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* DownerEnding: Unless the Moneans get their act together, their planet is likely doomed.
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* DownerEnding: Unless the Moneans get their act together, within months their planet entire way of life is likely doomed.
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters are when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry" after missing her cue.
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters are is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry" after missing her cue.
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* AlienLunch: Tom is confined to a leola root stew diet. The horror...
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* AlienLunch: Tom is confined restricted to a leola root stew diet. The horror...
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* RuleOfSymbolism: Tom Paris saving the day in the BlackAndWhiteMorality world of ''Captain Proton'', versus the complications of planetary politics that Starfleet has to deal with.
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* DescriptionCut: Tom says that it all began with him doing something he would consider a complete waste of time. Cut to Tom as ''Captain Proton!''
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* DescriptionCut: Tom says that it all began with him doing something he his father would consider a complete waste of time. Cut to Tom as ''Captain Proton!''
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* DistressedDude: Proton's trusty SideKick Buster has been captured by the Twin Mistresses of Evil.
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-->'''BURKUS:''' I'm supposed to go back and explain this to [[The47Society forty-seven]] regional sovereigns? They'll pass their first unanimous resolution, calling for my head.
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-->'''BURKUS:''' I'm supposed to go back and explain this to [[The47Society forty-seven]] regional sovereigns? They'll pass their first unanimous resolution, calling for my head. head!
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* CouldSayItBut
-->'''PARIS:''' I'm not supposed to get involved in the internal affairs of alien worlds. Unless, of course, someone makes a direct request...
-->'''PARIS:''' I'm not supposed to get involved in the internal affairs of alien worlds. Unless, of course, someone makes a direct request...
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-->'''BURKUS:''' I'm supposed to go back and explain this to [[The47Society forty-seven]] regional sovereigns? They'll pass their first unanimous resolution, calling for my head.
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* AttackHello: The first thing the water planet aliens do is fire upon ''Voyager'', which [[CurbStompBattle casually knocks out their weapon systems]], causing them to try communication instead.
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* AttackHello: The first thing the water planet aliens Moneans do is fire upon ''Voyager'', which [[CurbStompBattle casually knocks out their weapon systems]], causing them to try communication instead.
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters are when one of them says, "Sorry, Harry" after missing her cue.
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters are when one of them Megan says, "Sorry, Harry" after missing her cue.
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* DownerEnding: Unless the aliens get their act together, the planet is likely doomed.
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* DownerEnding: Unless the aliens Moneans get their act together, the their planet is likely doomed.
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* WithAllDueRespect: Done without respect, as per usual.
-->'''BURKUS:''' With all due respect, who are you to tell us what to do with our ocean?\\
'''PARIS:''' With all due respect, [[{{Precursors it's not your ocean]].
-->'''BURKUS:''' With all due respect, who are you to tell us what to do with our ocean?\\
'''PARIS:''' With all due respect, [[{{Precursors it's not your ocean]].
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* MeaningfulLook: Chakotay gives a WTF? look when Captain Janeway offers to give a tour of ''Voyager'' to the aliens who've just fired on them. Fortunately they're not a VillainOfTheWeek.
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* TheTriple: Jenny is quiet, artistic and has a cute dimple on her cheek.
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* SpeakInUnison: Demonica and Malicia pout in unison.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: While chained up by two gorgeous twins Harry says, "Don't worry about me, Proton. [[ADateWithRosiePalms I can handle myself!]]" Not with your arms chained you won't.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: While chained up by playing on the holodeck with two gorgeous twins Harry says, "Don't worry about me, Proton. [[ADateWithRosiePalms I can handle myself!]]" Not with your arms chained you won't.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: While chained up by two gorgeous twins Harry says, "Don't worry about me, Proton. [[ADateWithRosiePalms I can handle myself!]]" Not with your arms chained you won't.
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* BlatantLies: Tom starts doing push-ups in his cell. He's only got to three when Neelix enters, whereupon he immediately jumps to 98...99...100.
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* InsigniaRipOffRitual: The episode opens on Janeway removing one of Tom's pips, demoting him to Ensign.
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* InsigniaRipOffRitual: The episode opens on Janeway removing one of Tom's pips, demoting him to Ensign. The commbadge he removes himself, as he enters the brig.
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* AttackHelloAttackHello: The first thing the water planet aliens do is fire upon ''Voyager'', which [[CurbStompBattle casually knocks out their weapon systems]], causing them to try communication instead.
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* ThatsAnOrder: B'Elanna gets her revenge for Tom pulling rank in "Displaced"
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* ThatsAnOrder: B'Elanna gets her revenge for Tom pulling rank in "Displaced""Displaced".
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Tom still feels the need to connect to his estranged father.
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* DownerEnding: Unless the aliens get their act together, the planet is likely doomed.
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* ThatsAnOrder: B'Elanna gets her revenge for Tom pulling rank in "Displaced"
-->'''Torres:''' Rumor has it you're free for dinner.
-->'''Paris:''' Gee, I don't know. Are you sure you want to be seen associating with an ex-con?
-->'''Torres:''' My quarters, 0700. That's an order...''Ensign''.
-->'''Torres:''' Rumor has it you're free for dinner.
-->'''Paris:''' Gee, I don't know. Are you sure you want to be seen associating with an ex-con?
-->'''Torres:''' My quarters, 0700. That's an order...''Ensign''.
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* MilitaryMashupMachine: The ''Delta Flyer'' is modified to operate underwater, making it a combination spacecraft/submersible.
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters are when one of them says, "Sorry, Harry" after missing her cue.
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* MindProbe
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* AttackHello
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Tom Paris screws the PrimeDirective to try to save an ocean planet that was slowly being destroyed by an oxygen-mining operation. He gets a demotion and thirty days in the brig for his effort. And he didn't even save the planet.
* SingleBiomePlanet: ''Voyager'' comes across an ocean world with no landmass whatsoever. In its center is a machine created by {{Precursors}}, that stops the water from dissipating out into space.
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* EasilyForgiven: Averted unlike in Season One; with the crew now firmly under her control, Captain Janeway can afford to be a bit more harsh on a crewmember who steals a shuttle and takes off on a private mission. Unfortunately StatusQuoIsGod, so Tom eventually gets his rank back so he's on an equal footing with B'Elanna.
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* DescriptionCutDescriptionCut: Tom says that it all began with him doing something he would consider a complete waste of time. Cut to Tom as ''Captain Proton!''
* FatalAttractor: Lampshaded by Tom re Harry.
* FatalAttractor: Lampshaded by Tom re Harry.
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Tom Paris is demoted to Ensign and confined to the brig for thirty days. While there he dictates a letter to his father about how this came about.
!!This episode has the following tropes:
* AlienLunch: Tom is confined to a leola root stew diet. The horror...
* BatmanCanBreatheInSpace: Captain Proton is introduced flying through outer space protected by a [[AdventurerOutfit leather jacket and flying goggles]].
* DescriptionCut
* FemmeFatale: The Twin Mistresses of Evil, Demonica and Malicia.
* TheGhost: The oft-mentioned but never seen Delaney Twins finally make a one-off appearance.
* InsigniaRipOffRitual: The episode opens on Janeway removing one of Tom's pips, demoting him to Ensign.
* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: Averted; the Doctor enjoys informing Paris that he's not indispensable at the helm.
* PrimeDirective
* ShowWithinAShot
* TooKinkyToTorture: Harry Kim greatly enjoys being chained up by the [[TwinThreesomeFantasy Delaney Sisters]] and threatened with mental enslavement via their evil [[MindProbe Brain Probe]], so much so that he [[UnwantedRescue insists Captain Proton not be hasty in his rescue]].
* VoiceoverLetter: Tom is actually dictating the letter on his PADD, producing the same effect.
* WhatTheHellHero
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!!This episode has the following tropes:
* AlienLunch: Tom is confined to a leola root stew diet. The horror...
* BatmanCanBreatheInSpace: Captain Proton is introduced flying through outer space protected by a [[AdventurerOutfit leather jacket and flying goggles]].
* DescriptionCut
* FemmeFatale: The Twin Mistresses of Evil, Demonica and Malicia.
* TheGhost: The oft-mentioned but never seen Delaney Twins finally make a one-off appearance.
* InsigniaRipOffRitual: The episode opens on Janeway removing one of Tom's pips, demoting him to Ensign.
* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: Averted; the Doctor enjoys informing Paris that he's not indispensable at the helm.
* PrimeDirective
* ShowWithinAShot
* TooKinkyToTorture: Harry Kim greatly enjoys being chained up by the [[TwinThreesomeFantasy Delaney Sisters]] and threatened with mental enslavement via their evil [[MindProbe Brain Probe]], so much so that he [[UnwantedRescue insists Captain Proton not be hasty in his rescue]].
* VoiceoverLetter: Tom is actually dictating the letter on his PADD, producing the same effect.
* WhatTheHellHero
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