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Sayaka's mental state continues to deteriorate as she continues her crusade as a magical girl now that Kyuusuke has been courted by Hitomi. While the other girls look for alternatives on how to deal with her, it may be too late to save her.
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Sayaka's mental state continues to deteriorate as she continues her crusade as a magical girl now that Kyuusuke Kyousuke has been courted by Hitomi. While the other girls look for alternatives on how to deal with her, it may be too late to save her.
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* FamousLastWords: To quote the late Sayaka Miki: "I was stupid, so stupid."
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* FamousLastWords: JustForFun/FamousLastWords: To quote the late Sayaka Miki: "I was stupid, so stupid."
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* InMediaRes: The episode continues with Elsa Maria's brutal demise by Sayaka's hand.
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* InMediaRes: InMediasRes: The episode continues with Elsa Maria's brutal demise by Sayaka's hand.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka believes Homura is this. She refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her well-being at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive. Of course, given Sayaka's BlackAndWhiteInsanity, she doesn't realize that Homura's ulterior motive is something benevolent.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka believes Homura is this. She refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her well-being at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive. Of course, given Sayaka's BlackAndWhiteInsanity, she doesn't realize that Homura's ulterior motive is something more benevolent.
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* NoKillLikeOverkill: Just seconds before Madoka can make a contract with Kyuubey, Homura pumps him full of bullets which leaves him dead.
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* UncertainDoom: It's never shown what Homura did to the abusive yakuza men but it's more then certain that they didn't get away unpunished.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive. Of course, given Sayaka's BlackAndWhiteInsanity, she doesn't realize that Homura's ulterior motive is something benevolent.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka believes Homura is this. She refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her well-being at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive. Of course, given Sayaka's BlackAndWhiteInsanity, she doesn't realize that Homura's ulterior motive is something benevolent.
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* BodyBackupDrive: Kyuubey has infinite amounts of bodies that it can use in the event it's current body is killed or rendered inactive. But it admits that it doesn't like having to do so.
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* InMediaRes: The episode continues with Elsa Maria's brutal demise by Sayaka's hand.
* IronicEcho: Sayaka recites one of Kyoko's lessons to her as she comes to terms with her tragic state.
-->'''Sayaka:''' For all the happiness you wish for someone, someone else gets cursed with equal misery. That's how it is for Magical Girls.
* IronicEcho: Sayaka recites one of Kyoko's lessons to her as she comes to terms with her tragic state.
-->'''Sayaka:''' For all the happiness you wish for someone, someone else gets cursed with equal misery. That's how it is for Magical Girls.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After chewing out Madoka for refusing to fight alongside her, Sayaka is shown regretting her words as she's running away.
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* YouOweMe: Averted. Not wanting to owe anything to a selfish Magical Girl like Kyoko, Sayaka gives her Elsa's Grief Seed so they can stay even.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive. Of course, given Sayaka's BlackAndWhiteMorality, she doesn't realize that Homura's ulterior motive is something benevolent.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive. Of course, given Sayaka's BlackAndWhiteMorality, BlackAndWhiteInsanity, she doesn't realize that Homura's ulterior motive is something benevolent.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive. Of course, given Sayaka's BlackAndWhiteMorality, she doesn't realize that Homura's ulterior motive is something benevolent.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Kyoko appears to stop Homura before she can kill Sayaka.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Kyoko appears to stop Homura before she can (apparently) kill Sayaka.
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* MercyKill: Homura tries to invoke this on Sayaka so that her pathetic state won't cause Madoka anymore suffering.
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* MercyKill: Homura tries to invoke claims she'll do this on to Sayaka so that her pathetic state won't cause Madoka anymore suffering.
* ScareEmStraight: It appears as though she attempts to kill Sayaka for causing Madoka grief as she slowly positions a glowing hand near her chest. However, since Homura fights and kills quickly and efficiently with ''handguns'' or ''explosives'' (especially since her offensive ability with magic is incredibly weak or nonexistent), and she doesn't destroy Sayaka's Soul Gem [[note]]which had been on the ground at the time and even when she's transformed, it's on her bellybutton[[/note]], an act that would ''actually'' kill her, it appeared to be an intimidation tactic in order to scare Sayaka into using a Grief Seed.
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** For starters, Homura is actually a time traveler from another timeline
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** For starters, Homura is actually a time traveler from another timelinetimeline.
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* FamousLastWords: To quote the late Sayaka Miki: "I was stupid, so stupid."
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Sayaka refuses Homura's help citing that she doesn't care about her at all and that she has a shifty personality while doing things behind everyone's back for some ulterior motive.
* MercyKill: Homura tries to invoke this on Sayaka so that her pathetic state won't cause Madoka anymore suffering.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The normally composed and majestic Homura breaks down crying after stopping Madoka from making a contract with Kyuubey.
* SayMyName: Kyoko calls out to Sayaka while the latter is transforming into a Witch.
* TitleDrop: Sayaka reveals the title "I was stupid, so stupid", just as her Soul Gem is consumed by despair.
* WhamEpisode: This episode proves to be major game changer over the revelations made.
** For starters, Homura is actually a time traveler from another timeline
** Kyuubey's real name is actually "Incubator".
** And lastly, magical girls are actually witches who are born after they've reached their DespairEventHorizon.
* WhamShot: After reaching peak despair, Sayaka's Soul Gem cracks and becomes a ''Grief Seed''.
* MercyKill: Homura tries to invoke this on Sayaka so that her pathetic state won't cause Madoka anymore suffering.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The normally composed and majestic Homura breaks down crying after stopping Madoka from making a contract with Kyuubey.
* SayMyName: Kyoko calls out to Sayaka while the latter is transforming into a Witch.
* TitleDrop: Sayaka reveals the title "I was stupid, so stupid", just as her Soul Gem is consumed by despair.
* WhamEpisode: This episode proves to be major game changer over the revelations made.
** For starters, Homura is actually a time traveler from another timeline
** Kyuubey's real name is actually "Incubator".
** And lastly, magical girls are actually witches who are born after they've reached their DespairEventHorizon.
* WhamShot: After reaching peak despair, Sayaka's Soul Gem cracks and becomes a ''Grief Seed''.
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->''"In this world, women who are on their path to adulthood are called girls. So it makes sense that [[TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou you]], who will one day become a witch, [[WhamLine be called]] ''[[WhamLine magical girls]]''."''
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->''"In this world, women who are on their path to adulthood are called girls. So it makes sense that [[TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou you]], who will one day become a witch, [[WhamLine be called]] ''[[WhamLine called magical girls]]''.girls]]."''
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Sayaka's mental state continues to deteriorate as she continues her crusade as a magical girl now that Kyuusuke has been courted by Hitomi. While the other girls look for alternatives on how to deal with her, it may be too late to save her.
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!!This episode provides examples of:
* AssholeVictim: Heavily implied that Sayaka killed the BastardBoyfriend and his compatriot while on the train.
* BigDamnHeroes: Kyoko appears to stop Homura before she can kill Sayaka.
* DomesticAbuse: While on a train, Sayaka overhears a yakuza man bragging to his friend on how he slaps around his girlfriend while treating her like trash.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Homura tells Kyoko that there's no point in trying to kill Kyuubey. She proves it right in the climax.
* GetOut: Homura gives a sophisticated "begone" to Kyuubey after hearing everything she wanted to listen to.
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->''"In this world, women who are on their path to adulthood are called girls. So it makes sense that [[TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou you]], who will one day become a witch, [[WhamLine be called]] ''[[WhamLine magical girls]]''."''
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!!This episode provides examples of:
* AssholeVictim: Heavily implied that Sayaka killed the BastardBoyfriend and his compatriot while on the train.
* BigDamnHeroes: Kyoko appears to stop Homura before she can kill Sayaka.
* DomesticAbuse: While on a train, Sayaka overhears a yakuza man bragging to his friend on how he slaps around his girlfriend while treating her like trash.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Homura tells Kyoko that there's no point in trying to kill Kyuubey. She proves it right in the climax.
* GetOut: Homura gives a sophisticated "begone" to Kyuubey after hearing everything she wanted to listen to.
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->''"In this world, women who are on their path to adulthood are called girls. So it makes sense that [[TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou you]], who will one day become a witch, [[WhamLine be called]] ''[[WhamLine magical girls]]''."''
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