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Aen'da, an awkward, time-traveling elf, rescues Sylvanas Windrunner from the Limbo she goes after being killed by Genn Greymane. Aen'da does it in exchange for Sylvanas' loyalty and on the condition that she never becomes Warchief in the alternate timeline she's about to send them both back to. Aen'da's motives? To heal the damage done by Garrosh time-traveling without the bronze dragonflight's approval. She also calls Sylvanas the (Elven) Aspect of Death.
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Aen'da, an awkward, time-traveling elf, rescues Lady Sylvanas Windrunner from the Limbo she goes after being killed by Genn Greymane. Aen'da does it in exchange for Sylvanas' loyalty and on the condition that she never becomes Warchief in the alternate timeline she's about to send them both back to. Aen'da's motives? To heal the damage done by Garrosh time-traveling without the bronze dragonflight's approval. She also calls Sylvanas the (Elven) Aspect of Death.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Aen'da is introduced as a powerful yet awkward Kaldorei/Sin'dorei hybrid. Proof of the former is that with one shoot from her bow Delune she can access the Maw where Sylvanas, thrice sent there, is without worrying about not going back. The latter is accomplished the moment she opens her mouth and doesn't quite know how to explain to Sylvanas why she's rescuing her from there or who she is. She admits not having prepared a speech.
* FirstEpisodeResurrection: After her canonical assassination by Greymane, Sylvanas is given the opportunity to return to the point before she was crowned Warchief by a mysterious time traveler in exchange for her loyalty and trust.
* FirstEpisodeResurrection: After her canonical assassination by Greymane, Sylvanas is given the opportunity to return to the point before she was crowned Warchief by a mysterious time traveler in exchange for her loyalty and trust.
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* FirstEpisodeResurrection: After her canonical assassination by Greymane, Sylvanas is given the opportunity to return to the point before she was crowned Warchief by a mysterious time traveler in exchange for her loyalty and trust.
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* FirstEpisodeResurrection: Sylvanas, after After her canonical assassination by Greymane, Sylvanas is given the opportunity to return to the point before she was crowned Warchief by a mysterious time traveler in exchange for her loyalty and trust.
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* ReWatchBonus: The epigraph specifies that it's the sands of time (a mechanism under the bronze dragonflight's purview) that will work a miracle. This excludes [[spoiler:Trisha and Altalune's]] method since it employs scientific principles instead of dragon magic. In other words, it's foreshadowing for [[spoiler:their eventual failure at saving Bloom and Stella]].
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* ReWatchBonus: RewatchBonus: The epigraph specifies that it's the sands of time (a mechanism under the bronze dragonflight's purview) that will work a miracle. This excludes [[spoiler:Trisha and Altalune's]] method since it employs scientific principles instead of dragon magic. In other words, it's foreshadowing for [[spoiler:their eventual failure at saving Bloom and Stella]].
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* {{Epigraph}}:{{Epigraph}}: Unlike the [[Recap/ParadoxusPrologo prologue]], this chapter's introductory quote is not attributed to any character and it's much more straightforward in its connection to the fanfic's plot and CentralTheme. It crystallizes every important character's hopes that going back in time would solve their problems. Trisha and Altalune are determined to save their mom from an untimely death, Sylvanas wants to protect her people while staying away from her hellish afterlife, and Aen'da seeks an ally against the Burning Legion.
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* ReWatchBonus: The epigraph specifies that it's the sands of time (a mechanism under the bronze dragonflight's purview) that will work a miracle. This excludes [[spoiler:Trisha and Altalune's]] method since it employs scientific principles instead of dragon magic. In other words, it's foreshadowing for [[spoiler:their eventual failure at saving Bloom and Stella]].
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-->"...Y las arenas del tiempo crearán un milagro."[[labelnote:Translation]]...And shall the sands of time create a miracle.[[/labelnote]]
-->"...Y las arenas del tiempo crearán un milagro."[[labelnote:Translation]]...And shall the sands of time create a miracle.[[/labelnote]]
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Aen'da, an awkward, time-traveling elf, rescues Sylvanas Windrunner from the Limbo she goes after being killed by Genn Greymane. She Aen'da does it in exchange for Sylvanas' loyalty and on the condition that she never becomes War Chief Warchief in the alternate timeline she's about to send them both back to. Aen'da's motives? To heal the damage done by Garrosh time-traveling without the bronze dragonflight's approval. She also calls Sylvanas the (Elven) Aspect of Death.
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Aen'da, an awkward, time-traveling elf, rescues Sylvaas Windrunner from the Limbo she goes after being killed by Genn Greymane. She does it in exchange for Sylvanas' loyalty and on the condition that she never becomes War Chief in the alternate timeline she's about to send them both back to. She calls Sylvanas the (Elven) Aspect of Death.
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Aen'da, an awkward, time-traveling elf, rescues Sylvaas Sylvanas Windrunner from the Limbo she goes after being killed by Genn Greymane. She does it in exchange for Sylvanas' loyalty and on the condition that she never becomes War Chief in the alternate timeline she's about to send them both back to. She calls Sylvanas the (Elven) Aspect of Death.
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* PointOfDivergence: For the ''Warcraft'' universe, the primordial change is that Sylvanas never wound up an alliance with the Jailer due to the time-traveling elf's interference. Sylvanas is given the task of not becoming Warchief, which means most of the events of ''Battle for Azeroth'' and afterward are heavily changed or don't happen at all.
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* PointOfDivergence: For the ''Warcraft'' universe, the primordial change is that Sylvanas never wound up an alliance with the Jailer due to the time-traveling elf's Aen'da's interference. Sylvanas is given the task of not becoming Warchief, which means most of the events of ''Battle for Azeroth'' and afterward are heavily changed or don't happen at all.
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* HowWeGotHere: The first four chapters are devoted to partially explaining why Altalune and Trisha have arrived at the conclusion that time travel is the only way to fix things. The narration goes back 150 years into the past, switching the POV to that of Sylvanas'.
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* HowWeGotHere: The first four chapters are devoted to partially explaining why Altalune and Trisha have arrived at the conclusion that time travel is the only way to fix things. The In this chapter, the narration goes back 150 years into the past, switching past and switches the POV to that of Sylvanas'.Sylvanas'. Through her, the key figure that eventually connects Magix with Azeroth is introduced.
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* PointOfDivergence: For the ''Warcraft'' universe, the primordial change is that Sylvanas never wounds wound up an alliance with the Jailer due to the time-traveling elf's interference. Sylvanas is given the task of not becoming Warchief, which means most of the events of ''Battle for Azeroth'' and afterward are heavily changed or don't happen at all.
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* HowWeGotHere: The first four chapters are devoted to partially explaining why Altalune and Trisha have arrived at the conclusion that time travel is the only way to fix things. The narration goes back 150 years into the past, switching the POV to that of Sylvanas'.
* FirstEpisodeResurrection: Sylvanas, after her canonical assassination by Greymane, is given the opportunity to return to the point before she was crowned Warchief by a mysterious time traveler in exchange for her loyalty and trust.
* PointOfDivergence: For the ''Warcraft'' universe, the primordial change is that Sylvanas never wounds up an alliance with the Jailer due to the time-traveling elf's interference. Sylvanas is given the task of not becoming Warchief, which means most of the events of ''Battle for Azeroth'' and afterward are heavily changed or don't happen at all.
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* HowWeGotHere: The first four chapters are devoted to partially explaining why Altalune and Trisha have arrived at the conclusion that time travel is the only way to fix things. The narration goes back 150 years into the past, switching the POV to that of Sylvanas'.
* FirstEpisodeResurrection: Sylvanas, after her canonical assassination by Greymane, is given the opportunity to return to the point before she was crowned Warchief by a mysterious time traveler in exchange for her loyalty and trust.
* PointOfDivergence: For the ''Warcraft'' universe, the primordial change is that Sylvanas never wounds up an alliance with the Jailer due to the time-traveling elf's interference. Sylvanas is given the task of not becoming Warchief, which means most of the events of ''Battle for Azeroth'' and afterward are heavily changed or don't happen at all.
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