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-->'''Mariner:''' See this bad boy? Tentacle guy, bunch of arms. Stabbed me with a barnacle blade. Check it out-- Magus III, Nanibia Prime, [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Scottsdale]]. That was a mess. I ''earned'' every one in high-concept fights just like this one.
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-->'''Mariner:''' See this bad boy? Tentacle guy, bunch of arms. Stabbed me with a barnacle blade. Check it out-- Magus III, Nanibia Prime, [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers [[TheTriple Scottsdale]]. That was a mess. I ''earned'' every one in high-concept fights just like this one.
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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Mariner rattles off the locations where she got her scars: Magus III, Nanibia Prime, and Scottsdale, Arizona. That last one was a mess, apparently.
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* TheTriple: Mariner rattles off the locations where she got her scars: Magus III, Nanibia Prime, and Scottsdale, Arizona. That last one was a mess, apparently.
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* OnlySaneMan: Vindor is the only one among the Gelrakians who feels that TrailByCombat and crushing people under a giant crystal might not be the most fair justice system.
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* OnlySaneMan: Vindor is the only one among the Gelrakians who feels that TrailByCombat TrialByCombat and crushing people under a giant crystal might not be the most fair justice system.
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* OnlySaneMan: Vindor is the only one among the Gelrakians who feels that TrailByCombat and crushing people under a giant crystal might not be the most fair justice system.
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* BoardingPod: The Gelrakians use them to board the Cerritos.
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* RuleBreakerRuleNamer: An inversion as The Biomler Effect is meant to encourage buffer time so people can have a break between tasks. Biomler, being the rule happy guy he is, isn’t happy being associated with the effect.
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* BadassBoast: Ransom tells Vindor that he doesn't even need a battle blade.
--> (''after dropping the battle blade'') "Come on big guy. I only need my ''hands'' for this one!"
--> (''after dropping the battle blade'') "Come on big guy. I only need my ''hands'' for this one!"
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-->'''Ransom:''' ''(tears off his shirt)'' Let's do this!
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-->'''Ransom:''' ''(tears ''[tears off his shirt)'' shirt]'' Let's do this!
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* SoundEffectBleep:
-->'''Mariner:''' ''(to Ransom)'' I'm calling bull[bleep] on your whole thing here, sir.\\
-->'''Mariner:''' ''(to Ransom)'' I'm calling bull[bleep] on your whole thing here, sir.\\
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* SoundEffectBleep:
SoundEffectBleep: Comes up a few times in this episode.
-->'''Mariner:'''''(to Ransom)'' (''to Ransom'') I'm calling bull[bleep] on your whole thing here, sir.\\
-->'''Mariner:'''
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'''Mariner:''' ''(after Ransom stabs her in the foot)'' What the [bleep]?!\\
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'''Mariner:''' ''(after (''after Ransom stabs her in the foot)'' foot'') What the [bleep]?!\\
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'''T'Ana:''' ''(re Mariner's collection of scars)'' Congratulations, you look like a [bleep]ing scratching post.
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'''T'Ana:''' ''(re (''re Mariner's collection of scars)'' scars'') Congratulations, you look like a [bleep]ing scratching post.
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* AngryAnimalisticGrowl: Dr. T'Ana viciously hisses when she performs a flying kick against three Gelrakian soldiers.
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* AngryAnimalisticGrowl: Dr. T'Ana viciously hisses when she performs a flying kick dropkick against three Gelrakian soldiers.
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--> '''Mariner:''' (''after seeing Ransom handle Vindor'') Whoa. That was actually kinda hot. Ugh! Get it together Mariner! Get it together! You are ''not'' into this. Come on.\\\
'''Ransom:''' (''after Mariner threatens him while being dragged to the brig'') Okay, that was kinda hot.
'''Ransom:''' (''after Mariner threatens him while being dragged to the brig'') Okay, that was kinda hot.
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-->'''Mariner:''' See this bad boy? Tentacle guy, bunch of arms. Stabbed me with a barnacle blade. Check it out-- Magus III, Nanibia Prime, [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Scottsdale]]. That was a mess. I earned every one in high-concept fights just like this one.
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-->'''Mariner:''' See this bad boy? Tentacle guy, bunch of arms. Stabbed me with a barnacle blade. Check it out-- Magus III, Nanibia Prime, [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Scottsdale]]. That was a mess. I earned ''earned'' every one in high-concept fights just like this one.
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'''Boimler:''' …Yeah, but I have a phaser. ''(fires at his would-be captors)'' These guys are lightweights.
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'''Boimler:''' …Yeah, but I have a phaser. ''(fires ''[fires at his would-be captors)'' captors]'' These guys are lightweights.lightweights. ''This'' is what the Red Alert's about?
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--> '''Gelrakian leader:''' You do realize you're fighting over who gets to be chopped in half by Vindor right?
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* PermissionToSpeakFreely:
-->'''Mariner:''' Permission to speak freely?\\
-->'''Mariner:''' Permission to speak freely?\\
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* PermissionToSpeakFreely:
PermissionToSpeakFreely: Mariner asks this after Ransom tells her that he's writing a speech that will help them get out of prison.
-->'''Mariner:''' A ''speech''? ''Seriously''? Permission to speak freely?\\
-->'''Mariner:''' A ''speech''? ''Seriously''? Permission to speak freely?\\
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A new work protocol eliminating "buffer time" has the Lower Decks crew running ragged as they try to keep up with their tightened schedules. Ensign Mariner and Commander Ransom's mutual lack of respect comes to a head during an away mission.
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After Captain Freeman establishes a new work protocol eliminating "buffer time"
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Ransom has this reaction, mid-CaptainsLog, when he sees that the ''Cerritos'''s high-profile diplomatic mission to Cardassia Prime has been cancelled.
-->'''Ransom:''' First officer's log, stardate 57501.4. The ''Cerritos'' is en route to Cardassia Prime for the most amazing reason. Captain Freeman is going to be instrumental in brokering peace between the-– uh, wait. Just… reading a little message here. Yada yada yada… oh. [[OhCrap Oh no.]] The captain is ''not'' gonna be happy about this.
-->'''Ransom:''' First officer's log, stardate 57501.4. The ''Cerritos'' is en route to Cardassia Prime for the most amazing reason. Captain Freeman is going to be instrumental in brokering peace between the-– uh, wait. Just… reading a little message here. Yada yada yada… oh. [[OhCrap Oh no.]] The captain is ''not'' gonna be happy about this.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Ransom has this reaction, mid-CaptainsLog, when he sees that the ''Cerritos'''s high-profile diplomatic mission to Cardassia Prime has been cancelled.
cancelled and realizes that Captain Freeman will be furious at this slight.
-->'''Ransom:''' First officer's log, stardate 57501.4. The ''Cerritos'' is en route to Cardassia Prime for the most amazing reason. Captain Freeman is going to be instrumental in brokering peace betweenthe-– the-- uh, wait. Just… Just... reading a little message here. Yada yada yada… yada... oh. [[OhCrap Oh no.]] The captain is ''not'' gonna be happy about this.
-->'''Ransom:''' First officer's log, stardate 57501.4. The ''Cerritos'' is en route to Cardassia Prime for the most amazing reason. Captain Freeman is going to be instrumental in brokering peace between
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** People need downtime. Constant work with not time to rest will lead to burnout and exhaustion.
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** People need downtime. Constant work with not no time to rest will lead to burnout and exhaustion.
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* AnAesop: A) People need downtime. B) Forcing people to rush through assigned tasks in order to meet arbitrary and/or unrealistic timelines will lead to hasty and sloppy work and dangerous workplace practices.
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* AnAesop: A) AnAesop:
** People need downtime.B) Constant work with not time to rest will lead to burnout and exhaustion.
** Forcing people to rush through assigned tasks in order to meet arbitrary and/or unrealistic timelines will lead to hasty and sloppy work and dangerous workplace practices.
** People need downtime.
** Forcing people to rush through assigned tasks in order to meet arbitrary and/or unrealistic timelines will lead to hasty and sloppy work and dangerous workplace practices.
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* PokemonSpeak: Vindor, the gigantic champion of the Gelrakians, only seems to [[PokemonSpeak say his own name]], usually in a bellowing roar. Subverted when Ransom takes him down -- Vindor admits that he just does it to play up the DumbMuscle angle, and loves reading.
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* PokemonSpeak: Vindor, the gigantic champion of the Gelrakians, only seems to [[PokemonSpeak say his own name]], name, usually in a bellowing roar. Subverted when Ransom takes him down -- Vindor admits that he just does it to play up the DumbMuscle angle, and loves reading.
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* DistantEpilogue: The last scene takes place an indeterminate but very long period of time in the future, where the episode's events [[FutureImperfect have become fuzzily-remembered legend]].
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* FantasticRacism: The Gelrakians ''really'' hate the wood-worshippers of Mavok Prime.
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* FantasticRacism: The crystal-revering Gelrakians ''really'' hate the wood-worshippers of Mavok Prime.Prime.
* FutureImperfect: In the DistantEpilogue, the episode's events are recalled in a very distorted manner where Boimler, the prissy and by-the-book ensign, is remembered as a chronically tardy and corner-cutting figure due to the Boimler Effect having overshadowed all other parts of his life.
* FutureImperfect: In the DistantEpilogue, the episode's events are recalled in a very distorted manner where Boimler, the prissy and by-the-book ensign, is remembered as a chronically tardy and corner-cutting figure due to the Boimler Effect having overshadowed all other parts of his life.
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* OneWordVocabulary: Vindor, the gigantic champion of the Gelrakians, only seems to [[PokemonSpeak say his own name]], usually in a bellowing roar. Subverted when Ransom takes him down-- Vindor admits that he just does it to play up the DumbMuscle angle, and loves reading.
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* PokemonSpeak: Vindor, the gigantic champion of the Gelrakians, only seems to [[PokemonSpeak say his own name]], usually in a bellowing roar. Subverted when Ransom takes him down -- Vindor admits that he just does it to play up the DumbMuscle angle, and loves reading.
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* ArtisticLicenseMartialArts: Crosses over into WhatTheFuAreYouDoing When Ransom goes into a TrialByCombat [[ShirtlessScene he tears off his shirt]] and proceeds to fight entirely with two-handed bludgeon attacks, as a reference to the often stilted choreography of
''The Original Series'' fist fights. Absolutely absurd, but surprisingly it actually works.
''The Original Series'' fist fights. Absolutely absurd, but surprisingly it actually works.
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* ArtisticLicenseMartialArts: Crosses over into WhatTheFuAreYouDoing When Ransom goes into a TrialByCombat [[ShirtlessScene he tears off his shirt]] and proceeds to fight entirely with two-handed bludgeon attacks, as a reference to the often stilted choreography of
of ''The Original Series'' fist fights. Absolutely absurd, but surprisingly it actually works.
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* CrystallineLandscape: Gelrak is covered in fields of towering purple crystals covered in complex carvings by the locals, who center every part of their culture around using and/or revering crystals.
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* CrystallineLandscape: CrystalLandscape: Gelrak is covered in fields of towering purple crystals covered in complex carvings by the locals, who center every part of their culture around using and/or revering crystals.
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* ArtisticLicenseMartialArts: Crosses over into WhatTheFuAreYouDoing. When Ransom goes into a TrialByCombat [[ShirtlessScene he tears off his shirt]] and proceeds to fight entirely with two-handed bludgeon attacks, as a reference to the often stilted choreography of The Original Series fist fights. Absolutely absurd, but surprisingly it actually works.
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* ArtisticLicenseMartialArts: Crosses over into WhatTheFuAreYouDoing. WhatTheFuAreYouDoing When Ransom goes into a TrialByCombat [[ShirtlessScene he tears off his shirt]] and proceeds to fight entirely with two-handed bludgeon attacks, as a reference to the often stilted choreography of The of
''The OriginalSeries Series'' fist fights. Absolutely absurd, but surprisingly it actually works.
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* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: Vindor, the colossal Gelrakian gladiator, fights using a huge club studded with crystalline spikes.
* CrystallineLandscape: Gelrak is covered in fields of towering purple crystals covered in complex carvings by the locals, who center every part of their culture around using and/or revering crystals.
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* DudeWheresMyRespect: Freeman feels like the ''Cerritos'' is considered a joke by the rest of Starfleet.
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* DudeWheresMyRespect: Freeman feels like the ''Cerritos'' is considered a joke by the rest of Starfleet.Starfleet, and enforces a set of extremely strict workspace regulations in an attempt to improve the ship's reputation.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Boimler is naturally very by-the-book and proves to be largely unaffected by the removal of Buffer Time. While the rest of the crew is too exhausted to handle the invaders, Boimler casually phasers the spear wielding Gelrakians and practically strolls through the chaos unaffected.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Boimler is naturally very by-the-book and proves to be largely unaffected by the removal of Buffer Time. While the rest of the crew is too exhausted to handle the invaders, Boimler casually phasers the spear wielding Gelrakians and practically strolls through the chaos unaffected.to get to the bridge.