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Having been “scooped” by a trio of the Planet’s top reporters, Lois seeks to recover by getting an exclusive interview with Superman, dragging Clark and Jimmy into an investigation of a dangerous escaped criminal to do so.
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Having been “scooped” "scooped" by a trio of the Planet’s Planet's top reporters, Lois seeks to recover by getting an exclusive interview with Superman, dragging Clark and Jimmy into an investigation of a dangerous escaped criminal to do so.
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* HypocriticalHumor: Rough House chides Mist for using his real name instead of his code name... after Mist calls out in alarm when Rough House's hasty attack on Superman nearly gets him hit by Silver Banshee's sonic blast.
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* HypocriticalHumor: Rough House chides Mist for using his real name instead of his code name... after Mist calls out in alarm when Rough House's hasty attack on Superman nearly gets him hit by Silver Banshee's sonic the group's FreezeRay -- and knocks Superman out of the way, wasting the entire blast.
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* TemptingFate: Siobhan tells a concerned Kyle not to worry, as Intergang has the robbery under complete control. This is of course, followed by things immediately getting out of hand for them.
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* PercussiveMaintenance: Intergang are able to stop the freeze ray the first time by hitting it. It isn’t as successful the second time, releasing the crystal power source from containment and causing it to go haywire.
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* PercussiveMaintenance: Intergang are able to stop the freeze ray the first time by Rough House hitting it. It isn’t as successful the second time, largely because he's wearing his [[PowerFist gauntlets]], releasing the crystal power source from containment and causing it to go haywire.
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* SayingTooMuch: Roughhouse has a bad habit of calling his teammates by their real names when he’s supposed to use codenames.
* SmallNameBigEgo: All the members of Intergang show signs of this, but Silver Banshee is the worst. Despite being in prison for a series of incompetently-done smash and grabs of convenience stores and the like, she has spent her time there boasting constantly of her plans for "a big score". Said plans are revealed to be a robbery of one of the largest banks in Metropolis that is only remotely achievable thanks to Intergang's new tech advantage.
* SmallNameBigEgo: All the members of Intergang show signs of this, but Silver Banshee is the worst. Despite being in prison for a series of incompetently-done smash and grabs of convenience stores and the like, she has spent her time there boasting constantly of her plans for "a big score". Said plans are revealed to be a robbery of one of the largest banks in Metropolis that is only remotely achievable thanks to Intergang's new tech advantage.
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* SayingTooMuch: Roughhouse Rough House has a bad habit of calling his teammates by their real names when he’s supposed to use codenames.
* SmallNameBigEgo: All the members of Intergang show signs of this, but Silver Banshee is the worst. Despite being in prison for a series of incompetently-done smash and grabs of convenience stores and the like, she has spent her time there boasting constantly of her plans for "a big score". Said plans are revealed to be a robbery of one of the largest banks in Metropolis that is only remotely achievable thanks to Intergang's new techadvantage.advantage, something she of course had no idea about at the time.
* SmallNameBigEgo: All the members of Intergang show signs of this, but Silver Banshee is the worst. Despite being in prison for a series of incompetently-done smash and grabs of convenience stores and the like, she has spent her time there boasting constantly of her plans for "a big score". Said plans are revealed to be a robbery of one of the largest banks in Metropolis that is only remotely achievable thanks to Intergang's new tech
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Unlike her coworkers Steve Lombart and Kat Grant who are condescending, arrogant and show no mercy in belittling the fresh meat, Ronnie is the only one who is against their showboating and just wants to get the job done, even offering to give Lois credit in the finished piece.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Unlike her coworkers Steve Lombart Lombard and Kat Grant who are condescending, arrogant and show no mercy in belittling the fresh meat, Ronnie is the only one who is against their showboating and just wants to get the job done, even offering to give Lois credit in the finished piece.
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* DoNotCallMePaul: Roughhouse has a bad habit of calling his teammates by their real name when he’s supposed to use codenames.
* HypocriticalHumor: Rough House chides Mist for using his real name instead of his code name... after Mist calls out in alarm when Rough House's hasty attack on Superman nearly gets him hit by Silver Banshee's sonic blast.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Silver Banshee, Mist and Roughhouse are all made members of the same gang in this story, with Mist and Silver Banshee being biological siblings.
* TheRival: The Best Friend Squad have to deal with the ''Scoop Troop'', the Daily Planet's top reporters known for their inflated egos and for stealing their stories per order of their boss.
* TheRival: The Best Friend Squad have to deal with the ''Scoop Troop'', the Daily Planet's top reporters known for their inflated egos and for stealing their stories per order of their boss.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Silver Banshee, Mist and Roughhouse Rough House are all made members of the same gang in this story, with Mist and Silver Banshee being biological siblings.
* TheRival: The Best Friend Squad have to deal with the ''Scoop Troop'', the Daily Planet's top reporters known for their inflated egos and for stealing their stories per order of theirboss.boss.
* SayingTooMuch: Roughhouse has a bad habit of calling his teammates by their real names when he’s supposed to use codenames.
* TheRival: The Best Friend Squad have to deal with the ''Scoop Troop'', the Daily Planet's top reporters known for their inflated egos and for stealing their stories per order of their
* SayingTooMuch: Roughhouse has a bad habit of calling his teammates by their real names when he’s supposed to use codenames.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Clark, Lois and Jimmy are able to enter the prison the villains escaped from and get an interview with the warden using stolen press badges. Press badges which clearly have the ''real owners' pictures'' on them.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Clark, Lois and Jimmy are able to enter the prison the villains escaped from and get an interview with the warden using stolen press badges. Press badges which clearly have the ''real owners' pictures'' pictures on them.them''.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Clark, Lois and Jimmy are able to enter the prison the villains escaped from and get an interview with the warden using stolen press badges. Press badges which clearly have the ''real owners' pictures'' on them.
