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These are on the character sheets because they're weaknesses of the powers, Marrow's in particular are demonstrated in more than one episode (and this isn't the first episode it's demonstrated in).
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* LogicalWeakness:
** Marrow's Semblance only freezes the area he's pointing at and requires his focus to use. So Weiss using her summons and keeping herself away from it means Marrow is stuck fighting one when he tries to freeze the other, distracting him enough for Weiss to knock him out.
** Elm's Semblance to root herself to the ground doesn't work very well when the floor's integrity is compromised, so Yang deliberately breaks it to knock Elm off balance.
** Marrow's Semblance only freezes the area he's pointing at and requires his focus to use. So Weiss using her summons and keeping herself away from it means Marrow is stuck fighting one when he tries to freeze the other, distracting him enough for Weiss to knock him out.
** Elm's Semblance to root herself to the ground doesn't work very well when the floor's integrity is compromised, so Yang deliberately breaks it to knock Elm off balance.
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* BlindObedience: Discussed several times in the episode. The Ace-Ops are extremely loyal to Ironwood and don't need to have orders explained or justified to follow them. Yang tells Blake there's no point trying to reason with Elm and Vine because they're "just following orders", while Clover and Qrow argue about the same during their fight.
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* BlindObedience: Discussed several times in the episode. The Ace-Ops are extremely loyal to Ironwood and don't need to have orders explained or justified to follow them. Yang tells Blake there's no point trying to reason with Elm and Vine because they're "just "{{just following orders", orders}}", while Clover and Qrow argue about the same during their fight.
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* {{Fingore}}: Tyrian deliberately dislocates his right thumb in order to slip his hands free of his cuffs to escape then. The camera then zooms in to focus on the bruised and unnaturally twisted state of his thumb and remains in close-up as he places his hand on the floor and forces his thumb back into joint. The sound of bones crunching as he both dislocates and resets his thumb is [[SickeningCrunch very loud]].
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* {{Fingore}}: Tyrian deliberately dislocates his right thumb in order to slip his hands free of his cuffs to escape then.them. The camera then zooms in to focus on the bruised and unnaturally twisted state of his thumb and remains in close-up as he places his hand on the floor and forces his thumb back into joint. The sound of bones crunching as he both dislocates and resets his thumb is [[SickeningCrunch very loud]].
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Per "Is this an example?" discussion, removing invalid example.
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* TakeNoPrisoners: Harriet and Elm make it clear that they are more than willing to ''execute'' team RWBY for being traitors to Atlas, despite their orders being to simply arrest and imprison them.
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* TakeNoPrisoners: Harriet and Elm make it clear that they are more than willing to ''execute'' team RWBY for being traitors to Atlas, despite their orders being to simply arrest and imprison them.
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** Despite Clover saying he only had orders to arrest Qrow, Robyn fires at Clover immediately out of mistrust, leading to an escalating fight that frees Tyrian, allowing him to crash the airship. Robyn ends up spending the rest of the episode unconscious as a result of her actions.
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** Despite Clover saying he only had orders to arrest Qrow, Robyn fires at Clover immediately out of mistrust, leading to an escalating fight that frees Tyrian, allowing him to crash the airship. airship and knock Robyn ends up spending the rest of the episode unconscious as a result of her actions.unconscious.
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* ThisCannotBe: When Neo gets punched by Oscar so hard that she's knocked out of her transformation there's a clear look of shock on her face that he did so.
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* ThisCannotBe: When Neo gets punched by Oscar so hard that she's knocked out of her transformation there's a clear look of shock on her face transformation, she's visibly shocked that he did so.
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* TakeNoPrisoners: Harriet and Elm make it clear that they are more than willing to ''execute'' team RWBY for being traitors to Atlas, despite their orders being to simply arrest and imprison them.
