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* ButterflyEffect: {{Defied}}: the Raider, [[GenreSavvy not being stupid]], is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
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* ButterflyEffect: {{Defied}}: the Raider, [[GenreSavvy not being stupid]], is who's trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
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* ButterflyEffect: Subverted. The Raider is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
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* ButterflyEffect: Subverted. The Raider {{Defied}}: the Raider, [[GenreSavvy not being stupid]], is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
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just a gag, not a real casanova
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* CasanovaWannabe: At the end of the issue, One tries searching for Lyla's phone number.
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* BreakoutCharacter: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue, but he will soon become the most three-dimensional bad guy of the series.
* Film/TheButterflyEffect: The Raider is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
* Film/TheButterflyEffect: The Raider is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
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* BreakoutCharacter: BreakoutVillain: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue, but he will soon become the most three-dimensional bad guy of the series.
*Film/TheButterflyEffect: ButterflyEffect: Subverted. The Raider is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
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* [[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us that the last seven pages were useless because the Raider went into the past and changed the events, really necessary?
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* TheButterflyEffect: Film/TheButterflyEffect: The Raider is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
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After taking a night out from superhero duty, Donald gets warned by One about a mysterious flying vandal. The night after, Paperinik meets him, and is easily defeated by the crook's mysterious powers. While the villain keeps stealing ostensibly useless objects, One and Paperinik learn of [[TimeMaster his true abilities]] and that they will need help... Maybe a strange journalist can offer a hand?
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After taking a night out from superhero duty, Donald gets is warned by One about a mysterious flying vandal. The night after, following night, Paperinik meets him, and is easily defeated by the crook's mysterious powers. While the villain keeps stealing ostensibly useless objects, One and Paperinik learn of [[TimeMaster his true abilities]] and that they will need help... Maybe a strange journalist can offer a hand?
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* BreakoutCharacter: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue, but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
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* BreakoutCharacter: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue, but he will soon become the most tridimensional three-dimensional bad guy of the series.
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* FamilyFriendlyFirearms: Averted: One a guard shoots The the Raider with regular bullets.
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* SaveScumming: The Raider's favourite tactic: If something doesn't go his way, he can simply go back in time and change it.
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* SaveScumming: The Raider's favourite tactic: If if something doesn't go his way, he can simply go back in time and change it.
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* [[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us that the last seven pages were useless because The the Raider went into the past and changed the events, really necessary?
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* CasanovaWannabe: At the end of the issue, One try tries searching for Lyla's phone number.
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* {{Pun}}: Considerable amounts of time-related puns. [[spoiler: [[ShmuckBait Or is that too soon]] to share?]]
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* {{Pun}}: Considerable amounts of time-related puns. [[spoiler: [[ShmuckBait [[spoiler:[[ShmuckBait Or is that too soon]] to share?]]
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After taking a night out from superhero duty, Donald gets warned by One about a mysterious flying vandal. The night after, Paperinik meets him, and is easily defeated by the crook's mysterious powers. While the villain keeps stealing ostensibly useless objects, One and Paperinik learn of [[TimeMaster his true abilities]] and that they will need help... Mayhap Maybe a strange journalist can offer a hand?
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* BreakOutCharacter: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue, but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
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* BreakOutCharacter: BreakoutCharacter: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue, but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Considerable amounts of time-related pun. [[spoiler: [[ShmuckBait Or is that too soon]] to share?]]
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* OneMansTrashIsAnothersTreasure: Except for some diamonds, the list of object stolen by The Raider includes such [[SarcasmMode priceless items]] like a box, a rope and two coils of copper. And yet,thanks to them [[spoiler:he can change the future]].
* [[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us that the last seven pages were useless because The Raider went into the past really necessary?
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* OneMansTrashIsAnothersTreasure: Except for some diamonds, the list of object objects stolen by The Raider includes such [[SarcasmMode priceless items]] like a box, a rope and two coils of copper. And yet,thanks yet, thanks to them [[spoiler:he can change the future]].
*[[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us {{Pun}}: Considerable amounts of time-related puns. [[spoiler: [[ShmuckBait Or is that the last seven pages were useless because The Raider went into the past really necessary?too soon]] to share?]]
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* TimeTravel: What all the plot revolves around.around.
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* [[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us that the last seven pages were useless because The Raider went into the past really necessary?
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Grammar clean-up patrol. Nobody move, and anybody who does will be subjected to Ret Gone and a serious case of head-herpes.
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After taking a night out from superheroing,Donald get superhero duty, Donald gets warned by One about a misterious mysterious flying vandal.vandal. The night after,Paperinik after, Paperinik meets him,but he him, and is easily defeated by the crook misterious powers.crook's mysterious powers. While the villain keeps stealing apparently ostensibly useless stuff,One objects, One and Paperinik learn of [[TimeMaster his true abilities abilities]] and that they will need help...maybe help... Mayhap a strange journalist can offer a hand?
* BreakOutCharacter: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue, but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
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* CasanovaWannabe: At the end of the issue One try searching for Lyla's phone number.
* CharacterizationMarchesOn: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue,but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: A pretty minor thing,but Angus doesn't have his SignatureLaugh yet.
* FamilyFriendlyFirearms: Averted:one guard shot The Raider with regular bullets.
* FreudianSlip: After bumping into Donald,Lyla inadvertently calls him Paperinik.
* IncrediblyLamePun: Lots and lots of time.related pun.
* CharacterizationMarchesOn: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue,but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: A pretty minor thing,but Angus doesn't have his SignatureLaugh yet.
* FamilyFriendlyFirearms: Averted:one guard shot The Raider with regular bullets.
* FreudianSlip: After bumping into Donald,Lyla inadvertently calls him Paperinik.
* IncrediblyLamePun: Lots and lots of time.related pun.
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* CasanovaWannabe: At the end of the issue issue, One try searching for Lyla's phone number.
*CharacterizationMarchesOn: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue,but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
*EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: A pretty minor thing,but thing, but Angus doesn't have his SignatureLaugh yet.
* FamilyFriendlyFirearms:Averted:one Averted: One guard shot The Raider with regular bullets.
* FreudianSlip: After bumping intoDonald,Lyla Donald, Lyla inadvertently calls him Paperinik.
* IncrediblyLamePun:Lots and lots Considerable amounts of time.related pun.time-related pun. [[spoiler: [[ShmuckBait Or is that too soon]] to share?]]
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* OneMansTrashIsAnothersTreasure: Except for some diamonds,the list of object stolen by The Raider includes some [[SarcasmMode priceless item]] like a box,a rope and two coil of copper.And yet,thanks to them [[spoiler:he can change the future]].
* [[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us that the last seven pages were useless because The Raider time traveled to the past really necessary?
* [[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us that the last seven pages were useless because The Raider time traveled to the past really necessary?
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* OneMansTrashIsAnothersTreasure: Except for some diamonds,the diamonds, the list of object stolen by The Raider includes some such [[SarcasmMode priceless item]] items]] like a box,a box, a rope and two coil coils of copper.copper. And yet,thanks to them [[spoiler:he can change the future]].
* [[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us that the last seven pages were useless because The Raidertime traveled to went into the past really necessary?
* [[ViewersAreMorons Readers Are Morons]]: Was the caption informing us that the last seven pages were useless because The Raider
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* SaveScumming: The Raider Raider's favourite tactic:if tactic: If something doesn't go his way,he way, he can simply go back in time and change it.
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* FamilyFriendlyFirearms: Averted:one guard shot The Raider with regular bullets.
* FreudianSlip: After bumping into Donald,Lyla inadvertently calls him Paperinik.
* IncrediblyLamePun: Lots and lots of time.related pun.
* MacGuffin: The cronosail.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Lots and lots of time.related pun.
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* OneMansTrashIsAnotherMansTreasure: OneMansTrashIsAnothersTreasure: Except for some diamonds,the list of object stolen by The Raider includes some [[SarcasmMode priceless item]] like a box,a rope and two coil of copper.And yet,thanks to them [[spoiler:he can change the future]].
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After taking a night out from superheroing,Donald get warned by One about a misterious flying vandal.The night after,Paperinik meets him,but he is easily defeated by the crook misterious powers.While the villain keeps stealing apparently useless stuff,One and Paperinik learn his true abilities and that they will need help...maybe a strange journalist can offer a hand?
'''Tropes Present In This Issue:'''
* TheButterflyEffect: The Raider is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
* CharacterizationMarchesOn: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue,but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
* OneMansTrashIsAnotherMansTreasure: Except for some diamonds,the list of object stolen by The Raider includes some [[SarcasmMode priceless item]] like a box,a rope and two coil of copper.And yet,thanks to them [[spoiler:he can change the future]].
* TheReveal: Lyla is a robot from the future that works for the TimePolice.
* SaveScumming: The Raider favourite tactic:if something doesn't go his way,he can simply go back in time and change it.
'''Tropes Present In This Issue:'''
* TheButterflyEffect: The Raider is trying to build a machine able to change the future ''without'' triggering it.
* CharacterizationMarchesOn: The Raider acts as a very flat villain in this issue,but he will soon become the most tridimensional bad guy of the series.
* OneMansTrashIsAnotherMansTreasure: Except for some diamonds,the list of object stolen by The Raider includes some [[SarcasmMode priceless item]] like a box,a rope and two coil of copper.And yet,thanks to them [[spoiler:he can change the future]].
* TheReveal: Lyla is a robot from the future that works for the TimePolice.
* SaveScumming: The Raider favourite tactic:if something doesn't go his way,he can simply go back in time and change it.