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* {{Hypocrite}}: Alex's interview on TV where she talks about how she started the Don't Bothers and that their success is due to their focus on fun is undercut by the fact she's started pushing the kids into training more like the Ducks. Lauren acknowledges it quite nicely as the kids watch the interview.
-->'''Lauren:''' What a load of [[PrecisionFStrike crap]].
-->'''Lauren:''' What a load of [[PrecisionFStrike crap]].
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* UnderminedByReality: InUniverse. Alex's interview on TV where she talks about how she started the Don't Bothers and that their success is due to their focus on fun is undercut by the fact she's started pushing the kids into training more like the Ducks. Lauren acknowledges it quite nicely as the kids watch the interview.
-->'''Lauren:''' What a load of [[PrecisionFStrike crap]].
-->'''Lauren:''' What a load of [[PrecisionFStrike crap]].
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* BaitAndSwitchComment: Alex offers Evan and Sofi nachos. Except it's a new recipe... broccoli instead of chips, and no cheese.
--> '''Evan''': So it's just broccoli.
--> '''Evan''': So it's just broccoli.
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* BaitAndSwitchComment: Alex offers Evan and Sofi nachos. Except it's a new recipe... broccoli instead of chips, and no cheese.
--> '''Evan''': So it's just broccoli.cheese. [[BecameTheirOwnAntithesis Because she's trying superfoods]].
--> '''Evan''': So it's just broccoli.
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--> '''Evan''': So it's just broccoli.
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* BaitAndSwitchComment: Alex offers Evan and Sofi nachos. Except it's a new recipe... broccoli instead of chips, and no cheese.
--> '''Evan''': So it's just broccoli.
--> '''Evan''': So it's just broccoli.
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* OhCrap: Nick is positively alarmed at the idea of taking a potential game-winning shot; indeed, the scene plays out more like a DreamSequence (complete with InnerMonologue and slow-motion development) than an actual hockey play.
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* OhCrap: Nick is positively alarmed at the idea possibility of taking a potential game-winning shot; indeed, the scene plays out more like a DreamSequence (complete with InnerMonologue and slow-motion development) than an actual hockey play.
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* OhCrap: Nick is positively alarmed at the idea of taking a potential game-winning shot; indeed, the scene plays out more like a DreamSequence (complete with inner monologue and slow-motion development) than an actual hockey play.
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* OhCrap: Nick is positively alarmed at the idea of taking a potential game-winning shot; indeed, the scene plays out more like a DreamSequence (complete with inner monologue InnerMonologue and slow-motion development) than an actual hockey play.
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* OhCrap: Nick is positively alarmed at the idea of taking a potential game-winning shot; indeed, the scene plays out more like a DreamSequence (complete with inner monologue and slow-motion action) than an actual hockey play.
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* OhCrap: Nick is positively alarmed at the idea of taking a potential game-winning shot; indeed, the scene plays out more like a DreamSequence (complete with inner monologue and slow-motion action) development) than an actual hockey play.
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* OhCrap: Nick is positively alarmed at the idea of him taking a potential game-winning shot; indeed, the scene plays out more like a DreamSequence (complete with inner monologue and slow-motion action) than an actual hockey play.
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* OhCrap: Nick is positively alarmed at the idea of him taking a potential game-winning shot; indeed, the scene plays out more like a DreamSequence (complete with inner monologue and slow-motion action) than an actual hockey play.
