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* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: The red one openly tells the blue one that her treating her Magical Girl life a game ''pisses her off''. She says it again when Sayaka brings up the yellow one.
* TitleDrop: Sayaka thinks "There's no way I'll ever regret it" after hearing Kyusuke play his violin on the hospital roof.
* TitleDrop: Sayaka thinks "There's no way I'll ever regret it" after hearing Kyusuke play his violin on the hospital roof.
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* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: The red one Kyoko openly tells the blue one Sayaka that her treating her Magical Girl life like a game ''pisses her off''. She says it again when Sayaka brings up the yellow one.
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* TitleDrop: Sayaka thinks "There's no way I'll ever regret it" after hearingKyusuke Kyousuke play his violin on the hospital roof.
* TitleDrop: Sayaka thinks "There's no way I'll ever regret it" after hearing
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* TitleDrop: Sayaka thinks about the title "There's no way I'll ever regret it" after hearing Kyusuke play his violin on the hospital roof.
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* TitleDrop: Sayaka thinks about the title "There's no way I'll ever regret it" after hearing Kyusuke play his violin on the hospital roof.
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* HealThyself: Because Sayaka's wish was to heal Kyuusuke's hand paralysis, she gets a bonus ability of healing her body.
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* HealThyself: Because Sayaka's wish was to heal Kyuusuke's Kyousuke's hand paralysis, she gets a bonus ability of healing her body.
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Sayaka enjoys the fruits of her wish now that Kyuusuke is healed while prepping herself into becoming a Magical Girl worthy of being Mami's successor. But her second mission undergoes a drastic interruption when veteran Magical Girl Kyoko Sakura makes her prescence, and beliefs, known to her.
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Sayaka enjoys the fruits of her wish now that Kyuusuke Kyousuke is healed while prepping herself into becoming a Magical Girl worthy of being Mami's successor. But her second mission undergoes a drastic interruption when veteran Magical Girl Kyoko Sakura makes her prescence, and beliefs, known to her.
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Sayaka enjoys the fruits of her wish now that Kyuusuke is healed while prepping herself into becoming a magical girl worthy of being Mami's successor. But her second mission undergoes a drastic interruption when veteran magical girl Kyoko Sakura makes her prescence, and beliefs, known to her.
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Sayaka enjoys the fruits of her wish now that Kyuusuke is healed while prepping herself into becoming a magical girl Magical Girl worthy of being Mami's successor. But her second mission undergoes a drastic interruption when veteran magical girl Magical Girl Kyoko Sakura makes her prescence, and beliefs, known to her.
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* TitleDrop: Sayaka thinks about the title "There's no way I'll ever regret it" after hearing Kyusuke play his violin on the hospital roof.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: During the fight, Kyuubey mentions that only another Magical Girl is powerful enough to stop Sayaka and Kyoko's fight. Homura turns out to be the one to stop them.
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* ThatMakesMeAngry: The red one openly tells the blue one that her treating her Magical Girl life a game ''pisses her off''. She says it again when Sayaka brings up the yellow one.
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* ThatMakesMeAngry: ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: The red one openly tells the blue one that her treating her Magical Girl life a game ''pisses her off''. She says it again when Sayaka brings up the yellow one.
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* ArtComesToLife: The Familiar Anja resembles a 4-year-old's drawing of a little girl riding a shapeshifting vehicle.
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* ArtComesToLife: ArtInitiatesLife: The Familiar Anja resembles a 4-year-old's drawing of a little girl riding a shapeshifting vehicle.
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-->'''Kyoko:''' If You don't get it when I explain it and trying to beat some sense into you ain't really working... ''guess my only option is to kill ya!''\\
'''Sayaka:''' I won't lose. ''Not to you!!''
'''Sayaka:''' I won't lose. ''Not to you!!''
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just before Sayaka is impaled by Kyoko, or before Madoka makes a contract with Kyuubey, Homura shows up to stop the fighting.
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* ArtComesToLife: The Familiar Anja resembles a 4-year-old's drawing of a little girl riding a shapeshifting vehicle.
* BarrierWarrior: Kyoko's bonus ability allows her to create red chains around her. She produces some to keep Madoka from interfering in her duel with the newbie.
* BigDamnHeroes: Just before Sayaka is impaled by Kyoko, or before Madokamakes can make a contract with Kyuubey, Homura shows up to stop the fighting.fighting.
* BigEater: Every one of Kyoko's scenes has her eating some type of snack.
* BigShutUp: Sayaka says this to Kyoko after insisting that she should show some respect to her.
* BarrierWarrior: Kyoko's bonus ability allows her to create red chains around her. She produces some to keep Madoka from interfering in her duel with the newbie.
* BigDamnHeroes: Just before Sayaka is impaled by Kyoko, or before Madoka
* BigEater: Every one of Kyoko's scenes has her eating some type of snack.
* BigShutUp: Sayaka says this to Kyoko after insisting that she should show some respect to her.
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* DuelToTheDeath: Outraged by their opponent's opposite ideals, the two Magical Girls battle each other to the death.
-->'''Kyoko:''' If
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Kyuubey explains to Kyoko that he considers Homura to be an "irregularity" as he doesn't remember contracting her.
-->'''Kyoko:''' If
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Kyuubey explains to Kyoko that he considers Homura to be an "irregularity" as he doesn't remember contracting her.
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* TheMentor: Defied. Homura refuses Madoka's request of teaming up with Sayaka or giving her protection on the grounds that she doomed herself the moment she forged her contract.
* TheNeedsOfTheMany: Sayaka hates the idea of letting a Familiar mature as that would mean innocent people would have to die.
* TheNeedsOfTheMany: Sayaka hates the idea of letting a Familiar mature as that would mean innocent people would have to die.
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-->'''Kyoko:''' Didn't they teach you about the ''food chain'' at school?
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-->'''Kyoko:''' Ever hear of this thing called the ''food chain''? Didn't they teach you about it at school?
* ThatMakesMeAngry: The red one openly tells the''food chain'' at school?blue one that her treating her Magical Girl life a game ''pisses her off''. She says it again when Sayaka brings up the yellow one.
* ThatMakesMeAngry: The red one openly tells the
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Sayaka enjoys the fruits of her wish now that Kyuusuke is healed while prepping herself into becoming a magical girl worthy of being Mami's successor. But her second mission undergoes a drastic interruption when veteran magical girl Kyoko Sakura makes her prescence, and beliefs, known to her.
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!!This episode provides examples of:
* BigDamnHeroes: Just before Sayaka is impaled by Kyoko, or before Madoka makes a contract with Kyuubey, Homura shows up to stop the fighting.
* CallBack: Kyoko uses some of her magic on a tower viewer just like how [[Recap/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaEpisode02ThatWouldBeTrulyWonderful Mami improved Sayaka's bat]].
* {{Cliffhanger}}: The last scene shows Homura showing up to interrupt Sayaka and Kyoko's death duel.
* HealThyself: Because Sayaka's wish was to heal Kyuusuke's hand paralysis, she gets a bonus ability of healing her body.
* TheSocialDarwinist: Kyoko explains how it's better for Familiars to kill a couple of weak humans so they can mature into proper Witches which can allow Magical Girls to reap their Grief Seeds.
-->'''Kyoko:''' Didn't they teach you about the ''food chain'' at school?
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!!This episode provides examples of:
* BigDamnHeroes: Just before Sayaka is impaled by Kyoko, or before Madoka makes a contract with Kyuubey, Homura shows up to stop the fighting.
* CallBack: Kyoko uses some of her magic on a tower viewer just like how [[Recap/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaEpisode02ThatWouldBeTrulyWonderful Mami improved Sayaka's bat]].
* {{Cliffhanger}}: The last scene shows Homura showing up to interrupt Sayaka and Kyoko's death duel.
* HealThyself: Because Sayaka's wish was to heal Kyuusuke's hand paralysis, she gets a bonus ability of healing her body.
* TheSocialDarwinist: Kyoko explains how it's better for Familiars to kill a couple of weak humans so they can mature into proper Witches which can allow Magical Girls to reap their Grief Seeds.
-->'''Kyoko:''' Didn't they teach you about the ''food chain'' at school?
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