* ExactWords: When Ridley is holding Interstella over a great height, Lop demands that he let her go. Ridley finds that to be a great idea and does just that- by dropping her from that height to her death.
--->'''Interstella:''' "THAT'S NOT WHAT SHE MEANT, YOU JACKAAAAAAAASS!"
--->'''Interstella:''' "THAT'S NOT WHAT SHE MEANT, YOU JACKAAAAAAAASS!"
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* UnhandThemVillain: When Ridley is holding Interstella over a great height, Lop demands that he let her go. Ridley finds that to be a great idea and does just that- by dropping her from that height to her death.
--->'''Interstella:''' "THAT'S NOT WHAT SHE MEANT, YOU JACKAAAAAAAASS!
--->'''Interstella:''' "THAT'S NOT WHAT SHE MEANT, YOU JACKAAAAAAAASS!
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* Disproportionate Retribution: Parallel Susie wishes to disassemble the molecules of the nearest manager and destroy everyone else on her team in their introduction since her being plucked into the Arena wasn’t on her schedule.
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* Disproportionate Retribution: DisproportionateRetribution: Parallel Susie wishes to disassemble the molecules of the nearest manager and destroy everyone else on her team in their introduction since her being plucked into the Arena wasn’t on her schedule.
