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** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is Luan putting the video of fic Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload a video you've done of someone without their permission.
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** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is Luan putting the video of fic Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload she has a video you've done of someone without their permission.rule against doing so.
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* AgeInappropriateArt: When Lucy makes a reference to ''VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys'', Lincoln responds that maybe they should monitor her Internet use more closely.
* EntertainmentAboveTheirAge: When Lucy makes a reference to ''VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys'', Lincoln responds that maybe they should monitor her Internet use more closely.
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** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is Luan putting the video of Fic!Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload a video you've done of someone without their permission.
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** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is Luan putting the video of Fic!Lincoln's fic Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload a video you've done of someone without their permission.
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* AgeInappropriateArt: When Lucy makes a reference to ''VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys'', Lincoln responds that maybe they should monitor her Internet use more closely.
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* PantsPullingPrank: Fanfic Lola pantses the bully to humiliate him.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Fanfic Lisa has been playing chess since she was two, and the real Lisa has been playing chess since she was ''one''.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Fanfic Lisa has been playing chess since she was two, and the real Lisa has been playing chess since she was ''one''. To be precise, one year and eight months, or 20 months old.
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The story begins with Fic!Lincoln getting ready for an Ace Savvy convention at... the comic book store? Where you can meet Ace Savvy in person? And the person who displays the best "superhero skills" gets to appear in the next Ace Savvy comic book.
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The story begins with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln getting ready for an Ace Savvy convention at... the comic book store? Where you can meet Ace Savvy in person? And the person who displays the best "superhero skills" gets to appear in the next Ace Savvy comic book.
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The fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Lincoln in Vanzilla and claim he'll probably screw up, and eventually he gets let out.
At the convention, Fic!Lincoln has to beat up a robot, while Fic!Luan films him doing it, but the robot beats ''him'' up instead and he ends up falling off the stage and knocking over the comic books. The sisters laugh at him again and Fic!Luan uploads the video to [=YouTube=] (breaking character by doing it without his permission). This makes him very sad and embarrassed on the way home, to the point of tears, but the sisters ''continue'' to tease him.
When they get home, they find the TV remote broken and the girls all blame Fic!Lincoln since he was the last person to use it apparently. This gets him grounded and denied dessert. The siblings comment on the uncharacteristic antagonism of the fanfic sisters, and it turns out that Lily's saying "men" is trying to say "mean".
Fic!Lincoln goes into his room to sulk and breaks his family photo. That night, he decides to run away, making some of the siblings reading the fanfic get teary-eyed themselves.
Fic!Lincoln ends up going to Fic!Bobby's house, where the truth about the Princess Pony book is revealed to Lucy's sisters. The fanfic Santiago kids let him stay at their place for a few nights and Fic!Bobby wants to break up with Fic!Lori, but Fic!Lincoln tells him not to tell his sisters he's there because he wants to wait and see if they really do miss him.
The next morning, the Fic!Lincoln has breakfast with the Santiagos and his sisters are eating at home (their parents are going off for some reason), when they notice Fic!Lincoln isn't present, so Fic!Leni goes up to find him, only to find him missing.
After breakfast, they go over to see Fic!Clyde, but his dads just slam the door on them. They try Fic!Pop-Pop but he doesn't know either, so (and strangely, Fic!Leni suggests this), they look at the Santiagos'. When they show up, Fic!Lincoln hides in Fic!Ronnie Anne's room while Fic!Bobby plays dumb. Fic!Lincoln is convinced that his sisters didn't look worried about him.
The fanfic sisters go home and search Fic!Lincoln's room again, where they find the broken family portrait and Fic!Luna realises that maybe he ran away because of them. (Meanwhile, the real Lincoln is wondering why they didn't cotton onto that idea sooner). Fic!Lily (nonverbally) reveals that ''she'' was the one who broke the TV remote (which is inexplicably in Fic!Lincoln's room).
Meanwhile, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are getting ready for bed, having just watched a (boring) movie. He overhears his sisters crying over the computer and realises they do miss him. The next morning, Fic!Bobby reveals Fic!Lincoln to the girls.
He comes home, and they apologise, but he's still sore at them. A day later, Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. arrive and their daughters them in on the details. Then, the fanfic sisters go upstairs to discuss the matter and observe that Fic!Lincoln has forgiven Fic!Lily.
Fic!Lynn takes Fic!Lincoln for a bike ride and he falls off his bike. He's surprised she cares about him (which offends the real Lynn) and they get back on their bikes. The next day, a boy starts to bully Fic!Lincoln but gets beat up by... the twins? When they get home, Fic!Lisa notices an ad for a chess tournament at school, so she decides to teach Fic!Lincoln to play chess so he can enter. She does, and he wins.
Fic!Luan shows Fic!Lincoln a video of her being scared by Fic!Lucy's vampire suit, Fic!Lucy writes a poem about him, and Fic!Leni admits she was a hypocrite and reveals that she too was embarrassed at a convention as a kid. Fic!Lori and Fic!Luna apologise again, and the latter sings.
Finally, Fic!Lincoln seems to have forgiven his sisters, but when they start having an insult match and involve him in it, he gets mad at them all over again. Fic!Lisa, feeling bad, goes to bed, but then some of her liquid goes onto her lamp's cord and starts a fire. Everyone works to save everyone else and evacuate, but Fic!Lincoln ends up trapped in the burning house. His older sisters rescue him but he's unconscious. His sisters try to wake him up, while the real siblings start to cry, but thankfully, Fic!Lincoln wakes up.
The fanfic Louds then split up while their house is being repaired: the oldest three sisters with the Santiagos, Fic!Luan, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lisa, Fic!Lily, and the parents with Fic!Pop-Pop, and Fic!Lucy, Fic!Lincoln, and the twins at the [=McBride=] house.
When they arrive back, they find that Fic!Lori's perfume, the clothes Fic!Leni designed, Fic!Luna's music equipment, Mr. Coconuts, Fic!Lynn's sports balls, Fic!Lucy's poetry book, Fic!Lola's pageant clothes, Fic!Lisa's experiments, Fic!Lily's blankie, and Fic!Lincoln's comics, Bun-Bun, and a few of his clothes have been burnt up and Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo are nowhere to be seen. The family is sad, but happy that they're all still alive, and everyone watches a movie.
At the convention, Fic!Lincoln has to beat up a robot, while Fic!Luan films him doing it, but the robot beats ''him'' up instead and he ends up falling off the stage and knocking over the comic books. The sisters laugh at him again and Fic!Luan uploads the video to [=YouTube=] (breaking character by doing it without his permission). This makes him very sad and embarrassed on the way home, to the point of tears, but the sisters ''continue'' to tease him.
When they get home, they find the TV remote broken and the girls all blame Fic!Lincoln since he was the last person to use it apparently. This gets him grounded and denied dessert. The siblings comment on the uncharacteristic antagonism of the fanfic sisters, and it turns out that Lily's saying "men" is trying to say "mean".
Fic!Lincoln goes into his room to sulk and breaks his family photo. That night, he decides to run away, making some of the siblings reading the fanfic get teary-eyed themselves.
Fic!Lincoln ends up going to Fic!Bobby's house, where the truth about the Princess Pony book is revealed to Lucy's sisters. The fanfic Santiago kids let him stay at their place for a few nights and Fic!Bobby wants to break up with Fic!Lori, but Fic!Lincoln tells him not to tell his sisters he's there because he wants to wait and see if they really do miss him.
The next morning, the Fic!Lincoln has breakfast with the Santiagos and his sisters are eating at home (their parents are going off for some reason), when they notice Fic!Lincoln isn't present, so Fic!Leni goes up to find him, only to find him missing.
After breakfast, they go over to see Fic!Clyde, but his dads just slam the door on them. They try Fic!Pop-Pop but he doesn't know either, so (and strangely, Fic!Leni suggests this), they look at the Santiagos'. When they show up, Fic!Lincoln hides in Fic!Ronnie Anne's room while Fic!Bobby plays dumb. Fic!Lincoln is convinced that his sisters didn't look worried about him.
The fanfic sisters go home and search Fic!Lincoln's room again, where they find the broken family portrait and Fic!Luna realises that maybe he ran away because of them. (Meanwhile, the real Lincoln is wondering why they didn't cotton onto that idea sooner). Fic!Lily (nonverbally) reveals that ''she'' was the one who broke the TV remote (which is inexplicably in Fic!Lincoln's room).
Meanwhile, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are getting ready for bed, having just watched a (boring) movie. He overhears his sisters crying over the computer and realises they do miss him. The next morning, Fic!Bobby reveals Fic!Lincoln to the girls.
He comes home, and they apologise, but he's still sore at them. A day later, Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. arrive and their daughters them in on the details. Then, the fanfic sisters go upstairs to discuss the matter and observe that Fic!Lincoln has forgiven Fic!Lily.
Fic!Lynn takes Fic!Lincoln for a bike ride and he falls off his bike. He's surprised she cares about him (which offends the real Lynn) and they get back on their bikes. The next day, a boy starts to bully Fic!Lincoln but gets beat up by... the twins? When they get home, Fic!Lisa notices an ad for a chess tournament at school, so she decides to teach Fic!Lincoln to play chess so he can enter. She does, and he wins.
Fic!Luan shows Fic!Lincoln a video of her being scared by Fic!Lucy's vampire suit, Fic!Lucy writes a poem about him, and Fic!Leni admits she was a hypocrite and reveals that she too was embarrassed at a convention as a kid. Fic!Lori and Fic!Luna apologise again, and the latter sings.
Finally, Fic!Lincoln seems to have forgiven his sisters, but when they start having an insult match and involve him in it, he gets mad at them all over again. Fic!Lisa, feeling bad, goes to bed, but then some of her liquid goes onto her lamp's cord and starts a fire. Everyone works to save everyone else and evacuate, but Fic!Lincoln ends up trapped in the burning house. His older sisters rescue him but he's unconscious. His sisters try to wake him up, while the real siblings start to cry, but thankfully, Fic!Lincoln wakes up.
The fanfic Louds then split up while their house is being repaired: the oldest three sisters with the Santiagos, Fic!Luan, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lisa, Fic!Lily, and the parents with Fic!Pop-Pop, and Fic!Lucy, Fic!Lincoln, and the twins at the [=McBride=] house.
When they arrive back, they find that Fic!Lori's perfume, the clothes Fic!Leni designed, Fic!Luna's music equipment, Mr. Coconuts, Fic!Lynn's sports balls, Fic!Lucy's poetry book, Fic!Lola's pageant clothes, Fic!Lisa's experiments, Fic!Lily's blankie, and Fic!Lincoln's comics, Bun-Bun, and a few of his clothes have been burnt up and Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo are nowhere to be seen. The family is sad, but happy that they're all still alive, and everyone watches a movie.
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The fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Lincoln Lincoln in Vanzilla and claim he'll probably screw up, and eventually he gets let out.
At the convention,Fic!Lincoln Lincoln has to beat up a robot, while Fic!Luan Luan films him doing it, but the robot beats ''him'' up instead and he ends up falling off the stage and knocking over the comic books. The sisters laugh at him again and Fic!Luan Luan uploads the video to [=YouTube=] (breaking character by doing it without his permission). This makes him very sad and embarrassed on the way home, to the point of tears, but the sisters ''continue'' to tease him.
When they get home, they find the TV remote broken and the girls all blameFic!Lincoln Lincoln since he was the last person to use it apparently. This gets him grounded and denied dessert. The siblings comment on the uncharacteristic antagonism of the fanfic sisters, and it turns out that Lily's saying "men" is trying to say "mean".
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln goes into his room to sulk and breaks his family photo. That night, he decides to run away, making some of the siblings reading the fanfic get teary-eyed themselves.
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln ends up going to Fic!Bobby's Bobby's house, where the truth about the Princess Pony book is revealed to Lucy's sisters. The fanfic Santiago kids let him stay at their place for a few nights and Fic!Bobby Bobby wants to break up with Fic!Lori, Lori, but Fic!Lincoln Lincoln tells him not to tell his sisters he's there because he wants to wait and see if they really do miss him.
The next morning, theFic!Lincoln fanfic version of Lincoln has breakfast with the Santiagos and his sisters are eating at home (their parents are going off for some reason), when they notice Fic!Lincoln Lincoln isn't present, so Fic!Leni Leni goes up to find him, only to find him missing.
After breakfast, they go over to seeFic!Clyde, Clyde, but his dads just slam the door on them. They try Fic!Pop-Pop Pop-Pop but he doesn't know either, so (and strangely, Fic!Leni Leni suggests this), they look at the Santiagos'. When they show up, Fic!Lincoln Lincoln hides in Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne's room while Fic!Bobby Bobby plays dumb. Fic!Lincoln Lincoln is convinced that his sisters didn't look worried about him.
The fanfic sisters go home and searchFic!Lincoln's Lincoln's room again, where they find the broken family portrait and Fic!Luna Luna realises that maybe he ran away because of them. (Meanwhile, the real Lincoln is wondering why they didn't cotton onto that idea sooner). Fic!Lily Fanfic Lily (nonverbally) reveals that ''she'' was the one who broke the TV remote (which is inexplicably in Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's room).
Meanwhile,Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne are getting ready for bed, having just watched a (boring) movie. He overhears his sisters crying over the computer and realises they do miss him. The next morning, Fic!Bobby fanfic Bobby reveals Fic!Lincoln Lincoln to the girls.
He comes home, and they apologise, but he's still sore at them. A day later,Fic!Rita Rita and Fic!Lynn Lynn Sr. arrive and their daughters fill them in on the details. Then, the fanfic sisters go upstairs to discuss the matter and observe that Fic!Lincoln Lincoln has forgiven Fic!Lily.
Fic!LynnLily.
Fanfic Lynn takesFic!Lincoln Lincoln for a bike ride and he falls off his bike. He's surprised she cares about him (which offends the real Lynn) and they get back on their bikes. The next day, a boy starts to bully Fic!Lincoln Lincoln but gets beat up by... the twins? When they get home, Fic!Lisa Lisa notices an ad for a chess tournament at school, so she decides to teach Fic!Lincoln Lincoln to play chess so he can enter. She does, and he wins.
Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan shows Fic!Lincoln Lincoln a video of her being scared by Fic!Lucy's Lucy's vampire suit, Fic!Lucy Lucy writes a poem about him, and Fic!Leni Leni admits she was a hypocrite and reveals that she too was embarrassed at a convention as a kid. Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori and Fic!Luna Luna apologise again, and the latter sings.
Finally,Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln seems to have forgiven his sisters, but when they start having an insult match and involve him in it, he gets mad at them all over again. Fic!Lisa, Lisa, feeling bad, goes to bed, but then some of her liquid goes onto her lamp's cord and starts a fire. Everyone works to save everyone else and evacuate, but Fic!Lincoln Lincoln ends up trapped in the burning house. His older sisters rescue him but he's unconscious. His sisters try to wake him up, while the real siblings start to cry, but thankfully, Fic!Lincoln story Lincoln wakes up.
The fanfic Louds then split up while their house is being repaired: the oldest three sisters with the Santiagos,Fic!Luan, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lisa, Fic!Lily, Luan, Lynn, Lisa, Lily, and the parents with Fic!Pop-Pop, Pop-Pop, and Fic!Lucy, Fic!Lincoln, Lucy, Lincoln, and the twins at the [=McBride=] house.
When they arrive back, they find thatFic!Lori's Lori's perfume, the clothes Fic!Leni Leni designed, Fic!Luna's Luna's music equipment, Mr. Coconuts, Fic!Lynn's Lynn's sports balls, Fic!Lucy's Lucy's poetry book, Fic!Lola's Lola's pageant clothes, Fic!Lisa's Lisa's experiments, Fic!Lily's Lily's blankie, and Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's comics, Bun-Bun, and a few of his clothes have been burnt up and Fic!Izzy Izzy and Fic!El El Diablo are nowhere to be seen. The family is sad, but happy that they're all still alive, and everyone watches a movie.
At the convention,
When they get home, they find the TV remote broken and the girls all blame
The next morning, the
After breakfast, they go over to see
The fanfic sisters go home and search
Meanwhile,
He comes home, and they apologise, but he's still sore at them. A day later,
Fic!Lynn
Fanfic Lynn takes
Finally,
The fanfic Louds then split up while their house is being repaired: the oldest three sisters with the Santiagos,
When they arrive back, they find that
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* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Lynn Sr. and Fic!Rita somehow didn't notice their daughters teasing Fic!Lincoln in Vanzilla, or Fic!Lincoln crying.
* AdaptationalJerkass: The sisters in the fanfic are more relentless with their teasing than in canon, continuing to tease Fic!Lincoln even when he's crying.
* AdaptationalWimp: Initially, a notable aversion-- Fic!Lincoln does cry in this story, but unlike other stories about Lincoln, there's a solid reason for it. However, he later plays this straight by being mad at his sisters for insulting him, when they were ''all'' insulting each other and the insults were just playful.
* AdaptationalJerkass: The sisters in the fanfic are more relentless with their teasing than in canon, continuing to tease Fic!Lincoln even when he's crying.
* AdaptationalWimp: Initially, a notable aversion-- Fic!Lincoln does cry in this story, but unlike other stories about Lincoln, there's a solid reason for it. However, he later plays this straight by being mad at his sisters for insulting him, when they were ''all'' insulting each other and the insults were just playful.
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* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn Sr. and Fic!Rita Rita somehow didn't notice their daughters teasing Fic!Lincoln Lincoln in Vanzilla, or Fic!Lincoln Lincoln crying.
* AdaptationalJerkass: The sisters in the fanfic are more relentless with their teasing than in canon, continuing to teaseFic!Lincoln Lincoln even when he's crying.
* AdaptationalWimp: Initially, a notable aversion-- Fic!Lincoln does cry in this story, but unlike other stories about Lincoln, there's a solid reason for it. However, he later plays this straight by being mad at his sisters for insulting him, when they were ''all'' insulting each other and the insults were just playful.crying.
* AdaptationalJerkass: The sisters in the fanfic are more relentless with their teasing than in canon, continuing to tease
* AdaptationalWimp: Initially, a notable aversion-- Fic!Lincoln does cry in this story, but unlike other stories about Lincoln, there's a solid reason for it. However, he later plays this straight by being mad at his sisters for insulting him, when they were ''all'' insulting each other and the insults were just playful.
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* BallsGag: Lynn snickers when Fic!Lynn says, "My balls are gone!".
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* BallsGag: Lynn snickers when Fic!Lynn her fanfic counterpart says, "My balls are gone!".
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* BittersweetEnding: The fanfic ends with several of the Loud kids' belongings burnt up and Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo unaccounted for, but everyone's happy to be alive.
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* BittersweetEnding: The fanfic ends with several of the Loud kids' belongings burnt up and Fic!Izzy Izzy and Fic!El El Diablo unaccounted for, but everyone's happy to be alive.
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** Lincoln mockingly imitates his fanfic sisters for not realising how they could've offended Fic!Lincoln.
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** Lincoln mockingly imitates his fanfic sisters for not realising how they could've offended Fic!Lincoln.fanfic Lincoln.
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** Some of the sisters glare at Lily when Fic!Lincoln stops being mad at Fic!Lily early.
* DelayedReaction: The fanfic sisters don't realise how mean they've been to Fic!Lincoln until after he runs away.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: On being told Fic!Lincoln broke the remote, Fic!Lynn Sr. makes him go to bed without dessert.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Fic!Lana and Fic!Lola are referred to in the narration as "the two twins" several times.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The catalyst for Fic!Lincoln's bad day was him being embarrassed at the convention falling into the comics.
* DelayedReaction: The fanfic sisters don't realise how mean they've been to Fic!Lincoln until after he runs away.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: On being told Fic!Lincoln broke the remote, Fic!Lynn Sr. makes him go to bed without dessert.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Fic!Lana and Fic!Lola are referred to in the narration as "the two twins" several times.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The catalyst for Fic!Lincoln's bad day was him being embarrassed at the convention falling into the comics.
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** Some of the sisters glare at Lily when Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln stops being mad at Fic!Lily her story counterpart early.
* DelayedReaction: The fanfic sisters don't realise how mean they've been toFic!Lincoln Lincoln until after he runs away.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: On being toldFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln broke the remote, Fic!Lynn Lynn Sr. makes him go to bed without dessert.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:Fic!Lana Fanfic Lana and Fic!Lola Lola are referred to in the narration as "the two twins" several times.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The catalyst forFic!Lincoln's fanfic Lincoln's bad day was him being embarrassed at the convention falling into the comics.
* DelayedReaction: The fanfic sisters don't realise how mean they've been to
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: On being told
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The catalyst for
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** When the fanfic sisters realise how mean they've been, they all start crying (downplayed, as Fic!Lucy only cries a few tears).
** All of Fic!Lincoln's sisters cry when he's unconscious and they're scared for his life, as does the real Lincoln and all his sisters.
** All of Fic!Lincoln's sisters cry when he's unconscious and they're scared for his life, as does the real Lincoln and all his sisters.
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** When the fanfic sisters realise how mean they've been, they all start crying (downplayed, as Fic!Lucy Lucy only cries a few tears).
** All ofFic!Lincoln's fanfic Lincoln's sisters cry when he's unconscious and they're scared for his life, as does the real Lincoln and all his sisters.
** All of
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** Lola might blame Lincoln for doing things without knowing for sure, but she always bases her blame on ''some'' evidence (unlike Fic!Lola who just blames Fic!Lincoln for breaking the remote willy-nilly). Like when she blamed him for clogging the toilet, it was because he did do it lots of times before.
** Lucy may like sad stories, but even see finds the end of Part One too sad.
** Lucy may like sad stories, but even see finds the end of Part One too sad.
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** Lola might blame Lincoln for doing things without knowing for sure, but she always bases her blame on ''some'' evidence (unlike Fic!Lola fanfic Lola who just blames Fic!Lincoln Lincoln for breaking the remote willy-nilly). Like when she blamed him for clogging the toilet, it was because he did do it lots of times before.
** Lucy may like sad stories, but evensee she finds the end of Part One too sad.
** Lucy may like sad stories, but even
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** Lincoln facepalms when the fanfic sisters (except Fic!Luna) don't realise how they could've offended Fic!Lincoln.
** Fic!Lincoln facepalms when Fic!Clyde wants Fic!Lori to stay with him.
* ImpromptuCampfireCookout: Discussed when Lori jokingly claims that Fic!Lincoln's parents and sisters are around their housefire roasting marshmallows.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Fic!Luan films Fic!Lincoln crashing into the comic books at the convention and puts it on [=YouTube=].
** Fic!Lincoln facepalms when Fic!Clyde wants Fic!Lori to stay with him.
* ImpromptuCampfireCookout: Discussed when Lori jokingly claims that Fic!Lincoln's parents and sisters are around their housefire roasting marshmallows.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Fic!Luan films Fic!Lincoln crashing into the comic books at the convention and puts it on [=YouTube=].
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** Lincoln facepalms when the fanfic sisters (except Fic!Luna) Luna) don't realise how they could've offended Fic!Lincoln.
Lincoln.
**Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln facepalms when Fic!Clyde Clyde wants Fic!Lori Lori to stay with him.
* ImpromptuCampfireCookout: Discussed when Lori jokingly claims thatFic!Lincoln's fanfic Lincoln's parents and sisters are around their housefire roasting marshmallows.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube:Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan films Fic!Lincoln Lincoln crashing into the comic books at the convention and puts it on [=YouTube=].
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* ImpromptuCampfireCookout: Discussed when Lori jokingly claims that
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube:
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** When the fanfic Loud kids are having an insult match, Fic!Luna is insulted for her loudness, which the real Luna is proud of.
* IResembleThatRemark: When Fic!Lola is insulted for her shouting, the real Lola shouts that she doesn't shout that often.
* LamePunReaction: The fanfic sisters groan at Fic!Luan's "ground beef" pun.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The fanfic sisters all cry upon realising how mean they've been to Fic!Lincoln.
* IResembleThatRemark: When Fic!Lola is insulted for her shouting, the real Lola shouts that she doesn't shout that often.
* LamePunReaction: The fanfic sisters groan at Fic!Luan's "ground beef" pun.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The fanfic sisters all cry upon realising how mean they've been to Fic!Lincoln.
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** When the fanfic Loud kids are having an insult match, Fic!Luna Luna is insulted for her loudness, which the real Luna is proud of.
* IResembleThatRemark: WhenFic!Lola fanfic Lola is insulted for her shouting, the real Lola shouts that she doesn't shout that often.
* LamePunReaction: The fanfic sisters groan atFic!Luan's Luan's "ground beef" pun.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The fanfic sisters all cry upon realising how mean they've been toFic!Lincoln.Lincoln.
* IResembleThatRemark: When
* LamePunReaction: The fanfic sisters groan at
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The fanfic sisters all cry upon realising how mean they've been to
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* NatureTinkling: When the fanfic twins don't let Fic!Lincoln go to the bathroom, Fic!Lana tells him to just go outside. This grosses out several of the siblings reading it, including Lori, but Lana says that she does it all the time.
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* NatureTinkling: When the fanfic twins don't let Fic!Lincoln Lincoln go to the bathroom, Fic!Lana Lana tells him to just go outside. This grosses out several of the siblings reading it, including Lori, but Lana says that she does it all the time.
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* PantsPullingPrank: Fic!Lola pantses the bully to humiliate him.
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* PantsPullingPrank: Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola pantses the bully to humiliate him.
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** Lisa is too sad to call out the author for the comma splice when Fic!Lincoln cries to Fic!Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Anne.
** When Lincoln points out that Fic!Ronnie Anne is not roughhousing with him, Lana suggests that it's because Fic!Lincoln is crying and she might feel the situation is too serious.
** When Lincoln points out that Fic!Ronnie Anne is not roughhousing with him, Lana suggests that it's because Fic!Lincoln is crying and she might feel the situation is too serious.
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** Lisa is too sad to call out the author for the comma splice when Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln cries to Fic!Bobby Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne.
** When Lincoln points out thatFic!Ronnie fanfic Ronnie Anne is not roughhousing with him, Lana suggests that it's because Fic!Lincoln Lincoln is crying and she might feel the situation is too serious.
** When Lincoln points out that
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** Fic!Lynn says, "Look who's going to the Ace Savvy convention!" as an "insult". The real Lynn would've been able to think up a better insult.
** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is Fic!Luan putting the video of Fic!Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload a video you've done of someone without their permission.
** Fic!Bobby agrees to lie to Fic!Lori, something which Bobby canonically wouldn't do.
** A minor one, but Fic!Lincoln becomes a bit dramatic when he describes his sisters' meanness as a "fate worse than death".
** Fic!Lola pantses the bully, which is a bit crass for her and seems more like something Lana would do.
** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is Fic!Luan putting the video of Fic!Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload a video you've done of someone without their permission.
** Fic!Bobby agrees to lie to Fic!Lori, something which Bobby canonically wouldn't do.
** A minor one, but Fic!Lincoln becomes a bit dramatic when he describes his sisters' meanness as a "fate worse than death".
** Fic!Lola pantses the bully, which is a bit crass for her and seems more like something Lana would do.
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** Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn says, "Look who's going to the Ace Savvy convention!" as an "insult". The real Lynn would've been able to think up a better insult.
** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this isFic!Luan Luan putting the video of Fic!Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload a video you've done of someone without their permission.
**Fic!Bobby Fanfic Bobby agrees to lie to Fic!Lori, Lori, something which Bobby canonically wouldn't do.
** A minor one, butFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln becomes a bit dramatic when he describes his sisters' meanness as a "fate worse than death".
**Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola pantses the bully, which is a bit crass for her and seems more like something Lana would do.
** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is
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** The sisters think Fic!Lincoln broke the remote on purpose because he was mad that the twins made him go to the toilet outside, but he didn't watch TV after then, and if he did break the remote, ''he'' wouldn't have been able to use it either.
** If Fic!Lily can point to herself and admit she broke the TV remote, why didn't she do it sooner? Also, why was the remote in Fic!Lincoln's room?
** If Fic!Lily can point to herself and admit she broke the TV remote, why didn't she do it sooner? Also, why was the remote in Fic!Lincoln's room?
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** The sisters think Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln broke the remote on purpose because he was mad that the twins made him go to the toilet outside, but he didn't watch TV after then, and if he did break the remote, ''he'' wouldn't have been able to use it either.
** IfFic!Lily fanfic Lily can point to herself and admit she broke the TV remote, why didn't she do it sooner? Also, why was the remote in Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's room?
** If
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* TheRunaway: Fic!Lincoln decides to run away to the Santiagos' after his sisters relentlessly tease him.
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* TheRunaway: Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln decides to run away to the Santiagos' after his sisters relentlessly tease him.
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** Fic!Lori shouts, "LINCOLN!" when she thinks he took the remote and then later when she's looking for him during the fire.
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** Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori shouts, "LINCOLN!" when she thinks he took the remote and then later when she's looking for him during the fire.
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** Fic!Lincoln says, "Lisa!" upon seeing her unconscious.
** Fic!Luna shouts, "Oh no! LINCOLN!" when he's unconscious.
** Fic!Luna shouts, "Oh no! LINCOLN!" when he's unconscious.
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** Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln says, "Lisa!" upon seeing her unconscious.
**Fic!Luna Fanfic Luna shouts, "Oh no! LINCOLN!" when he's unconscious.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Fic!Lisa has been playing chess since she was two, and the real Lisa has been playing chess since she was ''one''.
* TakeThat: When Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are bored to sleep by a movie, Luan bets it was ''Film/TwoThousandAndOneASpaceOdyssey''.
* TakeThat: When Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are bored to sleep by a movie, Luan bets it was ''Film/TwoThousandAndOneASpaceOdyssey''.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Fic!Lisa Fanfic Lisa has been playing chess since she was two, and the real Lisa has been playing chess since she was ''one''.
* TakeThat: WhenFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne are bored to sleep by a movie, Luan bets it was ''Film/TwoThousandAndOneASpaceOdyssey''.
* TakeThat: When
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* UncertainDoom: Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo are unaccounted for after the fire (because apparently only Fic!Charles, Fic!Cliff, Fic!Geo, and Fic!Walt were carried out), so it's unknown if they died or not. Thankfully, at least, Fic!Lana's other pets, plus Fic!Fangs and Fic!Gary must be accounted for, or else they would've been mentioned, but it's still unknown what happened to the reptiles.
* UnderwearOfPower: Fic!Lola teases Fic!Lincoln for liking superheroes who wear their "underwear on the outside". Lincoln critiques this for being an old joke.
* YouAreGrounded: Fic!Lynn Sr. grounds Fic!Lincoln for supposedly breaking the remote and then later grounds the fanfic sisters for being mean to their brother.
* UnderwearOfPower: Fic!Lola teases Fic!Lincoln for liking superheroes who wear their "underwear on the outside". Lincoln critiques this for being an old joke.
* YouAreGrounded: Fic!Lynn Sr. grounds Fic!Lincoln for supposedly breaking the remote and then later grounds the fanfic sisters for being mean to their brother.
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* UncertainDoom: Fic!Izzy Izzy and Fic!El El Diablo are unaccounted for after the fire in the fanfic (because apparently only Fic!Charles, Fic!Cliff, Fic!Geo, Charles, Cliff, Geo, and Fic!Walt Walt were carried out), so it's unknown if they died or not. Thankfully, at least, Fic!Lana's Lana's other pets, plus Fic!Fangs Fangs and Fic!Gary Gary must be accounted for, or else they would've been mentioned, but it's still unknown what happened to the reptiles.
* UnderwearOfPower:Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola teases Fic!Lincoln Lincoln for liking superheroes who wear their "underwear on the outside". Lincoln critiques this for being an old joke.
* YouAreGrounded:Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn Sr. grounds Fic!Lincoln Lincoln for supposedly breaking the remote and then later grounds the fanfic sisters for being mean to their brother.
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He comes home, and they apologise, but he's still sore at them. To be continued.
Part Two begins a day later, with Fic!Lincoln still mad at his sisters. Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. arrive and their daughters them in on the details. Then, the fanfic sisters go upstairs to discuss the matter and observe that Fic!Lincoln has forgiven Fic!Lily.
Part Two begins a day later, with Fic!Lincoln still mad at his sisters. Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. arrive and their daughters them in on the details. Then, the fanfic sisters go upstairs to discuss the matter and observe that Fic!Lincoln has forgiven Fic!Lily.
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He comes home, and they apologise, but he's still sore at them. To be continued.
Part Two begins aA day later, with Fic!Lincoln still mad at his sisters. Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. arrive and their daughters them in on the details. Then, the fanfic sisters go upstairs to discuss the matter and observe that Fic!Lincoln has forgiven Fic!Lily.
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Lincoln is back on the couch, and this time, he's brought along ''all'' his sisters. This is because they're going to be reading ''Trustworthy'', which they've gotten a lot of requests for.
The story begins with Fic!Lincoln getting ready for an Ace Savvy convention at... the comic book store? Where you can meet Ace Savvy in person? And the person who displays the best "superhero skills" gets to appear in the next Ace Savvy comic book.
He goes into the hallway to find all his sisters laughing at him and teasing him. Then, the twins don't let him go to the bathroom because they think he'll clog the toilet again. They continue to laugh at him and meanwhile, on the couch, Lily keeps pointing at the screen and saying, "Men!".
The fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Lincoln in Vanzilla and claim he'll probably screw up, and eventually he gets let out.
At the convention, Fic!Lincoln has to beat up a robot, while Fic!Luan films him doing it, but the robot beats ''him'' up instead and he ends up falling off the stage and knocking over the comic books. The sisters laugh at him again and Fic!Luan uploads the video to [=YouTube=] (breaking character by doing it without his permission). This makes him very sad and embarrassed on the way home, to the point of tears, but the sisters ''continue'' to tease him.
When they get home, they find the TV remote broken and the girls all blame Fic!Lincoln since he was the last person to use it apparently. This gets him grounded and denied dessert. The siblings comment on the uncharacteristic antagonism of the fanfic sisters, and it turns out that Lily's saying "men" is trying to say "mean".
Fic!Lincoln goes into his room to sulk and breaks his family photo. That night, he decides to run away, making some of the siblings reading the fanfic get teary-eyed themselves.
Fic!Lincoln ends up going to Fic!Bobby's house, where the truth about the Princess Pony book is revealed to Lucy's sisters. The fanfic Santiago kids let him stay at their place for a few nights and Fic!Bobby wants to break up with Fic!Lori, but Fic!Lincoln tells him not to tell his sisters he's there because he wants to wait and see if they really do miss him.
The next morning, the Fic!Lincoln has breakfast with the Santiagos and his sisters are eating at home (their parents are going off for some reason), when they notice Fic!Lincoln isn't present, so Fic!Leni goes up to find him, only to find him missing.
After breakfast, they go over to see Fic!Clyde, but his dads just slam the door on them. They try Fic!Pop-Pop but he doesn't know either, so (and strangely, Fic!Leni suggests this), they look at the Santiagos'. When they show up, Fic!Lincoln hides in Fic!Ronnie Anne's room while Fic!Bobby plays dumb. Fic!Lincoln is convinced that his sisters didn't look worried about him.
The fanfic sisters go home and search Fic!Lincoln's room again, where they find the broken family portrait and Fic!Luna realises that maybe he ran away because of them. (Meanwhile, the real Lincoln is wondering why they didn't cotton onto that idea sooner). Fic!Lily (nonverbally) reveals that ''she'' was the one who broke the TV remote (which is inexplicably in Fic!Lincoln's room).
Meanwhile, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are getting ready for bed, having just watched a (boring) movie. He overhears his sisters crying over the computer and realises they do miss him. The next morning, Fic!Bobby reveals Fic!Lincoln to the girls.
He comes home, and they apologise, but he's still sore at them. To be continued.
Part Two begins a day later, with Fic!Lincoln still mad at his sisters. Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. arrive and their daughters them in on the details. Then, the fanfic sisters go upstairs to discuss the matter and observe that Fic!Lincoln has forgiven Fic!Lily.
Fic!Lynn takes Fic!Lincoln for a bike ride and he falls off his bike. He's surprised she cares about him (which offends the real Lynn) and they get back on their bikes. The next day, a boy starts to bully Fic!Lincoln but gets beat up by... the twins? When they get home, Fic!Lisa notices an ad for a chess tournament at school, so she decides to teach Fic!Lincoln to play chess so he can enter. She does, and he wins.
Fic!Luan shows Fic!Lincoln a video of her being scared by Fic!Lucy's vampire suit, Fic!Lucy writes a poem about him, and Fic!Leni admits she was a hypocrite and reveals that she too was embarrassed at a convention as a kid. Fic!Lori and Fic!Luna apologise again, and the latter sings.
Finally, Fic!Lincoln seems to have forgiven his sisters, but when they start having an insult match and involve him in it, he gets mad at them all over again. Fic!Lisa, feeling bad, goes to bed, but then some of her liquid goes onto her lamp's cord and starts a fire. Everyone works to save everyone else and evacuate, but Fic!Lincoln ends up trapped in the burning house. His older sisters rescue him but he's unconscious. His sisters try to wake him up, while the real siblings start to cry, but thankfully, Fic!Lincoln wakes up.
The fanfic Louds then split up while their house is being repaired: the oldest three sisters with the Santiagos, Fic!Luan, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lisa, Fic!Lily, and the parents with Fic!Pop-Pop, and Fic!Lucy, Fic!Lincoln, and the twins at the [=McBride=] house.
When they arrive back, they find that Fic!Lori's perfume, the clothes Fic!Leni designed, Fic!Luna's music equipment, Mr. Coconuts, Fic!Lynn's sports balls, Fic!Lucy's poetry book, Fic!Lola's pageant clothes, Fic!Lisa's experiments, Fic!Lily's blankie, and Fic!Lincoln's comics, Bun-Bun, and a few of his clothes have been burnt up and Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo are nowhere to be seen. The family is sad, but happy that they're all still alive, and everyone watches a movie.
With that, the fanfic is done, and the Loud kids go out to Burpin' Burger to cheer themselves up.
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* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Lynn Sr. and Fic!Rita somehow didn't notice their daughters teasing Fic!Lincoln in Vanzilla, or Fic!Lincoln crying.
* AdaptationalJerkass: The sisters in the fanfic are more relentless with their teasing than in canon, continuing to tease Fic!Lincoln even when he's crying.
* AdaptationalWimp: Initially, a notable aversion-- Fic!Lincoln does cry in this story, but unlike other stories about Lincoln, there's a solid reason for it. However, he later plays this straight by being mad at his sisters for insulting him, when they were ''all'' insulting each other and the insults were just playful.
* BabySeeBabyDo: When Lola says, "No! Bad Lisa!", Lily echoes back, "Ba Wisa!".
* BallsGag: Lynn snickers when Fic!Lynn says, "My balls are gone!".
* BigWhat: All of the sisters except Lucy shout, "WHAT?!" upon finding out that it was Lucy who clogged the toilet.
* BittersweetEnding: The fanfic ends with several of the Loud kids' belongings burnt up and Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo unaccounted for, but everyone's happy to be alive.
* BlowingARaspberry: When Luan asks Lily to say, "girls", she blows a raspberry instead.
* CharacterExaggeration: Sure, the sisters tease Lincoln a lot, but in the fanfic, they keep doing it while he's crying and blame him without proof for breaking the remote.
* ContinuityNod:
** The sisters end up finding out the truth about Lucy clogging the toilet in "Sleuth or Consequences?".
** Lincoln remembers Episode One, where in the story they read, he was out-of-character for crying, but states that in this story, he has reason to cry.
** Lori mentions that the only time Bobby lied to her was telling her he liked her ShoddyShindig in "Party Down".
** Lincoln mentions the girls tiring Clyde's dads out, which happened in "Attention Deficit".
** The fanfic sisters feel guilty about fighting over money (in "It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud House"), which the real siblings point out is strange because that conflict was resolved. Lori and Lincoln also argue about who was in the wrong during the events of "Sound of Silence".
* CopycatMockery:
** Lincoln mockingly imitates his fanfic sisters for not realising how they could've offended Fic!Lincoln.
** When Lori says that they wouldn't have enough time to list Lincoln's dumb choices, he later teasingly parrots it by saying that he wouldn't have enough time to list the sisters' bad actions to him.
* DeathGlare:
** Lana glares at Lucy for not admitting it was she who clogged the toilet earlier.
** Luna gives Luan a dirty look for making a joke in a serious situation.
** Some of the sisters glare at Lily when Fic!Lincoln stops being mad at Fic!Lily early.
* DelayedReaction: The fanfic sisters don't realise how mean they've been to Fic!Lincoln until after he runs away.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: On being told Fic!Lincoln broke the remote, Fic!Lynn Sr. makes him go to bed without dessert.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Fic!Lana and Fic!Lola are referred to in the narration as "the two twins" several times.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The catalyst for Fic!Lincoln's bad day was him being embarrassed at the convention falling into the comics.
* EverybodyCries:
** When the fanfic sisters realise how mean they've been, they all start crying (downplayed, as Fic!Lucy only cries a few tears).
** All of Fic!Lincoln's sisters cry when he's unconscious and they're scared for his life, as does the real Lincoln and all his sisters.
* EveryoneHasStandards:
** The girls point out that while they may tease Lincoln a lot, they wouldn't keep teasing him if he cried about it.
** Lola might blame Lincoln for doing things without knowing for sure, but she always bases her blame on ''some'' evidence (unlike Fic!Lola who just blames Fic!Lincoln for breaking the remote willy-nilly). Like when she blamed him for clogging the toilet, it was because he did do it lots of times before.
** Lucy may like sad stories, but even see finds the end of Part One too sad.
** Lynn admits to having pantsed, punched, and thrown mud at Lincoln, but points out that she cares about his safety and would never seriously injure him.
* {{Facepalm}}:
** Lincoln facepalms when the fanfic sisters (except Fic!Luna) don't realise how they could've offended Fic!Lincoln.
** Fic!Lincoln facepalms when Fic!Clyde wants Fic!Lori to stay with him.
* ImpromptuCampfireCookout: Discussed when Lori jokingly claims that Fic!Lincoln's parents and sisters are around their housefire roasting marshmallows.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Fic!Luan films Fic!Lincoln crashing into the comic books at the convention and puts it on [=YouTube=].
* InsultBackfire:
** Lynn insults Lucy for looking like a vampire, which makes her proud.
** When the fanfic Loud kids are having an insult match, Fic!Luna is insulted for her loudness, which the real Luna is proud of.
* IResembleThatRemark: When Fic!Lola is insulted for her shouting, the real Lola shouts that she doesn't shout that often.
* LamePunReaction: The fanfic sisters groan at Fic!Luan's "ground beef" pun.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The fanfic sisters all cry upon realising how mean they've been to Fic!Lincoln.
* NationalStereotypes: Luan puns on the idea that Australians call everybody "mate" by joking that the prize for an Australian chess tournament is a "check, mate".
* NatureTinkling: When the fanfic twins don't let Fic!Lincoln go to the bathroom, Fic!Lana tells him to just go outside. This grosses out several of the siblings reading it, including Lori, but Lana says that she does it all the time.
* NotAfraidToDie: Lucy claims that death isn't bad, but rather "a natural, beautiful part of the cycle of life."
* NotHyperbole: Lucy says that Lincoln's joke about her having powers was "so funny she forgot how to laugh". Then, it turns out that she really ''did'' forget.
* PantsPullingPrank: Fic!Lola pantses the bully to humiliate him.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
** Lisa is too sad to call out the author for the comma splice when Fic!Lincoln cries to Fic!Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Anne.
** When Lincoln points out that Fic!Ronnie Anne is not roughhousing with him, Lana suggests that it's because Fic!Lincoln is crying and she might feel the situation is too serious.
* OutOfCharacter:
** Fic!Lynn says, "Look who's going to the Ace Savvy convention!" as an "insult". The real Lynn would've been able to think up a better insult.
** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is Fic!Luan putting the video of Fic!Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload a video you've done of someone without their permission.
** Fic!Bobby agrees to lie to Fic!Lori, something which Bobby canonically wouldn't do.
** A minor one, but Fic!Lincoln becomes a bit dramatic when he describes his sisters' meanness as a "fate worse than death".
** Fic!Lola pantses the bully, which is a bit crass for her and seems more like something Lana would do.
* PlotHole:
** The sisters think Fic!Lincoln broke the remote on purpose because he was mad that the twins made him go to the toilet outside, but he didn't watch TV after then, and if he did break the remote, ''he'' wouldn't have been able to use it either.
** If Fic!Lily can point to herself and admit she broke the TV remote, why didn't she do it sooner? Also, why was the remote in Fic!Lincoln's room?
* {{Pun}}:
** Luan makes the "more clogs than a Dutch shoe factory" joke again...
** She then tells Lincoln he's just as "loud" as his sisters...
** And then later, she says that she can't "picture" her and her sisters not noticing the broken family portrait.
** Still later, she makes a joke "What prize do you get for winning an Australian chess tournament? A check, mate!".
** Finally, at the end, she makes the old "me three" joke.
* TheRunaway: Fic!Lincoln decides to run away to the Santiagos' after his sisters relentlessly tease him.
* SayMyName:
** Fic!Lori shouts, "LINCOLN!" when she thinks he took the remote and then later when she's looking for him during the fire.
** Luna, Lincoln, Lucy, and Lisa all shout, "LUAN!" when she tries to make the "umbrella building" joke.
** The fanfic sisters shout, "LINCOLN!!!" when they see him again after he runs away.
** Fic!Lincoln says, "Lisa!" upon seeing her unconscious.
** Fic!Luna shouts, "Oh no! LINCOLN!" when he's unconscious.
* ShoutOut:
** Luna quotes "Splish Splash" by saying the "Good Golly, Miss Molly!" lyric.
** Leni went through a ''Anime/SailorMoon'' phase when she was eight.
* SmartBall: Leni is the first one to realise that Lily's "men" is a mispronunciation of "mean".
* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Fic!Lisa has been playing chess since she was two, and the real Lisa has been playing chess since she was ''one''.
* TakeThat: When Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are bored to sleep by a movie, Luan bets it was ''Film/TwoThousandAndOneASpaceOdyssey''.
* ThinSkinnedBully: The bully in the fanfic runs away crying after being embarrassed by two six-year-olds.
* UncertainDoom: Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo are unaccounted for after the fire (because apparently only Fic!Charles, Fic!Cliff, Fic!Geo, and Fic!Walt were carried out), so it's unknown if they died or not. Thankfully, at least, Fic!Lana's other pets, plus Fic!Fangs and Fic!Gary must be accounted for, or else they would've been mentioned, but it's still unknown what happened to the reptiles.
* UnderwearOfPower: Fic!Lola teases Fic!Lincoln for liking superheroes who wear their "underwear on the outside". Lincoln critiques this for being an old joke.
* YouAreGrounded: Fic!Lynn Sr. grounds Fic!Lincoln for supposedly breaking the remote and then later grounds the fanfic sisters for being mean to their brother.
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The story begins with Fic!Lincoln getting ready for an Ace Savvy convention at... the comic book store? Where you can meet Ace Savvy in person? And the person who displays the best "superhero skills" gets to appear in the next Ace Savvy comic book.
He goes into the hallway to find all his sisters laughing at him and teasing him. Then, the twins don't let him go to the bathroom because they think he'll clog the toilet again. They continue to laugh at him and meanwhile, on the couch, Lily keeps pointing at the screen and saying, "Men!".
The fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Lincoln in Vanzilla and claim he'll probably screw up, and eventually he gets let out.
At the convention, Fic!Lincoln has to beat up a robot, while Fic!Luan films him doing it, but the robot beats ''him'' up instead and he ends up falling off the stage and knocking over the comic books. The sisters laugh at him again and Fic!Luan uploads the video to [=YouTube=] (breaking character by doing it without his permission). This makes him very sad and embarrassed on the way home, to the point of tears, but the sisters ''continue'' to tease him.
When they get home, they find the TV remote broken and the girls all blame Fic!Lincoln since he was the last person to use it apparently. This gets him grounded and denied dessert. The siblings comment on the uncharacteristic antagonism of the fanfic sisters, and it turns out that Lily's saying "men" is trying to say "mean".
Fic!Lincoln goes into his room to sulk and breaks his family photo. That night, he decides to run away, making some of the siblings reading the fanfic get teary-eyed themselves.
Fic!Lincoln ends up going to Fic!Bobby's house, where the truth about the Princess Pony book is revealed to Lucy's sisters. The fanfic Santiago kids let him stay at their place for a few nights and Fic!Bobby wants to break up with Fic!Lori, but Fic!Lincoln tells him not to tell his sisters he's there because he wants to wait and see if they really do miss him.
The next morning, the Fic!Lincoln has breakfast with the Santiagos and his sisters are eating at home (their parents are going off for some reason), when they notice Fic!Lincoln isn't present, so Fic!Leni goes up to find him, only to find him missing.
After breakfast, they go over to see Fic!Clyde, but his dads just slam the door on them. They try Fic!Pop-Pop but he doesn't know either, so (and strangely, Fic!Leni suggests this), they look at the Santiagos'. When they show up, Fic!Lincoln hides in Fic!Ronnie Anne's room while Fic!Bobby plays dumb. Fic!Lincoln is convinced that his sisters didn't look worried about him.
The fanfic sisters go home and search Fic!Lincoln's room again, where they find the broken family portrait and Fic!Luna realises that maybe he ran away because of them. (Meanwhile, the real Lincoln is wondering why they didn't cotton onto that idea sooner). Fic!Lily (nonverbally) reveals that ''she'' was the one who broke the TV remote (which is inexplicably in Fic!Lincoln's room).
Meanwhile, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are getting ready for bed, having just watched a (boring) movie. He overhears his sisters crying over the computer and realises they do miss him. The next morning, Fic!Bobby reveals Fic!Lincoln to the girls.
He comes home, and they apologise, but he's still sore at them. To be continued.
Part Two begins a day later, with Fic!Lincoln still mad at his sisters. Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. arrive and their daughters them in on the details. Then, the fanfic sisters go upstairs to discuss the matter and observe that Fic!Lincoln has forgiven Fic!Lily.
Fic!Lynn takes Fic!Lincoln for a bike ride and he falls off his bike. He's surprised she cares about him (which offends the real Lynn) and they get back on their bikes. The next day, a boy starts to bully Fic!Lincoln but gets beat up by... the twins? When they get home, Fic!Lisa notices an ad for a chess tournament at school, so she decides to teach Fic!Lincoln to play chess so he can enter. She does, and he wins.
Fic!Luan shows Fic!Lincoln a video of her being scared by Fic!Lucy's vampire suit, Fic!Lucy writes a poem about him, and Fic!Leni admits she was a hypocrite and reveals that she too was embarrassed at a convention as a kid. Fic!Lori and Fic!Luna apologise again, and the latter sings.
Finally, Fic!Lincoln seems to have forgiven his sisters, but when they start having an insult match and involve him in it, he gets mad at them all over again. Fic!Lisa, feeling bad, goes to bed, but then some of her liquid goes onto her lamp's cord and starts a fire. Everyone works to save everyone else and evacuate, but Fic!Lincoln ends up trapped in the burning house. His older sisters rescue him but he's unconscious. His sisters try to wake him up, while the real siblings start to cry, but thankfully, Fic!Lincoln wakes up.
The fanfic Louds then split up while their house is being repaired: the oldest three sisters with the Santiagos, Fic!Luan, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lisa, Fic!Lily, and the parents with Fic!Pop-Pop, and Fic!Lucy, Fic!Lincoln, and the twins at the [=McBride=] house.
When they arrive back, they find that Fic!Lori's perfume, the clothes Fic!Leni designed, Fic!Luna's music equipment, Mr. Coconuts, Fic!Lynn's sports balls, Fic!Lucy's poetry book, Fic!Lola's pageant clothes, Fic!Lisa's experiments, Fic!Lily's blankie, and Fic!Lincoln's comics, Bun-Bun, and a few of his clothes have been burnt up and Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo are nowhere to be seen. The family is sad, but happy that they're all still alive, and everyone watches a movie.
With that, the fanfic is done, and the Loud kids go out to Burpin' Burger to cheer themselves up.
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* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Lynn Sr. and Fic!Rita somehow didn't notice their daughters teasing Fic!Lincoln in Vanzilla, or Fic!Lincoln crying.
* AdaptationalJerkass: The sisters in the fanfic are more relentless with their teasing than in canon, continuing to tease Fic!Lincoln even when he's crying.
* AdaptationalWimp: Initially, a notable aversion-- Fic!Lincoln does cry in this story, but unlike other stories about Lincoln, there's a solid reason for it. However, he later plays this straight by being mad at his sisters for insulting him, when they were ''all'' insulting each other and the insults were just playful.
* BabySeeBabyDo: When Lola says, "No! Bad Lisa!", Lily echoes back, "Ba Wisa!".
* BallsGag: Lynn snickers when Fic!Lynn says, "My balls are gone!".
* BigWhat: All of the sisters except Lucy shout, "WHAT?!" upon finding out that it was Lucy who clogged the toilet.
* BittersweetEnding: The fanfic ends with several of the Loud kids' belongings burnt up and Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo unaccounted for, but everyone's happy to be alive.
* BlowingARaspberry: When Luan asks Lily to say, "girls", she blows a raspberry instead.
* CharacterExaggeration: Sure, the sisters tease Lincoln a lot, but in the fanfic, they keep doing it while he's crying and blame him without proof for breaking the remote.
* ContinuityNod:
** The sisters end up finding out the truth about Lucy clogging the toilet in "Sleuth or Consequences?".
** Lincoln remembers Episode One, where in the story they read, he was out-of-character for crying, but states that in this story, he has reason to cry.
** Lori mentions that the only time Bobby lied to her was telling her he liked her ShoddyShindig in "Party Down".
** Lincoln mentions the girls tiring Clyde's dads out, which happened in "Attention Deficit".
** The fanfic sisters feel guilty about fighting over money (in "It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud House"), which the real siblings point out is strange because that conflict was resolved. Lori and Lincoln also argue about who was in the wrong during the events of "Sound of Silence".
* CopycatMockery:
** Lincoln mockingly imitates his fanfic sisters for not realising how they could've offended Fic!Lincoln.
** When Lori says that they wouldn't have enough time to list Lincoln's dumb choices, he later teasingly parrots it by saying that he wouldn't have enough time to list the sisters' bad actions to him.
* DeathGlare:
** Lana glares at Lucy for not admitting it was she who clogged the toilet earlier.
** Luna gives Luan a dirty look for making a joke in a serious situation.
** Some of the sisters glare at Lily when Fic!Lincoln stops being mad at Fic!Lily early.
* DelayedReaction: The fanfic sisters don't realise how mean they've been to Fic!Lincoln until after he runs away.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: On being told Fic!Lincoln broke the remote, Fic!Lynn Sr. makes him go to bed without dessert.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Fic!Lana and Fic!Lola are referred to in the narration as "the two twins" several times.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The catalyst for Fic!Lincoln's bad day was him being embarrassed at the convention falling into the comics.
* EverybodyCries:
** When the fanfic sisters realise how mean they've been, they all start crying (downplayed, as Fic!Lucy only cries a few tears).
** All of Fic!Lincoln's sisters cry when he's unconscious and they're scared for his life, as does the real Lincoln and all his sisters.
* EveryoneHasStandards:
** The girls point out that while they may tease Lincoln a lot, they wouldn't keep teasing him if he cried about it.
** Lola might blame Lincoln for doing things without knowing for sure, but she always bases her blame on ''some'' evidence (unlike Fic!Lola who just blames Fic!Lincoln for breaking the remote willy-nilly). Like when she blamed him for clogging the toilet, it was because he did do it lots of times before.
** Lucy may like sad stories, but even see finds the end of Part One too sad.
** Lynn admits to having pantsed, punched, and thrown mud at Lincoln, but points out that she cares about his safety and would never seriously injure him.
* {{Facepalm}}:
** Lincoln facepalms when the fanfic sisters (except Fic!Luna) don't realise how they could've offended Fic!Lincoln.
** Fic!Lincoln facepalms when Fic!Clyde wants Fic!Lori to stay with him.
* ImpromptuCampfireCookout: Discussed when Lori jokingly claims that Fic!Lincoln's parents and sisters are around their housefire roasting marshmallows.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Fic!Luan films Fic!Lincoln crashing into the comic books at the convention and puts it on [=YouTube=].
* InsultBackfire:
** Lynn insults Lucy for looking like a vampire, which makes her proud.
** When the fanfic Loud kids are having an insult match, Fic!Luna is insulted for her loudness, which the real Luna is proud of.
* IResembleThatRemark: When Fic!Lola is insulted for her shouting, the real Lola shouts that she doesn't shout that often.
* LamePunReaction: The fanfic sisters groan at Fic!Luan's "ground beef" pun.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The fanfic sisters all cry upon realising how mean they've been to Fic!Lincoln.
* NationalStereotypes: Luan puns on the idea that Australians call everybody "mate" by joking that the prize for an Australian chess tournament is a "check, mate".
* NatureTinkling: When the fanfic twins don't let Fic!Lincoln go to the bathroom, Fic!Lana tells him to just go outside. This grosses out several of the siblings reading it, including Lori, but Lana says that she does it all the time.
* NotAfraidToDie: Lucy claims that death isn't bad, but rather "a natural, beautiful part of the cycle of life."
* NotHyperbole: Lucy says that Lincoln's joke about her having powers was "so funny she forgot how to laugh". Then, it turns out that she really ''did'' forget.
* PantsPullingPrank: Fic!Lola pantses the bully to humiliate him.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
** Lisa is too sad to call out the author for the comma splice when Fic!Lincoln cries to Fic!Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Anne.
** When Lincoln points out that Fic!Ronnie Anne is not roughhousing with him, Lana suggests that it's because Fic!Lincoln is crying and she might feel the situation is too serious.
* OutOfCharacter:
** Fic!Lynn says, "Look who's going to the Ace Savvy convention!" as an "insult". The real Lynn would've been able to think up a better insult.
** The fanfic sisters are all meaner than in canon, but one noteworthy part of this is Fic!Luan putting the video of Fic!Lincoln's mistake on [=YouTube=] without getting his permission, even though one of her own rules is never to upload a video you've done of someone without their permission.
** Fic!Bobby agrees to lie to Fic!Lori, something which Bobby canonically wouldn't do.
** A minor one, but Fic!Lincoln becomes a bit dramatic when he describes his sisters' meanness as a "fate worse than death".
** Fic!Lola pantses the bully, which is a bit crass for her and seems more like something Lana would do.
* PlotHole:
** The sisters think Fic!Lincoln broke the remote on purpose because he was mad that the twins made him go to the toilet outside, but he didn't watch TV after then, and if he did break the remote, ''he'' wouldn't have been able to use it either.
** If Fic!Lily can point to herself and admit she broke the TV remote, why didn't she do it sooner? Also, why was the remote in Fic!Lincoln's room?
* {{Pun}}:
** Luan makes the "more clogs than a Dutch shoe factory" joke again...
** She then tells Lincoln he's just as "loud" as his sisters...
** And then later, she says that she can't "picture" her and her sisters not noticing the broken family portrait.
** Still later, she makes a joke "What prize do you get for winning an Australian chess tournament? A check, mate!".
** Finally, at the end, she makes the old "me three" joke.
* TheRunaway: Fic!Lincoln decides to run away to the Santiagos' after his sisters relentlessly tease him.
* SayMyName:
** Fic!Lori shouts, "LINCOLN!" when she thinks he took the remote and then later when she's looking for him during the fire.
** Luna, Lincoln, Lucy, and Lisa all shout, "LUAN!" when she tries to make the "umbrella building" joke.
** The fanfic sisters shout, "LINCOLN!!!" when they see him again after he runs away.
** Fic!Lincoln says, "Lisa!" upon seeing her unconscious.
** Fic!Luna shouts, "Oh no! LINCOLN!" when he's unconscious.
* ShoutOut:
** Luna quotes "Splish Splash" by saying the "Good Golly, Miss Molly!" lyric.
** Leni went through a ''Anime/SailorMoon'' phase when she was eight.
* SmartBall: Leni is the first one to realise that Lily's "men" is a mispronunciation of "mean".
* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Fic!Lisa has been playing chess since she was two, and the real Lisa has been playing chess since she was ''one''.
* TakeThat: When Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are bored to sleep by a movie, Luan bets it was ''Film/TwoThousandAndOneASpaceOdyssey''.
* ThinSkinnedBully: The bully in the fanfic runs away crying after being embarrassed by two six-year-olds.
* UncertainDoom: Fic!Izzy and Fic!El Diablo are unaccounted for after the fire (because apparently only Fic!Charles, Fic!Cliff, Fic!Geo, and Fic!Walt were carried out), so it's unknown if they died or not. Thankfully, at least, Fic!Lana's other pets, plus Fic!Fangs and Fic!Gary must be accounted for, or else they would've been mentioned, but it's still unknown what happened to the reptiles.
* UnderwearOfPower: Fic!Lola teases Fic!Lincoln for liking superheroes who wear their "underwear on the outside". Lincoln critiques this for being an old joke.
* YouAreGrounded: Fic!Lynn Sr. grounds Fic!Lincoln for supposedly breaking the remote and then later grounds the fanfic sisters for being mean to their brother.
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