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* BittersweetEnding: PlayedForLaughs. Emma and Ziggs manage to defeat Ezekiel and save humanity, and are immediately arrested for wiping out the nighthawk population.
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* HypocriticalHumor: Emma claims that Perky's Buds is all about raging against the capitalist patriarchy, "but in a chill way, while still making tonnes of money".
* MoodWhiplash: The Metzgers prepare to execute Emma and Ziggs, only to be interrupted by a nighthawk shitting on Bob Metzger.
* MoodWhiplash: The Metzgers prepare to execute Emma and Ziggs, only to be interrupted by a nighthawk shitting on Bob Metzger.
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* PyrrhicVictory: Emma and Ziggs gain a hard-won victory against the nighthawks, but will likely face life in prison for having killed the entire population of the iconic and endangered species.
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* PyrrhicVictory: Emma and Ziggs gain a hard-won victory against the nighthawks, but are arrested and will likely face life in prison for having killed the entire population of the iconic and endangered species.
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* PyrrhicVictory: Emma and Ziggs gain a hard-won victory against the nighthawks, but will likely face life in prison for having killed the entire population of the iconic and endangered species.
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When a rumor is spread claiming that Stephanie Lauter is pregnant, she is forced to spend her summer at Abstinence Camp, stuck with nerdy prudes like Grace Chastity, the girl who mistakenly spread the rumor in the first place. Campers spin stories about a vengeful Axe-Man who slays anyone who doesn't abstain, but those are only ghost stories... or are they?
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When a rumor is spread claiming that Stephanie Lauter is pregnant, she is forced to spend her summer at Abstinence Camp, stuck with nerdy prudes like Grace Chastity, Chasity, the girl who mistakenly spread the rumor in the first place. Campers spin stories about a vengeful Axe-Man who slays anyone who doesn't abstain, but those are only ghost stories... or are they?
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight?: After being rescued from the Metzger's attack, Emma and Ziggs wake up in their own beds, covered in dirt, trying to remember what happened the night before.
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight?: WhatDidIDoLastNight: After being rescued from the Metzger's Metzgers' attack, Emma and Ziggs wake up in their own beds, covered in dirt, trying to remember what happened the night before.
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* AllCrimesAreEqual: Lumber-Axe tends to treat anything more intimate than hand-holding as an evil act worthy of murder.
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* CampWackyname: The titular Abstinence Camp is aptly called "Camp Idontwannabang".
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* CampWackyname: The titular Abstinence Camp is aptly called "Camp Idontwannabang".Idonwannabang". Like Grace Chasity's surname, it's just one T away from being way too on-the-nose.
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* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: The cool, party animal Steph and the Nerdy Pete become friends and lovers during their stay at Camp Idontwannabang
* DesecratingTheDead: After Gabe is killed, Lumber-Axe turns [[GenuineHumanHide his skin into a pile of wallets]], left as a message to the camp counselors.
* DesecratingTheDead: After Gabe is killed, Lumber-Axe turns [[GenuineHumanHide his skin into a pile of wallets]], left as a message to the camp counselors.
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* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: The cool, party animal Steph and the Nerdy nerdy Pete become friends and lovers during their stay at Camp Idontwannabang
Idonwannabang.
* DesecratingTheDead: After Gabe is killed,Lumber-Axe Lumber Axe turns [[GenuineHumanHide his skin into a pile of wallets]], left as a message to the camp counselors.
* DesecratingTheDead: After Gabe is killed,
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* GetItOverWith: After Lumber-Axe kills Boy Jerry, Girl Jeri tells him to "Just finish it already." He obliges.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by Lumber-Ax .
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl Jeri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form of Lumber-Axe. Making it worse, Boy Jerry actively encourages their child to kill anyone who breaks the camp rules about sex and, when Grace brings this up, all he can do is try to offer BlatantLies about the DeliveryStork.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Steph and Pete are just about to test the Lumber-Axe myth by showering in the same stall, when they are stopped by Girl Jeri and Boy Jerry, just before Lumber-Axe strikes.
* OffWithHisHead: Noah is decapitated by Lumber-Axe for making out with Mary.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by Lumber-Ax .
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl Jeri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form of Lumber-Axe. Making it worse, Boy Jerry actively encourages their child to kill anyone who breaks the camp rules about sex and, when Grace brings this up, all he can do is try to offer BlatantLies about the DeliveryStork.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Steph and Pete are just about to test the Lumber-Axe myth by showering in the same stall, when they are stopped by Girl Jeri and Boy Jerry, just before Lumber-Axe strikes.
* OffWithHisHead: Noah is decapitated by Lumber-Axe for making out with Mary.
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* GetItOverWith: After Lumber-Axe Lumber Axe kills Boy Jerry, Girl Jeri tells him to "Just finish it already." He obliges.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, byLumber-Ax .
Lumber Axe.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl Jeri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form ofLumber-Axe.Lumber Axe. Making it worse, Boy Jerry actively encourages their child to kill anyone who breaks the camp rules about sex and, when Grace brings this up, all he can do is try to offer BlatantLies about the DeliveryStork.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Steph and Pete are just about to test theLumber-Axe Lumber Axe myth by showering in the same stall, when they are stopped by Girl Jeri and Boy Jerry, just before Lumber-Axe Lumber Axe strikes.
* OffWithHisHead: Noah is decapitated byLumber-Axe Lumber Axe for making out with Mary.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl Jeri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form of
* InterruptedIntimacy: Steph and Pete are just about to test the
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* PassingTheTorch: After the final confrontation, Lumber-Axe is content to retire into the woods, leaving Grace with his axe, which she uses to keep the other campers in line.
* PinkGirlBlueBoy: Camp Idontwannabang has a strict color coded policy, making the girls wear pink and the boys wear blue - when Steph askes to wear a blue shirt, she's shut down by a counselor.
* ProductionForeshadowing: This story is a spiritual predecessor to ''Theatre/NerdyPrudesMustDie'', introducing its three main protagonists -- Stephanie Lauter appearing for the first time, while Grace Chasity and Peter Spankoffski are pulled out of the background after several years of buildup -- and exploring their dynamic, personalities, and themes. The song "Axe Man" even contains a motif found in two tracks in ''Nerdy Prudes Must Die''.
* SelfMadeOrphan: Lumber-Axe at the end of the story kills his parents, Boy Jerry and Girl Jeri.
* SexSignalsDeath: Any character who even comes close to having sex in the Witchwood meets their death at the hands of Lumber-Axe, the Hatchetfield Axe-man, who believes that any sort of intimacy in his woods is a crime that deserves death.
* StereotypicalNerd: Pete Spankoffski is a socially awkward, introverted, suspender-and-glasses-wearing nerd. He is able to overcome some of his stereotypical nerdiness by the end, standing up for himself and Stephanie to the counselors, and holding his own against Lumber-Axe for a bit.
* PinkGirlBlueBoy: Camp Idontwannabang has a strict color coded policy, making the girls wear pink and the boys wear blue - when Steph askes to wear a blue shirt, she's shut down by a counselor.
* ProductionForeshadowing: This story is a spiritual predecessor to ''Theatre/NerdyPrudesMustDie'', introducing its three main protagonists -- Stephanie Lauter appearing for the first time, while Grace Chasity and Peter Spankoffski are pulled out of the background after several years of buildup -- and exploring their dynamic, personalities, and themes. The song "Axe Man" even contains a motif found in two tracks in ''Nerdy Prudes Must Die''.
* SelfMadeOrphan: Lumber-Axe at the end of the story kills his parents, Boy Jerry and Girl Jeri.
* SexSignalsDeath: Any character who even comes close to having sex in the Witchwood meets their death at the hands of Lumber-Axe, the Hatchetfield Axe-man, who believes that any sort of intimacy in his woods is a crime that deserves death.
* StereotypicalNerd: Pete Spankoffski is a socially awkward, introverted, suspender-and-glasses-wearing nerd. He is able to overcome some of his stereotypical nerdiness by the end, standing up for himself and Stephanie to the counselors, and holding his own against Lumber-Axe for a bit.
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* PassingTheTorch: After the final confrontation, Lumber-Axe Lumber Axe is content to retire into the woods, leaving Grace with his axe, which she uses to keep the other campers in line.
* PinkGirlBlueBoy: CampIdontwannabang Idonwannabang has a strict color coded policy, making the girls wear pink t-shirts and the boys wear blue - when blue. When Steph askes to wear jokingly asks for a blue shirt, she's shut down by a counselor.
one, the counselor is not amused.
* ProductionForeshadowing: This story is a spiritual predecessor to ''Theatre/NerdyPrudesMustDie'', introducing its three main protagonists -- Stephanie Lauter appearing for the first time, while Grace Chasity and Peter Spankoffski are pulled out of the background after several years of buildup -- and exploring their dynamic, personalities, and themes. The song "Axe Man" even contains a motif found in two tracks in ''Nerdy Prudes MustDie''.
Die''. It was originally intended to be a spiritual ''sequel'' -- or, depending on how much Hatchetfield lore was in place during the development of the "nerdy prudes" trilogy, just a regular sequel -- but the need for a second season of ''Nightmare Time'' to happen before ''Nerdy Prudes'' changed those plans.
* SelfMadeOrphan:Lumber-Axe Lumber Axe at the end of the story kills his parents, Boy Jerry and Girl Jeri.
* SexSignalsDeath: Any character who even comes close to having sex in the Witchwood meets their death at the hands ofLumber-Axe, Lumber Axe, the Hatchetfield Axe-man, Mad Woodsman, who believes that any sort of intimacy in his woods is a crime that deserves death.
* StereotypicalNerd: Pete Spankoffski is a socially awkward, introverted, suspender-and-glasses-wearing nerd. He is able to overcome some of his stereotypical nerdiness by the end, standing up for himself and Stephanie to the counselors, and holding his own againstLumber-Axe Lumber Axe for a bit.
* PinkGirlBlueBoy: Camp
* ProductionForeshadowing: This story is a spiritual predecessor to ''Theatre/NerdyPrudesMustDie'', introducing its three main protagonists -- Stephanie Lauter appearing for the first time, while Grace Chasity and Peter Spankoffski are pulled out of the background after several years of buildup -- and exploring their dynamic, personalities, and themes. The song "Axe Man" even contains a motif found in two tracks in ''Nerdy Prudes Must
* SelfMadeOrphan:
* SexSignalsDeath: Any character who even comes close to having sex in the Witchwood meets their death at the hands of
* StereotypicalNerd: Pete Spankoffski is a socially awkward, introverted, suspender-and-glasses-wearing nerd. He is able to overcome some of his stereotypical nerdiness by the end, standing up for himself and Stephanie to the counselors, and holding his own against
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* ProductionForeshadowing: This story is a spiritual predecessor to ''Theatre/NerdyPrudesMustDie'', introducing its three main protagonists -- Stephanie Lauter appearing for the first time, while Grace Chasity and Peter Spankoffski are pulled out of the background after several years of buildup -- and exploring their dynamic, personalities, and themes.
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* ProductionForeshadowing: This story is a spiritual predecessor to ''Theatre/NerdyPrudesMustDie'', introducing its three main protagonists -- Stephanie Lauter appearing for the first time, while Grace Chasity and Peter Spankoffski are pulled out of the background after several years of buildup -- and exploring their dynamic, personalities, and themes. The song "Axe Man" even contains a motif found in two tracks in ''Nerdy Prudes Must Die''.
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* CalvalryBetrayal: The nighthawks save Emma and Ziggs from the Metzgers... but only to enslave them to grow marijuana for them.
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* CalvalryBetrayal: CavalryBetrayal: The nighthawks save Emma and Ziggs from the Metzgers... but only to enslave them to grow marijuana for them.
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"Perky's Buds and Abstinence Camp" is the second episode of ''Nightmare Time 2'', the second season of ''WebVideo/NightmareTime''.
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"Perky's Buds Buds" and Abstinence "Abstinence Camp" is the second episode of ''Nightmare Time 2'', the second season of ''WebVideo/NightmareTime''.
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Perky’s Buds is the first story in the second episode of Nightmare Time 2.
After working hard to earn her inheritance, Emma Perkins is finally able to open the pot farm that she had always dreamt about, Perky’s Buds. Together with Ziggs, her graphic designer and farmhand, she fights to protect her farm from nighthawks that keep eating the product, and some unfriendly neighbors.
After working hard to earn her inheritance, Emma Perkins is finally able to open the pot farm that she had always dreamt about, Perky’s Buds. Together with Ziggs, her graphic designer and farmhand, she fights to protect her farm from nighthawks that keep eating the product, and some unfriendly neighbors.
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After working hard to earn her inheritance, Emma Perkins is finally able to open the pot farm that she had always dreamt about,
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* CalvalryBetrayal: The nighthawks save Emma and Ziggs from the Metzgers... but only to enslave them to grow marijuana for them.
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Abstinence Camp is the second story in the second episode of Nightmare Time 2.
When a rumor is spread claiming that Stephanie Lauter is pregnant, she is forced to spend her summer at Abstinence Camp, stuck with nerdy prudes like Grace Chastity, the girl who mistakenly spread the rumor in the first place. Campers spin stories about a vengeful Axe-Man who slays anyone who doesn’t abstain, but those are only ghost stories… or are they?
When a rumor is spread claiming that Stephanie Lauter is pregnant, she is forced to spend her summer at Abstinence Camp, stuck with nerdy prudes like Grace Chastity, the girl who mistakenly spread the rumor in the first place. Campers spin stories about a vengeful Axe-Man who slays anyone who doesn’t abstain, but those are only ghost stories… or are they?
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Abstinence Camp is the second story in the second episode of Nightmare ''Nightmare Time 2.
2''.
When a rumor is spread claiming that Stephanie Lauter is pregnant, she is forced to spend her summer at Abstinence Camp, stuck with nerdy prudes like Grace Chastity, the girl who mistakenly spread the rumor in the first place. Campers spin stories about a vengeful Axe-Man who slays anyone whodoesn’t doesn't abstain, but those are only ghost stories… stories... or are they?
When a rumor is spread claiming that Stephanie Lauter is pregnant, she is forced to spend her summer at Abstinence Camp, stuck with nerdy prudes like Grace Chastity, the girl who mistakenly spread the rumor in the first place. Campers spin stories about a vengeful Axe-Man who slays anyone who
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* CampWackyname: The titular Abstinence Camp is aptly called "Camp Idontwannabang"
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* FriendshipDenial: Grace believes that she and Steph are friends, and that she’s trying to help Steph with her bad habits. From Steph’s perspective, Grace is trying to ruin her life by getting her sent to abstinence camp.
--> '''Grace:''' I was just trying to help. I'm your friend.
--> '''Steph:''' No, you're not. You're an annoying, self-righteous, nerdy prude. And the only good thing about this is that I won't have to spend anymore time with you.
* GetItOverWith: After Lumber-Axe kills Boy Jerry, Girl Jerry tells him to "Just finish it already." He obliges.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by Lumber-Ax
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl Jerri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form of Lumber-Axe. Making it worse, Boy-Jerry actively encourages their child to kill anyone who breaks the camp rules about sex and, when Grace brings this up, all he can do is try to offer BlatantLies about the DeliveryStork.
--> '''Grace:''' I was just trying to help. I'm your friend.
--> '''Steph:''' No, you're not. You're an annoying, self-righteous, nerdy prude. And the only good thing about this is that I won't have to spend anymore time with you.
* GetItOverWith: After Lumber-Axe kills Boy Jerry, Girl Jerry tells him to "Just finish it already." He obliges.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by Lumber-Ax
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl Jerri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form of Lumber-Axe. Making it worse, Boy-Jerry actively encourages their child to kill anyone who breaks the camp rules about sex and, when Grace brings this up, all he can do is try to offer BlatantLies about the DeliveryStork.
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* FriendshipDenial: Grace believes that she and Steph are friends, and that she’s she's trying to help Steph with her bad habits. From Steph’s Steph's perspective, Grace is trying to ruin her life by getting her sent to abstinence camp.
--> '''Grace:''' -->'''Grace:''' I was just trying to help. I'm your friend.
-->friend.\\
'''Steph:''' No, you're not. You're an annoying, self-righteous, nerdy prude. And the only good thing about this is that I won't have to spend anymore time with you.
* GetItOverWith: After Lumber-Axe kills Boy Jerry, GirlJerry Jeri tells him to "Just finish it already." He obliges.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, byLumber-Ax
Lumber-Ax .
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and GirlJerri Jeri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form of Lumber-Axe. Making it worse, Boy-Jerry Boy Jerry actively encourages their child to kill anyone who breaks the camp rules about sex and, when Grace brings this up, all he can do is try to offer BlatantLies about the DeliveryStork.
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'''Steph:''' No, you're not. You're an annoying, self-righteous, nerdy prude. And the only good thing about this is that I won't have to spend anymore time with you.
* GetItOverWith: After Lumber-Axe kills Boy Jerry, Girl
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl
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* PinkGirlBlueBoy: Camp Idontwannabang has a strict color coded policy, making the girls wear pink and the boys wear blue - when Steph askes to wear a blue shirt, she’s shut down by a counselor.
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* PinkGirlBlueBoy: Camp Idontwannabang has a strict color coded policy, making the girls wear pink and the boys wear blue - when Steph askes to wear a blue shirt, she’s she's shut down by a counselor.
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* AllCrimesAreEqual: Lumber-Axe tends to treat anything more intimate than hand-holding as an evil act worthy of murder.
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by Lumber-Axe.
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by Lumber-Axe.Lumber-Ax
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl Jerri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form of Lumber-Axe. Making it worse, Boy-Jerry actively encourages their child to kill anyone who breaks the camp rules about sex and, when Grace brings this up, all he can do is try to offer BlatantLies about the DeliveryStork.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Boy Jerry and Girl Jerri run an abstinence camp that is hardline about maintaining virginity, but they themselves had a child in the form of Lumber-Axe. Making it worse, Boy-Jerry actively encourages their child to kill anyone who breaks the camp rules about sex and, when Grace brings this up, all he can do is try to offer BlatantLies about the DeliveryStork.
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* CalvalryBetrayal: The nighthawks save Emma and Ziggs from the Metzgers...but only to enslave them to grow marijuana for them.
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* CigarChomper: Mayor Solomon Lauter lights one as he takes Stephanie to camp, signaling that he's done talking to his daughter.
* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: The cool, party animal Stephanie and the Nerdy Pete become friends [[spoiler: and lovers]] during their stay at Camp Idontwannabang
* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: The cool, party animal Stephanie and the Nerdy Pete become friends [[spoiler: and lovers]] during their stay at Camp Idontwannabang
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* CigarChomper: Mayor Solomon Lauter lights one as he takes Stephanie Steph to camp, signaling that he's done talking to his daughter.
* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: The cool, party animalStephanie Steph and the Nerdy Pete become friends [[spoiler: and lovers]] lovers during their stay at Camp Idontwannabang
* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: The cool, party animal
* FriendshipDenial: Grace believes that she and Steph are friends, and that she’s trying to help Steph with her bad habits. From Steph’s perspective, Grace is trying to ruin her life by getting her sent to abstinence camp.
--> '''Grace:''' I was just trying to help. I'm your friend.
--> '''Steph:''' No, you're not. You're an annoying, self-righteous, nerdy prude. And the only good thing about this is that I won't have to spend anymore time with you.
--> '''Grace:''' I was just trying to help. I'm your friend.
--> '''Steph:''' No, you're not. You're an annoying, self-righteous, nerdy prude. And the only good thing about this is that I won't have to spend anymore time with you.
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* InterruptedIntimacy: Stephanie and Pete are just about to test the Lumber-Axe myth by showering in the same stall, when they are stopped by Girl Jeri and Boy Jerry, just before Lumber-Axe strikes.
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* SexSignalsDeath: Any character who even comes close to having sex in the Witchwood meets their death at the hands of Lumber-Axe, the Hatchetfield Axe-man, who believes that any sort of intimacy in his woods is a crime that deserves death.
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After working hard to earn her inheritance, Emma Perkins is finally able to open the pot farm that she had always dreamt about, Perky’s Buds. Together with Ziggs, her graphic designer and farmhand, she fights to protect her farm from nighthawks that keep eating the product, and some unfriendly neighbors.
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Abstinence Camp is the second story in the second episode of Nightmare Time 2.
When a rumor is spread claiming that Stephanie Lauter is pregnant, she is forced to spend her summer at Abstinence Camp, stuck with nerdy prudes like Grace Chastity, the girl who mistakenly spread the rumor in the first place. Campers spin stories about a vengeful Axe-Man who slays anyone who doesn’t abstain, but those are only ghost stories… or are they?
Abstinence Camp is the second story in the second episode of Nightmare Time 2.
When a rumor is spread claiming that Stephanie Lauter is pregnant, she is forced to spend her summer at Abstinence Camp, stuck with nerdy prudes like Grace Chastity, the girl who mistakenly spread the rumor in the first place. Campers spin stories about a vengeful Axe-Man who slays anyone who doesn’t abstain, but those are only ghost stories… or are they?
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* CampWackyname: The titular Abstinence Camp is aptly called "Camp Idontwannabang"
* CigarChomper: Mayor Solomon Lauter lights one as he takes Stephanie to camp, signaling that he's done talking to his daughter.
* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: The cool, party animal Stephanie and the Nerdy Pete become friends [[spoiler: and lovers]] during their stay at Camp Idontwannabang
* DesecratingTheDead: After Gabe is killed, Lumber-Axe turns [[GenuineHumanHide his skin into a pile of wallets]], left as a message to the camp counselors.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by Lumber-Axe.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Stephanie and Pete are just about to test the Lumber-Axe myth by showering in the same stall, when they are stopped by Girl Jeri and Boy Jerry, just before Lumber-Axe strikes.
* OffWithHisHead: Noah is decapitated by Lumber-Axe for making out with Mary.
* OneSteveLimit: The two featured camp counselors are both named Jerry, specifically Boy Jerry and Girl Jerry. They call their son Little Jerry.
* PassingTheTorch: After the final confrontation, Lumber-Axe is content to retire into the woods, leaving Grace with his axe, which she uses to keep the other campers in line.
* CampWackyname: The titular Abstinence Camp is aptly called "Camp Idontwannabang"
* CigarChomper: Mayor Solomon Lauter lights one as he takes Stephanie to camp, signaling that he's done talking to his daughter.
* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: The cool, party animal Stephanie and the Nerdy Pete become friends [[spoiler: and lovers]] during their stay at Camp Idontwannabang
* DesecratingTheDead: After Gabe is killed, Lumber-Axe turns [[GenuineHumanHide his skin into a pile of wallets]], left as a message to the camp counselors.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Boy Jerry is split in half, head to toe, by Lumber-Axe.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Stephanie and Pete are just about to test the Lumber-Axe myth by showering in the same stall, when they are stopped by Girl Jeri and Boy Jerry, just before Lumber-Axe strikes.
* OffWithHisHead: Noah is decapitated by Lumber-Axe for making out with Mary.
* OneSteveLimit: The two featured camp counselors are both named Jerry, specifically Boy Jerry and Girl Jerry. They call their son Little Jerry.
* PassingTheTorch: After the final confrontation, Lumber-Axe is content to retire into the woods, leaving Grace with his axe, which she uses to keep the other campers in line.
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* StereotypicalNerd: Pete Spankoffski is a socially awkward, introverted, suspender-and-glasses-wearing nerd. He is able to overcome some of his stereotypical nerdiness by the end, standing up for himself and Stephanie to the counselors, and holding his own against Lumber-Axe for a bit.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: After being name-dropped in the first two Hatchetfield stage shows and set to become a key Hatchetfield character in the third, Grace Chasity plays a small role in this story before taking center stage in "Abstinence Camp", this episode's second half.
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* ProductionForeshadowing: This story is a spiritual predecessor to ''Theatre/NerdyPrudesMustDie'', introducing its three main protagonists -- Stephanie Lauter appearing for the first time, while Grace Chasity and Peter Spankoffski are pulled out of the background after several years of buildup -- and exploring their dynamic, personalities, and themes.
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* AdorableEvilMinions: The nighthawks, while creepy at times, are pretty damn cute.
* AirborneMook: Emma and Ziggs face an army of nighthawks with psychic abilities.
* BirdPoopGag: Just as Bob Metzger is about to condemn Emma and Ziggs to be sacrificed, a bird poops on his shirt. The humor doesn't last long.
* EnmityWithAnObject: After the birds are fooled by a scarecrow created by Emma and Ziggs, and are enraged by its lack of conversational skills.
* FeatheredFiend: The nighthawks rip the Metzgers apart, leaving Louie Metzger as little more than a skeleton.
* FightingYourFriend: After the nighthawks use their psychic abilities to turn Ziggs into their puppet, Emma is forced to fight for her life against her employee.
* HalfWittedHillbilly: The Metzgers certainly present as this, willing to kill Emma and Ziggs to protect the forest.
* PeoplePuppets: Ziggs is turned into one of these by the nighthawks, to be used as a tool to farm, or to fight Emma.
* SandNecktie: The Metzgers put Emma and Ziggs in these, burying them up to their necks before they try running them over with a wheat-cutter.
* TheStoner: Both Emma and Ziggs aren't hesitant to test the product that they are growing on their farm.
* WhatDidIDoLastNight?: After being rescued from the Metzger's attack, Emma and Ziggs wake up in their own beds, covered in dirt, trying to remember what happened the night before.
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* AirborneMook: Emma and Ziggs face an army of nighthawks with psychic abilities.
* BirdPoopGag: Just as Bob Metzger is about to condemn Emma and Ziggs to be sacrificed, a bird poops on his shirt. The humor doesn't last long.
* EnmityWithAnObject: After the birds are fooled by a scarecrow created by Emma and Ziggs, and are enraged by its lack of conversational skills.
* FeatheredFiend: The nighthawks rip the Metzgers apart, leaving Louie Metzger as little more than a skeleton.
* FightingYourFriend: After the nighthawks use their psychic abilities to turn Ziggs into their puppet, Emma is forced to fight for her life against her employee.
* HalfWittedHillbilly: The Metzgers certainly present as this, willing to kill Emma and Ziggs to protect the forest.
* PeoplePuppets: Ziggs is turned into one of these by the nighthawks, to be used as a tool to farm, or to fight Emma.
* SandNecktie: The Metzgers put Emma and Ziggs in these, burying them up to their necks before they try running them over with a wheat-cutter.
* TheStoner: Both Emma and Ziggs aren't hesitant to test the product that they are growing on their farm.
* WhatDidIDoLastNight?: After being rescued from the Metzger's attack, Emma and Ziggs wake up in their own beds, covered in dirt, trying to remember what happened the night before.
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"Perky's Buds and Abstinence Camp" is the second episode of ''Nightmare Time 2'', the second season of ''WebVideo/NightmareTime''.
As with most ''Nightmare Time'' episodes, it's a DoubleFeature, consisting of two stories.
!! Perky's Buds
-->edited by [[Creator/LangBrothers Matt Lang]]
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"Perky's Buds" performed by Creator/JoeyRichter and Jae Hughes; directed by Creator/JoeyRichter
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!! Abstinence Camp
-->edited by [[Creator/LangBrothers Nick Lang]]
-->'''Musical Sequences:'''\\
"Axe Man" performed by Creator/CoreyDorris and Bryce Charles; directed by Curt Mega\\
"Virginity Rocks!" performed by Jon Matteson and Kim Whalen; directed by Creator/LaurenLopez
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As with most ''Nightmare Time'' episodes, it's a DoubleFeature, consisting of two stories.
!! Perky's Buds
-->edited by [[Creator/LangBrothers Matt Lang]]
-->'''Musical Sequences:'''\\
"Perky's Buds" performed by Creator/JoeyRichter and Jae Hughes; directed by Creator/JoeyRichter
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!! Abstinence Camp
-->edited by [[Creator/LangBrothers Nick Lang]]
-->'''Musical Sequences:'''\\
"Axe Man" performed by Creator/CoreyDorris and Bryce Charles; directed by Curt Mega\\
"Virginity Rocks!" performed by Jon Matteson and Kim Whalen; directed by Creator/LaurenLopez
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