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* HandBehindHead: Timber Spruce does the gesture while admiting he was hoping to impress Twilight with his astronomic knowledge.
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* HandBehindHead: Timber Spruce does the gesture while admiting admitting he was hoping to impress Twilight with his astronomic knowledge.
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It looks like the data vampire ate part of a sentence.
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* GeekyTurnOn: Twilight wanted
* HandBehindHead: Timber Spruce does the gesture while he admit he was hoping to impress Twilight with his astronomic knowledge.
* HandBehindHead: Timber Spruce does the gesture while he admit he was hoping to impress Twilight with his astronomic knowledge.
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* GeekyTurnOn: Twilight wanted
wanted to impress Timber with her schedule for the museum events and Timber wanted to impress Twilight by pointing out constellations.
* HandBehindHead: Timber Spruce does the gesture whilehe admit admiting he was hoping to impress Twilight with his astronomic knowledge.
* HandBehindHead: Timber Spruce does the gesture while
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* GeekyTurnOn: Twilight wanted to impress Timber with her schedule for the museum events and Timber wanted to impress Twilight by pointing out constellations.
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* GeekyTurnOn: Twilight wanted to impress wanted
* HandBehindHead: Timberwith her schedule for Spruce does the museum events and Timber wanted gesture while he admit he was hoping to impress Twilight by pointing out constellations. with his astronomic knowledge.
* HandBehindHead: Timber
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* DontExplainTheJoke: After Twilight attempts to make a pun, Timber commenting on it leads to a very awkward bout of forced laughter.
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* DontExplainTheJoke: After Twilight attempts to make a pun, Timber commenting on it leads to a very awkward dorky bout of forced laughter.
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''[beat]''
'''Twilight:''' ''[sounding fake]'' AHAHAHAHA... AhAhaaahaahaa... ha...
'''Twilight:''' ''[sounding fake]'' AHAHAHAHA... AhAhaaahaahaa... ha...
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'''Twilight:''' ''[sounding fake]'' AHAHAHAHA...
* FacePalm: Twilight facepalms after her bad pun and awkward laughing.
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* AirQuotes: Twilight gestures quotes around the word "hang-out" rather than saying it's a date.
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* FingerQuote: Twilight gestures quotes around the word "hang-out" rather than saying it's a date.
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* FingerQuote: DontExplainTheJoke: After Twilight gestures quotes around attempts to make a pun, Timber commenting on it leads to a very awkward bout of forced laughter.
-->'''Twilight:''' Hey, Timber! Want to go inside and see theword "hang-out" rather than saying it's a date.gravity exhibit? I'ts really ''pulling me in''.\\
'''Timber:''' Hehehe... on account of the gravitational pull?\\
''[beat]''
'''Twilight:''' ''[sounding fake]'' AHAHAHAHA... AhAhaaahaahaa... ha...
-->'''Twilight:''' Hey, Timber! Want to go inside and see the
'''Timber:''' Hehehe... on account of the gravitational pull?\\
''[beat]''
'''Twilight:''' ''[sounding fake]'' AHAHAHAHA... AhAhaaahaahaa... ha...
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* FingerQuote: Twilight gestures quotes around the word "hang-out" rather than saying it's a date.
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*GeekyTurnOn: Twilight wanted to impress Timber with her schedule for the museum events and Timber wanted to impress Twilight by pointing out constellations.
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* NotADate: While Twilight and Timber's day out is ''obviously'' intended to be a date, Twilight only refers to it as "hanging out."
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* NotADate: While Twilight and Timber's day out is ''obviously'' intended to be a date, Twilight only refers to it as "hanging out."out".
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Twilight is going to the planetarium to hang out with Timber, and Fluttershy gives her a jar of insects to take with her "just in case." At the planetarium the exhibits Twilight wanted to see are variably gone or closed, and when she and Timber go to have cocoa it's dark and overcast out and they burn their tongues. Twilight apologizes for the bad day, she just wanted to impress Timber. Timber consoles her and shows off some astronomy knowledge he studied up on in his own attempt to impress her. At that moment Fluttershy's insects escape their jar and fly off, glowing brightly and lighting up the sky for the two.
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As Twilight is going to the planetarium to hang out gets ready for an evening with Timber, and Timber at the museum, Fluttershy gives her a jar of insects to take with her "just in case." At the planetarium All the exhibits Twilight wanted wants to see are variably either gone or closed, the sky is too overcast for stargazing, and when she and Timber go to have cocoa it's dark and overcast out and they burn their tongues. tongues on the hot cocoa she brought along. Twilight apologizes for the bad day, night, saying that she just wanted to impress Timber. Timber He consoles her and shows off some astronomy knowledge he studied up on in his own attempt to impress her. At that moment moment, Fluttershy's insects escape their jar and fly off, glowing brightly and lighting up the sky for the two.
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* ChekhovsGun: Fluttershy's jar of insects.
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* ChekhovsGun: Fluttershy's jar of insects.insects, which turn out to be fireflies when Twilight accidentally sets them loose.
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Twilight is going to the planetary to hang out with Timber, and Fluttershy gives her a jar of insects to take with her "just in case." At the planetarium the exhibits Twilight wanted to see are variably gone or closed, and when she and Timber go to have cocoa it's dark and overcast out and they burn their tongues. Twilight apologizes for the bad day, she just wanted to impress Timber. Timber consoles her and shows off some astronomy knowledge he studied up on in his own attempt to impress her. At that moment Fluttershy's insects escape their jar and fly off, glowing brightly and lighting up the sky for the two.
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Twilight is going to the planetary planetarium to hang out with Timber, and Fluttershy gives her a jar of insects to take with her "just in case." At the planetarium the exhibits Twilight wanted to see are variably gone or closed, and when she and Timber go to have cocoa it's dark and overcast out and they burn their tongues. Twilight apologizes for the bad day, she just wanted to impress Timber. Timber consoles her and shows off some astronomy knowledge he studied up on in his own attempt to impress her. At that moment Fluttershy's insects escape their jar and fly off, glowing brightly and lighting up the sky for the two.
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* TheCameo: Star Swirl's human counterpart, apparently a famous astronomer, has an exhibit in the planetarium.
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* TheCameo: AlternateSelf: Star Swirl's human counterpart, apparently a famous astronomer, has an exhibit in the planetarium.
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->Written by: Gillian M. Berrow
Twilight is going to the planetary to hang out with Timber, and Fluttershy gives her a jar of insects to take with her "just in case." At the planetarium the exhibits Twilight wanted to see are variably gone or closed, and when she and Timber go to have cocoa it's dark and overcast out and they burn their tongues. Twilight apologizes for the bad day, she just wanted to impress Timber. Timber consoles her and shows off some astronomy knowledge he studied up on in his own attempt to impress her. At that moment Fluttershy's insects escape their jar and fly off, glowing brightly and lighting up the sky for the two.
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!!Tropes:
* TheCameo: Star Swirl's human counterpart, apparently a famous astronomer, has an exhibit in the planetarium.
* ChekhovsGun: Fluttershy's jar of insects.
* NotADate: While Twilight and Timber's day out is ''obviously'' intended to be a date, Twilight only refers to it as "hanging out."
* ShipTease: The short establishes Twilight and Timber have continued their friendship beyond ''Legend of Everfree'' and are still interested in each other romantically, even if this was NotADate.
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Twilight is going to the planetary to hang out with Timber, and Fluttershy gives her a jar of insects to take with her "just in case." At the planetarium the exhibits Twilight wanted to see are variably gone or closed, and when she and Timber go to have cocoa it's dark and overcast out and they burn their tongues. Twilight apologizes for the bad day, she just wanted to impress Timber. Timber consoles her and shows off some astronomy knowledge he studied up on in his own attempt to impress her. At that moment Fluttershy's insects escape their jar and fly off, glowing brightly and lighting up the sky for the two.
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!!Tropes:
* TheCameo: Star Swirl's human counterpart, apparently a famous astronomer, has an exhibit in the planetarium.
* ChekhovsGun: Fluttershy's jar of insects.
* NotADate: While Twilight and Timber's day out is ''obviously'' intended to be a date, Twilight only refers to it as "hanging out."
* ShipTease: The short establishes Twilight and Timber have continued their friendship beyond ''Legend of Everfree'' and are still interested in each other romantically, even if this was NotADate.
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