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* RunningGag: This won't be the first time people in the studio forget they're miked and everyone in the control room can hear them.
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* RunningGag: This won't be the first last time people in the studio forget they're miked and everyone in the control room can hear them.
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-->'''Dana:''' No, that's not what I mean, Jeremy. I mean, you *like* Natalie, don't you?
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-->'''Dana:''' No, that's not what I mean, Jeremy. I mean, you *like* ''like'' Natalie, don't you?
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-->'''Casey:''' We were this close to beating Miami. This close. Do you know how many times we've beaten Miami?
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-->'''Casey:''' We were this ''this'' close to beating Miami. This ''This'' close. Do you know how many times we've beaten Miami?
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-->'''Casey:''' All right, all right, all right.
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-->'''Casey:''' [[{{Touche}} All right, all right, all right.right]].
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Written by Creator/MattTarses & Creator/AaronSorkin
Written by Creator/MattTarses & Creator/AaronSorkin
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Natalie is getting death threats and hate-filled e-mails from [[Recap/SportsNightS01E05MaryPatShelby her decision to press charges against Christian Patrick]], and it's affecting her work; she's been forgetting things. Everyone is trying to tiptoe around that so they don't make her feel any worse, but she's upset about that as well. Jeremy, meanwhile, is doing his best to make sure Natalie doesn't see any of those death threats or e-mails, even [[StalkerWithACrush breaking into Natalie's e-mail so he can see them before she does]], and depriving himself of sleep. Dan and Dana both tell Jeremy to get some sleep, but they also recognize, as Dana puts it, his feelings for Natalie are pure, so they suggest he give her a quiet dinner. At the end of a show, after Natalie has called everybody out for walking on eggshells around her, she storms out, only to find Jeremy passed on on the floor, with candles, a bottle of wine, some pillows, and takeout Chinese food around him. When Natalie finds out Jeremy did this because he likes her, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming she sits with him while he sleeps]], and Dana kindly but firmly tells Natalie to get her act together.
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Natalie is getting death threats and hate-filled e-mails from [[Recap/SportsNightS01E05MaryPatShelby her decision to press charges against Christian Patrick]], and it's affecting her work; she's been forgetting things. Everyone is trying to tiptoe around that so they don't make her feel any worse, but she's upset about that as well. Jeremy, meanwhile, is doing his best to make sure Natalie doesn't see any of those death threats or e-mails, even [[StalkerWithACrush breaking into Natalie's e-mail so he can see them before she does]], and depriving himself of sleep. Dan and Dana both tell Jeremy to get some sleep, but they also recognize, as Dana puts it, his feelings for Natalie are pure, so they suggest he give her a quiet dinner. At the end of a show, after Natalie has called everybody out for walking on eggshells around her, she storms out, only to find Jeremy passed on on the floor, with candles, a bottle of wine, some pillows, and takeout Chinese food around him. When Natalie finds out Jeremy did this because he likes her, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming she sits with him while he sleeps]], sleeps, and Dana kindly but firmly tells Natalie to get her act together.
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-->'''Dana:''' Let me answer that question in four parts, with the fourth part first and the third part last. The second part has five syllables...
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-->'''Dana:''' Let me answer that question in four parts, with the fourth part first and the third part last. The second part has five syllables...syllables-
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-->'''Jeremy:''' I've had this sense, it's a faint, subtle thing...thing-
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-->'''Gordon:''' I gotta tell you, when she wears that outfit...
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-->'''Gordon:''' I gotta tell you, when she wears that outfit...outfit-
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* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: Casey asks Dana to ask Chris, Will and Dave for the "crash and burn" sound effect when he does his latest slam of Rostenkowski; she says they don't have it, but when Casey does it, they say they have it.
** [[ItsWhatIDo It's what they do]].
** [[ItsWhatIDo It's what they do]].
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* StockSoundEffects: Casey asks Dana to ask Chris, Will and Dave for the "crash and burn" sound effect when he does his latest slam of Rostenkowski; she says they don't have it, but when Casey does it, they say they have it.
** [[ItsWhatIDo It's what they do]].
** [[ItsWhatIDo It's what they do]].
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** It's what they do.
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** [[ItsWhatIDo It's what they do.do]].
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-->'''Casey: Yeah, four of 'em.
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* StockSoundEffects: Casey asks Dana to ask Chris, Will and Dave for the "crash and burn" sound effect when he does his latest slam of Rostenkowski; she says they don't have it, but when Casey does it, they say they have it.
** It's what they do.
** It's what they do.
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* CallBack: When Casey snarks about how Natalie's off her game, Dana reminds him of [[Recap/SportsNightS01E01Pilot how he was after his divorce]].
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EveryoneCanSeeIt: Dana, at least, can see what's between Jeremy and Natalie:
-->'''Dana:''' You like Natalie, don't you?
-->'''Jeremy:''' Me?
-->'''Dana:''' Yes.
-->'''Jeremy:''' Of course I like her.
-->'''Dana:''' No, that's not what I mean, Jeremy. I mean, you *like* Natalie, don't you?
** And a little later:
-->'''Dana:''' I'll let you in on a secret. I think Natalie likes you as well.
-->'''Jeremy:'''...I've been getting that feeling.
-->'''Dana:''' Good.
-->'''Jeremy:''' I've had this sense, it's a faint, subtle thing...
-->'''Dana:''' She's been throwing herself at you.
-->'''Jeremy:''' See, I didn't get that.
-->'''Dana:''' Trust me.
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{{Foreshadowing}}: The budget problems Isaac and Dana discuss will become even more prominent in Season 2.
*RunningGag:RunningGag: This won't be the first time people in the studio forget they're miked and everyone in the control room can hear them.
-->'''Dana:''' You like Natalie, don't you?
-->'''Jeremy:''' Me?
-->'''Dana:''' Yes.
-->'''Jeremy:''' Of course I like her.
-->'''Dana:''' No, that's not what I mean, Jeremy. I mean, you *like* Natalie, don't you?
** And a little later:
-->'''Dana:''' I'll let you in on a secret. I think Natalie likes you as well.
-->'''Jeremy:'''...I've been getting that feeling.
-->'''Dana:''' Good.
-->'''Jeremy:''' I've had this sense, it's a faint, subtle thing...
-->'''Dana:''' She's been throwing herself at you.
-->'''Jeremy:''' See, I didn't get that.
-->'''Dana:''' Trust me.
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-->'''Casey:''' They tell me I'm all over the radio in the Great Lakes region.
-->'''Elliot:''' I've never been to the Great Lakes.
-->'''Casey: Yeah, four of 'em.
-->'''Elliot:''' How are they?
-->'''Casey:''' Great.
-->'''Casey:''' They tell me I'm all over the radio in the Great Lakes region.
-->'''Elliot:''' I've never been to the Great Lakes.
-->'''Casey: Yeah, four of 'em.
-->'''Elliot:''' How are they?
-->'''Casey:''' Great.
** Also, everyone says Dan looks like [[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes Elmer Fudd]] when he's dressed in winter wear.
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-->'''Gordon:''' Feisty girl.
-->'''Casey:''' Yeah, she's a pip.
-->'''Gordon:''' I gotta tell you, when she wears that outfit...
-->'''Casey:''' I heard!
*WhatTheHellHero:WhatTheHellHero: Natalie finally gives this speech near the end because she's fed up with everyone trying to be "nice" to her instead of telling her she's screwing up.
-->'''Gordon:''' Feisty girl.
-->'''Casey:''' Yeah, she's a pip.
-->'''Gordon:''' I gotta tell you, when she wears that outfit...
-->'''Casey:''' I heard!
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-->'''Casey:''' How am I conversationally anal-retentive?
-->'''Dana:''' Let me answer that question in four parts, with the fourth part first and the third part last. The second part has five syllables...
-->'''Casey:''' All right, all right, all right.
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* SeriousBusiness: Basically, why Casey keeps harping about his alma mater losing to Miami.
-->'''Casey:''' We were this close to beating Miami. This close. Do you know how many times we've beaten Miami?
-->'''Dan:''' You've never beaten Miami.
-->'''Casey:''' We've never beaten Miami! Now. who am I supposed to see about that?
-->'''Dan:''' [[DeadpanSnarker A therapist?]]
* ShoutOut: Dana compares Jeremy to Literature/DonQuixote.
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-->'''Dana:''' Let me answer that question in four parts, with the fourth part first and the third part last. The second part has five syllables...
-->'''Casey:''' All right, all right, all right.
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* SeriousBusiness: Basically, why Casey keeps harping about his alma mater losing to Miami.
-->'''Casey:''' We were this close to beating Miami. This close. Do you know how many times we've beaten Miami?
-->'''Dan:''' You've never beaten Miami.
-->'''Casey:''' We've never beaten Miami! Now. who am I supposed to see about that?
-->'''Dan:''' [[DeadpanSnarker A therapist?]]
* ShoutOut: Dana compares Jeremy to Literature/DonQuixote.
* ThrowItIn: InUniverse: After Natalie fails to get new copy to the teleprompter on time, Dan ad-libs something about singer Tony Orlando to fill in.
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Natalie is getting death threats and hate-filled e-mails from [[Recap/SportsNightS01E05MaryPatShelby her decision to press charges against Christian Patrick]], and it's affecting her work; she's been forgetting things. Everyone is trying to tiptoe around that so they don't make her feel any worse, but she's upset about that as well. Jeremy, meanwhile, is doing his best to make sure Natalie doesn't see any of those death threats or e-mails, even [[StalkerWithACrush breaking into Natalie's e-mail so he can see them before she does]], and depriving himself of sleep. Dan and Dana both tell Jeremy to get some sleep, but they also recognize, as Dana puts it, his feelings for Natalie are pure, so they suggest he give her a quiet dinner. At the end of a show, after Natalie has called everybody out for walking on eggshells around her, she storms out, only to find Jeremy passed on on the floor, with candles, a bottle of wine, some pillows, and takeout Chinese food around him. When Natalie finds out Jeremy did this because he likes her, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming she sits with him while he sleeps]], and Dana kindly but firmly tells Natalie to get her act together.
Elsewhere, Casey keeps harping on his alma mater losing a big game against Miami, though he changes his mind at the end.
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