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->'''Raine:''' I'll keep you safe, Eda. I promise.
->'''Raine:''' I'll keep you safe, Eda. I promise.
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[[caption-width-right:350:''Every once in awhile, in the middle of an ordinary life, love gives us a fairy tale.'']]
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* NoodleIncident: Shortly before they enter the covention center, Bump mentions a story about Eda turning the school inside out. No elaboration is given beyond Eda responding with "that was a fun day."
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* AmbiguouslyRelated: Two of Eda's fellow students are probably Boscha's parents. One of them even has three eyes.
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* EveryoneWentToSchoolTogether: Downplayed. While the Clawthorne sisters, Raine, Amity's parents, Darius, and what appears to be [[https://arianod.tumblr.com/post/681677849207390208/boschas-moms Boscha's parents]] all attended Hexside at the same time, multiple other characters are shown to have attended different schools (like Willow's parents). And even in Raine's case, they started out as a St. Epiderms student and only transferred to Hexside at the end of the flashback after meeting Eda.
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* EveryoneWentToSchoolTogether: Downplayed. While the Clawthorne sisters, Raine, Amity's parents, Darius, and what appears to be [[https://arianod.tumblr.com/post/681677849207390208/boschas-moms Boscha's parents]] all attended Hexside at the same time, multiple other characters are shown to have attended different schools (like Willow's parents). And even in Raine's case, they started out as a St. Epiderms Epiderm student and only transferred to Hexside at the end of the flashback after meeting Eda.
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* ScholarshipStudent: Raine mentions that St. Epiderm is an expensive school, and that they're attending I.F.W.O.T. every year in exchange for a continued scholarship.
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* BreatherEpisode: Although things get back into the "Day of Unity" plotline at the end, this is mainly a flashback story to how Eda and Raine first met, with heaps of ForegoneConclusion material to nullify much of the drama, and in any case it's hard to come close to the emotional extremes of the previous episode.
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* BreatherEpisode: Although things get back into the "Day of Unity" plotline at the end, this is mainly a flashback story to how Eda and Raine first met, with heaps of ForegoneConclusion material to nullify much of the drama, and in any case it's hard to come close to the emotional extremes of the previous episode.episode, or the sheer horror of the following one.
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** In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was always TheAce. It's possible that they're only like that around Eda.
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** In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was always TheAce. It's possible that they're only like that around Eda.Eda (which is given some support by how she's apparently the only one they've ever really talked to at the event), or that, [[UnreliableNarrator since the whole thing is framed as a story Eda is telling Luz, King and Hooty, she's playing up their positive characteristics]]. Or both.
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* PetTheDog: When Terra stops Faust from expelling Eda, she also lets Bump keep his job.
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* PetTheDog: PetTheDog:
** When Terra stops Faust from expelling Eda, she also lets Bump keep hisjob.job.
** Eda's permanent record in the present, as seen when signing Luz up for Hexside, is ''much'' smaller than it was when Faust showed it to her. This would suggest that after Bump took over he sifted through and exempted any unreasonable infractions Faust recorded to leave only the truly serious offenses.
** When Terra stops Faust from expelling Eda, she also lets Bump keep his
** Eda's permanent record in the present, as seen when signing Luz up for Hexside, is ''much'' smaller than it was when Faust showed it to her. This would suggest that after Bump took over he sifted through and exempted any unreasonable infractions Faust recorded to leave only the truly serious offenses.
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** In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was always TheAce. It's possible that she's only like that around Eda.
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** In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was always TheAce. It's possible that she's they're only like that around Eda.
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** In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was always TheAce. It's possible that she's only like that around Eda.
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* WhamEpisode: Raine is, at least as of this episode, aware of what Terra is doing with her teas and is using their trick of altering drinks to secretly neutralize its mind-wiping power before drinking them so as to trick her into thinking that they're still brainwashed. An abomination user, who is implied to be Darius, is now working with them to oppose the Day of Unity, and we see a document of what Belos is planning with a "Draining Spell", channeling the magic towards the eclipse for an unknown purpose.
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* WhamEpisode: Raine is, at least as of this episode, aware of what Terra is doing with her teas and is using their trick of altering drinks to secretly neutralize its mind-wiping power before drinking them so as to trick her into thinking that they're still brainwashed. An abomination user, who is implied to be Darius, is now working with them to oppose the Day of Unity, and we see a document of what Belos is planning with a "Draining Spell", channeling the magic towards the eclipse for an unknown purpose. And Raine doesn't want to involve Eda so she won't get hurt.
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** In light of Raine's PretendToBeBrainwashed routine in this episode, the events of "Follies at the Coven Day Parade" take on a whole new meaning. Raine whistles just before drinking Terra's tea in that episode, and it also explains their tears after Eda left them at the alley.
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** In light of Raine's PretendToBeBrainwashed routine in this episode, the events of "Follies at the Coven Day Parade" take on a whole new meaning. Raine whistles just before drinking Terra's tea in that episode, and it also explains their tears after Eda left them at the alley. And on a less spoilery note, a picture of the IFWOT ribbon was included in Eda's file on them.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Principal Faust threatening the students with either detention or suspension for "being late to being ''early''" establishes how much of an EvilPrincipal he is.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Principal Faust threatening the students with either detention or suspension for "being late to being ''early''" establishes how much of an EvilPrincipal he is.
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* {{Lunacy}}: A discussion Eda and Lilith have at the beginning of the story shows that potion making can impacted by celestial alignment. Eda answers a trick question that, depending on the phase of the moon, a certain ingredient will have less potency and need to be doubled up proportion for any recipes that call for it.
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* WhenThePlanetsAlign: A discussion Eda and Lilith have at the beginning of the story shows that potion making is impacted by celestial alignment. Eda answers a trick question that, depending on the phase of the moon, a certain ingredient will have less potency and need to be doubled up in any recipes that call for it.
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* WhenThePlanetsAlign: A discussion Eda and Lilith have at the beginning of the story shows that potion making is impacted by celestial alignment. Eda answers a trick question that, depending on the phase of the moon, a certain ingredient will have less potency and need to be doubled up in any recipes that call for it.
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* {{Retcon}}: In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was always TheAce.
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** In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was alwaysTheAce.TheAce.
** "Something Ventured, Someone Framed" showed a picture of Bump from Eda's schooldays, already wearing the principal's uniform and looking identical to how he does in the present day. This episode retcons that he was actually only vice principal, and looked significantly younger.
** In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was always
** "Something Ventured, Someone Framed" showed a picture of Bump from Eda's schooldays, already wearing the principal's uniform and looking identical to how he does in the present day. This episode retcons that he was actually only vice principal, and looked significantly younger.
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* TheAce: Raine Whispers is revealed to have been this as a teenager. Not only were they as brilliant as Eda, but they were athletic and academically motivated, too.
* {{Retcon}}: In "Eda's Requiem," Raine is introduced having terrible [[PerformanceAnxiety stage fright]], [[LuminescentBlush flustering easily]], and Eda remarks multiple times how they TookALevelInBadass. Raine not only shows ''none'' of these qualities as a teen in the flashback, but Eda now acts as though Raine was always TheAce.
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** In "Any Sport in a Storm," Darius declined to bring in Hunter's (unwilling) recruits for the Emperor's Coven on the grounds that they already have plenty, disliked Hunter's YesMan attitude yet approved when he GrewASpine, and promised to keep his Palisman a secret. If the miniature Abomination sporting Darius' signature hairstyle is any indication, he's been defying the Emperor's will all along.
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** Speaking of Darius, in "Any Sport in a Storm" he declined to bring in Hunter's (unwilling) recruits on the grounds that they already had plenty, approved when Hunter GrewASpine, and promised to keep his Palisman a secret. TheReveal puts these scenes in a new light.
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* StealthPun: Eda agrees to a wager with Principal Faust to avoid being expelled. In other words, a FaustianBargain.
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* UriahGambit: A non-lethal version, but Faust is setting up Bump up to fail with Eda so that he has an excuse to fire him.
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* UriahGambit: A non-lethal version, but Faust is setting up Bump up to fail with Eda so that he has an excuse to fire him.
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* QuirkyBard: In-universe, the Bard Coven was seen as this until Raine Whispers gave them a good name. When they first met Eda, Raine even groused that most people dismissed Bard Magic as silly and useless without giving it a chance.
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* TallPoppySyndrome: In the flashback, Raine's classmates are extra eager to take them out because they resent how accomplished they are.
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* AbsenteeActor: This is the first episode since "Through the Looking Glass Ruins" where Amity isn't so much as mentioned.
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* AbsenteeActor: This is the first episode since "Through the Looking Glass Ruins" "Keeping Up A-fear-ances" where Amity isn't so much as mentioned.
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** Eda and Lilith talk about Coven tryouts in seven months. The viewer knows this will go horribly wrong.
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** Eda and Lilith talk about passing Coven tryouts in seven months. The viewer knows this will go horribly wrong.
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* EvilPrincipal: Faust is obsessed with with punishing his students over educating them, and [[ItsAllAboutMe takes credit]] for the accomplishments of the few who do manage to excel. The only reason why he didn't expel Eda ages ago is because [[KeepingTheEnemyClose he wanted to "know evil" by studying it up close]], and has used her and her mischief as a case study.
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* EvilPrincipal: Faust is obsessed with with punishing his students over educating them, and [[ItsAllAboutMe takes credit]] for the accomplishments of the few who do manage to excel. The only reason why he didn't expel Eda ages ago is because [[KeepingTheEnemyClose he wanted to "know evil" by studying it up close]], and has used her and her mischief as a case study.
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* HourglassPlot: Back when they were dating, Eda often shut Raine out when she actually needed them most in an effort to not hurt them. Now, Raine is one shutting Eda out when they need her most in an effort to prevent hurting her.
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* HourglassPlot: Back when they were dating, Eda often shut Raine out when she actually needed them most in an effort to not hurt them. Now, Raine is the one shutting Eda out when they need her most in an effort to prevent hurting her.
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* LapPillow: Luz is shown sleeping with her head on Eda's lap when the story ends.
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* SleepCute: Luz, King, Hooty, even the echo mouse are all sleeping while surrounding Eda near the end.
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* HourglassPlot: Back when they were dating, Eda often shut Raine out when she actually needed them most in an effort to not hurt them. Now, Raine is one shutting Eda out when they need her most in an effort to prevent hurting her.
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** In "Any Port in a Storm," Darius declined to bring in Hunter's (unwilling) recruits for the Emperor's Coven on the grounds that they already have plenty, disliked Hunter's YesMan attitude yet approved when he GrewASpine, and promised to keep his Palisman a secret. If the miniature Abomination sporting Darius' signature hairstyle is any indication, he's been defying the Emperor's will all along.
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** In "Any Port Sport in a Storm," Darius declined to bring in Hunter's (unwilling) recruits for the Emperor's Coven on the grounds that they already have plenty, disliked Hunter's YesMan attitude yet approved when he GrewASpine, and promised to keep his Palisman a secret. If the miniature Abomination sporting Darius' signature hairstyle is any indication, he's been defying the Emperor's will all along.
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** Faust clearly enjoys the thought of getting rid of Bump but also separating Eda from Lilith. He even tells her that he will savor her expulsion.
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** Faust clearly enjoys the thought of not only getting rid of Bump but also separating Eda from Lilith. He even tells her that he will savor her expulsion.
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* {{Sadist}}: Terra not only pits all the students against each other in a game of "Covens vs. Wilds" (threatening to turn the losers into mulch), she also attempts to poison everyone after Eda and Raine stand up to her.
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** Faust clearly enjoys the thought of getting rid of Bump but also separating Eda from Lilith. He even tells her that he will savor her expulsion.
** Terra not only pits all the students against each other in a game of "Covens vs. Wilds" (threatening to turn the losers into mulch), she also attempts to poison everyone after Eda and Raine stand up to her.
** Faust clearly enjoys the thought of getting rid of Bump but also separating Eda from Lilith. He even tells her that he will savor her expulsion.
** Terra not only pits all the students against each other in a game of "Covens vs. Wilds" (threatening to turn the losers into mulch), she also attempts to poison everyone after Eda and Raine stand up to her.
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* UriahGambit: A non-lethal version, but Faust is setting up Bump up to fail with Eda so that he has an excuse to fire him.
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* AbusiveParents: One of the students at the program (possibly Perry Porter) states that his parents told him to come back with a blue ribbon, or not come back at all.
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* AbusiveParents: One of the students at the program (possibly Perry Porter) states that his parents told him to come back with a blue ribbon, or not come back at all.
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** When Eda fails to get her ribbon, Bump remarks that she'll probably end up selling trash at the Night Market.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Principal Faust threatening the students with either detention or suspension establishes how much of an EvilPrincipal he is.
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** In "Any Port in a Storm," Darius declined to bring in Hunter's (unwilling) recruits for the Emperor's Coven on the grounds that they already have plenty, disliked Hunter's YesMan attitude yet approved when he GrewASpine, and promised to keep his Palisman a secret. If the miniature Abomination sporting Darius' signature hairstyle is any indication, he's been defying the Emperor's will all along.
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* BlasphemousBoast: When the young Clawthorne sisters are talking about everything they'll accomplish when they join the Emperor's Coven, Eda finishes it off by saying that "even the Titan will gasp in fear."
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* CrushBlush: Eda's cheeks briefly flush after Raine catches and returns one of her impromptu Grudgby fastballs.