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* RuleOfCool: Lampshaded by Tom Paris, who wants to add cool-looking dynametric tail fins to the ''Flyer''.
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* RuleOfCool: Lampshaded by Tom Paris, who wants to add cool-looking dynametric 'dynametric tail fins fins' to the ''Flyer''.
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* LensmanArmsRace: Seven scans the Malon vessel with the Astrometrics sensors, and finds they're building their own vessel.
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* LensmanArmsRace: Seven scans the Malon vessel with the Astrometrics sensors, and finds they're building their own vessel.vessel, which will be ready before the Delta Flyer.
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* InfiniteSuppliesInfiniteSupplies: Enough to build a shuttle of entirely new design. At least this one is a more permanent fixture, being too cool to abandon after every shuttle crash.
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* LensmanArmsRaceLensmanArmsRace: Seven scans the Malon vessel with the Astrometrics sensors, and finds they're building their own vessel.
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* UnfinishedUntestedUsedAnyway: The Delta Flyer in launched before they've solved the micro-fracture problem. If B'Elanna hadn't insisted on coming along, the crew would be dead.
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* DeathSeeker: B'Elanna starts engaging in higher- and higher-risk activities on the holodeck with the safeties off. It's pretty clear that if Chakotay hadn't stepped in, she would have kept going until she got herself killed. B'Elanna however denies she's trying to commit suicide by proxy, she's just trying to feel something, anything at all, even if it's only physical pain.
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* DeathSeeker: B'Elanna starts engaging in higher- and higher-risk activities on the holodeck with the safeties off. It's pretty clear that if Chakotay hadn't stepped in, she would have kept going until she got herself killed. B'Elanna however denies she's trying to commit suicide by proxy, she's just trying to feel something, [[EmptyShell anything at all, all]], even if it's only physical pain.
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-->'''TORRES:''' When I was six, my father walked out on me. When I was nineteen, I got kicked out of Starfleet. A few years later, I got separated from the Maquis. And just when I start to feel safe, you tell me that all of our old friends have been slaughtered. The way I figure it, I've lost every family I've ever had.
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-->'''TORRES:''' When I was six, my father walked out on me. When I was nineteen, I got kicked out of Starfleet. A few years later, I got separated from the Maquis. And just when I start to feel safe, [[EverybodysDeadDave you tell me that all of our old friends have been slaughtered.slaughtered]]. The way I figure it, I've lost every family I've ever had.
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* RuleOfCool: Lampshaded by Tom Paris.
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* RuleOfCool: Lampshaded by Tom Paris.Paris, who wants to add cool-looking dynametric tail fins to the ''Flyer''.
-->'''TUVOK:''' Your embellishments are purely decorative. They serve no practical purpose.\\
'''PARIS:''' I beg to differ. If we make this thing look mean enough, other ships are going to think twice before taking us on.
-->'''TUVOK:''' Your embellishments are purely decorative. They serve no practical purpose.\\
'''PARIS:''' I beg to differ. If we make this thing look mean enough, other ships are going to think twice before taking us on.
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-->'''PARIS:''' Let's face it; Class-two shuttles just don't cut it in the Delta Quadrant. We've needed something bigger and better since we got here.
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* TechnologyPorn: Tom's enthusive description of the ''Delta Flyer'' verges on this.
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* TechnologyPorn: Tom's enthusive description of TechnologyPorn
-->'''PARIS:''' Behold the''Delta Flyer'' verges Delta Flyer. Ultra-aerodynamic contours, retractable nacelles, parametallic hull plating, unimatrix shielding based on this.Tuvok's brilliant design for the multispatial probe, and a Borg-inspired weapons system.
-->'''PARIS:''' Behold the
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* MeaningfulLook: Janeway orders Chakotay to take over the shuttle mission. B'Elanna insists on going instead. When Chakotay returns to the bridge, Janeway doesn't have to ask how or why he hasn't carried out her order.
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* MeaningfulLook: Janeway orders Chakotay to take over the shuttle mission. B'Elanna insists on going instead. When Chakotay returns to the bridge, Janeway doesn't have to ask how or why he hasn't carried out her order.order; a single look is enough.
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* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows a lot more animation lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] or Chakotay that there's nothing wrong with her.
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* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows a lot more animation when lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] or Chakotay that there's nothing wrong with her.
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* TechnologyPorn: Tom's enthusiasm for the DF.
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* TechnologyPorn: Tom's enthusiasm for enthusive description of the DF.''Delta Flyer'' verges on this.
-->'''TORRES:''' When I was six, my father walked out on me. When I was nineteen, I got kicked out of Starfleet. A few years later, I got separated from the Maquis. And just when I start to feel safe, you tell me that all of our old friends have been slaughtered. The way I figure it, I've lost every family I've ever had.
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* WorstAidWorstAid: B'Elanna treats her own injuries so no-one will know what she's up to.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' Some of these injuries were life-threatening, B'Elanna.\\
'''TORRES:''' Do I look like I'm dying?\\
'''JANEWAY:''' The Doctor says many of the wounds were treated by someone with the medical expertise of a first-year nursing student.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' Some of these injuries were life-threatening, B'Elanna.\\
'''TORRES:''' Do I look like I'm dying?\\
'''JANEWAY:''' The Doctor says many of the wounds were treated by someone with the medical expertise of a first-year nursing student.
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* TechnologyPorn: Tom's enthusiasm for the DF.
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* KickTheSonOfTheBitch: The Malon shuttle gets stuck in the gas giant. Instead of offering to help, Janeway just orders ''Voyager'' to leave.
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* KickTheSonOfTheBitch: KickTheSonOfABitch: The Malon shuttle gets stuck in the gas giant. Instead of offering to help, Janeway just orders ''Voyager'' to leave.
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!!This episode has the following tropes:
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* CoolShipCoolShip / ShinyLookingSpaceships
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* DeathSeeker
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* DeathSeekerDeathSeeker: B'Elanna starts engaging in higher- and higher-risk activities on the holodeck with the safeties off. It's pretty clear that if Chakotay hadn't stepped in, she would have kept going until she got herself killed. B'Elanna however denies she's trying to commit suicide by proxy, she's just trying to feel something, anything at all, even if it's only physical pain.
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* EmptyShell
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* SurvivorsGuilt
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* ScrewYourUltimatum: The captain of a Malon freighter holds Voyager responsible for the destruction of another of their ships and announces that they're taking Voyager's new probe as compensation and demands that they immediately leave orbit of the gas giant in which it's currently trapped (presumably under threat of violence). Janeway, never one to take anyone's crap, reminds him that the other ship tried to steal their probe and was destroyed going into the gas giant after it, against Voyager's warnings. When he continues to press the matter, insisting that their people are salvage experts and Voyager has little chance of getting to the probe first in any event, Janeway just smirks and busts out this little gem:
-->"We have a little expertise of our own; we're a very determined crew, so ''my'' suggestion is that ''you'' leave orbit, and in the future, if you come across anything that bears the insignia of the USS ''Voyager'', head in the other direction."
-->"We have a little expertise of our own; we're a very determined crew, so ''my'' suggestion is that ''you'' leave orbit, and in the future, if you come across anything that bears the insignia of the USS ''Voyager'', head in the other direction."
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* ADayInTheLimelight: The focus of this episode is on B'Elanna and Chakotay.
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* ChekhovsGun: One of the components B'Elanna uses to assemble an improvised forcefield generator is being handled by Tuvok earlier.
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* GadgeteerGenius: When the microfractures threaten to rupture the hull on the ''Delta Flyer'', B'Elanna sets about MacGyvering up a forcefield out of various shuttle components.
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* KickTheSonOfTheBitch: The Malon shuttle gets stuck in the gas giant. Instead of offering to help, Janeway just orders ''Voyager'' to leave.
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* TooDumbToLiveTooDumbToLive: The first Malon vessel implodes while pursuing the probe into the gas giant's atmosphere.
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* LeaveMeAlone: Despite the presence of ParentalSubstitute Janeway, FireForgedFriend Chakotay, her beau Tom Paris, Neelix who offered himself as TheConfident in "Day of Honor", and the Doctor, B'Elanna never goes to any of them for help.
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* LeaveMeAlone: Despite the presence of ParentalSubstitute Janeway, FireForgedFriend Chakotay, her beau Tom Paris, Neelix who (who offered himself as TheConfident TheConfidant in "Day of Honor", Honor"), and the Doctor, B'Elanna never goes to any of them for help.
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* BadassBoastActionGirl: In one of her programs, B'Elanna takes on Cardassian soldiers twice her size.
* BadassBoast: Captain Janeway is no stranger to these, but this one is a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
--> '''Janeway''': Well, Mister...?
--> '''Malon''': Vrelk. Controller Vrelk.
--> '''Janeway''': ''Vrelk''. We have a little expertise of our own; we're a very determined crew, so ''my'' suggestion is that ''you'' leave orbit, and in the future, if you come across anything that bears the insignia of the USS ''Voyager'', head in the other direction.
* BadassBoast: Captain Janeway is no stranger to these, but this one is a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
--> '''Janeway''': Well, Mister...?
--> '''Malon''': Vrelk. Controller Vrelk.
--> '''Janeway''': ''Vrelk''. We have a little expertise of our own; we're a very determined crew, so ''my'' suggestion is that ''you'' leave orbit, and in the future, if you come across anything that bears the insignia of the USS ''Voyager'', head in the other direction.
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* LeaveMeAlone: Despite the presence of ParentalSubstitute Janeway, FireForgedFriend Chakotay, her beau Tom Paris, Neelix who offered himself as TheConfident in "Day of Honor", and the Doctor, B'Elanna never goes to any of them for help.
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* The47SocietyThe47Society: B'Elanna ran the Maquis massacre program for 47 seconds, then never played it again.
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* WhenSheSmiles at the end of the episode it's a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* MeaningfulLook: Janeway orders Chakotay to take over the shuttle mission. B'Elanna insists on going instead. When Chakotay returns to the bridge, Janeway doesn't have to ask how or why he hasn't carried out her order.
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* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows more animation lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] or Chakotay that there's nothing wrong with her.
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* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows a lot more animation lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] or Chakotay that there's nothing wrong with her.
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* The47Society
* EverybodysDeadDave
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* SpacePiratesSalvagePirates
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* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows more animation lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] in Sickbay that she had for the entire episode to that point.
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* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows more animation lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] in Sickbay or Chakotay that she had for the entire episode to that point.there's nothing wrong with her.
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* BerserkButton: Averted; everyone is surprised when B'Elanna does react to events she'd normally blow her stack over, like Seven criticising her design or Janeway pulling her off the ''Delta Flyer'' project.
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* BerserkButton: Averted; everyone is surprised when B'Elanna does doesn't react to events she'd normally blow her stack over, like Seven criticising criticizing her design or Janeway pulling her off the ''Delta Flyer'' project.
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''Voyager'' finds itself in conflict with Malon salvage vessels who are trying to steal their multi-spatial probe, trapped in the upper layers of a gas giant. Tom Paris suggests they build a new, enhanced shuttlecraft to get it back. But the crew become concerned about the behaviour of their Chief Engineer, who keeps engaging in high-risk activities on the holodeck.
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* BadassBoast
* BerserkButton: Averted; everyone is surprised when B'Elanna does react to events she'd normally blow her stack over, like Seven criticising her design or Janeway pulling her off the ''Delta Flyer'' project.
* CaptainCrash: The ''Delta Flyer'' is designed to avert this.
* ComfortFood: B'Elanna asks Neelix for banana pancakes, just like her grandmother used to make.
* CoolShip
* DeathSeeker
* HeroicBSOD
* InfiniteSupplies
* LensmanArmsRace
* MacGuffin: The multi-spatial probe.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness
* RuleOfCool: Lampshaded by Tom Paris.
* SpacePirates
* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows more animation lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] in Sickbay that she had for the entire episode to that point.
* StraightMan: Neelix tries this, and waits for the ObligatoryJoke re his cooking. B'Elanna doesn't respond.
* TooDumbToLive
* WorstAid
!!!This episode has the following tropes:
* BadassBoast
* BerserkButton: Averted; everyone is surprised when B'Elanna does react to events she'd normally blow her stack over, like Seven criticising her design or Janeway pulling her off the ''Delta Flyer'' project.
* CaptainCrash: The ''Delta Flyer'' is designed to avert this.
* ComfortFood: B'Elanna asks Neelix for banana pancakes, just like her grandmother used to make.
* CoolShip
* DeathSeeker
* HeroicBSOD
* InfiniteSupplies
* LensmanArmsRace
* MacGuffin: The multi-spatial probe.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness
* RuleOfCool: Lampshaded by Tom Paris.
* SpacePirates
* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows more animation lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] in Sickbay that she had for the entire episode to that point.
* StraightMan: Neelix tries this, and waits for the ObligatoryJoke re his cooking. B'Elanna doesn't respond.
* TooDumbToLive
* WorstAid
