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* NoManShouldHaveThisPower: Clyde throws the Berserker pendant in the water to make sure it can't be used again.
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** Clyde himself uses it to wipe
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** Clyde himself uses it to wipewipe his mother's memories of his WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld lifestyle.
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* BrokenAesop: After showing the negative consequences of using the berserker pendant, especially using it to give LaserGuidedAmnesia, Clyde does so on his mother. Overlaps with StatusQuoIsGod.
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* BrokenAesop: After showing the negative consequences of using the berserker pendant, especially using it to give LaserGuidedAmnesia, Clyde does so on his mother.mother so she doesn't know how he meets [[MonsterOfTheWeek Aliens and Monsters]] [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld regularly]]. Overlaps with StatusQuoIsGod.
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* BrokenAesop: After showing the negative consequences of using the berserker pendant, especially using it to give LaserGuidedAmnesia, Clyde does so on his mother. Overlaps with StatusQuoIsGod.
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Paul forces this upon Clyde throughout the story as he tells his son to forget about all of his friends so that they can run away together. As a consequence, Clyde reverts to his slightly more jockish personality from his first appearance and as so much amnesia begins to corrode his sense of identity, he becomes increasingly scared and confused by the situation.
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Paul forces this upon Clyde throughout the story as he tells his son to forget about all of his friends and his mother so that they can run away together. As a consequence, Clyde reverts to his slightly more jockish personality from his first appearance and as so much amnesia begins to corrode his sense of identity, he becomes increasingly scared and confused by the situation.situation.
** Clyde himself uses it to wipe
* MoralMyopia: Clyde himself uses the pendant to give his mother LaserGuidedAmnesia about him fighting aliens, despite knowing how terrible the consequences can be.
** Clyde himself uses it to wipe
* MoralMyopia: Clyde himself uses the pendant to give his mother LaserGuidedAmnesia about him fighting aliens, despite knowing how terrible the consequences can be.
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* PokeThePoodle: Paul's antics with the pendant start off as this, but quickly become much worse.
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She couldn't have had any idea that would happen
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* TheBusCameBack: Maria and Alan appear one last time. This is the first and only time Maria and Rani interact.
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* TheBusCameBack: Maria and Alan appear one last time. This is the first and only time Maria and Rani interact.interact onscreen.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Rani just leaves the Berserker pendant where Clyde's dad can pick it up when Clyde decides to break the rules and brag about everything.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: ContrivedCoincidence: Somewhat downplayed. It just happens that Rani just leaves picked up the Berserker pendant where Clyde's dad can pick it up when while Sarah Jane was away ''and'' the same weekend that Clyde decides decided to break show his dad the rules and brag about everything.attic.
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* AnAesop: What Clyde learns throughout the story is that sometimes you're better off without having bad parents in their lives. He at first wants to re-connect with his dad, but after all the conflict he causes irresponsibly, Clyde tells him to leave and the episode ends throws away his only keepsake of the dad.
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* AnAesop: What Clyde learns throughout the story is that sometimes you're better off without having bad parents in their lives. your life. He at first wants to re-connect with his dad, but after all the conflict he causes irresponsibly, Clyde tells him to leave and at the end of the episode ends throws away his only keepsake of the dad.
* FirstNameBasis: Clyde's mom tells Luke to call her "Carla" instead of "Mrs. Langer".
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* PapaWolf: Clyde's father is able to overcome the effects of the Berserker pendant through his love of his wife and son.
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* PapaWolf: Clyde's father is able to overcome the effects of the Berserker pendant through his love of his wife ex-wife and son.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Rani just leaves the Berserker pendant where Clyde's dad can pick it up when Clyde decides to break the rules and brag about everything.
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* AdultFear: Imagine your relationship with your son is fine in the morning, and then in the evening he doesn't know who you are...
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* AbsenteeActor: This is the first story where Mr Smith does not physically make an appearance. Sarah Jane shuts him down in her absence, and when he is called upon, the wall panels do not open up to reveal him. Instead, an answering machine function activates and plays an automated message. However, Creator/AlexanderArmstrong is still credited for his speaking lines in the role. Additionally, because he is inactive, this is the first story where Mr Smith's iconic boot-up fanfare is not heard playing.
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* AnAesop: What Clyde learns throughout the story is that sometimes you're better off without having bad parents in their lives. He at first wants to re-connect with his dad, but after all the conflict he causes irresponsibly, Clyde tells him to leave and the episode ends throws away his only keepsake of the dad.
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* AbsenteeActor: This is the first story where Mr Smith does not physically make an appearance. Sarah Jane shuts him down in her absence, and when he is called upon, the wall panels do not open up to reveal him. Instead, an answering machine function activates and plays an automated message. However, Creator/AlexanderArmstrong, is still credited for his speaking lines in the role. Additionally, because he is inactive, this is the first story where Mr Smith's iconic boot-up fanfare is not heard playing.
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* AbsenteeActor: This is the first story where Mr Smith does not physically make an appearance. Sarah Jane shuts him down in her absence, and when he is called upon, the wall panels do not open up to reveal him. Instead, an answering machine function activates and plays an automated message. However, Creator/AlexanderArmstrong, Creator/AlexanderArmstrong is still credited for his speaking lines in the role. Additionally, because he is inactive, this is the first story where Mr Smith's iconic boot-up fanfare is not heard playing.
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* ContinuityNod: Paul mentions the [[Recap.DoctorWhoS30E12TheStolenEarth the Daleks]].
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* ContinuityNod: Paul mentions the [[Recap.DoctorWhoS30E12TheStolenEarth the Daleks]].
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Clyde.
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%% ZCE * WellDoneSonGuy: Clyde.
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* VisitByDivorcedDad: Clyde's dad makes his only appearance in the series.
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* ShoppingMontage: A rare male example with Clyde and Paul. Also, it would be better to call it a ''stealing'' montage because Paul is using the pendant to convince shop assistants to give away stuff for free, and to stop Clyde from being bothered by this.
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* PapaWolf: Clyde's father is able to overcome the effects of the Berserker pendant through his love of his wife and son.
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* AbusiveParents: Clyde's dad turns out to be a selfish, irresponsible, manipulative dick. Clyde eventually makes peace with him, but realises that he's better off with him.
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* AbsenteeActor: This is the first story where Mr Smith does not physically make an appearance. Sarah Jane shuts him down in her absence, and when he is called upon, the wall panels do not open up to reveal him. Instead, an answering machine function activates and plays an automated message. However, Creator/AlexanderArmstrong, is still credited for his speaking lines in the role. Additionally, because he is inactive, this is the first story where Mr Smith's iconic boot-up fanfare is not heard playing.
* TheBusCameBack: Maria and Alan appear one last time. This is the first and only time Maria and Rani interact.
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* DisappearedDad: Paul.
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* DisappearedDad: Paul.Paul and Carla fell out of love when Clyde was younger. Paul ran off with her sister Melba and went to live in Germany. When Melba became pregnant in 2009, Paul ran again, this time returning to Clyde.
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFightIKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Clyde and his mum talk Paul through his memories, whilst Sarah shows him a reflection of himself in her handbag mirror and he remembers who he really is.
* MythologyGag: Doubling as a StealthPun, and possibly unintentional: the first recurring cast member to use the pendant, complete with getting a mark is Rani. She got "[[Recap.DoctorWhoS22E3TheMarkOfTheRani The Mark Of The Rani]]".
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** Doubling as a StealthPun, and possibly unintentional: the first recurring cast member to use the pendant, complete with getting a mark is Rani. She got ''[[Recap.DoctorWhoS22E3TheMarkOfTheRani The Mark Of The Rani]]''.
* TheBusCameBack: Maria and Alan.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Clyde.
* TheBusCameBack: Maria and Alan.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Clyde.
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* TheBusCameBack: Maria and Alan.
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke and leaves him in the driveway while he makes off with Clyde. As Paul's command has no ending clause, Chandler is still exercising until the end of the episode and is very close to dying of exhaustion with buckets of sweat dripping off him.
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, Haresh Chandra, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke and leaves him in the driveway while he makes off with Clyde. As Paul's command has no ending clause, Chandler Haresh is still exercising until the end of the episode and is very close to dying of exhaustion with buckets of sweat dripping off him.
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke and leaves him in the driveway as he makes off with Clyde. As Paul's command has no ending clause, Chandler is still exercising until the end of the episode and is very close to dying of exhaustion with buckets of sweat dripping off him.
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke and leaves him in the driveway as while he makes off with Clyde. As Paul's command has no ending clause, Chandler is still exercising until the end of the episode and is very close to dying of exhaustion with buckets of sweat dripping off him.
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke but then just leaves him there. As Paul's command has no ending clause, Chandler is still exercising until the end of the episode and is very close to dying of exhaustion with buckets of sweat dripping off him.
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke but then just and leaves him there.in the driveway as he makes off with Clyde. As Paul's command has no ending clause, Chandler is still exercising until the end of the episode and is very close to dying of exhaustion with buckets of sweat dripping off him.
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* BodyHorror: The effects of overusing the pendant gives Paul [[IcyBlueEyes unearthly pale eyes]] and [[TaintedVeins bulging blue veins]].
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* BodyHorror: The effects effect of overusing the pendant gives Paul [[IcyBlueEyes unearthly pale eyes]] and [[TaintedVeins bulging blue veins]].
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* BodyHorror: The effects of overusing the pendant gives Paul {{IcyBlueEyes unearthly pale eyes]] and [[TaintedVeins bulging blue veins]].
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* BodyHorror: The effects of overusing the pendant gives Paul {{IcyBlueEyes [[IcyBlueEyes unearthly pale eyes]] and [[TaintedVeins bulging blue veins]].
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke but then just leaves him there.
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke but then just leaves him there. As Paul's command has no ending clause, Chandler is still exercising until the end of the episode and is very close to dying of exhaustion with buckets of sweat dripping off him.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Sarah Jane.
* CallingTheOldManOut
* ContinuityNod: Paul mentions the Daleks.
* CallingTheOldManOut
* ContinuityNod: Paul mentions the Daleks.
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* TheBerserker: The pendant is said to have been used by the Viking berserkers and transformed them into mindless but effective warriors. After using the pendant for long enough, Paul quickly degenerates into a twitching, ranting savage, barely capable of maintaining his train of thought.
* BigDamnHeroes: SarahJane.
Jane is absent for almost the entire episode but arrives at the story's climax just in time to save Paul from himself.
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BodyHorror: The effects of overusing the pendant gives Paul {{IcyBlueEyes unearthly pale eyes]] and [[TaintedVeins bulging blue veins]].
** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke but then just leaves him there.
* CallingTheOldManOut: The episode focuses on Clyde and Paul dealing with their fractured relationship, but of course alien jewellery is involved to hasten things.
* CompellingVoice: Using the pendant, a person can make others obey their every command. Even benign, off-handed remarks such as "shut up" can force the listener to be totally unable to speak.
* ContinuityNod: Paul mentions theDaleks.[[Recap.DoctorWhoS30E12TheStolenEarth the Daleks]].
* BigDamnHeroes: Sarah
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** Paul very nearly inflicts this on an innocent Mr. Chandler, as he commands him to do push ups as a joke but then just leaves him there.
* CallingTheOldManOut: The episode focuses on Clyde and Paul dealing with their fractured relationship, but of course alien jewellery is involved to hasten things.
* CompellingVoice: Using the pendant, a person can make others obey their every command. Even benign, off-handed remarks such as "shut up" can force the listener to be totally unable to speak.
* ContinuityNod: Paul mentions the
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Sarah Jane mentions how much she'd like to see ''her'' parents again. Guess what happens in the next story.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Sarah Jane mentions how much she'd like to see ''her'' her parents again. Guess what happens in the next story.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Paul forces this upon Clyde throughout the story as he tells his son to forget about all of his friends so that they can run away together. As a consequence, Clyde reverts to his slightly more jockish personality from his first appearance and as so much amnesia begins to corrode his sense of identity, he becomes increasingly scared and confused by the situation.
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** Doubling as a StealthPun, and possibly unintentional: the first recurring cast member to use the pendant, complete with getting a mark is Rani. She got [[Recap.DoctorWhoS22E3TheMarkOfTheRani The Mark Of The Rani]].
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** Doubling as a StealthPun, and possibly unintentional: the first recurring cast member to use the pendant, complete with getting a mark is Rani. She got [[Recap.''[[Recap.DoctorWhoS22E3TheMarkOfTheRani The Mark Of The Rani]].Rani]]''.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Sarah Jane mentions how much she'd like to see ''her'' parents again. Guess what happens in the next story.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Clyde.
* WhatAnIdiot
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Clyde.
* WhatAnIdiotClyde.
* WhatAnIdiot
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* ShoutOut: Using the pendant, Rani tells her father to impersonate Bianca Jackson from ''{{Eastenders}}''.
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* ShoutOut: Using the pendant, Rani tells her father to impersonate Bianca Jackson from ''{{Eastenders}}''.''Series/EastEnders''.
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Sarah Jane leaves Luke with Clyde's mother Carla while she leaves to pursue an alien called Travist Polong. Meanwhile, Rani discovers that Jacob, a student at her school, has obtained a pendent that grants the wearer mind control powers but slowly turns him into a monster. Frightened of its evil power, Jacob throws the pendant away. With Sarah Jane gone and Mr. Smith shut down, Rani leaves the pendant in Sarah Jane's attic for safekeeping.
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Sarah Jane leaves Luke with Clyde's mother Carla while she leaves to pursue an alien called Travist Polong. Meanwhile, Rani discovers that Jacob, a student at her school, has obtained a pendent pendant that grants the wearer mind control powers but slowly turns him into a monster. Frightened of its evil power, Jacob throws the pendant away. With Sarah Jane gone and Mr. Smith shut down, Rani leaves the pendant in Sarah Jane's attic for safekeeping.
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Clyde, Carla, and Paul have one last talk by the water. Clyde contemplates forcing Paul to stay with the pendant, but both know that he won't. Clyde uses the pendant to get Carla to forget everything that she learned about aliens and Clyde's adventures fighting them. Paul reveals that he ran away from Melba because she had become pregnant. Clyde tells him to go back to her, saying that he doesn't need him any more. Clyde then throws the pendant into the water.
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Clyde, Carla, and Paul have one last talk by the water. Clyde contemplates forcing Paul to stay with the pendant, but both know that he won't. Clyde uses the pendant to get Carla to forget everything that she learned about aliens and Clyde's adventures fighting them. Paul reveals that he ran away from Melba because she had become pregnant. Clyde tells him to go back to her, saying that he doesn't need him any more.anymore. Clyde then throws the pendant into the water.
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* AdultFear: Imagine your relationship with your son is fine in the morning, and then in the evening he doesn't know who you are...
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* TheBusCameBack: Maria and Alan.
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* TheBusCameBack: Maria and Alan.Alan.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Clyde.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Clyde.
* WhatAnIdiot
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** Doubling as a StealthPun, and possibly unintentional: the first recurring cast member to use the pendant, complete with getting a mark is Rani. She got [[Recap.DoctorWhoS22E3TheMarkOfTheRani The Mark Of The Rani]].