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* AllGirlsLovePonies: Princess Pony is described as "girly" in the fanfic and by Lola.
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It opens with Fic!Lucy watching Princess Pony (which the story calls "Pony Princess") on TV in her pony pyjamas. Lucy corrects the name and is a bit annoyed at another fanfic referencing Princess Pony. Her siblings are away watching one of Fic!Lynn's games and Fic!Lucy lied that she was going to stay with Fic!Haiku, but then Fic!Lincoln comes back and sees her in a "pony costume". Luna points out that pony pyjamas and a pony costume are quite different.
Fic!Lucy reveals to Fic!Lincoln that she watches Princess Pony in her pony pyjamas on her "break". This confuses the real siblings, since Lucy's break seems like her break from the darkness, but Lincoln already knows about that. Fic!Lucy is worried about being mocked for liking "girls' stuff" (even though she ''is'' a girl), but Fic!Lincoln points out that Fic!Lana isn't mocked for being a "tomboy". Luna points out the double standard that women and girls are allowed to bend gender stereotypes without being mocked more often than men and boys, and then we get an adult joke from her when she says, "I know I do" after Grammy asks if the author hates periods.
Fic!Lincoln goes to the game but won't stop chuckling. Lucy asks if it's really that funny and Lola says that if Fic!Lucy was wearing pyjamas with ponies on them, then no, but if she was wearing a pony ''costume'', then yes, it would be funny and they would indeed tease.
The twins ask Fic!Lincoln what's so funny, and he admits that it's Fic!Lucy's clothes. Luna points out that if that were to happen, the twins would pester him for info about the clothes. Sure enough, they (and Fic!Leni) start to pester him and wonder if it's her vampire costume or her skeleton costume, even though despite Lucy's love for Halloween, it's not actually Halloween.
Fic!Lola then guesses the secret as she owns pony pyjamas and Fic!Lucy is close to her in size (even though Fic!Lola doesn't know that Fic!Lucy likes ponies, the real Lola doesn't own pony pyjamas, and the real Lucy doesn't borrow things without asking). Then, Fic!Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy watches a "girl show". So Fic!Lincoln spills the beans and someone, confusingly, says, "Yay!". Fic!Lincoln tells them to let it go and Lana points out that the rule is the siblings are allowed a week of teasing (or a month in the case of the twins).
The sisters say that they will not let it go as it is "wrong" to have an unpopular opinion. The real siblings disagree and talk about their own unpopular opinions, but cringe when Lana reveals she likes anchovies on pizza. Fic!Lincoln pleads them not to tell anyone, but they insist on telling Fic!Lucy's friends.
The next day, Fic!Lynn reveals that the whole elementary school knows the secret. Fic!Haiku ends their friendship (which Lucy points out would be hypocritical since the real Haiku watches a "baby show" called "Frank the Foreman".) Fic!Lucy, mortified, hides in her locker and Fic!Lincoln feels guilty and apologises, but Fic!Lucy doesn't believe him.
Fic!Lincoln tries to earn her forgiveness with chocolates and working for her but she refuses (and apparently hates chocolate). She then tells him to prove he is sorry by humiliating himself in front of the whole town, which the real Lucy takes issue with: she knows Lincoln wouldn't be so mean, and forgiveness isn't something you earn by punishing yourself. Fic!Lucy then tells her brother how to do that: by wearing her pony pyjamas (even though they wouldn't fit him).
She sets up a red carpet for everyone to watch, and the real Lucy reveals that while she did appreciate what Lincoln did to make up for embarrassing his sisters in the episode "Making the Case", that doesn't mean she'd like to see him suffer. The story then ''ends with Fic!Lincoln being mad at Fic!Lucy and her crying''.
Fic!Lucy reveals to Fic!Lincoln that she watches Princess Pony in her pony pyjamas on her "break". This confuses the real siblings, since Lucy's break seems like her break from the darkness, but Lincoln already knows about that. Fic!Lucy is worried about being mocked for liking "girls' stuff" (even though she ''is'' a girl), but Fic!Lincoln points out that Fic!Lana isn't mocked for being a "tomboy". Luna points out the double standard that women and girls are allowed to bend gender stereotypes without being mocked more often than men and boys, and then we get an adult joke from her when she says, "I know I do" after Grammy asks if the author hates periods.
Fic!Lincoln goes to the game but won't stop chuckling. Lucy asks if it's really that funny and Lola says that if Fic!Lucy was wearing pyjamas with ponies on them, then no, but if she was wearing a pony ''costume'', then yes, it would be funny and they would indeed tease.
The twins ask Fic!Lincoln what's so funny, and he admits that it's Fic!Lucy's clothes. Luna points out that if that were to happen, the twins would pester him for info about the clothes. Sure enough, they (and Fic!Leni) start to pester him and wonder if it's her vampire costume or her skeleton costume, even though despite Lucy's love for Halloween, it's not actually Halloween.
Fic!Lola then guesses the secret as she owns pony pyjamas and Fic!Lucy is close to her in size (even though Fic!Lola doesn't know that Fic!Lucy likes ponies, the real Lola doesn't own pony pyjamas, and the real Lucy doesn't borrow things without asking). Then, Fic!Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy watches a "girl show". So Fic!Lincoln spills the beans and someone, confusingly, says, "Yay!". Fic!Lincoln tells them to let it go and Lana points out that the rule is the siblings are allowed a week of teasing (or a month in the case of the twins).
The sisters say that they will not let it go as it is "wrong" to have an unpopular opinion. The real siblings disagree and talk about their own unpopular opinions, but cringe when Lana reveals she likes anchovies on pizza. Fic!Lincoln pleads them not to tell anyone, but they insist on telling Fic!Lucy's friends.
The next day, Fic!Lynn reveals that the whole elementary school knows the secret. Fic!Haiku ends their friendship (which Lucy points out would be hypocritical since the real Haiku watches a "baby show" called "Frank the Foreman".) Fic!Lucy, mortified, hides in her locker and Fic!Lincoln feels guilty and apologises, but Fic!Lucy doesn't believe him.
Fic!Lincoln tries to earn her forgiveness with chocolates and working for her but she refuses (and apparently hates chocolate). She then tells him to prove he is sorry by humiliating himself in front of the whole town, which the real Lucy takes issue with: she knows Lincoln wouldn't be so mean, and forgiveness isn't something you earn by punishing yourself. Fic!Lucy then tells her brother how to do that: by wearing her pony pyjamas (even though they wouldn't fit him).
She sets up a red carpet for everyone to watch, and the real Lucy reveals that while she did appreciate what Lincoln did to make up for embarrassing his sisters in the episode "Making the Case", that doesn't mean she'd like to see him suffer. The story then ''ends with Fic!Lincoln being mad at Fic!Lucy and her crying''.
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It opens with Fic!Lucy fanfic Lucy watching Princess Pony (which the story calls "Pony Princess") on TV in her pony pyjamas. Lucy corrects the name and is a bit annoyed at another fanfic referencing Princess Pony. Her siblings are away watching one of Fic!Lynn's Lynn's games and Fic!Lucy fanfic Lucy lied that she was going to stay with Fic!Haiku, Haiku, but then Fic!Lincoln Lincoln comes back and sees her in a "pony costume". Luna (the real one) points out that pony pyjamas and a pony costume are quite different.
Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy reveals to Fic!Lincoln Lincoln that she watches Princess Pony in her pony pyjamas on her "break". This confuses the real siblings, since Lucy's break seems like her break from the darkness, but Lincoln already knows about that. Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy is worried about being mocked for liking "girls' stuff" (even though she ''is'' a girl), but Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln points out that Fic!Lana Lana isn't mocked for being a "tomboy". The real Luna points out the double standard that women and girls are allowed to bend gender stereotypes without being mocked more often than men and boys, and then we get an adult joke from her when she says, "I know I do" after Grammy asks if the author hates periods.
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln goes to the game but won't stop chuckling. On the couch, Lucy asks if it's really that funny and Lola says that if Fic!Lucy fanfic Lucy was wearing pyjamas with ponies on them, then no, but if she was wearing a pony ''costume'', then yes, it would be funny and they would indeed tease.
The twins askFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln what's so funny, and he admits that it's Fic!Lucy's Lucy's clothes. The real Luna points out that if that were to happen, the twins would pester him for info about the clothes. Sure enough, they (and Fic!Leni) Leni) start to pester him and wonder if it's her vampire costume or her skeleton costume, even though despite Lucy's love for Halloween, it's not actually Halloween.
Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola then guesses the secret as she owns pony pyjamas and Fic!Lucy Lucy is close to her in size (even though Fic!Lola fanfic Lola doesn't know that Fic!Lucy Lucy likes ponies, the real Lola doesn't own pony pyjamas, and the real Lucy doesn't borrow things without asking). Then, Fic!Leni fanfic Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy Lucy watches a "girl show". So Fic!Lincoln Lincoln spills the beans and someone, confusingly, says, "Yay!". Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln tells them to let it go and the real Lana points out that the rule is the siblings are allowed a week of teasing (or a month in the case of the twins).
The sisters say that they will not let it go as it is "wrong" to have an unpopular opinion. The real siblings disagree and talk about their own unpopular opinions, but cringe when Lana reveals she likes anchovies on pizza.Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln pleads them not to tell anyone, but they insist on telling Fic!Lucy's Lucy's friends.
The next day,Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn reveals that the whole elementary school knows the secret. Fic!Haiku Haiku ends their friendship (which Lucy points out would be hypocritical since the real Haiku watches a "baby show" called "Frank the Foreman".) Fic!Lucy, Fanfic Lucy, mortified, hides in her locker and Fic!Lincoln Lincoln feels guilty and apologises, but Fic!Lucy Lucy doesn't believe him.
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln tries to earn her forgiveness with chocolates and working for her but she refuses (and apparently hates chocolate). She then tells him to prove he is sorry by humiliating himself in front of the whole town, which the real Lucy takes issue with: she knows Lincoln wouldn't be so mean, and forgiveness isn't something you earn by punishing yourself. Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy then tells her brother how to do that: by wearing her pony pyjamas (even though they wouldn't fit him).
She sets up a red carpet for everyone to watch, and the real Lucy reveals that while she did appreciate what Lincoln did to make up for embarrassing his sisters in the episode "Making the Case", that doesn't mean she'd like to see him suffer. The story then ''ends withFic!Lincoln Lincoln being mad at Fic!Lucy Lucy and her crying''.
The twins ask
The sisters say that they will not let it go as it is "wrong" to have an unpopular opinion. The real siblings disagree and talk about their own unpopular opinions, but cringe when Lana reveals she likes anchovies on pizza.
The next day,
She sets up a red carpet for everyone to watch, and the real Lucy reveals that while she did appreciate what Lincoln did to make up for embarrassing his sisters in the episode "Making the Case", that doesn't mean she'd like to see him suffer. The story then ''ends with
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** Fic!Haiku ends her friendship with Fic!Lucy and calls her a loser.
** While Fic!Lucy is mainly all right, she was uncharacteristically mean only being mad at Fic!Lincoln for starting it, when the girls are equally at fault for spreading the secret, and then later refuses to forgive him.
** While Fic!Lucy is mainly all right, she was uncharacteristically mean only being mad at Fic!Lincoln for starting it, when the girls are equally at fault for spreading the secret, and then later refuses to forgive him.
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** Fic!Haiku Fanfic Haiku ends her friendship with Fic!Lucy Lucy and calls her a loser.
** WhileFic!Lucy fanfic Lucy is mainly all right, she was uncharacteristically mean only being mad at Fic!Lincoln Lincoln for starting it, when the girls are equally at fault for spreading the secret, and then later refuses to forgive him.
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* BadMoodRetreat: Fic!Lucy hides in her locker to deal with her embarrassment.
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* BrainyBaby: Discussed when Fic!Lincoln says that, for all they know, it could have been Fic!Lily who said, "What is it, Lola?".
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* BadMoodRetreat: Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy hides in her locker to deal with her embarrassment.
* BrainyBaby: Discussed whenFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln says that, for all they know, it could have been Fic!Lily Lily in the story who said, "What is it, Lola?".
* BrainyBaby: Discussed when
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* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: Fic!Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy watches a "girl show".
* DissonantSerenity: Luna points out that Fic!Lucy seems mellow for someone who had her secret blabbed to her whole school.
* DoesNotLikeSpam: Fic!Lucy apparently hates chocolate, unlike the real Lucy.
* DissonantSerenity: Luna points out that Fic!Lucy seems mellow for someone who had her secret blabbed to her whole school.
* DoesNotLikeSpam: Fic!Lucy apparently hates chocolate, unlike the real Lucy.
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* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: Fic!Leni Fanfic Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy Lucy watches a "girl show".
* DissonantSerenity: Luna points out thatFic!Lucy fanfic Lucy seems mellow for someone who had her secret blabbed to her whole school.
* DoesNotLikeSpam:Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy apparently hates chocolate, unlike the real Lucy.
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with Fic!Lucy feeling guilty for the whole ordeal and crying while Fic!Lincoln is mad at her.
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with Fic!Lucy Lucy feeling guilty for the whole ordeal and crying while Fic!Lincoln Lincoln is mad at her.
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* EmbarrassingPyjamas: Fic!Lucy is ridiculed for her pony pyjamas, and the kids on the couch all agree that a pony onesie is more embarrassing than pony-printed pyjamas.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The fanfic is about Fic!Lucy being embarrassed over her secret coming out.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The fanfic is about Fic!Lucy being embarrassed over her secret coming out.
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* EmbarrassingPyjamas: Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy is ridiculed for her pony pyjamas, and the kids on the couch all agree that a pony onesie is more embarrassing than pony-printed pyjamas.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The fanfic is aboutFic!Lucy Lucy being embarrassed over her secret coming out.
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* IdiotPlot: Discussed when Fic!Lola claims that the Princess Pony characters make a lot of dumb decisions.
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* IdiotPlot: Discussed InUniverse when Fic!Lola fanfic Lola claims that the Princess Pony characters make a lot of dumb decisions.
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** Fic!Lucy claims that Fic!Lincoln is no longer her brother when she's mad at him.
** Implied at the end when Fic!Lucy is described as Fic!Lincoln's "former sister".
** Implied at the end when Fic!Lucy is described as Fic!Lincoln's "former sister".
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** Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy claims that Fic!Lincoln Lincoln is no longer her brother when she's mad at him.
** Implied at the end whenFic!Lucy fanfic Lucy is described as Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's "former sister".
** Implied at the end when
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** One of the sisters is ''excited'' that Fic!Lucy likes Princess Pony for some reason.
** Fic!Lucy is meaner than in canon and hates chocolate.
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**Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy is meaner than in canon and hates chocolate.
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** How did Fic!Lola and Fic!Leni guess the truth?
** When Fic!Lola revealed that the pony pyjamas were hers, why did no one (not even Fic!Lana!) tease ''her'' for it?
** How does Fic!Lola know that the characters in Princess Pony have no personality and make dumb decisions if she doesn't follow it?
** When Fic!Lola revealed that the pony pyjamas were hers, why did no one (not even Fic!Lana!) tease ''her'' for it?
** How does Fic!Lola know that the characters in Princess Pony have no personality and make dumb decisions if she doesn't follow it?
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** How did Fic!Lola the fanfic versions Lola and Fic!Leni Leni guess the truth?
** WhenFic!Lola fanfic Lola revealed that the pony pyjamas were hers, why did no one (not even Fic!Lana!) Lana!) tease ''her'' for it?
** How doesFic!Lola fanfic Lola know that the characters in Princess Pony have no personality and make dumb decisions if she doesn't follow it?
** When
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We're back on the couch and Lincoln has brought along Luna, Lucy, and the twins. They will be reading an anonymously-submitted story called... uh-oh... ''Lincoln Betrays Lucy''.
It opens with Fic!Lucy watching Princess Pony (which the story calls "Pony Princess") on TV in her pony pyjamas. Lucy corrects the name and is a bit annoyed at another fanfic referencing Princess Pony. Her siblings are away watching one of Fic!Lynn's games and Fic!Lucy lied that she was going to stay with Fic!Haiku, but then Fic!Lincoln comes back and sees her in a "pony costume". Luna points out that pony pyjamas and a pony costume are quite different.
Fic!Lucy reveals to Fic!Lincoln that she watches Princess Pony in her pony pyjamas on her "break". This confuses the real siblings, since Lucy's break seems like her break from the darkness, but Lincoln already knows about that. Fic!Lucy is worried about being mocked for liking "girls' stuff" (even though she ''is'' a girl), but Fic!Lincoln points out that Fic!Lana isn't mocked for being a "tomboy". Luna points out the double standard that women and girls are allowed to bend gender stereotypes without being mocked more often than men and boys, and then we get an adult joke from her when she says, "I know I do" after Grammy asks if the author hates periods.
Fic!Lincoln goes to the game but won't stop chuckling. Lucy asks if it's really that funny and Lola says that if Fic!Lucy was wearing pyjamas with ponies on them, then no, but if she was wearing a pony ''costume'', then yes, it would be funny and they would indeed tease.
The twins ask Fic!Lincoln what's so funny, and he admits that it's Fic!Lucy's clothes. Luna points out that if that were to happen, the twins would pester him for info about the clothes. Sure enough, they (and Fic!Leni) start to pester him and wonder if it's her vampire costume or her skeleton costume, even though despite Lucy's love for Halloween, it's not actually Halloween.
Fic!Lola then guesses the secret as she owns pony pyjamas and Fic!Lucy is close to her in size (even though Fic!Lola doesn't know that Fic!Lucy likes ponies, the real Lola doesn't own pony pyjamas, and the real Lucy doesn't borrow things without asking). Then, Fic!Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy watches a "girl show". So Fic!Lincoln spills the beans and someone, confusingly, says, "Yay!". Fic!Lincoln tells them to let it go and Lana points out that the rule is the siblings are allowed a week of teasing (or a month in the case of the twins).
The sisters say that they will not let it go as it is "wrong" to have an unpopular opinion. The real siblings disagree and talk about their own unpopular opinions, but cringe when Lana reveals she likes anchovies on pizza. Fic!Lincoln pleads them not to tell anyone, but they insist on telling Fic!Lucy's friends.
The next day, Fic!Lynn reveals that the whole elementary school knows the secret. Fic!Haiku ends their friendship (which Lucy points out would be hypocritical since the real Haiku watches a "baby show" called "Frank the Foreman".) Fic!Lucy, mortified, hides in her locker and Fic!Lincoln feels guilty and apologises, but Fic!Lucy doesn't believe him.
Fic!Lincoln tries to earn her forgiveness with chocolates and working for her but she refuses (and apparently hates chocolate). She then tells him to prove he is sorry by humiliating himself in front of the whole town, which the real Lucy takes issue with: she knows Lincoln wouldn't be so mean, and forgiveness isn't something you earn by punishing yourself. Fic!Lucy then tells her brother how to do that: by wearing her pony pyjamas (even though they wouldn't fit him).
She sets up a red carpet for everyone to watch, and the real Lucy reveals that while she did appreciate what Lincoln did to make up for embarrassing his sisters in the episode "Making the Case", that doesn't mean she'd like to see him suffer. The story then ''ends with Fic!Lincoln being mad at Fic!Lucy and her crying''.
The real Louds understandably think the story is miserable and feel dirty. The kids then read that it's a parody of "the infamous ''WesternAnimation/HeyArnold'' episode", but that does not make it any better.
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* AdaptationalJerkass:
** While the sisters probably would tease Lucy for liking ponies, they wouldn't if they knew her feelings were seriously hurt. Also, they wouldn't blab to the whole school.
** Fic!Haiku ends her friendship with Fic!Lucy and calls her a loser.
** While Fic!Lucy is mainly all right, she was uncharacteristically mean only being mad at Fic!Lincoln for starting it, when the girls are equally at fault for spreading the secret, and then later refuses to forgive him.
* AllGirlsLovePonies: Princess Pony is described as "girly" in the fanfic and by Lola.
* AlliterativeTitle: Mentioned when Lucy brings up a kids' show called "Frank the Foreman".
* BadMoodRetreat: Fic!Lucy hides in her locker to deal with her embarrassment.
* BrainyBaby: Discussed when Fic!Lincoln says that, for all they know, it could have been Fic!Lily who said, "What is it, Lola?".
* ContinuityNod: Lincoln remembers posting embarrassing videos of his sisters, which happened in "Making the Case".
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: Fic!Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy watches a "girl show".
* DissonantSerenity: Luna points out that Fic!Lucy seems mellow for someone who had her secret blabbed to her whole school.
* DoesNotLikeSpam: Fic!Lucy apparently hates chocolate, unlike the real Lucy.
* DoubleStandard: Discussed when Luna mentions that girls can bend gender stereotypes and it's socially acceptable, but not so much boys.
* DownerEnding: The story ends with Fic!Lucy feeling guilty for the whole ordeal and crying while Fic!Lincoln is mad at her.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Apparently, Lola once wet herself on a school trip and Lana called her "Betsy Wetsy".
* EmbarrassingPyjamas: Fic!Lucy is ridiculed for her pony pyjamas, and the kids on the couch all agree that a pony onesie is more embarrassing than pony-printed pyjamas.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The fanfic is about Fic!Lucy being embarrassed over her secret coming out.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lincoln, Luna, Lucy, and Lola are pretty tolerant of unpopular opinions, but cringe when Lana mentions she likes anchovies on pizza.
* HiddenDepths: Apparently, Haiku watches a "baby show".
* IdiotPlot: Discussed when Fic!Lola claims that the Princess Pony characters make a lot of dumb decisions.
* IHaveNoSon:
** Fic!Lucy claims that Fic!Lincoln is no longer her brother when she's mad at him.
** Implied at the end when Fic!Lucy is described as Fic!Lincoln's "former sister".
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, Lucy has "complicated" reasons for liking Princess Pony, but they're not explained.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Haiku is sombre and apparently hates cheerful people, yet she apparently watches a "baby show" called "Frank the Foreman".
* OnlyOneFindsItFun: Lana is the only one of the reading Louds to like anchovies on pizza.
* OutOfCharacter:
** One of the sisters is ''excited'' that Fic!Lucy likes Princess Pony for some reason.
** Fic!Lucy is meaner than in canon and hates chocolate.
* PlotHole:
** How did Fic!Lola and Fic!Leni guess the truth?
** When Fic!Lola revealed that the pony pyjamas were hers, why did no one (not even Fic!Lana!) tease ''her'' for it?
** How does Fic!Lola know that the characters in Princess Pony have no personality and make dumb decisions if she doesn't follow it?
* PottyFailure: Lola apparently once wet herself on a school trip and Lana teased her for a month.
* ShoutOut: The fanfiction is a parody of an episode of ''Hey, Arnold!''.
* StockYuck: Nobody but Lana likes anchovies on pizza, and it's the one thing that they feel is wrong to have an unpopular opinion on.
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It opens with Fic!Lucy watching Princess Pony (which the story calls "Pony Princess") on TV in her pony pyjamas. Lucy corrects the name and is a bit annoyed at another fanfic referencing Princess Pony. Her siblings are away watching one of Fic!Lynn's games and Fic!Lucy lied that she was going to stay with Fic!Haiku, but then Fic!Lincoln comes back and sees her in a "pony costume". Luna points out that pony pyjamas and a pony costume are quite different.
Fic!Lucy reveals to Fic!Lincoln that she watches Princess Pony in her pony pyjamas on her "break". This confuses the real siblings, since Lucy's break seems like her break from the darkness, but Lincoln already knows about that. Fic!Lucy is worried about being mocked for liking "girls' stuff" (even though she ''is'' a girl), but Fic!Lincoln points out that Fic!Lana isn't mocked for being a "tomboy". Luna points out the double standard that women and girls are allowed to bend gender stereotypes without being mocked more often than men and boys, and then we get an adult joke from her when she says, "I know I do" after Grammy asks if the author hates periods.
Fic!Lincoln goes to the game but won't stop chuckling. Lucy asks if it's really that funny and Lola says that if Fic!Lucy was wearing pyjamas with ponies on them, then no, but if she was wearing a pony ''costume'', then yes, it would be funny and they would indeed tease.
The twins ask Fic!Lincoln what's so funny, and he admits that it's Fic!Lucy's clothes. Luna points out that if that were to happen, the twins would pester him for info about the clothes. Sure enough, they (and Fic!Leni) start to pester him and wonder if it's her vampire costume or her skeleton costume, even though despite Lucy's love for Halloween, it's not actually Halloween.
Fic!Lola then guesses the secret as she owns pony pyjamas and Fic!Lucy is close to her in size (even though Fic!Lola doesn't know that Fic!Lucy likes ponies, the real Lola doesn't own pony pyjamas, and the real Lucy doesn't borrow things without asking). Then, Fic!Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy watches a "girl show". So Fic!Lincoln spills the beans and someone, confusingly, says, "Yay!". Fic!Lincoln tells them to let it go and Lana points out that the rule is the siblings are allowed a week of teasing (or a month in the case of the twins).
The sisters say that they will not let it go as it is "wrong" to have an unpopular opinion. The real siblings disagree and talk about their own unpopular opinions, but cringe when Lana reveals she likes anchovies on pizza. Fic!Lincoln pleads them not to tell anyone, but they insist on telling Fic!Lucy's friends.
The next day, Fic!Lynn reveals that the whole elementary school knows the secret. Fic!Haiku ends their friendship (which Lucy points out would be hypocritical since the real Haiku watches a "baby show" called "Frank the Foreman".) Fic!Lucy, mortified, hides in her locker and Fic!Lincoln feels guilty and apologises, but Fic!Lucy doesn't believe him.
Fic!Lincoln tries to earn her forgiveness with chocolates and working for her but she refuses (and apparently hates chocolate). She then tells him to prove he is sorry by humiliating himself in front of the whole town, which the real Lucy takes issue with: she knows Lincoln wouldn't be so mean, and forgiveness isn't something you earn by punishing yourself. Fic!Lucy then tells her brother how to do that: by wearing her pony pyjamas (even though they wouldn't fit him).
She sets up a red carpet for everyone to watch, and the real Lucy reveals that while she did appreciate what Lincoln did to make up for embarrassing his sisters in the episode "Making the Case", that doesn't mean she'd like to see him suffer. The story then ''ends with Fic!Lincoln being mad at Fic!Lucy and her crying''.
The real Louds understandably think the story is miserable and feel dirty. The kids then read that it's a parody of "the infamous ''WesternAnimation/HeyArnold'' episode", but that does not make it any better.
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* AdaptationalJerkass:
** While the sisters probably would tease Lucy for liking ponies, they wouldn't if they knew her feelings were seriously hurt. Also, they wouldn't blab to the whole school.
** Fic!Haiku ends her friendship with Fic!Lucy and calls her a loser.
** While Fic!Lucy is mainly all right, she was uncharacteristically mean only being mad at Fic!Lincoln for starting it, when the girls are equally at fault for spreading the secret, and then later refuses to forgive him.
* AllGirlsLovePonies: Princess Pony is described as "girly" in the fanfic and by Lola.
* AlliterativeTitle: Mentioned when Lucy brings up a kids' show called "Frank the Foreman".
* BadMoodRetreat: Fic!Lucy hides in her locker to deal with her embarrassment.
* BrainyBaby: Discussed when Fic!Lincoln says that, for all they know, it could have been Fic!Lily who said, "What is it, Lola?".
* ContinuityNod: Lincoln remembers posting embarrassing videos of his sisters, which happened in "Making the Case".
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: Fic!Leni randomly guesses that Fic!Lucy watches a "girl show".
* DissonantSerenity: Luna points out that Fic!Lucy seems mellow for someone who had her secret blabbed to her whole school.
* DoesNotLikeSpam: Fic!Lucy apparently hates chocolate, unlike the real Lucy.
* DoubleStandard: Discussed when Luna mentions that girls can bend gender stereotypes and it's socially acceptable, but not so much boys.
* DownerEnding: The story ends with Fic!Lucy feeling guilty for the whole ordeal and crying while Fic!Lincoln is mad at her.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Apparently, Lola once wet herself on a school trip and Lana called her "Betsy Wetsy".
* EmbarrassingPyjamas: Fic!Lucy is ridiculed for her pony pyjamas, and the kids on the couch all agree that a pony onesie is more embarrassing than pony-printed pyjamas.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: The fanfic is about Fic!Lucy being embarrassed over her secret coming out.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lincoln, Luna, Lucy, and Lola are pretty tolerant of unpopular opinions, but cringe when Lana mentions she likes anchovies on pizza.
* HiddenDepths: Apparently, Haiku watches a "baby show".
* IdiotPlot: Discussed when Fic!Lola claims that the Princess Pony characters make a lot of dumb decisions.
* IHaveNoSon:
** Fic!Lucy claims that Fic!Lincoln is no longer her brother when she's mad at him.
** Implied at the end when Fic!Lucy is described as Fic!Lincoln's "former sister".
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, Lucy has "complicated" reasons for liking Princess Pony, but they're not explained.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Haiku is sombre and apparently hates cheerful people, yet she apparently watches a "baby show" called "Frank the Foreman".
* OnlyOneFindsItFun: Lana is the only one of the reading Louds to like anchovies on pizza.
* OutOfCharacter:
** One of the sisters is ''excited'' that Fic!Lucy likes Princess Pony for some reason.
** Fic!Lucy is meaner than in canon and hates chocolate.
* PlotHole:
** How did Fic!Lola and Fic!Leni guess the truth?
** When Fic!Lola revealed that the pony pyjamas were hers, why did no one (not even Fic!Lana!) tease ''her'' for it?
** How does Fic!Lola know that the characters in Princess Pony have no personality and make dumb decisions if she doesn't follow it?
* PottyFailure: Lola apparently once wet herself on a school trip and Lana teased her for a month.
* ShoutOut: The fanfiction is a parody of an episode of ''Hey, Arnold!''.
* StockYuck: Nobody but Lana likes anchovies on pizza, and it's the one thing that they feel is wrong to have an unpopular opinion on.
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