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* AgeInappropriateArt: Apparently, Lucy reads a lot of fanfiction and knows what {{Shipping}} is.
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** Fanfic Lori, Luan, and Lynn are very mean and demanding to Fic!Lincoln, ordering him around.
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** Fanfic Lori, Luan, and Lynn are very mean and demanding to Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, ordering him around.
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* EntertainmentAboveTheirAge: Apparently, Lucy reads a lot of fanfiction and knows what {{Shipping}} is.
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*HiddenDepths: At one point, Lisa correctly quotes [[Literature/TheBible Matthew 6:5]], implying that she is proficient in religious studies as well as science.
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We open on the Louds going back from the campground and Fic!Lori has had fun. This must be set after the time Lincoln waited on them, since the only campground they've ever been to is Scratchy Bottom and that's the only time they had fun there. It is-- and already, the sisters are acting strangely mean, with Fic!Lynn finding Fic!Lincoln getting chased by a bear funny and Fic!Lisa wanting him to wait on them again, even though he did it to make up for his past misdeeds and it was just a one-off.
As it turns out, Fic!Lincoln has fallen asleep in Vanzilla, so Fic!Luna and Fic!Leni carry him home and make a big show of what good sisters they are. Fic!Lori and, to a lesser extent, the real Lori point out that even though it's good to be kind to Lincoln, there's no point in rubbing it in like that, and Lisa quotes a relevant Bible passage.
Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna start to feel guilty for how they treated Fic!Lincoln (even though, as the real siblings point out, he was only doing it because he screwed up and he ''chose'' to do it) and they decide to take him for a shopping spree, since Fic!Leni just got her license. This frustrates the real Leni, who still can't drive.
Lincoln points out that he finds other places than the mall fun, and Fic!Lola teases Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna by saying, "The princes are back from kissing Sleeping Beauty!", which makes Luna wonder what being a boy is like. Lola claims that boys are gross, but she loves Lincoln anyway. The rest of the fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna.
Later, the kids are watching ''The Dream Boat'' except for Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, who are unpacking, and Fic!Lincoln, who is still asleep. Then, the fanfic parents have to go for a few days because one of Fic!Ruth's cats is acting up at the vet after eating pudding, so the TV-watching sisters decide to wake up Fic!Lincoln and have him wait on them again.
Fic!Luna and Fic!Leni are hanging out in Fic!Lincoln's room and complaining of their sisters' teasing of their being nice to him. Apparently, when Fic!Luna saved him from "hoodlum boys", Fic!Luan called her a "soccer mom" and Fic!Lori ''teased'' Fic!Leni for ''saving his life from attempted murderers''.
The fanfic girls have a sister meeting and plan to deliberately clog the toilet and convince Fic!Lincoln that he did it, then use that to blackmail him into being their servant. Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna have reservations, but the other girls claim that if they tell the truth, they'll tell Fic!Lincoln that it was their idea to choose Aloha Beach and Dairyland respectively. They then put Fic!Lily in Fic!Lincoln's room.
The next morning, Fic!Lincoln wakes up and goes to the bathroom to find the toilet clogged and Fic!Lori claims he clogged it... with his pee, somehow. Thus, the plan is in action and Fic!Lincoln needs to wait on his sisters.
First, he needs to escort a frantic Fic!Fangs out of Fic!Lola's closet, then he needs to blow up Fic!Luan's whoopee cushions, clean the bathroom for Fic!Lori's date, and test Fic!Lisa's pill... that somehow turned his undigested food into an egg he poops out. He then needs to wrestle with Fic!Lynn, and reach a picture for Fic!Lucy.
Just then, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna take the conch and take him out to the movies and the mall (bringing Fic!Lily along). The rest of the sisters get mad and, when they come back, they tell Fic!Lincoln the lie about whose idea was whose. He goes to confront Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, making them cry... then, he finds a video tape in Fic!Lily's diaper that reveals the truth. Wait, what?! The Louds have so many questions, they make a game of it.
He goes into the bathroom where Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are unclogging the toilet (because apparently in this fanfic, the Louds have superhuman bladders), Fic!Lincoln comes in and reveals the recording and it's revealed that Fic!''Lily'' did it. Fic!Lincoln storms in and confronts the rest of the girls (including Fic!Lynn, who wants Fic!Lincoln to "clean her balls", hehe) and swear to show the video to their parents. Then, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna sleep in Fic!Lincoln's room because they don't want to bunk with their roommates. Fic!Lily sleeps with them too (yup, four people in a linen closet!).
When the parents get back, they ground the sisters (except for the three who were innocent), who apologise... except Fic!Lynn. They then go to watch TV.
As it turns out, Fic!Lincoln has fallen asleep in Vanzilla, so Fic!Luna and Fic!Leni carry him home and make a big show of what good sisters they are. Fic!Lori and, to a lesser extent, the real Lori point out that even though it's good to be kind to Lincoln, there's no point in rubbing it in like that, and Lisa quotes a relevant Bible passage.
Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna start to feel guilty for how they treated Fic!Lincoln (even though, as the real siblings point out, he was only doing it because he screwed up and he ''chose'' to do it) and they decide to take him for a shopping spree, since Fic!Leni just got her license. This frustrates the real Leni, who still can't drive.
Lincoln points out that he finds other places than the mall fun, and Fic!Lola teases Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna by saying, "The princes are back from kissing Sleeping Beauty!", which makes Luna wonder what being a boy is like. Lola claims that boys are gross, but she loves Lincoln anyway. The rest of the fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna.
Later, the kids are watching ''The Dream Boat'' except for Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, who are unpacking, and Fic!Lincoln, who is still asleep. Then, the fanfic parents have to go for a few days because one of Fic!Ruth's cats is acting up at the vet after eating pudding, so the TV-watching sisters decide to wake up Fic!Lincoln and have him wait on them again.
Fic!Luna and Fic!Leni are hanging out in Fic!Lincoln's room and complaining of their sisters' teasing of their being nice to him. Apparently, when Fic!Luna saved him from "hoodlum boys", Fic!Luan called her a "soccer mom" and Fic!Lori ''teased'' Fic!Leni for ''saving his life from attempted murderers''.
The fanfic girls have a sister meeting and plan to deliberately clog the toilet and convince Fic!Lincoln that he did it, then use that to blackmail him into being their servant. Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna have reservations, but the other girls claim that if they tell the truth, they'll tell Fic!Lincoln that it was their idea to choose Aloha Beach and Dairyland respectively. They then put Fic!Lily in Fic!Lincoln's room.
The next morning, Fic!Lincoln wakes up and goes to the bathroom to find the toilet clogged and Fic!Lori claims he clogged it... with his pee, somehow. Thus, the plan is in action and Fic!Lincoln needs to wait on his sisters.
First, he needs to escort a frantic Fic!Fangs out of Fic!Lola's closet, then he needs to blow up Fic!Luan's whoopee cushions, clean the bathroom for Fic!Lori's date, and test Fic!Lisa's pill... that somehow turned his undigested food into an egg he poops out. He then needs to wrestle with Fic!Lynn, and reach a picture for Fic!Lucy.
Just then, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna take the conch and take him out to the movies and the mall (bringing Fic!Lily along). The rest of the sisters get mad and, when they come back, they tell Fic!Lincoln the lie about whose idea was whose. He goes to confront Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, making them cry... then, he finds a video tape in Fic!Lily's diaper that reveals the truth. Wait, what?! The Louds have so many questions, they make a game of it.
He goes into the bathroom where Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are unclogging the toilet (because apparently in this fanfic, the Louds have superhuman bladders), Fic!Lincoln comes in and reveals the recording and it's revealed that Fic!''Lily'' did it. Fic!Lincoln storms in and confronts the rest of the girls (including Fic!Lynn, who wants Fic!Lincoln to "clean her balls", hehe) and swear to show the video to their parents. Then, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna sleep in Fic!Lincoln's room because they don't want to bunk with their roommates. Fic!Lily sleeps with them too (yup, four people in a linen closet!).
When the parents get back, they ground the sisters (except for the three who were innocent), who apologise... except Fic!Lynn. They then go to watch TV.
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We open on the Louds going back from the campground and Fic!Lori Lori has had fun. This must be set after the time Lincoln waited on them, since the only campground they've ever been to is Scratchy Bottom and that's the only time they had fun there. It is-- and already, the sisters are acting strangely mean, with Fic!Lynn Lynn finding Fic!Lincoln Lincoln getting chased by a bear funny and Fic!Lisa Lisa wanting him to wait on them again, even though he did it to make up for his past misdeeds and it was just a one-off.
As it turns out,Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln has fallen asleep in Vanzilla, so Fic!Luna Luna and Fic!Leni Leni carry him home and make a big show of what good sisters they are. Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori and, to a lesser extent, the real Lori point out that even though it's good to be kind to Lincoln, there's no point in rubbing it in like that, and Lisa quotes a relevant Bible passage.
Fic!Leni Fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna start to feel guilty for how they treated Fic!Lincoln Lincoln (even though, as the real siblings point out, he was only doing it because he screwed up and he ''chose'' to do it) and they decide to take him for a shopping spree, since Fic!Leni Leni just got her license. This frustrates the real Leni, who still can't drive.
Lincoln points out that he finds other places than the mall fun, andFic!Lola fanfic Lola teases Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna Luna by saying, "The princes are back from kissing Sleeping Beauty!", which makes the real Luna wonder what being a boy is like. Lola claims that boys are gross, but she loves Lincoln anyway. The rest of the fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna.
Luna.
Later, the kids are watching ''The Dream Boat'' except forFic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna, Luna, who are unpacking, and Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, who is still asleep. Then, the fanfic parents have to go for a few days because one of Fic!Ruth's Ruth's cats is acting up at the vet after eating pudding, so the TV-watching sisters decide to wake up Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and have him wait on them again.
Fic!Luna Fanfic Luna and Fic!Leni Leni are hanging out in Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's room and complaining of their sisters' teasing of their being nice to him. Apparently, when Fic!Luna Luna saved him from "hoodlum boys", Fic!Luan Luan called her a "soccer mom" and Fic!Lori Lori ''teased'' Fic!Leni Leni for ''saving his life from attempted murderers''.
The fanfic girls have a sister meeting and plan to deliberately clog the toilet and convinceFic!Lincoln Lincoln that he did it, then use that to blackmail him into being their servant. Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna Luna have reservations, but the other girls claim that if they tell the truth, they'll tell Fic!Lincoln Lincoln that it was their idea to choose Aloha Beach and Dairyland respectively. They then put Fic!Lily Lily in Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's room.
The next morning,Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln wakes up and goes to the bathroom to find the toilet clogged and Fic!Lori Lori claims he clogged it... with his pee, somehow. Thus, the plan is in action and Fic!Lincoln Lincoln needs to wait on his sisters.
First, he needs to escort a franticFic!Fangs Fangs out of Fic!Lola's Lola's closet, then he needs to blow up Fic!Luan's Luan's whoopee cushions, clean the bathroom for Fic!Lori's Lori's date, and test Fic!Lisa's Lisa's pill... that somehow turned his undigested food into an egg he poops out. He then needs to wrestle with Fic!Lynn, Lynn, and reach a picture for Fic!Lucy.
Lucy.
Just then,Fic!Leni the fanfic versions of Leni and Fic!Luna Luna take the conch and take him out to the movies and the mall (bringing Fic!Lily Lily along). The rest of the sisters get mad and, when they come back, they tell Fic!Lincoln Lincoln the lie about whose idea was whose. He goes to confront Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna, Luna, making them cry... then, he finds a video tape in Fic!Lily's Lily's diaper that reveals the truth. Wait, what?! The Louds have so many questions, they make a game of it.
He goes into the bathroom whereFic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna Luna are unclogging the toilet (because apparently in this fanfic, the Louds have superhuman bladders), Fic!Lincoln Lincoln comes in and reveals the recording and it's revealed that Fic!''Lily'' ''Lily'' did it. Fic!Lincoln Lincoln storms in and confronts the rest of the girls (including Fic!Lynn, Lynn, who wants Fic!Lincoln Lincoln to "clean her balls", hehe) and swear to show the video to their parents. Then, Fic!Leni fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna sleep in Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's room because they don't want to bunk with their roommates. Fic!Lily Lily sleeps with them too (yup, four people in a linen closet!).
When the parents get back, they ground the sisters (except for the three who were innocent), who apologise... exceptFic!Lynn.Lynn. They then go to watch TV.
As it turns out,
Lincoln points out that he finds other places than the mall fun, and
Later, the kids are watching ''The Dream Boat'' except for
The fanfic girls have a sister meeting and plan to deliberately clog the toilet and convince
The next morning,
First, he needs to escort a frantic
Just then,
He goes into the bathroom where
When the parents get back, they ground the sisters (except for the three who were innocent), who apologise... except
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The alternate version begins with Fic!Lincoln walking to his room to sleep instead of being carried. Unfortunately for Lisa, the grammar is no better in this version. The good news is that the sisters who acted mean in the previous version are now in-character. The bad news is that now ''Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna'' have caught the "uncharacteristic meanness" bug. In fact, they're even worse! They hate boys, think they need to be pampered because they're girls, and hold a grudge for Fic!Lincoln's every mistake... and even a non-mistake (trying to get the girls to school on time).
Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna try to go through with the same plan the others had in the previous version, but Fic!Lincoln heard them and tells them off. Then, the parents come and ground them. Then, Fic!Lincoln has a good time with his non-scheming sisters... but he seems to be playing favourites, preferring Fic!Lori, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lola, and Fic!Lisa. Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna tearfully apologise and that's it.
Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna try to go through with the same plan the others had in the previous version, but Fic!Lincoln heard them and tells them off. Then, the parents come and ground them. Then, Fic!Lincoln has a good time with his non-scheming sisters... but he seems to be playing favourites, preferring Fic!Lori, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lola, and Fic!Lisa. Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna tearfully apologise and that's it.
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The alternate version begins with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln walking to his room to sleep instead of being carried. Unfortunately for Lisa, the grammar is no better in this version. The good news is that the sisters who acted mean in the previous version are now in-character. The bad news is that now ''Fic!Leni ''Leni and Fic!Luna'' Luna'' have caught the "uncharacteristic meanness" bug. In fact, they're even worse! They hate boys, think they need to be pampered because they're girls, and hold a grudge for Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's every mistake... and even a non-mistake (trying to get the girls to school on time).
Fic!Leni Fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna try to go through with the same plan the others had in the previous version, but Fic!Lincoln Lincoln heard them and tells them off. Then, the parents come and ground them. Then, Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln has a good time with his non-scheming sisters... but he seems to be playing favourites, preferring Fic!Lori, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lola, Lori, Lynn, Lola, and Fic!Lisa. Fic!Leni Lisa. Leni and Fic!Luna Luna tearfully apologise and that's it.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Fic!Lily is somehow smart enough to use a tape recorder.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Fic!Lily Fanfic Lily is somehow smart enough to use a tape recorder.
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** All the fanfic sisters except Fic!Leni, Fic!Lily, and Fic!Luna are uncharacteristically mean, expecting Fic!Lincoln to continue to wait on them, not caring about Fic!Ruth and her cat (even though the real Loud kids find Ruth gross they'd probably at least care a little bit, especially about the cat), blocking their parents out, teasing Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna just for being nice to their brother, and, in Fic!Lynn's case, laughing at him being chased by a bear and not apologising even when her sisters did.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna tease their sisters for being nice to Fic!Lincoln and claim boys are gross. Also, Fic!Lincoln plays favourites with his sisters.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna tease their sisters for being nice to Fic!Lincoln and claim boys are gross. Also, Fic!Lincoln plays favourites with his sisters.
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** All the fanfic sisters except Fic!Leni, Fic!Lily, Leni, Lily, and Fic!Luna Luna are uncharacteristically mean, expecting Fic!Lincoln Lincoln to continue to wait on them, not caring about Fic!Ruth Ruth and her cat (even though the real Loud kids find Ruth gross they'd probably at least care a little bit, especially about the cat), blocking their parents out, teasing Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna Luna just for being nice to their brother, and, in Fic!Lynn's Lynn's case, laughing at him being chased by a bear and not apologising even when her sisters did.
** In the alternate version,Fic!Leni fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna tease their sisters for being nice to Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and claim boys are gross. Also, Fic!Lincoln Lincoln plays favourites with his sisters.
** In the alternate version,
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* BallsGag: Fic!Lynn tells Fic!Lincoln to "clean her balls", so the real Lynn bursts out laughing.
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* BallsGag: Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn tells Fic!Lincoln Lincoln to "clean her balls", so the real Lynn bursts out laughing.
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** Fic!Lori, Fic!Luan, and Fic!Lynn are very mean and demanding to Fic!Lincoln, ordering him around.
** Fic!Lori is also mean to Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, teasing them for being nice to Fic!Lincoln, even when Fic!Leni ''saved his life''.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are the ones who are mean to their little brother, hating him for his gender and wanting to make him their servant.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Joked about when Lucy wonders if Fic!Lynn is trying to ship Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, and Fic!Lincoln, and then Lynn jokingly suggests that Fic!Lola's news is she's pregnant by Fic!Lincoln. All the other Louds are very disgusted by those jokes.
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks: Fic!Lincoln lets it be known to the audience that he needs to use the bathroom when he wakes up.
** Fic!Lori is also mean to Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, teasing them for being nice to Fic!Lincoln, even when Fic!Leni ''saved his life''.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are the ones who are mean to their little brother, hating him for his gender and wanting to make him their servant.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Joked about when Lucy wonders if Fic!Lynn is trying to ship Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, and Fic!Lincoln, and then Lynn jokingly suggests that Fic!Lola's news is she's pregnant by Fic!Lincoln. All the other Louds are very disgusted by those jokes.
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks: Fic!Lincoln lets it be known to the audience that he needs to use the bathroom when he wakes up.
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** Fic!Lori, Fic!Luan, Fanfic Lori, Luan, and Fic!Lynn Lynn are very mean and demanding to Fic!Lincoln, ordering him around.
**Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori is also mean to Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna, Luna, teasing them for being nice to Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, even when Fic!Leni Leni ''saved his life''.
** In the alternate version,Fic!Leni the counterparts of Leni and Fic!Luna Luna are the ones who are mean to their little brother, hating him for his gender and wanting to make him their servant.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Joked about when Lucy wonders ifFic!Lynn fanfic Lynn is trying to ship Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, Leni, Luna, and Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, and then Lynn jokingly suggests that Fic!Lola's fanfic Lola's news is she's pregnant by Fic!Lincoln.Lincoln. All the other Louds are very disgusted by those jokes.
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln lets it be known to the audience that he needs to use the bathroom when he wakes up.
**
** In the alternate version,
* BrotherSisterIncest: Joked about when Lucy wonders if
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks:
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** Lily is a ''bit'' of a BrainyBaby. Fic!Lily can ''use a tape recorder''.
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** Lily is a ''bit'' of a BrainyBaby. Fic!Lily Fanfic Lily can ''use a tape recorder''.
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* CopycatMockery: Lincoln mocks Fic!Lynn's loving Fic!Lincoln being chased by a bear by saying, as her, "Yeah, he almost got mauled to death. That was a riot!".
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* CopycatMockery: Lincoln mocks Fic!Lynn's fanfic Lynn's loving Fic!Lincoln his fanfic self's being chased by a bear by saying, as her, "Yeah, he almost got mauled to death. That was a riot!".
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** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are given "cold stares" for their meanness towards their brother.
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** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna are given "cold stares" for their meanness towards their brother.
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** At one point, the fanfic sisters claim Fic!Lincoln is stupid because he's a boy.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are the ones who think boys are gross.
* EmbarrassingDampSheets: Discussed when Fic!Lynn claims that Fic!Lincoln couldn't have gone a whole day and night without peeing or else he would've wet the bed.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Loud kids facepalm when Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna don't realise that Fic!Lincoln knows the truth.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Discussed when the fanfic sisters claim to Fic!Lincoln that Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are only pretending to be good sisters to cover up their bad acts.
* FellAsleepCrying: In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna end up crying themselves to sleep with guilt.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are the ones who think boys are gross.
* EmbarrassingDampSheets: Discussed when Fic!Lynn claims that Fic!Lincoln couldn't have gone a whole day and night without peeing or else he would've wet the bed.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Loud kids facepalm when Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna don't realise that Fic!Lincoln knows the truth.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Discussed when the fanfic sisters claim to Fic!Lincoln that Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are only pretending to be good sisters to cover up their bad acts.
* FellAsleepCrying: In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna end up crying themselves to sleep with guilt.
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** At one point, the fanfic sisters claim Fic!Lincoln Lincoln is stupid because he's a boy.
** In the alternate version,Fic!Leni fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna are the ones who think boys are gross.
* EmbarrassingDampSheets: Discussed whenFic!Lynn fanfic Lynn claims that Fic!Lincoln Lincoln couldn't have gone a whole day and night without peeing or else he would've wet the bed.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Loud kids facepalm whenFic!Leni fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna don't realise that Fic!Lincoln Lincoln knows the truth.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Discussed when the fanfic sisters claim toFic!Lincoln Lincoln that Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna Luna are only pretending to be good sisters to cover up their bad acts.
* FellAsleepCrying: In the alternate version,Fic!Leni fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna end up crying themselves to sleep with guilt.
** In the alternate version,
* EmbarrassingDampSheets: Discussed when
* {{Facepalm}}: The Loud kids facepalm when
* FauxAffablyEvil: Discussed when the fanfic sisters claim to
* FellAsleepCrying: In the alternate version,
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* HumourDissonance: InUniverse, the fanfic Loud sisters find it funny that Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are being nice to Fic!Lincoln, but the real Loud kids don't get what's so funny.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: Fic!Lisa invents a pill that converts Fic!Lincoln's semi-digested food into an egg, which is then pooped out. The real Lisa claims this is likely impossible and says she's a scientist, not a sorceress.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: Fic!Lisa invents a pill that converts Fic!Lincoln's semi-digested food into an egg, which is then pooped out. The real Lisa claims this is likely impossible and says she's a scientist, not a sorceress.
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* HumourDissonance: InUniverse, the fanfic Loud sisters find it funny that Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna Luna are being nice to Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, but the real Loud kids don't get what's so funny.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder:Fic!Lisa Fanfic Lisa invents a pill that converts Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's semi-digested food into an egg, which is then pooped out. The real Lisa claims this is likely impossible and says she's a scientist, not a sorceress.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder:
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna feel very guilty for their mistreatment of Fic!Lincoln, apologising tearfully and crying themselves to sleep.
* NobodyPoops: Zigzagged. While Fic!Lincoln initially needs to pee (after sleeping without waking up for about sixteen hours), the need seems to go away when he finds the toilet clogged. Then, he would have pooped, but Fic!Lisa's pill made him poop out an egg instead. After that, it's played straight, since Fic!Lily went all night and a good chunk of the day without a diaper change, and the other fanfic sisters spent the same good chunk of the day without a bathroom break.
* NobodyPoops: Zigzagged. While Fic!Lincoln initially needs to pee (after sleeping without waking up for about sixteen hours), the need seems to go away when he finds the toilet clogged. Then, he would have pooped, but Fic!Lisa's pill made him poop out an egg instead. After that, it's played straight, since Fic!Lily went all night and a good chunk of the day without a diaper change, and the other fanfic sisters spent the same good chunk of the day without a bathroom break.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: In the alternate version, Fic!Leni fanfic Leni and Fic!Luna Luna feel very guilty for their mistreatment of Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, apologising tearfully and crying themselves to sleep.
* NobodyPoops: Zigzagged. WhileFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln initially needs to pee (after sleeping without waking up for about sixteen hours), the need seems to go away when he finds the toilet clogged. Then, he would have pooped, but Fic!Lisa's Lisa's pill made him poop out an egg instead. After that, it's played straight, since Fic!Lily Lily went all night and a good chunk of the day without a diaper change, and the other fanfic sisters spent the same good chunk of the day without a bathroom break.
* NobodyPoops: Zigzagged. While
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** Aside from their uncharacteristic meanness, there's also Fic!Lola using the phrase "go potty".
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** Aside from their uncharacteristic meanness, there's also Fic!Lola fanfic Lola using the phrase "go potty".
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** Lucy ''definitely'' wouldn't draw on Edwin's face like Fic!Lucy did.
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** Lucy ''definitely'' wouldn't draw on Edwin's face like Fic!Lucy fanfic Lucy did.
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** Why didn't Fic!Lily show Fic!Lincoln the recording sooner?
** How could all the Loud siblings (Fic!Lily with her diaper and the rest with the clogged toilet) have gone so long without nature calling?
** How did Fic!Lily know that the words spoken at the meeting would clear Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna's names?
** How did no one notice the bulge in Fic!Lily's diaper created by the recorder?
** How could all the Loud siblings (Fic!Lily with her diaper and the rest with the clogged toilet) have gone so long without nature calling?
** How did Fic!Lily know that the words spoken at the meeting would clear Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna's names?
** How did no one notice the bulge in Fic!Lily's diaper created by the recorder?
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** Why didn't Fic!Lily fanfic Lily show Fic!Lincoln Lincoln the recording sooner?
** How could all the Loud siblings(Fic!Lily (fanfic Lily with her diaper and the rest with the clogged toilet) have gone so long without nature calling?
** How didFic!Lily fanfic Lily know that the words spoken at the meeting would clear Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna's Luna's names?
** How did no one notice the bulge inFic!Lily's Lily's diaper created by the recorder?
** How could all the Loud siblings
** How did
** How did no one notice the bulge in
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** Fic!Luan tells Fic!Lincoln not to blow himself up when he blows her whoopee cushions up.
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** Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan tells Fic!Lincoln Lincoln not to blow himself up when he blows her whoopee cushions up.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Discussed when Lucy says that if she didn't know better, she'd say Fic!Lynn was trying to ship Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna with Fic!Lincoln. [[BrotherSisterIncest Thank goodness she's not]].
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* ShipperOnDeck: Discussed when Lucy says that if she didn't know better, she'd say Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn was trying to ship Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna Luna with Fic!Lincoln.Lincoln. [[BrotherSisterIncest Thank goodness she's not]].
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** Fic!Lola calls Fic!Lincoln "Literature/SleepingBeauty".
** When Fic!Lincoln takes a red pill, Luan says that it'll either take him to ''Film/TheMatrix'' or a sexist ''Website/{{Reddit}}'' forum.
** When Fic!Lincoln takes a red pill, Luan says that it'll either take him to ''Film/TheMatrix'' or a sexist ''Website/{{Reddit}}'' forum.
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** Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola calls Fic!Lincoln Lincoln "Literature/SleepingBeauty".
** WhenFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln takes a red pill, Luan says that it'll either take him to ''Film/TheMatrix'' or a sexist ''Website/{{Reddit}}'' forum.
** When
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** With the tape-recorder-in-diaper scene, Lori wonders how Fic!Lily went that long without a diaper change.
* TranquilFury: Fic!Lincoln is described as "filled with rage" but also as speaking to Fic!Lily "calmly".
* VulgarHumour: When Fic!Lola says she has something she needs to tell Fic!Lincoln, Lynn says, "I'm pregnant and you're the father" as a joke. This is doubly vulgar in that they're brother and sister, and Lola's a six-year-old.
* WhoopeeCushion: Fic!Luan has Fic!Lincoln blow up her whoopee cushions.
* TranquilFury: Fic!Lincoln is described as "filled with rage" but also as speaking to Fic!Lily "calmly".
* VulgarHumour: When Fic!Lola says she has something she needs to tell Fic!Lincoln, Lynn says, "I'm pregnant and you're the father" as a joke. This is doubly vulgar in that they're brother and sister, and Lola's a six-year-old.
* WhoopeeCushion: Fic!Luan has Fic!Lincoln blow up her whoopee cushions.
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** With the tape-recorder-in-diaper scene, Lori wonders how Fic!Lily fanfic Lily went that long without a diaper change.
* TranquilFury:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln is described as "filled with rage" but also as speaking to Fic!Lily Lily "calmly".
* VulgarHumour: WhenFic!Lola fanfic Lola says she has something she needs to tell Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, Lynn (the real one) says, "I'm pregnant and you're the father" as a joke. This is doubly vulgar in that they're brother and sister, and Lola's a six-year-old.
* WhoopeeCushion:Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan has Fic!Lincoln Lincoln blow up her whoopee cushions.
* TranquilFury:
* VulgarHumour: When
* WhoopeeCushion:
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** The fanfic versions of the girls (except Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, and Fic!Lily) get grounded for two weeks for their mistreatment of Fic!Lincoln.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna get grounded for the same amount of time for making an evil plan.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna get grounded for the same amount of time for making an evil plan.
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** The fanfic versions of the girls (except Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, Leni, Luna, and Fic!Lily) Lily) get grounded for two weeks for their mistreatment of Fic!Lincoln.
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** In the alternate version,Fic!Leni Leni and Fic!Luna Luna get grounded for the same amount of time for making an evil plan.
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We open on the couch, and Lincoln has brought all ten of his sisters again because, once again, they will be reading a story that a lot of people have requested. It's called ''Whipped''. Will it make everyone cry like last time they did a request? Well, there's only one way to find out.
We open on the Louds going back from the campground and Fic!Lori has had fun. This must be set after the time Lincoln waited on them, since the only campground they've ever been to is Scratchy Bottom and that's the only time they had fun there. It is-- and already, the sisters are acting strangely mean, with Fic!Lynn finding Fic!Lincoln getting chased by a bear funny and Fic!Lisa wanting him to wait on them again, even though he did it to make up for his past misdeeds and it was just a one-off.
As it turns out, Fic!Lincoln has fallen asleep in Vanzilla, so Fic!Luna and Fic!Leni carry him home and make a big show of what good sisters they are. Fic!Lori and, to a lesser extent, the real Lori point out that even though it's good to be kind to Lincoln, there's no point in rubbing it in like that, and Lisa quotes a relevant Bible passage.
Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna start to feel guilty for how they treated Fic!Lincoln (even though, as the real siblings point out, he was only doing it because he screwed up and he ''chose'' to do it) and they decide to take him for a shopping spree, since Fic!Leni just got her license. This frustrates the real Leni, who still can't drive.
Lincoln points out that he finds other places than the mall fun, and Fic!Lola teases Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna by saying, "The princes are back from kissing Sleeping Beauty!", which makes Luna wonder what being a boy is like. Lola claims that boys are gross, but she loves Lincoln anyway. The rest of the fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna.
Later, the kids are watching ''The Dream Boat'' except for Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, who are unpacking, and Fic!Lincoln, who is still asleep. Then, the fanfic parents have to go for a few days because one of Fic!Ruth's cats is acting up at the vet after eating pudding, so the TV-watching sisters decide to wake up Fic!Lincoln and have him wait on them again.
Fic!Luna and Fic!Leni are hanging out in Fic!Lincoln's room and complaining of their sisters' teasing of their being nice to him. Apparently, when Fic!Luna saved him from "hoodlum boys", Fic!Luan called her a "soccer mom" and Fic!Lori ''teased'' Fic!Leni for ''saving his life from attempted murderers''.
The fanfic girls have a sister meeting and plan to deliberately clog the toilet and convince Fic!Lincoln that he did it, then use that to blackmail him into being their servant. Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna have reservations, but the other girls claim that if they tell the truth, they'll tell Fic!Lincoln that it was their idea to choose Aloha Beach and Dairyland respectively. They then put Fic!Lily in Fic!Lincoln's room.
The next morning, Fic!Lincoln wakes up and goes to the bathroom to find the toilet clogged and Fic!Lori claims he clogged it... with his pee, somehow. Thus, the plan is in action and Fic!Lincoln needs to wait on his sisters.
First, he needs to escort a frantic Fic!Fangs out of Fic!Lola's closet, then he needs to blow up Fic!Luan's whoopee cushions, clean the bathroom for Fic!Lori's date, and test Fic!Lisa's pill... that somehow turned his undigested food into an egg he poops out. He then needs to wrestle with Fic!Lynn, and reach a picture for Fic!Lucy.
Just then, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna take the conch and take him out to the movies and the mall (bringing Fic!Lily along). The rest of the sisters get mad and, when they come back, they tell Fic!Lincoln the lie about whose idea was whose. He goes to confront Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, making them cry... then, he finds a video tape in Fic!Lily's diaper that reveals the truth. Wait, what?! The Louds have so many questions, they make a game of it.
He goes into the bathroom where Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are unclogging the toilet (because apparently in this fanfic, the Louds have superhuman bladders), Fic!Lincoln comes in and reveals the recording and it's revealed that Fic!''Lily'' did it. Fic!Lincoln storms in and confronts the rest of the girls (including Fic!Lynn, who wants Fic!Lincoln to "clean her balls", hehe) and swear to show the video to their parents. Then, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna sleep in Fic!Lincoln's room because they don't want to bunk with their roommates. Fic!Lily sleeps with them too (yup, four people in a linen closet!).
When the parents get back, they ground the sisters (except for the three who were innocent), who apologise... except Fic!Lynn. They then go to watch TV.
With the fanfic over, the sisters are understandably miffed with their portrayal, but there is an alternate version. Maybe that'll be better?
The alternate version begins with Fic!Lincoln walking to his room to sleep instead of being carried. Unfortunately for Lisa, the grammar is no better in this version. The good news is that the sisters who acted mean in the previous version are now in-character. The bad news is that now ''Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna'' have caught the "uncharacteristic meanness" bug. In fact, they're even worse! They hate boys, think they need to be pampered because they're girls, and hold a grudge for Fic!Lincoln's every mistake... and even a non-mistake (trying to get the girls to school on time).
Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna try to go through with the same plan the others had in the previous version, but Fic!Lincoln heard them and tells them off. Then, the parents come and ground them. Then, Fic!Lincoln has a good time with his non-scheming sisters... but he seems to be playing favourites, preferring Fic!Lori, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lola, and Fic!Lisa. Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna tearfully apologise and that's it.
Lily is angry that she wasn't in the alternate version, but her siblings reassure her that that's no reason to be angry. Then, it's revealed that the alternate version was made as a joke response to the criticism the author got. The Louds point out that the author likely missed the point, and they go off to have fun... ''together, as a family''.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Fic!Lily is somehow smart enough to use a tape recorder.
* AdaptationalJerkass:
** All the fanfic sisters except Fic!Leni, Fic!Lily, and Fic!Luna are uncharacteristically mean, expecting Fic!Lincoln to continue to wait on them, not caring about Fic!Ruth and her cat (even though the real Loud kids find Ruth gross they'd probably at least care a little bit, especially about the cat), blocking their parents out, teasing Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna just for being nice to their brother, and, in Fic!Lynn's case, laughing at him being chased by a bear and not apologising even when her sisters did.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna tease their sisters for being nice to Fic!Lincoln and claim boys are gross. Also, Fic!Lincoln plays favourites with his sisters.
* AgeInappropriateArt: Apparently, Lucy reads a lot of fanfiction and knows what {{Shipping}} is.
* AsTheGoodBookSays: Lisa quotes a Bible passage about not praying hypocritically when the siblings discuss rubbing in kindness.
* BallsGag: Fic!Lynn tells Fic!Lincoln to "clean her balls", so the real Lynn bursts out laughing.
* BigSisterBully:
** Fic!Lori, Fic!Luan, and Fic!Lynn are very mean and demanding to Fic!Lincoln, ordering him around.
** Fic!Lori is also mean to Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, teasing them for being nice to Fic!Lincoln, even when Fic!Leni ''saved his life''.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are the ones who are mean to their little brother, hating him for his gender and wanting to make him their servant.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Joked about when Lucy wonders if Fic!Lynn is trying to ship Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, and Fic!Lincoln, and then Lynn jokingly suggests that Fic!Lola's news is she's pregnant by Fic!Lincoln. All the other Louds are very disgusted by those jokes.
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks: Fic!Lincoln lets it be known to the audience that he needs to use the bathroom when he wakes up.
* CharacterExaggeration:
** Sure, the Loud sisters tease a lot, but they wouldn't tease someone for ''saving their brother's life''.
** Lily is a ''bit'' of a BrainyBaby. Fic!Lily can ''use a tape recorder''.
* ContinuityNod:
** This episode alludes to "In Tents Debate", since the fanfic is set right after that episode.
** Seeing as this is the second requested episode, the Louds refer to ''Trustworthy'' and how it made everyone cry.
** Luna brings up her fanfic counterpart's antics in ''Substitute Roommate'' when she tried to beat her brother with a belt.
* CopycatMockery: Lincoln mocks Fic!Lynn's loving Fic!Lincoln being chased by a bear by saying, as her, "Yeah, he almost got mauled to death. That was a riot!".
* DeathGlare:
** Lily gives Lincoln a dirty look when he claims she's not smart enough to use a tape recorder.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are given "cold stares" for their meanness towards their brother.
* DoesNotLikeMen:
** At one point, the fanfic sisters claim Fic!Lincoln is stupid because he's a boy.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are the ones who think boys are gross.
* EmbarrassingDampSheets: Discussed when Fic!Lynn claims that Fic!Lincoln couldn't have gone a whole day and night without peeing or else he would've wet the bed.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Loud kids facepalm when Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna don't realise that Fic!Lincoln knows the truth.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Discussed when the fanfic sisters claim to Fic!Lincoln that Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are only pretending to be good sisters to cover up their bad acts.
* FellAsleepCrying: In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna end up crying themselves to sleep with guilt.
* GirlsHaveCooties: Gender-inverted when Lola says that boys are gross (but she loves Lincoln anyway).
* HatesBeingCalledCute: Downplayed. Lincoln finds it a bit embarrassing when Leni calls him cute, but he puts up with it.
* HehHehYouSaidX: Lynn has a good laugh when the phrase "clean my balls" pops up.
* HesitationEqualsDishonesty: Discussed when Lynn takes Lincoln's hesitating before calling her nice as a sign he's lying.
* HumourDissonance: InUniverse, the fanfic Loud sisters find it funny that Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are being nice to Fic!Lincoln, but the real Loud kids don't get what's so funny.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: Fic!Lisa invents a pill that converts Fic!Lincoln's semi-digested food into an egg, which is then pooped out. The real Lisa claims this is likely impossible and says she's a scientist, not a sorceress.
* InsultBackfire: Lola calls Lana gross and disgusting, but Lana thanks her.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna feel very guilty for their mistreatment of Fic!Lincoln, apologising tearfully and crying themselves to sleep.
* NobodyPoops: Zigzagged. While Fic!Lincoln initially needs to pee (after sleeping without waking up for about sixteen hours), the need seems to go away when he finds the toilet clogged. Then, he would have pooped, but Fic!Lisa's pill made him poop out an egg instead. After that, it's played straight, since Fic!Lily went all night and a good chunk of the day without a diaper change, and the other fanfic sisters spent the same good chunk of the day without a bathroom break.
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, the girls had at least one "sister meeting" in the past, but now they don't have them anymore. Leni, who claims this, adds, "especially not--" but is interrupted by Lynn.
* OutOfCharacter:
** Aside from their uncharacteristic meanness, there's also Fic!Lola using the phrase "go potty".
--->'''Lola''': "Go potty"? How old does this author think I am, five? I'm ''six'', thank you very much.
** Luan wouldn't use "soccer mom" as an insult, especially not for trying to keep Lincoln safe.
** Lucy ''definitely'' wouldn't draw on Edwin's face like Fic!Lucy did.
* PlotHole:
** Why didn't Fic!Lily show Fic!Lincoln the recording sooner?
** How could all the Loud siblings (Fic!Lily with her diaper and the rest with the clogged toilet) have gone so long without nature calling?
** How did Fic!Lily know that the words spoken at the meeting would clear Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna's names?
** How did no one notice the bulge in Fic!Lily's diaper created by the recorder?
* {{Pun}}:
** Fic!Luan tells Fic!Lincoln not to blow himself up when he blows her whoopee cushions up.
** Luna makes the old "Me too" "Me three" joke.
* ShipperOnDeck: Discussed when Lucy says that if she didn't know better, she'd say Fic!Lynn was trying to ship Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna with Fic!Lincoln. [[BrotherSisterIncest Thank goodness she's not]].
* ShoutOut:
** Fic!Lola calls Fic!Lincoln "Literature/SleepingBeauty".
** When Fic!Lincoln takes a red pill, Luan says that it'll either take him to ''Film/TheMatrix'' or a sexist ''Website/{{Reddit}}'' forum.
* StopWorshippingMe: Leni and Luna get a bit squirmy with how the story glorifies them.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: While it's never revealed if she really is, Leni keeps denying she's keeping a secret from Lincoln.
* ToiletHumour:
** Apparently, Lana has tried to clog the toilet with her pee before.
** With the tape-recorder-in-diaper scene, Lori wonders how Fic!Lily went that long without a diaper change.
* TranquilFury: Fic!Lincoln is described as "filled with rage" but also as speaking to Fic!Lily "calmly".
* VulgarHumour: When Fic!Lola says she has something she needs to tell Fic!Lincoln, Lynn says, "I'm pregnant and you're the father" as a joke. This is doubly vulgar in that they're brother and sister, and Lola's a six-year-old.
* WhoopeeCushion: Fic!Luan has Fic!Lincoln blow up her whoopee cushions.
* YouAreGrounded:
** The fanfic versions of the girls (except Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, and Fic!Lily) get grounded for two weeks for their mistreatment of Fic!Lincoln.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna get grounded for the same amount of time for making an evil plan.
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We open on the Louds going back from the campground and Fic!Lori has had fun. This must be set after the time Lincoln waited on them, since the only campground they've ever been to is Scratchy Bottom and that's the only time they had fun there. It is-- and already, the sisters are acting strangely mean, with Fic!Lynn finding Fic!Lincoln getting chased by a bear funny and Fic!Lisa wanting him to wait on them again, even though he did it to make up for his past misdeeds and it was just a one-off.
As it turns out, Fic!Lincoln has fallen asleep in Vanzilla, so Fic!Luna and Fic!Leni carry him home and make a big show of what good sisters they are. Fic!Lori and, to a lesser extent, the real Lori point out that even though it's good to be kind to Lincoln, there's no point in rubbing it in like that, and Lisa quotes a relevant Bible passage.
Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna start to feel guilty for how they treated Fic!Lincoln (even though, as the real siblings point out, he was only doing it because he screwed up and he ''chose'' to do it) and they decide to take him for a shopping spree, since Fic!Leni just got her license. This frustrates the real Leni, who still can't drive.
Lincoln points out that he finds other places than the mall fun, and Fic!Lola teases Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna by saying, "The princes are back from kissing Sleeping Beauty!", which makes Luna wonder what being a boy is like. Lola claims that boys are gross, but she loves Lincoln anyway. The rest of the fanfic sisters continue to tease Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna.
Later, the kids are watching ''The Dream Boat'' except for Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, who are unpacking, and Fic!Lincoln, who is still asleep. Then, the fanfic parents have to go for a few days because one of Fic!Ruth's cats is acting up at the vet after eating pudding, so the TV-watching sisters decide to wake up Fic!Lincoln and have him wait on them again.
Fic!Luna and Fic!Leni are hanging out in Fic!Lincoln's room and complaining of their sisters' teasing of their being nice to him. Apparently, when Fic!Luna saved him from "hoodlum boys", Fic!Luan called her a "soccer mom" and Fic!Lori ''teased'' Fic!Leni for ''saving his life from attempted murderers''.
The fanfic girls have a sister meeting and plan to deliberately clog the toilet and convince Fic!Lincoln that he did it, then use that to blackmail him into being their servant. Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna have reservations, but the other girls claim that if they tell the truth, they'll tell Fic!Lincoln that it was their idea to choose Aloha Beach and Dairyland respectively. They then put Fic!Lily in Fic!Lincoln's room.
The next morning, Fic!Lincoln wakes up and goes to the bathroom to find the toilet clogged and Fic!Lori claims he clogged it... with his pee, somehow. Thus, the plan is in action and Fic!Lincoln needs to wait on his sisters.
First, he needs to escort a frantic Fic!Fangs out of Fic!Lola's closet, then he needs to blow up Fic!Luan's whoopee cushions, clean the bathroom for Fic!Lori's date, and test Fic!Lisa's pill... that somehow turned his undigested food into an egg he poops out. He then needs to wrestle with Fic!Lynn, and reach a picture for Fic!Lucy.
Just then, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna take the conch and take him out to the movies and the mall (bringing Fic!Lily along). The rest of the sisters get mad and, when they come back, they tell Fic!Lincoln the lie about whose idea was whose. He goes to confront Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, making them cry... then, he finds a video tape in Fic!Lily's diaper that reveals the truth. Wait, what?! The Louds have so many questions, they make a game of it.
He goes into the bathroom where Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are unclogging the toilet (because apparently in this fanfic, the Louds have superhuman bladders), Fic!Lincoln comes in and reveals the recording and it's revealed that Fic!''Lily'' did it. Fic!Lincoln storms in and confronts the rest of the girls (including Fic!Lynn, who wants Fic!Lincoln to "clean her balls", hehe) and swear to show the video to their parents. Then, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna sleep in Fic!Lincoln's room because they don't want to bunk with their roommates. Fic!Lily sleeps with them too (yup, four people in a linen closet!).
When the parents get back, they ground the sisters (except for the three who were innocent), who apologise... except Fic!Lynn. They then go to watch TV.
With the fanfic over, the sisters are understandably miffed with their portrayal, but there is an alternate version. Maybe that'll be better?
The alternate version begins with Fic!Lincoln walking to his room to sleep instead of being carried. Unfortunately for Lisa, the grammar is no better in this version. The good news is that the sisters who acted mean in the previous version are now in-character. The bad news is that now ''Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna'' have caught the "uncharacteristic meanness" bug. In fact, they're even worse! They hate boys, think they need to be pampered because they're girls, and hold a grudge for Fic!Lincoln's every mistake... and even a non-mistake (trying to get the girls to school on time).
Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna try to go through with the same plan the others had in the previous version, but Fic!Lincoln heard them and tells them off. Then, the parents come and ground them. Then, Fic!Lincoln has a good time with his non-scheming sisters... but he seems to be playing favourites, preferring Fic!Lori, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lola, and Fic!Lisa. Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna tearfully apologise and that's it.
Lily is angry that she wasn't in the alternate version, but her siblings reassure her that that's no reason to be angry. Then, it's revealed that the alternate version was made as a joke response to the criticism the author got. The Louds point out that the author likely missed the point, and they go off to have fun... ''together, as a family''.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Fic!Lily is somehow smart enough to use a tape recorder.
* AdaptationalJerkass:
** All the fanfic sisters except Fic!Leni, Fic!Lily, and Fic!Luna are uncharacteristically mean, expecting Fic!Lincoln to continue to wait on them, not caring about Fic!Ruth and her cat (even though the real Loud kids find Ruth gross they'd probably at least care a little bit, especially about the cat), blocking their parents out, teasing Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna just for being nice to their brother, and, in Fic!Lynn's case, laughing at him being chased by a bear and not apologising even when her sisters did.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna tease their sisters for being nice to Fic!Lincoln and claim boys are gross. Also, Fic!Lincoln plays favourites with his sisters.
* AgeInappropriateArt: Apparently, Lucy reads a lot of fanfiction and knows what {{Shipping}} is.
* AsTheGoodBookSays: Lisa quotes a Bible passage about not praying hypocritically when the siblings discuss rubbing in kindness.
* BallsGag: Fic!Lynn tells Fic!Lincoln to "clean her balls", so the real Lynn bursts out laughing.
* BigSisterBully:
** Fic!Lori, Fic!Luan, and Fic!Lynn are very mean and demanding to Fic!Lincoln, ordering him around.
** Fic!Lori is also mean to Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna, teasing them for being nice to Fic!Lincoln, even when Fic!Leni ''saved his life''.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are the ones who are mean to their little brother, hating him for his gender and wanting to make him their servant.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Joked about when Lucy wonders if Fic!Lynn is trying to ship Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, and Fic!Lincoln, and then Lynn jokingly suggests that Fic!Lola's news is she's pregnant by Fic!Lincoln. All the other Louds are very disgusted by those jokes.
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks: Fic!Lincoln lets it be known to the audience that he needs to use the bathroom when he wakes up.
* CharacterExaggeration:
** Sure, the Loud sisters tease a lot, but they wouldn't tease someone for ''saving their brother's life''.
** Lily is a ''bit'' of a BrainyBaby. Fic!Lily can ''use a tape recorder''.
* ContinuityNod:
** This episode alludes to "In Tents Debate", since the fanfic is set right after that episode.
** Seeing as this is the second requested episode, the Louds refer to ''Trustworthy'' and how it made everyone cry.
** Luna brings up her fanfic counterpart's antics in ''Substitute Roommate'' when she tried to beat her brother with a belt.
* CopycatMockery: Lincoln mocks Fic!Lynn's loving Fic!Lincoln being chased by a bear by saying, as her, "Yeah, he almost got mauled to death. That was a riot!".
* DeathGlare:
** Lily gives Lincoln a dirty look when he claims she's not smart enough to use a tape recorder.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are given "cold stares" for their meanness towards their brother.
* DoesNotLikeMen:
** At one point, the fanfic sisters claim Fic!Lincoln is stupid because he's a boy.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are the ones who think boys are gross.
* EmbarrassingDampSheets: Discussed when Fic!Lynn claims that Fic!Lincoln couldn't have gone a whole day and night without peeing or else he would've wet the bed.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Loud kids facepalm when Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna don't realise that Fic!Lincoln knows the truth.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Discussed when the fanfic sisters claim to Fic!Lincoln that Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are only pretending to be good sisters to cover up their bad acts.
* FellAsleepCrying: In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna end up crying themselves to sleep with guilt.
* GirlsHaveCooties: Gender-inverted when Lola says that boys are gross (but she loves Lincoln anyway).
* HatesBeingCalledCute: Downplayed. Lincoln finds it a bit embarrassing when Leni calls him cute, but he puts up with it.
* HehHehYouSaidX: Lynn has a good laugh when the phrase "clean my balls" pops up.
* HesitationEqualsDishonesty: Discussed when Lynn takes Lincoln's hesitating before calling her nice as a sign he's lying.
* HumourDissonance: InUniverse, the fanfic Loud sisters find it funny that Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna are being nice to Fic!Lincoln, but the real Loud kids don't get what's so funny.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: Fic!Lisa invents a pill that converts Fic!Lincoln's semi-digested food into an egg, which is then pooped out. The real Lisa claims this is likely impossible and says she's a scientist, not a sorceress.
* InsultBackfire: Lola calls Lana gross and disgusting, but Lana thanks her.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna feel very guilty for their mistreatment of Fic!Lincoln, apologising tearfully and crying themselves to sleep.
* NobodyPoops: Zigzagged. While Fic!Lincoln initially needs to pee (after sleeping without waking up for about sixteen hours), the need seems to go away when he finds the toilet clogged. Then, he would have pooped, but Fic!Lisa's pill made him poop out an egg instead. After that, it's played straight, since Fic!Lily went all night and a good chunk of the day without a diaper change, and the other fanfic sisters spent the same good chunk of the day without a bathroom break.
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, the girls had at least one "sister meeting" in the past, but now they don't have them anymore. Leni, who claims this, adds, "especially not--" but is interrupted by Lynn.
* OutOfCharacter:
** Aside from their uncharacteristic meanness, there's also Fic!Lola using the phrase "go potty".
--->'''Lola''': "Go potty"? How old does this author think I am, five? I'm ''six'', thank you very much.
** Luan wouldn't use "soccer mom" as an insult, especially not for trying to keep Lincoln safe.
** Lucy ''definitely'' wouldn't draw on Edwin's face like Fic!Lucy did.
* PlotHole:
** Why didn't Fic!Lily show Fic!Lincoln the recording sooner?
** How could all the Loud siblings (Fic!Lily with her diaper and the rest with the clogged toilet) have gone so long without nature calling?
** How did Fic!Lily know that the words spoken at the meeting would clear Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna's names?
** How did no one notice the bulge in Fic!Lily's diaper created by the recorder?
* {{Pun}}:
** Fic!Luan tells Fic!Lincoln not to blow himself up when he blows her whoopee cushions up.
** Luna makes the old "Me too" "Me three" joke.
* ShipperOnDeck: Discussed when Lucy says that if she didn't know better, she'd say Fic!Lynn was trying to ship Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna with Fic!Lincoln. [[BrotherSisterIncest Thank goodness she's not]].
* ShoutOut:
** Fic!Lola calls Fic!Lincoln "Literature/SleepingBeauty".
** When Fic!Lincoln takes a red pill, Luan says that it'll either take him to ''Film/TheMatrix'' or a sexist ''Website/{{Reddit}}'' forum.
* StopWorshippingMe: Leni and Luna get a bit squirmy with how the story glorifies them.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: While it's never revealed if she really is, Leni keeps denying she's keeping a secret from Lincoln.
* ToiletHumour:
** Apparently, Lana has tried to clog the toilet with her pee before.
** With the tape-recorder-in-diaper scene, Lori wonders how Fic!Lily went that long without a diaper change.
* TranquilFury: Fic!Lincoln is described as "filled with rage" but also as speaking to Fic!Lily "calmly".
* VulgarHumour: When Fic!Lola says she has something she needs to tell Fic!Lincoln, Lynn says, "I'm pregnant and you're the father" as a joke. This is doubly vulgar in that they're brother and sister, and Lola's a six-year-old.
* WhoopeeCushion: Fic!Luan has Fic!Lincoln blow up her whoopee cushions.
* YouAreGrounded:
** The fanfic versions of the girls (except Fic!Leni, Fic!Luna, and Fic!Lily) get grounded for two weeks for their mistreatment of Fic!Lincoln.
** In the alternate version, Fic!Leni and Fic!Luna get grounded for the same amount of time for making an evil plan.
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