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* GoodVsGood: Vine and Marrow are still uneasy about fighting the heroes. Vine tries to defuse the fight before it starts by attempting to negotiate and Marrow admits that they were holding back the last time they fought. However, as before, Elm has no qualms about following her orders and Harriet continues to revel in being able to express her open disdain for the heroes, apparently including Penny.
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* GoodVsGood: GoodVersusGood: Vine and Marrow are still uneasy about fighting the heroes. Vine tries to defuse the fight before it starts by attempting to negotiate and Marrow admits that they were holding back the last time they fought. However, as before, Elm has no qualms about following her orders and Harriet continues to revel in being able to express her open disdain for the heroes, apparently including Penny.
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Trope shoehorning. This trope comes into play before a character can speak. Harriet interrupts Ruby in the middle of speaking because she doesn't want to hear any more.
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* PreEmptiveShutUp: When the heroes and the Ace-Ops argue on how to help Atlas, Ruby points out that raising the city won't do anything, as Salem will just come after them. Before she can really elaborate, Harrier threatens to throw her into jail.
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* PreEmptiveShutUp: When the heroes and the Ace-Ops argue on how to help Atlas, Ruby points out that raising the city won't do anything, as Salem will just come after them. Before she can really elaborate, Harrier threatens to throw her into jail.
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Tweaked wording.
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* HeroicRROD: Nora absorbs so much electricity to break down the door preventing them from saving Penny that her Aura quickly shatters, leaving her comatose and covered in scars.
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* HeroicRROD: Nora absorbs so much electricity to break down the door preventing them from saving Penny that Penny, which causes her Aura quickly shatters, leaving to shatter and knock her comatose and covered in scars.unconscious.
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->''"Well, you know what they say. If you can't beat them, then make'' them ''join'' you."
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->''"Well, you know what they say. If you can't beat them, then make'' them ''join'' you."you''."''
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->''"Well, you know what they say. If you can't beat them, then make’’ them ‘’join’’ you."
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->''"Well, you know what they say. If you can't beat them, then make’’ make'' them ‘’join’’ ''join'' you."
